Editing Saijaku Muhai no Bahamut:Volume 1 Prologue

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A handsome face with silver hair and ash coloured eyes.
 
A handsome face with silver hair and ash coloured eyes.
   
That man who wore a cape with a refined design imprinted on it acted in a manly manner like that of a noble, but he looked at the girl with sparkling eyes that made you think of a hungry beast.
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That man who wore a cape with a refined design imprinted on it acted in a manly manner like that of a noble, but he looked at the girl with his sparkling eyes that made you think of a hungry beast.
   
 
However, the girl clad in a black dress who had no emotion in her eyes didn’t get scared and instead gazed at the youth with her eyes.
 
However, the girl clad in a black dress who had no emotion in her eyes didn’t get scared and instead gazed at the youth with her eyes.
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The youth made an uncanny look, and stared at the girl for a while.
 
The youth made an uncanny look, and stared at the girl for a while.
   
“……Kuhahahaha! Oh I see! So you were that kind of girl! One of those people! This is a masterpiece! Hahahahaha! Hahahahahahahahahahahaha!”
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“……Kuhahahaha! Oh I see! So you were that kind of girl! One of that kind of people! This is a masterpiece! Hahahahaha! Hahahahahahahahahahahaha!”
   
 
He suddenly put his hand on his forehead and laughed as if he was mad.
 
He suddenly put his hand on his forehead and laughed as if he was mad.
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“I’ll give that to you. The “power” that will change fate—that sword device, that is. So flee while taking that with you. This castle will go down very soon, lady.”
 
“I’ll give that to you. The “power” that will change fate—that sword device, that is. So flee while taking that with you. This castle will go down very soon, lady.”
   
The man said that while putting on a smile that didn't hold any of the insanity he'd shown till now.
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The man said that while putting on a smile that didn’t carry any of the craziness he had till just now.
   
 
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