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Claire returned to her serious face, kicked the ground, and further accelerated.
 
Claire returned to her serious face, kicked the ground, and further accelerated.
   
Their opponent, Team Aquans, was ranked seventh in the interschool ranking.
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Their opponent, «Team Aquans», was ranked seventh in the interschool ranking.
   
 
It was a team that mainly constituted of powerful people gathered from the upperclassmen. They couldn't let their guard down.
 
It was a team that mainly constituted of powerful people gathered from the upperclassmen. They couldn't let their guard down.
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"I'm counting on you— Scarlet!"
 
"I'm counting on you— Scarlet!"
   
At the same time as Claire shouted, the incandescence hell cat running beside her changed its appearance into Flametounge.
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At the same time as Claire shouted, the incandescence hellcat running beside her changed its appearance into Flame Tongue.
   
 
It was—the incarnation of a contracted spirit that transformed into an armament—an elemental waffe. There was no one, who could release this as an elementary<!-- As in, mediocre? Or do you mean something like a first year student? Elementary seems a little awkward. --> student.
 
It was—the incarnation of a contracted spirit that transformed into an armament—an elemental waffe. There was no one, who could release this as an elementary<!-- As in, mediocre? Or do you mean something like a first year student? Elementary seems a little awkward. --> student.
   
Claire swung the Flametounge to the side.
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Claire swung the Flame Tongue to the side.
   
 
The red hot whip was running as it licked the ground, and a blazing wall of flames appeared.
 
The red hot whip was running as it licked the ground, and a blazing wall of flames appeared.
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He cut down many trees with his shiny-silver elemental waffe sword as he ran through.
 
He cut down many trees with his shiny-silver elemental waffe sword as he ran through.
   
His field of vision was bad due to the drifting mist. He sharpened his whole body's senses, and sensed the presence of divine power, which was the source of the power of an elementalist— a battle ability driven into him when he was young at the Instructional School.
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His field of vision was bad due to the drifting mist. He sharpened his whole body's senses, and sensed the presence of divine power, which was the source of the power of an elementalist— a battle ability driven into him when he was young at the «Instructional School».
   
 
(—One is coming this way.)
 
(—One is coming this way.)
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Also, Kamito couldn't use powerful spirit magic like Claire.
 
Also, Kamito couldn't use powerful spirit magic like Claire.
   
The handling of spirit magic was something necessary for the systematic research relating to the spirit subject, but Kamito was of Instructional School origin and thus he didn't receive practically any training in that area.
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The handling of spirit magic was something necessary for the systematic research relating to the spirit subject, but Kamito was of «Instructional School» origin and thus he didn't receive practically any training in that area.
   
 
However, if they were under the impression that Kamito's long distance attack measures were nonexistent, they were mistaken.
 
However, if they were under the impression that Kamito's long distance attack measures were nonexistent, they were mistaken.
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However, the opponent was an adamantine spirit, which possessed resistance against the fire attribute. It was acting as if the walls of flame were nothing.
 
However, the opponent was an adamantine spirit, which possessed resistance against the fire attribute. It was acting as if the walls of flame were nothing.
   
"Your flame spirit won't work on my Adamantine!"
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"Your flame spirit won't work on my «Adamantine»!"
   
 
The adamantine spirit came assaulting straight on. Claire kicked the ground and jumped.
 
The adamantine spirit came assaulting straight on. Claire kicked the ground and jumped.
   
That appearance of her red twintails flying and fluttering seemed almost as if they were scattering sparks.
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That appearance of her red twin tails flying and fluttering seemed almost as if they were scattering sparks.
   
 
The crimson killing flash freely tore through the sky. The surrounding trees were cut from their roots.
 
The crimson killing flash freely tore through the sky. The surrounding trees were cut from their roots.
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Jumping and scattering sparks landed into a puddle and made a sizzling sound.
 
Jumping and scattering sparks landed into a puddle and made a sizzling sound.
   
"...''A puddle?''"
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"...'''A puddle?'''"
   
 
Kamito, who had been fascinated by Claire's blade dance, suddenly frowned.
 
Kamito, who had been fascinated by Claire's blade dance, suddenly frowned.
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"Why you, release Fianna!"
 
"Why you, release Fianna!"
   
Aiming at the slimy coiling serpent's body, Claire launched her Flametounge.
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Aiming at the slimy coiling serpent's body, Claire launched her Flame Tongue.
   
However, the Flametounge made a sizzling noise and slipped though the semi-transparent body.
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However, the Flame Tongue made a sizzling noise and slipped though the semi-transparent body.
   
 
It was a water spirit, which had the worst compatibility with Scarlet, which was a flame spirit. Even within the five grand elemental spirits, it was the spirit that Claire wanted to not deal with the most. Furthermore, a spirit that took on a beast form was a high ranking spirit. That was probably the commander's contracted spirit— but there were no signs of the elementalist using it around.
 
It was a water spirit, which had the worst compatibility with Scarlet, which was a flame spirit. Even within the five grand elemental spirits, it was the spirit that Claire wanted to not deal with the most. Furthermore, a spirit that took on a beast form was a high ranking spirit. That was probably the commander's contracted spirit— but there were no signs of the elementalist using it around.
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The water spirit raised its head, aimed at Claire and released a strong Aqua Breath.
 
The water spirit raised its head, aimed at Claire and released a strong Aqua Breath.
   
Claire knocked down the water bullets with her Flametounge, but she simply couldn't defend against all of them—
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Claire knocked down the water bullets with her Flame Tongue, but she simply couldn't defend against all of them—
   
 
"Claire!"
 
