Editing Owari no Chronicle:Volume12 Chapter 4

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“Do they think the best option is to speak out now so they can become that manager?”
 
“Do they think the best option is to speak out now so they can become that manager?”
   
“This is a troublesome thing, isn’t it?” commented Ooshiro.
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“This would is a troublesome thing, isn’t it?” commented Ooshiro.
   
 
She nodded and said more.
 
She nodded and said more.
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It came from Itsukaichi Road which cut east to west through Akigawa.
 
It came from Itsukaichi Road which cut east to west through Akigawa.
   
On the eastern end of the road, it traveled around the outer edge of a school and two sounds played in competition as they rushed down that two-lane road.
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On the eastern end of the road, it travelled around the outer edge of a school and two sounds played in competition as they rushed down that two-lane road.
   
 
The two sounds were those of something tearing through the air.
 
The two sounds were those of something tearing through the air.
   
They traveled west below the streetlights.
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They travelled west below the streetlights.
   
 
Both of them took the form of flight.
 
Both of them took the form of flight.
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She evaded Kazami’s shots and pursued as her opponent accelerated away.
 
She evaded Kazami’s shots and pursued as her opponent accelerated away.
   
“Honestly. …Just lose already!”
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“Honestly …Just lose already!”
   
 
Meanwhile, she controlled her broom like a snowboard and swung around the sword that was as tall as she was.
 
Meanwhile, she controlled her broom like a snowboard and swung around the sword that was as tall as she was.
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“Well, I’m glad to see things are lively back there.”
 
“Well, I’m glad to see things are lively back there.”
   
Kazami raised her eyebrows and smiled bitterly.
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Kazami raised her eyebrows a smiled bitterly.
   
 
“But fine. Let’s settle this!”
 
“But fine. Let’s settle this!”
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The rising walls of broken pavement turned into cresting waves.
 
The rising walls of broken pavement turned into cresting waves.
   
She would only be hit by a spray of water, so she continued on.
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She would only be hit by a spray of water, so she continued on
   
 
She could see Kazami through the waves and the girl had begun waterskiing.
 
She could see Kazami through the waves and the girl had begun waterskiing.
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“Short sword!?”
 
“Short sword!?”
   
“I probably should have done this from the beginning, but then I couldn’t have caught you off guard.”
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I probably should have done this from the beginning, but then I couldn’t have caught you off guard.”
   
 
Now the one left defenseless was Kazami.
 
Now the one left defenseless was Kazami.

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