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As the two argued back and forth, the gate closed with a bang behind them. Startled, they turned around; however, they found no one there. They tried pushing the gate open, but it wouldn’t budge.
 
As the two argued back and forth, the gate closed with a bang behind them. Startled, they turned around; however, they found no one there. They tried pushing the gate open, but it wouldn’t budge.
   
"…I figured something like this might happen, but it seems like we’ve been trapped."
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"…I considered something like this might happen, but it seems like we’ve been trapped."
   
 
They heard a deep laugh coming from somewhere. Frightened, Sierra clung even closer to Jin. With the clearly shining moon at his back…Atop the school roof, a human figure could be seen. Long hair fluttering in the wind, the long slender figure was standing motionless. It was Konoe Ukyou. Jin squinted his eyes in disbelief.
 
They heard a deep laugh coming from somewhere. Frightened, Sierra clung even closer to Jin. With the clearly shining moon at his back…Atop the school roof, a human figure could be seen. Long hair fluttering in the wind, the long slender figure was standing motionless. It was Konoe Ukyou. Jin squinted his eyes in disbelief.
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"You’re suddenly energetic, huh. Are you over your fear of ghosts as well?"
 
"You’re suddenly energetic, huh. Are you over your fear of ghosts as well?"
   
While hiding behind his back, Sierra declared in response to Jin's interjection,
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While hiding behind his back, Sierra declared in response to Jin's interjection.
   
 
"Of course you’re the one going, commoner."
 
"Of course you’re the one going, commoner."
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"Nowadays, you don't call it that! It's a Persian restaurant, not a curry shop!"
 
"Nowadays, you don't call it that! It's a Persian restaurant, not a curry shop!"
   
Alf snapped sharply at Sierra. With extinguisher chemicals in their eyes, the big guys were on the ground, writhing about in horrendous pain. Alf pointed at the school and vigorously declared,
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Alf snapped sharply at Sierra. With extinguisher chemicals in their eyes, the big guys were on the ground, writhing about in horrendous pain. Alf pointed at the school and vigorously declared.
   
 
"Come on, we're going! We're taking back that lamp!"
 
"Come on, we're going! We're taking back that lamp!"
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"You're coming too. You have to help your Master, you know!"
 
"You're coming too. You have to help your Master, you know!"
   
"Wha-? I-It's not like this commoner is my Master or anything!"
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"Wha? It, it's not like this commoner is my Master or anything!"
   
Sierra retorted on reflex. With a hint of suspicion, Jin asked Alf,
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Sierra retorted on reflex. With a hint of suspicion, Jin asked Alf.
   
 
"How do you know about that? It couldn't be that you're also..."
 
"How do you know about that? It couldn't be that you're also..."
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"Ooh...Za-Zadou...Super cute..."
 
"Ooh...Za-Zadou...Super cute..."
   
"These guys too, huh! What's going on here?!"
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"These guys too huh! What's going on here?!"
   
 
"It's the Daemon of Adultery, Majnun."
 
"It's the Daemon of Adultery, Majnun."
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"Yuuya, come to your senses!"
 
"Yuuya, come to your senses!"
   
Taking a hold of Yuuya's shoulder, Jin pulled him off of Sierra. Compared to the army of giants from earlier, Yuuya who had probably never lifted anything heavier than a guitar was almost too easy an opponent. When Jin, who was used to mountain climbing and digging with a shovel when excavating ruins and the like, exerted his full strength; Yuuya was sent flying and his back hit the wall.
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Taking a hold of Yuuya's shoulder, Jin pulled him off of Sierra. Compared to the army of giants from earlier, Yuuya who had probably never lifted anything heavier than a guitar was almost too easy an opponent. When Jin, who was used to mountain climbing and digging with a shovel when excavating ruins and the like, exerted his full strength, Yuuya was sent flying and his back hit the wall.
   
 
"You okay, Zadou?"
 
"You okay, Zadou?"
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"It's Majnun's doing. The love this boy has for the girl has turned into jealousy."
 
"It's Majnun's doing. The love this boy has for the girl has turned into jealousy."
   
Hearing what Alf said, Jin stared at Yuuya in disbelief. His eyes were glowing red."
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Hearing what Alf said, Jin stared at Yuuya in disbelief. His eyes were glowing red.
   
 
"You mean he's jealous enough to want to kill me?
 
"You mean he's jealous enough to want to kill me?
   
"It's because Majnun takes the darker aspects of the human heart and amplifies them several-fold, you see,"
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"It's because Majnun takes the darker aspects of the human heart and amplifies them several-fold, you see."
   
