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"I've already had to concede to her joining the team temporarily due to the guarding quest, but—"
 
"I've already had to concede to her joining the team temporarily due to the guarding quest, but—"
   
She brushed her red twintail hair in irritation.
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She brushed her red twin-tail hair in irritation.
   
 
"Why is this girl in the same room with us?!"
 
"Why is this girl in the same room with us?!"
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(...She was thoroughly toyed with.)
 
(...She was thoroughly toyed with.)
   
Claire was extremely weak toward the reprehension in such an area, she was a super innocent high-class young lady.
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Claire was extremely weak toward the reprehension in such an area, she was a super innocent ojou-sama.
   
 
"Or perhaps, you have no confidence? You just don't want me to take away Kamito-kun?"
 
"Or perhaps, you have no confidence? You just don't want me to take away Kamito-kun?"
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Fianna further provoked Claire, who had finally snapped.
 
Fianna further provoked Claire, who had finally snapped.
   
"Guu... A...As you wish! Come forth, scorching hot hell cat!"
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"Guu... A...As you wish! Come forth, scorching hot hellcat!"
   
She summoned Scarlet and held in her hand an elemental waffe— Flametounge.
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She summoned Scarlet and held in her hand an elemental waffe— Flame Tongue.
   
 
"Hey, do you plan on destroying the dormitory?! The people from the Sylphid Knights will dash here!"
 
"Hey, do you plan on destroying the dormitory?! The people from the Sylphid Knights will dash here!"
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"What, now that it has come to this, are you pleading for your life?"
 
"What, now that it has come to this, are you pleading for your life?"
   
"I didn't say anything about having a blade dance match. I wonder if trying to settle everything with violence is something proper nobles do. Did all the nutrition that's supposed to go to your head go to your breasts—"
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"I didn't say anything about having a match in blade dance. I wonder if trying to settle everything with violence is something proper nobles do. Did all the nutrition that's supposed to go to your head go to your breasts—"
   
 
Fianna looked at Claire's breasts and smiled.
 
Fianna looked at Claire's breasts and smiled.
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Kamito flustered and held her hands to her back as Claire tried to recite fireball.
 
Kamito flustered and held her hands to her back as Claire tried to recite fireball.
   
At their best, they were hovering near the bottom of the inter-school ranking. If they caused any more problems, Team Scarlet's score would drop to the lowest rank.
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At their best, they were hovering near the bottom of the inter-school ranking. If they caused any more problems, «Team Scarlet»'s score would drop to the lowest rank.
   
 
"Guu...then, what kind of match are we having?!"
 
"Guu...then, what kind of match are we having?!"
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"No way, I can't accept such a duel!"
 
"No way, I can't accept such a duel!"
   
"Ah, offering a meal for a spirit to enjoy itself is the same type of kagura as a blade dance, a skill of a splendid elementalist. Isn't it also among the academy's core subjects?"
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"Ah, offering a meal for a spirit to enjoy itself is the same type of «Kagura» as a blade dance, a skill of a splendid elementalist. Isn't it also among the academy's core subjects?"
   
 
"Th...That's..."
 
"Th...That's..."
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(...Frankly, Claire has no chance of winning.)
 
(...Frankly, Claire has no chance of winning.)
   
He certainly had never eaten Claire's home cooking, but, in any case, she was the high-class young lady who had gotten through with mostly canned food in her meals since she came to the academy.
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He certainly had never eaten Claire's home cooking, but, in any case, she was the ojou-sama who got through with mostly canned food in her meals since she came to the academy.
   
 
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"...That's terrible. Do remember that."
 
"...That's terrible. Do remember that."
   
Besides Claire's character, just her appearance was that of a transcendent beautiful girl. He was without doubt that there would be as many young nobles as the number of stars, who would be hard-pressed by her lovely looks and ask her for a dance.
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Besides Claire's character, just her appearance was that of a transcendent beautiful girl. He was certain without doubt that there would be as many young nobles as the number of stars, who would be hard-pressed by her lovely looks and ask her for a dance.
   
 
"...At any rate, Claire, you're in a dress?"
 
"...At any rate, Claire, you're in a dress?"
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"Not everything you see is the truth— That was a saying from a certain senior of mine."
 
"Not everything you see is the truth— That was a saying from a certain senior of mine."
   
"That indeed seems like words that a princess maiden of the Divine Ritual Institute would say."
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"That indeed seems like words that a princess maiden of the «Divine Ritual Institute» would say."
   
 
Kamito shrugged his shoulders and stood beside Fianna.
 
