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Using a wooden stick in place of a sword, he swung it around to relax his tense and stiff muscles. Then Kamito walked to the plaza for breakfast.
 
Using a wooden stick in place of a sword, he swung it around to relax his tense and stiff muscles. Then Kamito walked to the plaza for breakfast.
   
On this fifth day of the Blade Dance, the showdown against the Four Gods lay ahead.
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On this fifth day of the «Blade Dance», the showdown against the «Four Gods» lay ahead.
   
Although the opposing team was renowned for their strength, Team Scarlet had also developed teamwork through numerous intense battles against formidable foes. The Four Gods were not impossible to defeat.
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Although the opposing team was renowned for their strength, «Team Scarlet» had also developed teamwork through numerous intense battles against formidable foes. The «Four Gods» were not impossible to defeat.
   
 
At the plaza, the young ladies had already begun preparing breakfast.
 
At the plaza, the young ladies had already begun preparing breakfast.
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Hiding in the shadows amongst the trees, Kamito felt cold sweat dripping down his cheek.
 
Hiding in the shadows amongst the trees, Kamito felt cold sweat dripping down his cheek.
   
Ellis' questions were based on the profile of the Strongest Blade Dancer, Ren Ashbell.
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Ellis' questions were based on the profile of the «Strongest Blade Dancer», Ren Ashbell.
   
...Speaking of which, three years ago, the day before the finals, reporters from every country were swarming Ren Ashbell, hoping for an interview.
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...Speaking of which, three years ago, the day before the finals, reporters from every country were swarming Ren Asbell, hoping for an interview.
   
 
Even in female attire, Kamito could not disguise his voice. Hence, when faced with the reporters' questions, he simply responded briefly with "yes" or "no" answers. Thanks to that, many ridiculous rumors began to spread from those interviews--
 
Even in female attire, Kamito could not disguise his voice. Hence, when faced with the reporters' questions, he simply responded briefly with "yes" or "no" answers. Thanks to that, many ridiculous rumors began to spread from those interviews--
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Her usually smooth skin was covered with numerous wounds.
 
Her usually smooth skin was covered with numerous wounds.
   
"...Oh, this was, umm, caused by sword training with Georgios yesterday. Don't worry, I'm fine. I've already cast healing magic so it will recover soon."
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"...Oh, this was, umm, caused by sword training with «Georgios» yesterday. Don't worry, I'm fine. I've already cast healing magic so it will recover soon."
   
 
Smiling wryly, Fianna shook her head.
 
Smiling wryly, Fianna shook her head.
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Just as Fianna whispered softly--
 
Just as Fianna whispered softly--
   
"As expected of the renowned Lost Queen. Even a familiar's presence was detected."
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"As expected of the renowned «Lost Queen». Even a familiar's presence was detected."
   
 
"...!?"
 
"...!?"
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Fianna cried out sharply while Kamito stared with his eyes widened with surprise.
 
Fianna cried out sharply while Kamito stared with his eyes widened with surprise.
   
Sjora Kahn -- the second-in-command of Team Inferno.
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Sjora Kahn -- the second-in-command of «Team Inferno».
   
 
"I never thought a mere familiar could possibly get through...!"
 
"I never thought a mere familiar could possibly get through...!"
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Under that seemingly poisonous gaze, Fianna was trembling slightly in her shoulders as she stood behind Kamito.
 
Under that seemingly poisonous gaze, Fianna was trembling slightly in her shoulders as she stood behind Kamito.
   
"...Fufu, I knew it. The Darkness Queen is more fitting for you."
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"...Fufu, I knew it. The «Darkness Queen» is more fitting for you."
   
 
"...What?"
 
"...What?"
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The three young ladies glared tearfully at Kamito.
 
The three young ladies glared tearfully at Kamito.
   
(Sigh, can we really beat the Four Gods like this...?)
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(Sigh, can we really beat the «Four Gods» like this...?)
   
 
Kamito sighed deeply in his mind.
 
Kamito sighed deeply in his mind.
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After the little commotion this morning--
 
After the little commotion this morning--
   
Team Scarlet finished a light breakfast and set off. The matter of the demon caster's spying in the stronghold was already mentioned during the meal.
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«Team Scarlet» finished a light breakfast and set off. The matter of the demon caster's spying in the stronghold was already mentioned during the meal.
   
"...Sjora Kahn eh. Although it's a bit concerning, we should focus our attention on the showdown against the Four Gods instead. If it's simple spying, other teams did it too."
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"...Sjora Kahn eh. Although it's a bit concerning, we should focus our attention on the showdown against the «Four Gods» instead. If it's simple spying, other teams did it too."
   
 
Put it aside for now and don't be too concerned -- That was Claire's opinion.
 
Put it aside for now and don't be too concerned -- That was Claire's opinion.
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...For some reason, there's an unpleasant premonition.
 
...For some reason, there's an unpleasant premonition.
   
The mention of the Darkness Queen lingered in his mind, causing great unease.
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The mention of the «Darkness Queen» lingered in his mind, causing great unease.
   
 
Although he had no impression of ever hearing something like that before -- for some unknown reason, his heart was greatly unsettled.
 
Although he had no impression of ever hearing something like that before -- for some unknown reason, his heart was greatly unsettled.
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With Claire's orders, the entire team entered a defensive formation.
 