 
Alf said before grabbing Yuuya's hair from behind and yanking him off of Jin.
 
Alf said before grabbing Yuuya's hair from behind and yanking him off of Jin.
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"I guess you reap what you sow, huh."
 
"I guess you reap what you sow, huh."
   
Being accused simultaneously by both Jin and Alf, Sierra hastily objected,
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Being accused simultaneously by both Jin and Alf, Sierra hastily objected.
   
 
"I wouldn't do that sort of thing! I'm quite sure that I maintain proper appearances, after all!"
 
"I wouldn't do that sort of thing! I'm quite sure that I maintain proper appearances, after all!"
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Majnun let out a final pained death cry. After it had finished swallowing Majnun, the sword returned to its original size. Subsequently, in a puff of smoke, the sword reverted back into Alf. There was just a slight swell to Alf's slender stomach.
 
Majnun let out a final pained death cry. After it had finished swallowing Majnun, the sword returned to its original size. Subsequently, in a puff of smoke, the sword reverted back into Alf. There was just a slight swell to Alf's slender stomach.
   
"Hmm. The essence of Majnun the devil of adultery, it had quite a unique flavor I think.
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"Hmm. The essence of Majnun the devil of adultery, it had quite a unique falvor I think.
   
 
She rubbed her belly looking rather satisfied. Jin's armor had also reverted to its original ring form at the same time that Alf reappeared. Jin touched his mouth in disbelief.
 
She rubbed her belly looking rather satisfied. Jin's armor had also reverted to its original ring form at the same time that Alf reappeared. Jin touched his mouth in disbelief.
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"Your logic is so out there, I'm not even going to try to argue with you."
 
"Your logic is so out there, I'm not even going to try to argue with you."
   
Suffering from a headache, Jin placed his hand on Sierra's head and unwillingly uttered the still unfamiliar incantation.
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Suffering from a headache, Jin place his head on Sierra's head and unwillingly uttered the still unfamiliar incantation.
   
 
"Chichinpuipui."
 
"Chichinpuipui."
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"It's only because he likes you that he was taken over by Majnun. Just forgive him already."
 
"It's only because he likes you that he was taken over by Majnun. Just forgive him already."
   
Just when things had calmed down, Sierra snapped at him like a razor's edge.
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Just when he things had calmed down, Sierra snapped at him like a razor's edge.
   
 
"Hey you, don't you feel mortified?"
 
"Hey you, don't you feel mortified?"
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"You're...that library committee member, right?"
 
"You're...that library committee member, right?"
   
"I've brought the Arabian Nights book that senpai was looking for."
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"I've brought the Arabian Nights book that sempai was looking for."
   
 
Satoko's eyes were generally hidden by her bangs, so he couldn't really make out her expression. Jin knit his brow suspiciously.
 
Satoko's eyes were generally hidden by her bangs, so he couldn't really make out her expression. Jin knit his brow suspiciously.
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Yuuya had said he was worried about sleepwalking and gone to see the school counselor about it, so it seemed he wouldn't be back for a while. He still couldn't reach his parents by phone.
 
Yuuya had said he was worried about sleepwalking and gone to see the school counselor about it, so it seemed he wouldn't be back for a while. He still couldn't reach his parents by phone.
   
The magic lamp was still inside one of his drawers. Last night he had been thinking that he wouldn't call her out a second time, but...as he considered what Alf had said, they needed to raise Sierra's genie level as much as possible if they wanted to oppose the Ark Daemons.
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The magic lamp was still inside one of his drawers. Last night he had been thinking that he wouldn't call her out a second time, but...as he considered what Alf had said, they need to raise Sierra's genie level as much as possible if they wanted to oppose the Ark Daemons.
   
 
"I'd rather not have to see that selfish girl, but...Well, it can't be helped I guess."
 
"I'd rather not have to see that selfish girl, but...Well, it can't be helped I guess."
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"It's not fine. I have to raise my genie level or..."
 
"It's not fine. I have to raise my genie level or..."
   
Sierra stood up and scowled at him. Jin was somewhat taken aback.
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Sierra stood up and scowled him. Jin was somewhat taken aback.
   
 
"...Ah, I know. Since I don't like wiping, there's a better way. Actually, I heard this from my head maid Mary about the essentials of cleaning."
 
"...Ah, I know. Since I don't like wiping, there's a better way. Actually, I heard this from my head maid Mary about the essentials of cleaning."

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