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At the start of the next day, the atmosphere in the class changed.
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At the start of the next day, the atmosphere of the class changed.
   
When Moroha stepped into the classroom, he was shocked as all the girls turned their heads simultaneously to look at him.
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When Moroha stepped into the classroom, he suffered a shock as all the girls turned their heads simultaneously to look at him.
   
 
With very warm and affectionate looks.
 
With very warm and affectionate looks.
   
Moroha as usual, sat at his seat in the middle of the last row but now with a cramped face.
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Moroha sat at his seat in the middle of the last row with a cramped face.
   
 
“Ah, Haimura-kun.”
 
“Ah, Haimura-kun.”
   
Just as he barely touched his seat, one of his female classmates rushed to his side.
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Just when he barely touched his seat, one of his female classmates rushed to his side.
   
The atmosphere suddenly turned ugly as the air was infused by feminine grudges of [Don’t jump the queue!], but as Moroha had shifted his attention to the girl in front of him, he failed to notice it completely.
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The atmosphere turned ugly with the air twisted by feminine grudges of [Don’t jump the queue!], but as Moroha had shifted his attention to the girl in front of him, he completely missed it.
   
She was a cute girl who seemed confident of her appearance; with a big ribbon in her hair that suited her a lot.
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A cute girl who seemed confidence of her appearance; with a big ribbon in her hair that suited her a lot.
   
If not for the existence of Satsuki and Shizuno, she’d probably be the most noticeable person.
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If not for the existence of Satsuki and Shizuno, she’ll probably be the most attention grabbing person.
   
 
“Do you have time after school? If possible, I would like you to help tutor me in Light Techniques. I have many areas to need your help on. Of course, as thanks, maybe we can have dinner or something together after that...”
 
“Do you have time after school? If possible, I would like you to help tutor me in Light Techniques. I have many areas to need your help on. Of course, as thanks, maybe we can have dinner or something together after that...”
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To the word “dinner”, Moroha’s mouth twitched slightly.
 
To the word “dinner”, Moroha’s mouth twitched slightly.
   
Although Moroha lived frugally due to his financial situation, he had never let anyone treate him before. He still had that much restraint.
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Although Moroha lived frugally due to his financial situation, he had never let anyone treated him before. He still had that much restrain.
   
But he had no qualms about accepting food in return for a favour.
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But he had no qualms about accepting [equivalent exchange].
   
 
Just as he was about to break into a smile of acceptance…..
 
Just as he was about to break into a smile of acceptance…..
   
“…Moroha already has an appointment.”
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“…Mohora already had an appointment.”
   
 
Like a phantom, Shizuno suddenly appeared behind the girl and grabbed her shoulder, whispering softly to her.
 
Like a phantom, Shizuno suddenly appeared behind the girl and grabbed her shoulder, whispering softly to her.
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“You are the same,” retorted Moroha as he stared dreadfully at Shizuno who appeared out of thin air.
 
“You are the same,” retorted Moroha as he stared dreadfully at Shizuno who appeared out of thin air.
   
“You just caused me to lose my dinner.”
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“You caused me to lose my dinner.”
   
 
“Doesn’t the hostel provide those?”
 
“Doesn’t the hostel provide those?”
   
“I’m in a growing phrase. Eating a 2nd dinner outside is hardly an issue.”
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“I’m in a growing phrase. Eating a 2nd dinner outside is a different matter.”
   
 
“I could treat you to dinner, all you can eat.”
 
“I could treat you to dinner, all you can eat.”
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“Aren’t you a black mage?”
 
“Aren’t you a black mage?”
   
“You are so dense,” sighed Shizuno. “Ranjou-san is glaring at me, so I'll be returning to my seat,” and she left.
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“You are so dense,” sigh Shizuno. “Ranjou-san is glaring at me, so I’m returning to my seat,” and she left.
   
Glancing out of the corner of his eyes, he saw Satsuki, who had just opened the classroom rear door, staring at them from across the room.
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Glancing out of the corner of his eyes, he saw Satsuki, who had just opened the classroom rear door, staring cross eyes at them.
   
Since Moroha pretended not to see her, she gave a “hmmp” and went to her seat.
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As Moroha pretended not to see her, she gave a “hmmp” and went to her seat.
   
 
Ignoring the grudge filled air generated by jealous girls.
 
Ignoring the grudge filled air generated by jealous girls.
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From the front door of the classroom, the large body of Isurugi Gen appeared.
 
From the front door of the classroom, the large body of Isurugi Gen appeared.
   
He swept his gaze around the classrooms once, and all the girls who were dreamily looking at Moroha tried their hardest to avoid looking Gen.
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He swept his gaze around the classrooms once, and all the girls who were dreamily looking at Moroha turned their faces away from Gen.
   
