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“Because…”
 
“Because…”
   
It’s simply that my chance of winning has gone down.
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It’s simply that my chance of winning have gone down.
   
 
But I desisted in my heart on giving in and saying aloud my honest feelings.
 
But I desisted in my heart on giving in and saying aloud my honest feelings.
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At the end of the day, the one who wins should be none other than me.
 
At the end of the day, the one who wins should be none other than me.
   
And if we’re speaking of wanting even more… I want to attain a great difference with the second place.
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And if we’re speakung of wanting even more… I want to attain a great difference with the second place.
   
 
If I manage to stand out like that… From the results of the race it won’t be difficult to propose a negotiation with Zonmi’s father.
 
If I manage to stand out like that… From the results of the race it won’t be difficult to propose a negotiation with Zonmi’s father.
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Since the girls had gotten delayed, changing their clothes, I who had finished my own arrangements stood all alone on the snow.
 
Since the girls had gotten delayed, changing their clothes, I who had finished my own arrangements stood all alone on the snow.
   
Since I had no choice but spacing out, I think I’ll check the rules of the hundred deaths course one more time.
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Since I had no choice but spacing out, I think I’ll check one more time the rules of the hundred deaths course.
   
 
The rules are easy.
 
The rules are easy.
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… Though, at first glance, it may look like a half-baked competition, negligence is taboo.
 
… Though, at first glance, it may look like a half-baked competition, negligence is taboo.
   
As even at the best of times just traveling on a path with deeply piled up snow can have you break a bone, if you add going up a steep slope, many a monster will easily have his stamina exhausted.
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As even at the best of times just traveling by a path with deeply poled up snow can have you break a bone, if you add going up a steep slope, many a monster will easily have his stamina exhausted.
   
   
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Thereafter.
 
Thereafter.
   
The AruMeru sisters, so as to slip past the glances from those around, quickly left my side.
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The AruMeru sisters, so as to slip through the glances from those around, quickly left my side.
   
 
I thought that with Zonmi’s case, but… as expected, being a country’s princess may bring with it various hardships.
 
I thought that with Zonmi’s case, but… as expected, being a country’s princess may bring with it various hardships.
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Several minutes later.
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Several minutes after.
   
 
In the blue sky without a single cloud… The fireworks that signaled the start of the hundred deaths course were launched.
 
In the blue sky without a single cloud… The fireworks that signaled the start of the hundred deaths course were launched.
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It seems that around three quarters of the participants had rushed out with the starting signal, and in contrast, the remainding quarter seemed to be taking it leisurely.
 
It seems that around three quarters of the participants had rushed out with the starting signal, and in contrast, the remainding quarter seemed to be taking it leisurely.
   
According to Zonmi,
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According to Zonmi.
   
 
[[File:Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa 4 p143.png|thumb]]
 
[[File:Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa 4 p143.png|thumb]]
   
In this race, along the way, diverse traps were set and in the worst case, it seems that one has to be prepared to face the danger of losing one’s life.
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In this race, along the way, there were set, diverse traps and in the worst case, it seems that one has to be prepared to face the danger of losing one’s life.
   
 
This means that starting in the vanguard = demerit of being more prone to falling into a trap, while those at the back, as they have the merit of being able to retain their stamina, they can progress better in the race.
 
This means that starting in the vanguard = demerit of being more prone to falling into a trap, while those at the back, as they have the merit of being able to retain their stamina, they can progress better in the race.
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I mean, hey, that guy, he’s a mummy man. He’s from the undead tribe.
 
I mean, hey, that guy, he’s a mummy man. He’s from the undead tribe.
   
Being from the undead tribe, he wouldn’t die just by having his head gnawed.
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Being from the undead tribe, he wouldn’t die just for having his head gnawed.
   
 
Surely… Perhaps…
 
Surely… Perhaps…
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My pride as an older brother is hanging on this match… I feel that I can afford less and less to lose.
 
My pride as an older brother is hanging on this match… I feel that I can afford less and less to lose.
   
“Let’s go. The race will soon enter its mid stage. The obstacles and troubles in the course are expected to increase.”
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“Let’s go. The race will soon enter into its mid stage. The obstacles and troubles in the course are expected to increase.”
   
 
“… Yup,”
 
“… Yup,”
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“There’s no problem. The race is about to enter its final stage.
 
“There’s no problem. The race is about to enter its final stage.
   
The magical beasts that will appear from now on should be so strong that they cannot be compared with those up until now.
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The magical beasts that will appear from now on should be so strong that cannot be compared with those up until now.
   
