Difference between revisions of "Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Prologue"

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Lautreamont Knight Country, people called it the country of Dragon Breeders.

To its north was the Zepharos Empire, while to its south was the Chevron Kingdom.

Sandwiched between the two major powers; a small country, with a population of no more than five million, had a special academy.

Ansarivan Dragon Riding Academy.

Educating and guiding teenage boys and girls who formed contracts with dragons -- an academy for Dragon Breeders.

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 Educating and guiding teenage boys and girls who formed contracts with dragons -- an academy for Dragon Breeders.
+<!-- This whole Prologue section is really clunky (sincere apologies translator & previous editors!). Whilst it technically makes sense, the multiple paragraph setup probably works better in Japanese than it does in English. Whilst I don't intend to rewrite the whole novel to remove all the unnecessary paragraph breaks, might I suggest a new version with fewer?:
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+Lautreamont Knight Country, also called 'the country of Dragon Breeders', was sandwiched between two major powers.
+To the north lay the Zepharos Empire and to its south lay the Chevron Kingdom.
+Despite its small size and a population numbering less than five million, it possessed a special academy: the An'Sullivan Dragon Riding Academy.
+This Academy educated and guided teenage boys and girls to form contracts with dragons. Specifically however, it was an academy for Dragon Breeders. * -->
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