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-Girls in prison must praise: 监禁绝赞少女中
  
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== Night 1 ==
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=== Beroubouchou ===
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Lit. tongue blade.
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=== Melodia Noise ===
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Written as "Song of Tears". Except, the voice actually says "Melodia Noise", so Guriko wouldn't have any clue what it's talking about. On a side note, Melodia Noise uses archaic language, but I decided not to use archaic English.
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=== Night 1 Questionable translations ===
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-"The Identical Structure of God and Me": Shirayuki's in class 1-D of 县立香条菱高中. Also, title = 上帝与我的一致构造. Plus all sorts of random uncertainties throughout, like whatever the stuff I had as "preface" and "postface" actually are since those don't make sense, though I won't post the entire thing.
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-Tatsue "meeting" Mitaka again: 一边凝视着久违重逢的青梅竹马
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-Hit the nail on the head: Pretty literal translation because I have no clue what it's supposed to mean. 该说是一针见血，还是气氛危险，他这种不同于以往的迷人言行是怎么回事?
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-Tatsue going to Kannonsakazaki High School: 为了知道具有贤木财团继承资格，自己必须打败的大哥——贤木愚龙的事，龙惠从这个春天起，便进入贤木任职的观音逆咲高中就读。
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-The girl who fell down: Skipped a description because I had no clue what it meant. 身体呈大字形. And, like the previous chapter, I think the sounds she make need to be fixed, especially some that I basically made up. Oh and I think what I used for her "nickname" sounds horrible.
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-2nd line after "Mitaka" forms his goal: “御贵”却连出乎意料之外的状态也应付不了
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-Mitsuki after her fall: 肉碎得稀烂，淌血，数根骨头外突，脸也溃不成形。
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-The phrase right before Tatsue blows at Mitsuki: 她用颤抖的指尖缠绕住风，使出全力吹向蜜姬。
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-Bok leaves: 叶卜么? ..? Google translate from Japanese gave me this.
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-"Kara" - Tossing the Chinese character (丽) into http://www.kawa.net/works/ajax/romanize/japanese-e.html didn't work, so I had Google translate it into Japanese and used that. Highly suspect method, and I'm not sure that’s even a name. Also not sure about something else in the conversation, except I just realized that my poor choice of a word processor cut off everything after this point (back to MS Word for me), and I don’t feel like digging it up again from the text.
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-The rest of my uncertain translations will be put back in at a to-be-determined date. It’s getting late and I wanna finish translating the chapter tonight.
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Revision as of 08:56, 14 February 2012

Translator's Notes and References for

蟲と眼球とチョコレートパフェ

Mushi and Eyeball and a Chocolate Parfait


Start

Questionable translations

-Need better onomatopoeia for whatever noise this girl's making, I think.

-squinted her eyes: Is this a typo? 夏子心想，一边醚起眼睛望着正在吃巧克力圣代的少女。

-I'd like to pay: I get the feeling that this isn't what you're supposed to say, but unfortunately, I basically never eat at restaurants and the like, so I have no clue...

-Cooking utensils: 大碗公、长筷、免洗筷这类餐具，已经先从纸箱里拿出来了。Not sure what each of them are, but they all seem to be cooking utensils.

-*: Also says the bowl was placed on 免洗筷, and I don't know what that is.

-After cutting off her sense of touch: 少女在切断自己意识上的感官后，敲了位在公寓三楼的隔壁房间的门。

-Girls in prison must praise: 监禁绝赞少女中

Night 1

Beroubouchou

Lit. tongue blade.

Melodia Noise

Written as "Song of Tears". Except, the voice actually says "Melodia Noise", so Guriko wouldn't have any clue what it's talking about. On a side note, Melodia Noise uses archaic language, but I decided not to use archaic English.

Night 1 Questionable translations

-"The Identical Structure of God and Me": Shirayuki's in class 1-D of 县立香条菱高中. Also, title = 上帝与我的一致构造. Plus all sorts of random uncertainties throughout, like whatever the stuff I had as "preface" and "postface" actually are since those don't make sense, though I won't post the entire thing.

-Tatsue "meeting" Mitaka again: 一边凝视着久违重逢的青梅竹马

-Hit the nail on the head: Pretty literal translation because I have no clue what it's supposed to mean. 该说是一针见血，还是气氛危险，他这种不同于以往的迷人言行是怎么回事?

-Tatsue going to Kannonsakazaki High School: 为了知道具有贤木财团继承资格，自己必须打败的大哥——贤木愚龙的事，龙惠从这个春天起，便进入贤木任职的观音逆咲高中就读。

-The girl who fell down: Skipped a description because I had no clue what it meant. 身体呈大字形. And, like the previous chapter, I think the sounds she make need to be fixed, especially some that I basically made up. Oh and I think what I used for her "nickname" sounds horrible.

-2nd line after "Mitaka" forms his goal: “御贵”却连出乎意料之外的状态也应付不了

-Mitsuki after her fall: 肉碎得稀烂，淌血，数根骨头外突，脸也溃不成形。

-The phrase right before Tatsue blows at Mitsuki: 她用颤抖的指尖缠绕住风，使出全力吹向蜜姬。

-Bok leaves: 叶卜么? ..? Google translate from Japanese gave me this.

-"Kara" - Tossing the Chinese character (丽) into http://www.kawa.net/works/ajax/romanize/japanese-e.html didn't work, so I had Google translate it into Japanese and used that. Highly suspect method, and I'm not sure that’s even a name. Also not sure about something else in the conversation, except I just realized that my poor choice of a word processor cut off everything after this point (back to MS Word for me), and I don’t feel like digging it up again from the text.

-The rest of my uncertain translations will be put back in at a to-be-determined date. It’s getting late and I wanna finish translating the chapter tonight.



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