With Claire's orders, the entire team entered a defensive formation.
   
Kamito immediately performed a releasing chant. As Est's figure disappeared into particles of light in the air, a dazzling silver-white sword, Terminus Est, appeared in Kamito's hand the next instant.
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Kamito immediately performed a releasing chant. As Est's figure disappeared into particles of light in the air, a dazzling silver-white sword, «Terminus Est», appeared in Kamito's hand the next instant.
   
 
On the far end of the wide road extending through the forest--
 
On the far end of the wide road extending through the forest--
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Were four girls dressed in vividly colorful oriental formal attire.
 
Were four girls dressed in vividly colorful oriental formal attire.
   
"--Be careful. They are the Four Gods."
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"--Be careful. They are the «Four Gods»."
   
 
Claire readied Flametongue as she spoke.
 
Claire readied Flametongue as she spoke.
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Their form-fitting formal dresses emphasized their supple bodies and each was embroidered with designs representing their respective divine beast.
 
Their form-fitting formal dresses emphasized their supple bodies and each was embroidered with designs representing their respective divine beast.
   
The skirt portion of the formal dresses all featured daringly high slits, allowing their seductive thighs to flash in and out of view alluringly as they walked.
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The skirt portion of the formal dresses all featured daringly high slits, allowing their seductive thighs to flash in and out of view seductively as they walked.
   
 
"Seriously, Kamito, where exactly are you looking?"
 
"Seriously, Kamito, where exactly are you looking?"
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Kamito frantically shook his head.
 
Kamito frantically shook his head.
   
Ignoring Kamito and his groups' antics, the girls of the Four Gods approached.
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Ignoring Kamito and his groups' antics, the girls of the «Four Gods» approached.
   
"Making your acquaintance for the first time, I am Rao of the Azure Dragon."
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"Making your acquaintance for the first time, I am Rao of the «Azure Dragon»."
   
"I am Hakua of the Black Tortoise."
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"I am Hakua of the «Black Tortoise»."
   
 
Their black hair styled in buns, the two girls bowed together towards Kamito and his group.
 
Their black hair styled in buns, the two girls bowed together towards Kamito and his group.
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Looking extremely alike, they were most probably sisters.
 
Looking extremely alike, they were most probably sisters.
   
"Fufu, I am Rion of the Vermilion Bird."
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"Fufu, I am Rion of the «Vermilion Bird»."
   
"--Shao of the White Tiger. Please treat me well."
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"--Shao of the «White Tiger». Please treat me well."
   
 
The last to introduce herself was an energetic white-haired beauty.
 
The last to introduce herself was an energetic white-haired beauty.
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Her azure eyes displayed a gaze of savagery akin to wild beasts.
 
Her azure eyes displayed a gaze of savagery akin to wild beasts.
   
(She is the strongest elementalist amongst the Four Gods...)
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(She is the strongest elementalist amongst the «Four Gods»...)
   
 
Despite her short stature, her entire body gave off a terrifying aura of combat.
 
Despite her short stature, her entire body gave off a terrifying aura of combat.
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--Making a grand appearance was a girl in ritual attire.
 
--Making a grand appearance was a girl in ritual attire.
   
Because she was quite short, she had been blocked from view by the Four Gods until now.
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Because she was quite short, she had been blocked from view by the «Four Gods» until now.
   
 
"I am the Quina Empire's third princess -- Linfa Sin Quina!"
 
"I am the Quina Empire's third princess -- Linfa Sin Quina!"
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The girl ran forward and announced with her chest swelled out in pride.
 
The girl ran forward and announced with her chest swelled out in pride.
   
(...Is that girl the commander of the Four Gods?)
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(...Is that girl the commander of the «Four Gods»?)
   
 
It was clear from her ritual attire that she was not an elementalist who fought on the frontlines. Most likely, she was someone who performed ritual dancing like Fianna--
 
It was clear from her ritual attire that she was not an elementalist who fought on the frontlines. Most likely, she was someone who performed ritual dancing like Fianna--
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Linfa angrily pointed her finger at Kamito as she yelled tearfully.
 
Linfa angrily pointed her finger at Kamito as she yelled tearfully.
   
"Damn you, Kazehaya Kamito! A-Absolutely unforgivable! My loyal Four Gods, this inhuman bestial king of lust must be drawn and quartered instantly!"
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"Damn you, Kazehaya Kamito! A-Absolutely unforgivable! My loyal «Four Gods», this inhuman bestial king of lust must be drawn and quartered instantly!"
   
Answering to Linfa's orders, the girls of the Four Gods summoned their respective elemental waffen.
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Answering to Linfa's orders, the girls of the «Four Gods» summoned their respective «Elemental Waffen».
   
 
"Somehow I seemed to have made her angry...?"
 
"Somehow I seemed to have made her angry...?"
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"Idiot, who asked you to poke at someone's sore spot! Pay attention, we're up!"
 
"Idiot, who asked you to poke at someone's sore spot! Pay attention, we're up!"
   
Kamito wielded the Demon Slayer with both hands and leaped forward.
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Kamito wielded the «Demon Slayer» with both hands and leaped forward.
   
 
--Thus the blade dance began.
 
--Thus the blade dance began.

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