 
Even the guys, who were originally embarrassed by the delicate mood of the girls, strived not to look at Gen in the eyes.
 
Even the guys, who were originally embarrassed by the delicate mood of the girls, strived not to look at Gen in the eyes.
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“What did you say, bitch?”
 
“What did you say, bitch?”
   
Gen, fully roused from his previous lethargy and stood up again. Moroha could not help but cover his face with his hands.
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Gen got emotionally excited and stood up again. Moroha cannot help but covered his face with his hands.
   
Gen looked at Satsuki with death in his eyes, while Satsuki fearlessly stared back with scorn.
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Gen looked at Satsuki with death in his eyes, while Satsuki fearlessly stared back with scornful eyes.
   
A death-match …… did not happen.
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A deathmatch …… did not happen.
   
 
“Huh. There’s no point in messing around with a weakling.”
 
“Huh. There’s no point in messing around with a weakling.”
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“This kind of thing, it’s better to decide it earlier.”
 
“This kind of thing, it’s better to decide it earlier.”
   
What did you meant by [earlier]? What was [better to decide]? Moroha could understand.
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What did you meant by [earlier]? What was [better to decide]? Moroha cannot understand.
   
 
“The No.1 is you, lets decide it that way,” Moroha replied indifferently.
 
“The No.1 is you, lets decide it that way,” Moroha replied indifferently.
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“I won’t shut up. Anyway, Isurugi was running all over you, why did you remain silent even so, Moroha?”
 
“I won’t shut up. Anyway, Isurugi was running all over you, why did you remain silent even so, Moroha?”
   
“Because the topic of "who's the best" is dreadfully boring.”
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“Because the topic of No.1 is dreadfully boring.”
   
To Moroha, lunch was the most important thing right at this moment. He eagerly tore open the bread packaging.
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To Moroha, lunch was the most important thing right at that moment. He eagerly tore open the bread packaging.
   
 
“Don’t you feel any defiance when other people ridicule you?”
 
“Don’t you feel any defiance when other people ridicule you?”
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“Nope, none whatsoever,” replied Moroha as he stuffed his mouth full of pizza toast.
 
“Nope, none whatsoever,” replied Moroha as he stuffed his mouth full of pizza toast.
   
“I guess Moroha is more in love with money than power?” asked Shizuno straightforwardly from his side.
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“I guess Moroha love money better?” asked Shizuno straightforwardly from his side.
   
 
“[Love] is not the appropriate word to use. I’m not a miser or anything. I just felt that it’s hard to go through life without money, and I also cannot repay my Uncle and aunt. I don’t want that.”
 
“[Love] is not the appropriate word to use. I’m not a miser or anything. I just felt that it’s hard to go through life without money, and I also cannot repay my Uncle and aunt. I don’t want that.”
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“I was so angered by you that I couldn’t concentrate on the lessons the entire morning.”
 
“I was so angered by you that I couldn’t concentrate on the lessons the entire morning.”
   
“No, you had better concentrate on the lessons,” countered Moroha. “I’m not asking you to study till you spit blood out, but since the fees are free, please don’t waste the chance to get a good education.”
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“No, you had better concentrate on the lessons,” contered Moroha. “I’m not asking you to study till you spit blood out, but since the fees are free, please don’t waste the chance to get a good education.”
   
 
“This….I will admit that I am at fault on this matter,” said the embarrassed Satsuki as she played with her ponytail after being scolded by Moroha.
 
“This….I will admit that I am at fault on this matter,” said the embarrassed Satsuki as she played with her ponytail after being scolded by Moroha.
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“Moroha is really an outstanding student.”
 
“Moroha is really an outstanding student.”
   
“I’m not up to that standard. After all the efforts my uncle spent convincing me to come to high school, if I were to leisurely pass my time here without making an effort, I’ll be so ashamed that I’d punch myself.”
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“I’m not up to that standard. After all the efforts my uncle spent convincing me to come to high school, if I were to leisurely pass my time here without making an effort, I’ll be so ashamed that I’ll punch myself.”
   
Even though he was not putting any financial burden on his Uncle right now, Moroha felt that he might as well study hard instead of wasting his time. If he were to do that, he might as well go find a full-time job.
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Even though he was not putting any financial burden on his Uncle right now, Moroha felt that he might as study hard instead of wasting his time. If he were to do that, he might as well go find a full-time job.
   
 
“AHHH~~AHH. I still feel so frustrated.”
 
“AHHH~~AHH. I still feel so frustrated.”
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“The me just now, who thought you were a model student, was an idiot,” Satsuki sighed exaggeratedly.
 
“The me just now, who thought you were a model student, was an idiot,” Satsuki sighed exaggeratedly.
   