Kamito shrugged his shoulders and stood beside Fianna.
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She was slicing a carrot with a nice tapping rhythm.
 
She was slicing a carrot with a nice tapping rhythm.
   
Because she was a kagura expert, who pleased spirits, as expected her skill was good.
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Because she was a «Kagura» expert, who pleased spirits, as expected her skill was good.
   
 
"You seem full of confidence."
 
"You seem full of confidence."
   
"Of course. During the time at the Divine Ritual Institute, although there was a ritual to offer cooked meals to high ranking spirits only once a month, all of them were satisfied with my offered meals and returned to Astral Zero."
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"Of course. During the time at the «Divine Ritual Institute», although there was a ritual to offer cooked meals to high ranking spirits only once a month, all of them were satisfied with my offered meals and returned to Astral Zero."
   
 
"Really? That's amazing."
 
"Really? That's amazing."
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"What kind of person do you think I am?"
 
"What kind of person do you think I am?"
   
"Ah, I would like for you to not take a princess maiden, who serves the spirit lords of the Divine Ritual Institute, lightly. I can read your mind like picking something up."
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"Ah, I would like for you to not take a princess maiden, who serves the spirit lords of the «Divine Ritual Institute», lightly. I can read your mind like picking something up."
   
 
After saying that, Fianna drew her face close and gently placed her hand onto Kamito's forehead.
 
After saying that, Fianna drew her face close and gently placed her hand onto Kamito's forehead.
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"Ehh, what is... this?"
 
"Ehh, what is... this?"
   
"This is the Ordesia royal family's specialty, the white stew."
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"This is the Ordesia royal family's speciality, the white stew."
   
 
"How is it white!?"
 
"How is it white!?"
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Unfairness aside, Fianna also did not eat Claire's burnt-black thing, but Claire, who blew her top, seemed to not have noticed such a thing.
 
Unfairness aside, Fianna also did not eat Claire's burnt-black thing, but Claire, who blew her top, seemed to not have noticed such a thing.
   
Or perhaps he should put it that she was basically weak to provocation to things about noble young ladies. She was even weaker especially when it involved her family name and her pride as a noble.
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Or perhaps he should put it that she was basically weak to provocation to things about noble ojou-samas. She was even weaker especially when it involved her family name and her pride as a noble.
   
 
"I...I get it, it's alright if I eat a mouthful of that, right? I'm good with spicy things, after all."
 
"I...I get it, it's alright if I eat a mouthful of that, right? I'm good with spicy things, after all."
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Well, he felt that it was certain that they did not decide on the precise conditions to win.
 
Well, he felt that it was certain that they did not decide on the precise conditions to win.
   
"You certainly did say that you made the spirits satisfied with a ritual of the Divine Ritual Institute, right?"
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"You certainly did say that you made the spirits satisfied with a ritual of the «Divine Ritual Institute», right?"
   
 
"Yeah, just by eating a mouthful, they returned to Astral Zero seemingly satisfied."
 
"Yeah, just by eating a mouthful, they returned to Astral Zero seemingly satisfied."
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(This is... bad...!)
 
(This is... bad...!)
   
Kamito, who was brought up as an assassin since he was young at the Instructional School, did not even do training against this kind of allurement. As, he was at the age where he did not yet require a counter-measure for such a thing, and his contracted spirit was keeping all approaching females completely away from him.
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Kamito, who was brought up as an assassin since he was young at the «Instructional School», did not even do training against this kind of allurement. As, he was at the age where he did not yet require a counter-measure for such a thing, and his contracted spirit was keeping all approaching females completely away from him.
   
 
However, Kamito was now of the marriageable age of a youth.
 
However, Kamito was now of the marriageable age of a youth.
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However, the move Claire took next was completely unexpected.
 
However, the move Claire took next was completely unexpected.
   
It wasn't the usual where she blew Kamito away with her Flametounge—
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It wasn't the usual where she blew Kamito away with her Flame Tongue—
   
 
"I...I'll... also wash your back."
 
"I...I'll... also wash your back."
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===Part 6===
 
===Part 6===
   
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"Ho...How is it, Kamito? Does it feel good?"
 
"Ho...How is it, Kamito? Does it feel good?"
   
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It was something normal humans would fail to hear, the sound of metal clashing.
 
It was something normal humans would fail to hear, the sound of metal clashing.
   
However, Kamito, who once received training at the Instructional School, certainly heard it.
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However, Kamito, who once received training at the «Instructional School», certainly heard it.
   
 
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===Translation Notes and References===
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==Translation Notes and References==
 
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