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The male hostel of Akane Academy is a modern building completed around five years ago.
 
The male hostel of Akane Academy is a modern building completed around five years ago.
   
When one describes a male hostel, an image of a dingy, dirty building will emerge, but this building is different.
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When one described a male hostel, an image of a dingy, dirty building will emerge, but this building is different.
   
Designed like a high class hotel, even the entrance is modernised with an automatic sensor gate.
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Designed like a high class hotel, even the entrance is modernised with an automatic sensor gate.
   
Moroha’s room is located on the third floor, a carpeted room with western interior design. Mohora had long wanted to live in a place without tatami flooring and on a real bed. He was fairly dancing in joy when he moved into this room.
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Mohora’s room is located on the third floor, a carpeted room with western interior design. Mohora had long wanted to live in a place without tatami floorings and on a real bed, he was fairly dancing in joy when he moved into this room.
   
 
Moroha woke up to the alarm clock on the second morning of his high school life.
 
Moroha woke up to the alarm clock on the second morning of his high school life.
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There is even air-conditioning. Also, a high-end laptop computer with free, unlimited internet access.
 
There is even air-conditioning. Also, a high-end laptop computer with free, unlimited internet access.
   
To Moroha who came from a poor family, every item in this room is an expensive luxury item that he had longed for his entire life. He was deeply touched when he first realised he could use all of them.
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To Moroha who came from a poor family, every item in this room is an expensive luxury item that he had longed for his entire life. He was deeply touched when he first realised he can use all of them.
   
For him, who came to school with almost no personal belongings, in a single night he had turned into a high school student with a fulfilling life. How much investment was poured into this school? While he contemplated that question, he was cheerful. “It’s great to have entered this school.”
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For him who came to school with almost no personal belongings, in a single night he had turned into a high school student with a fulfilling life. How much investment was poured into this school? While he contemplated that question, he was cheerful. “It’s great to have entered this school.”
   
 
Moroha climbed out of the bed and switched off the alarm.
 
Moroha climbed out of the bed and switched off the alarm.
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Then he noticed the letter he had placed on the table.
 
Then he noticed the letter he had placed on the table.
   
“I’ll need to remember to post this on the way to school,” he muttered as he confirmed the address and name on the envelope. The address is his uncle’s home, which was where Moroha was living until now. He had promised to send a letter home after the end of the welcoming ceremony.
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“I’ll need to remember to post this on the way to school,” he muttered that as he confirmed the address and name on the envelope. The address is his uncle’s home, which was where Moroha was living until now. He had promised to send a letter home after the end of the welcoming ceremony.
   
 
As stated before, his uncle and aunt who raised him are not considered well-off financially.
 
As stated before, his uncle and aunt who raised him are not considered well-off financially.
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Although not as close to them as a real family, Moroha still liked and respected the two people who bought him up.
 
Although not as close to them as a real family, Moroha still liked and respected the two people who bought him up.
   
And because of that, Moroha was not willing to add to their burdens and was going to abandon a high school education. He wanted to enter society as soon as possible as a working individual so that he could repay them.
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And because of that, Moroha was not willing to add to their burdens and was going to abandon a high school education. He wanted to enter society as soon as possible as a working individual so that he can repay them.
   
 
Of course the two of them objected strenuously, and wanted him to go to high school, and even University if possible. In his last year of middle school, they would discuss the matter with him almost every day.
 
Of course the two of them objected strenuously, and wanted him to go to high school, and even University if possible. In his last year of middle school, they would discuss the matter with him almost every day.
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Scratching his head, he contemplated the truth of the saying: You’ll talk to yourself more when you live alone.
 
Scratching his head, he contemplated the truth of the saying: You’ll talk to yourself more when you live alone.
   
Ok, lets have breakfast. Wearing his sleepwear come house wear, he proceeded to the cafeteria in a T-shirt and shorts.
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Ok, Lets have breakfast. Wearing his sleepwear 'come house wear, he proceeded to the cafeteria in a T-shirt and shorts.
   
He was not worried about his attire as there are mostly guys in the cafeteria, and all of them were his peers.
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He was not worried about his attire as there are only mostly guys in the cafeteria, and all of them were his peers.
   
 
The cafeteria is a huge room that can seat more than a 100 people at the same time.
 
The cafeteria is a huge room that can seat more than a 100 people at the same time.
   
The meal attendants will serve you after you queue in the line with your meal trays.
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The meal attendants will serve you after you queued in the line with your meal trays.
   
Breakfast for today is rice, Miso soup, fried lotus roots, egg rolls and grilled fish with salad as a side dish.
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Breakfast for today is Rice, Miso soup, fried lotus roots, egg rolls and grilled fish with salad as a side dish.
   
 
(A 3-dish meal early in the morning, how extravagant.)
 
(A 3-dish meal early in the morning, how extravagant.)
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A great situation for Moroha who was always hungry like any adolescent.
 
A great situation for Moroha who was always hungry like any adolescent.
   
If his current life could continue like this for the next 3 years, he’d be living his dream.
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If his current life can continued like this for the next 3 years, he’d be living his dream.
   
(Still, the taste is not quite as good as Auntie’s cooking.)
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(Still, the taste is still not as good as Auntie’s cooking.)
   
 
Moroha daydreamed as he ate his breakfast. It’ll be a lie to say that he is not homesick.
 
Moroha daydreamed as he ate his breakfast. It’ll be a lie to say that he is not homesick.
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That was the last family photo he took with his parents when he was in elementary school.
 
That was the last family photo he took with his parents when he was in elementary school.
   
Moroha lived with his family in a small countryside town. His parents, in partnership with the local agriculture farms, operated a small eatery with fresh products and ingredients.
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Moroha lived with his family in a small countryside town. His parents, in partnership with the local agriculture farms, operate a small eatery with fresh products and ingredients.
   
 
When Moroha was seven, his parents drove a small truck out to the farms to stock up.
 
When Moroha was seven, his parents drove a small truck out to the farms to stock up.
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That was basically the situation.
 
That was basically the situation.
   
Once he understood the situation, he unhesitatingly rushed to the adults, and cried out “Use my blood.”
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Once he understood the situation, he unhesitatingly rushed to the adults, and cried out ”Use my blood.”
   
 
He knew that he had the same blood type as his parents.
 
He knew that he had the same blood type as his parents.
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He looked at the boy in the photo.
 
He looked at the boy in the photo.
   
The boy looked back at him with irritated eyes.
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The he in the photo looked back at him with irritated eyes.
   
 
In the photo, his mother was hugging him, an elementary school student then, from behind. Due to that, he was exhibiting an unhappy and embarrassed expression.
 
In the photo, his mother was hugging him, an elementary school student then, from behind. Due to that, he was exhibiting an unhappy and embarrassed expression.

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