“Forget it, there will be no next time. I don’t want to be disciplined for breaking the school rules.”
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“Forget it, that’ll be no next time. I don’t want to be disciplined for breaking the school rules.”
   
 
Looking off to the side, she sucked greedily at the orange juice.
 
Looking off to the side, she sucked greedily at the orange juice.
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“Ah, it’s so tasty.”
 
“Ah, it’s so tasty.”
   
Hearing this clumsy thanks, Moroha and Shizuno can only smiled bitterly at each other.
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Hearing this clumsy thanks, Moroha and Satsukican only smiled bitterly at each other.
   
 
Following, the two of them also took out more bread from the bags.
 
Following, the two of them also took out more bread from the bags.
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The pairing of soft bread and crispy skin gave the outer layer a sweet taste, which combined with the exciting mature tasting filling; it was the perfect blend of sweetness and spiciness.
 
The pairing of soft bread and crispy skin gave the outer layer a sweet taste, which combined with the exciting mature tasting filling; it was the perfect blend of sweetness and spiciness.
   
“You said “AHHHHH!” You actually said “AHHHHHHH!” And an in, in, in…indirect kiss!”
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“You said “AHHHHH!” You actually said “AHHHHHHH!” And an In,in,in…indirect kiss!”
   
 
“What indirect kiss? Are you an elementary school child?”
 
“What indirect kiss? Are you an elementary school child?”
   
“How could you do that when you already have a sister, you heartless playboy!”
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“How could you do that when you already have a sister, you radish of a playboy!”
   
“Heartless? Playboy? Is that something you said to your brother in the past?”
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“What radish or playboy? Is that something you said to your brother in the past?”
   
 
“I wouldn’t say that! Ah~ah, to think Fraga was so gentle last time. He will go [Ahhhhhh] and feed me every day. How did he change into such a philanderer?”
 
“I wouldn’t say that! Ah~ah, to think Fraga was so gentle last time. He will go [Ahhhhhh] and feed me every day. How did he change into such a philanderer?”
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“How could I not make a fuss? How many times had I said this, this is a major event for a girl!”
 
“How could I not make a fuss? How many times had I said this, this is a major event for a girl!”
   
“It’s only a touch between lips.”
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“It’s only a touch between lips and lips.”
   
 
“What do you mean by [only]?!”
 
“What do you mean by [only]?!”
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On the other hand, Shizuno’s dimples were showing up on her face. She must be feeling happy about teasing Satsuki.
 
On the other hand, Shizuno’s dimples were showing up on her face. She must be feeling happy about teasing Satsuki.
   
The single organism that was straight-laced Satsuki had not notice that yet. Shizuno was still better at this. Looking at this, Moroha could not help but smile.
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The single organism that was straight-laced Satsuki had not notice that yet. Shizuno was still better at this. Looking at this, Moroha could not help but smiled.
   
 
“I’m full.” Moroha clapped his hand together in appreciation and thought about how peaceful the day was.
 
“I’m full.” Moroha clapped his hand together in appreciation and thought about how peaceful the day was.
   
Of course, he would only come to regret his naïvety later in the day.
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Of course, he would deeply realized how naïve his thinking was later in the day.
   
 
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<center><big><big>◆◆◆</big></big></center>
   
After changing into the battle suits inside the changing rooms, the three of them walked together towards the tunnel.
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After changing into the battle suits inside the changing rooms, the three of them walked together toward in a tunnel.
   
 
For the afternoon practical lessons, they came to the first training arena again.
 
For the afternoon practical lessons, they came to the first training arena again.
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His statement did make some sense.
 
His statement did make some sense.
   
But only in a twisted manner, similar to the logic of a thief.
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But only in a twisted manner, similar to the logics of a thief.
   
 
“Ah, so that’s it. Isurugi-kun is so clever. That’s great.”
 
“Ah, so that’s it. Isurugi-kun is so clever. That’s great.”
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Next, she ran out covering her ears.
 
Next, she ran out covering her ears.
   
“Wait, Satsuki.” Moroha wasn’t able to catch her, his voice didn't even reach her ears.
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“Wait, Satsuki.” Moroha wasn’t able to catch her, not even his voice penetrated past her ears.
   
 
Satsuki ran into the connecting tunnel under the eyes of the entire year one student body.
 
Satsuki ran into the connecting tunnel under the eyes of the entire year one student body.
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He wanted to hold her shaking delicate shoulders.
 
He wanted to hold her shaking delicate shoulders.
   
He couldn’t ignore Satsuki.
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He couldn’t ignored Satsuki, ignored the crying Satsuki.
   
 
Moroha did not hesitate and chased after her.
 
Moroha did not hesitate and chased after her.
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Satsuki continued to remain silent.
 
Satsuki continued to remain silent.
   
So it means that he can stay at her side, Moroha forced himself to interpret her silence as that.
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So it means that he cannot stay at her side, Moroha chose to interpret her silence as that meaning forcefully.
   