"Claire!"
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It had a rigid silver heavy-armor. Its red eyes were glaringly shining in its helmet.
 
It had a rigid silver heavy-armor. Its red eyes were glaringly shining in its helmet.
   
It was the knight spirit Georgios— The contracted spirit that served the Ordesia royal family for generations.
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It was the knight spirit «Georgios»— The contracted spirit that served the Ordesia royal family for generations.
   
 
It was power that Fianna, who was once called the Lost Queen, had regained.
 
It was power that Fianna, who was once called the Lost Queen, had regained.
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"This makes it our third consecutive victory in our battles, this is all thanks to my wonderful commands<!-- maybe it'll sound better if we used something like 'leadership' or 'instructions'-->."
 
"This makes it our third consecutive victory in our battles, this is all thanks to my wonderful commands<!-- maybe it'll sound better if we used something like 'leadership' or 'instructions'-->."
   
Brushing her red twintails, Claire muttered in a good mood.
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Brushing her red twin-tails, Claire muttered in a good mood.
   
 
"I won't deny it, but... today's match was a little too much of a close call."
 
"I won't deny it, but... today's match was a little too much of a close call."
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As Claire was sternly glaring, Kamito averted the topic in a fluster.
 
As Claire was sternly glaring, Kamito averted the topic in a fluster.
   
"Although, if I recall Ellis' team had two comrades who're still injured, right?"
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"Although, if I recall Ellis' team had two comrades who're still injuried, right?"
   
 
They were the Sylphid Knights' Rakka and Reishia. They, who were also Ellis' teammate, fought Jio Inzagi in the quest the other day and were injured.
 
They were the Sylphid Knights' Rakka and Reishia. They, who were also Ellis' teammate, fought Jio Inzagi in the quest the other day and were injured.
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Hearing Fianna's murmuring—
 
Hearing Fianna's murmuring—
   
Claire was taken aback, and looked down at the hell cat spirit near her feet.
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Claire was taken aback, and looked down at the hellcat spirit near her feet.
   
 
"...Hey, Scarlet."
 
"...Hey, Scarlet."
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(Th-This is a little cute...)
 
(Th-This is a little cute...)
   
Kamito was also unconsciously startled at the hell cat girl's unexpected weak point.
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Kamito was also unconsciously startled at the hellcat girl's unexpected weak point.
   
 
"Mmm, Kamito-kun, are you not going to pat me?"
 
"Mmm, Kamito-kun, are you not going to pat me?"
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Although, even Kamito also couldn't stay composed.
 
Although, even Kamito also couldn't stay composed.
   
It was for only an instant, but Kamito didn't miss Claire's hurt expression. The matter about her sister, Rubia Elstein, had been a great emotional scar to her.
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It was for only an instant, but Kamito didn't miss Claire's hurt expression. The matter about her sister, Rubia Elstien, had been a great emotional scar to her.
   
 
"This is really sickening. For the sister of a felon, who did that much, to be boldly attending the academy, what on earth are your nerves made of—"
 
"This is really sickening. For the sister of a felon, who did that much, to be boldly attending the academy, what on earth are your nerves made of—"
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Yes—
 
Yes—
   
The one, who was slowly walking from the other side of the corridor, was a blonde haired beautiful girl overflowing with elegance.
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The one, who was slowly walking from the other side of the corridor, was a blond haired beautiful girl overflowing with elegance.
   
 
She was the eldest daughter with the lineage of the honorable Laurenfrost family, and also the self-declared rival of Claire.
 
She was the eldest daughter with the lineage of the honorable Laurenfrost family, and also the self-declared rival of Claire.
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Rinslet's nocked demon bow of ice was certainly aimed at the place between her eyebrows.
 
Rinslet's nocked demon bow of ice was certainly aimed at the place between her eyebrows.
   
It was the high ranking demon ice spirit Fenrir's elemental waffe— Freezing Arrow.
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It was the high ranking demon ice spirit «Fenrir's» elemental waffe— Freezing Arrow.
   
 
"The one, who moved first, was you seniors. Therefore, this is a proper self-defense. Although, it seemed that I, who moved later, was somehow faster."
 
"The one, who moved first, was you seniors. Therefore, this is a proper self-defense. Although, it seemed that I, who moved later, was somehow faster."
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"Hmm, to settle that, I will be treating. This is a small expense for my Laurenfrost family. Claire Rouge, your Highness, and the spirit over there, there is no need to hold back."
 
"Hmm, to settle that, I will be treating. This is a small expense for my Laurenfrost family. Claire Rouge, your Highness, and the spirit over there, there is no need to hold back."
   
The high-class yound lady brushed her platinum-blonde hair.
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The ojou-sama brushed her platinum-blonde hair.
   
 
"No." "I decline."
 
"No." "I decline."
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"Th-That's... err... u..."
 
"Th-That's... err... u..."
   
Rinslet became teary at the merciless retorts by the two young ladies.
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Rinslet became teary at the merciless retorts by the two ojou-sama.
   
 
There was no longer any fragment of her braveness from just now.
 
There was no longer any fragment of her braveness from just now.
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"Gu..."
 
"Gu..."
   
...He couldn't answer back. To begin with, Kamito, who was from the Instructional School, had not received education on the systematic spirit subjects so far, so if he couldn't help it, he couldn't help it.
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...He couldn't answer back. To begin with, Kamito, who was from the «Instructional School», had not received education on the systematic spirit subjects so far, so if he couldn't help it, he couldn't help it.
   
 
On the other hand, the results of Claire's lecture subjects were unexpectedly top-class even in the Academy.
 
On the other hand, the results of Claire's lecture subjects were unexpectedly top-class even in the Academy.

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