Editing Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter7
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Enduring the pain, he encircled his surroundings with his line of sight— |
Enduring the pain, he encircled his surroundings with his line of sight— |
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− | The girl he thrust aside was unable to stand up and |
+ | The girl he thrust aside was unable to stand up and sitting on the ground. |
− | The moment he took a breath of |
+ | The moment he took a breath of relieve, he coughed violently. |
Red blood surged out onto the ground. |
Red blood surged out onto the ground. |