 
The weather report had stated that the spring season for this year will be a good one. As proven by looking up into the sky, the mild sun was gently shining on and warming up the two of them.
 
The weather report had stated that the spring season for this year will be a good one. As proven by looking up into the sky, the mild sun was gently shining on and warming up the two of them.
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How many sheep-like clouds had he counted floating pass in the sky?
 
How many sheep-like clouds had he counted floating pass in the sky?
   
“I wanted Onii-sama to praise me.” Satsuki said mumbled suddenly.
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“I wanted Onii-sama to praise me.” Satsuki said softly suddenly.
   
 
Moroha was shocked lightly by her sudden utterance.
 
Moroha was shocked lightly by her sudden utterance.
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Moroha felt Satsuki nodding her head.
 
Moroha felt Satsuki nodding her head.
   
“Still, I wasn’t lonely at all. I had Salacia’s memories and dreamed of Fraga every night when I sleep. To Salacia, Fraga was her world and everything. To me, it was the same.”
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“Still, I wasn’t lonely at all. I had Salacia’s memories and dreamt of Fraga every night when I sleep. To Salacia, Fraga was her world and everything. To me, it was the same.”
   
 
She confessed all that in a mournful voice and a soft tone. To Satsuki, her beloved Onii-sama is a supremely important existence.
 
She confessed all that in a mournful voice and a soft tone. To Satsuki, her beloved Onii-sama is a supremely important existence.
   
While temporarily ignoring the fact that Moroha was that beloved Onii-sama for the moment, the loyalty she displayed toward that love wwould make anyone feel touched by her.
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While temporarily ignoring the fact that Moroha was that beloved Onii-sama for the moment, the loyalty she displayed toward that love will make anyone feel touched by her.
   
 
“After I passed the test and found myself a <Savior>, and informed that I’m not the only one who had memories of their past life, and that there is a school that gathered <Saviors>, I had a thought…….”
 
“After I passed the test and found myself a <Savior>, and informed that I’m not the only one who had memories of their past life, and that there is a school that gathered <Saviors>, I had a thought…….”
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“My goals are not noble at all. I actually had no rights to preach to Isurugi, because I’m the same as him. Looking at him, it was like looking into a mirror and seeing my ugly side. I cannot resist myself and challenged him. And I lost……even when those fellow laughs at Onii-sama, as your sister I cannot even protect your honor. I am so useless…..”
 
“My goals are not noble at all. I actually had no rights to preach to Isurugi, because I’m the same as him. Looking at him, it was like looking into a mirror and seeing my ugly side. I cannot resist myself and challenged him. And I lost……even when those fellow laughs at Onii-sama, as your sister I cannot even protect your honor. I am so useless…..”
   
Her voice started shaking and break apart as she talked, and after reaching the end she started crying again.
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She voice started shaking and break apart as she talked, and after reaching the end she started crying again.
   
 
Hugging her legs, she rolled her small body even tighter into a ball, looking even smaller.
 
Hugging her legs, she rolled her small body even tighter into a ball, looking even smaller.
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“Eh…..what?” Satsuki asked with a doubtful expression.
 
“Eh…..what?” Satsuki asked with a doubtful expression.
   
Then, her face spoiled by crying was blushed a faint gentle red.
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Then, her face spoilt by crying was blushed a faint gentle red.
   
 
Moroha continue purposefully:
 
Moroha continue purposefully:
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Even when Gen started shouting, Moroha remained silent. He only looked back at them with his ever increasingly deepening and darkening fearsome eyes.
 
Even when Gen started shouting, Moroha remained silent. He only looked back at them with his ever increasingly deepening and darkening fearsome eyes.
   
(This guy… can actually give this kind of look…)
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(This guy….can actually give this kind of look…)
   
 
Gen could feel sweat beneath his clothes.
 
Gen could feel sweat beneath his clothes.
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“Still, it’s not like I don’t understand your feelings. So let’s change locations. So why don’t you let me handle this matter? If you listen to me, I guarantee the two of you will get to fight as much as you want.” Tanaka-sensei said as he wiped his black-rimmed glasses with his handkerchief.
 
“Still, it’s not like I don’t understand your feelings. So let’s change locations. So why don’t you let me handle this matter? If you listen to me, I guarantee the two of you will get to fight as much as you want.” Tanaka-sensei said as he wiped his black-rimmed glasses with his handkerchief.
   
Gen, intrigued, nodded his head. Moroha appeared without dissension ——
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Gen, intrigued, nodded his head. Moroha appeared without dissention ——
   
 
In this way, the curtains raised for the battle stage between Moroha and Gen.
 
In this way, the curtains raised for the battle stage between Moroha and Gen.
 
 
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