Even with the tenacious physical ability of the little sister and her battle sense… She’s human. If it’s just simple battle power, we win.”
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Even with the tenacious physical ability of the little sister nor her battle sense… She’s human. If it’s just simple battle power, we win.”
   
 
“In other words… We can still make a comeback.”
 
“In other words… We can still make a comeback.”
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Even now, most likely, despite conducting herself with stout-heartedness, Zonmi’s weariness must be reaching its peak.
 
Even now, most likely, despite conducting herself with stout-heartedness, Zonmi’s weariness must be reaching its peak.
   
So as to not bring to waste Zonmi’s efforts… I must win this race at all costs…
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So as to not bring to waste, Zonmi’s efforts… I must win this race at all costs…
   
 
“Zonmi!? Duck!”
 
“Zonmi!? Duck!”
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The gust of wind that blew boisterously, bore such strength that it almost blew us up, stooped as we were.
 
The gust of wind that blew boisterously, bore such strength that it almost blew us up, stooped as we were.
   
Eventually, the wind passed by and Zonmi, fixing her posture and with a face that said “I can’t understand”, addressed my previous actions.
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Eventually, the wing passed through and Zonmi, fixing her posture and with a face that said “I can’t understand”, addressed my previous actions.
   
 
“… I can’t believe it. How could you, just now… Know that the wind was going to blow?”
 
“… I can’t believe it. How could you, just now… Know that the wind was going to blow?”
   
“No, just. It’s not like it’s specially groundless, but… Somehow I think I heard the wind’s sound.”
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“No, just. It’s not like it it’s specially groundless, but… Somehow I think I heard the wind’s sound.”
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
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“…!?”
 
“…!?”
   
While I was basking in the not all that bad feeling of being praised by Zonmi.
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While I was basking in the, not all that bad feeling of being praised by Zonmi.
   
 
I sensed from behind, the presence of a strong magic power.
 
I sensed from behind, the presence of a strong magic power.
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So, we could promptly see the owner of the magic power I sensed earlier before us.
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So, we promptly could see the owner of the magic power I sensed earlier before us.
   
 
“What the heck… This guy…”
 
“What the heck… This guy…”
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The color of its scales and the shape of its wings were also different from Iris’s.
 
The color of its scales and the shape of its wings were also different from Iris’s.
   
Somehow… It seems that it’s a dragon from a species other than a red dragon.
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Somehow… It seems that it’s a dragon from a species other than red dragon.
   
 
However, that wasn’t the point that surprised me.
 
However, that wasn’t the point that surprised me.
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“…”
 
“…”
   
I asked Zonmi a question related to the explanation about monsters and magical beasts I was given before.
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I asked Zonmi a question related with the explanation about monsters and magical beasts I was given before.
   
 
Magical beasts are for the most part monsters with no intelligence.
 
Magical beasts are for the most part monsters with no intelligence.
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However, no matter how many enemies or if it’s an unidentified strong foe, I am fortunate to have such a reassuring partner.
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However, no matter how many enemies or if it’s an unidentified strong foe, I am lucky for having such a reassuring partner.
   
 
Having just now gone around the side of the enemy, Zonmi has already thrust the tip of her umbrella at the back of the neck of the skull dragon.
 
Having just now gone around the side of the enemy, Zonmi has already thrust the tip of her umbrella at the back of the neck of the skull dragon.
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“…?”
 
“…?”
   
Thinking back, the carelessness of the me at the time knew no bounds.
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Thinking it back, the carelessness of the me at the time knew no bounds.
   
 
I mean, I… Even after my surroundings were filled with it, I didn’t realize that the vapor was in fact poisonous gas.
 
I mean, I… Even after my surroundings were filled with it, I didn’t realize that the vapor was in fact poisonous gas.
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At last I’ll become a man.
 
At last I’ll become a man.
   
I gulped the saliva collected inside my mouth from the nervousness, at that time.
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I gulped the saliva collected inside my moth from the nervousness, at that time.
   
   
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What is happening now before us?… Not being able to assimilate it into my head, my body just went stiff.
 
What is happening now before us?… Not being able to assimilate it into my head, my body just went stiff.
   
“… T-to think people came expressly to save you, and before them you, to neechan… You do those rude things! Human, I’ll kill you! I’ll kill you and feed you to Aruru<!--If it sound as if she’s speaking about an animal, it’s intended; if it doesn’t, please make it so like it looks-->!”
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“… T-to think people came expressly to save you, and before them you, to neechan… You do those rude things! Human, I’ll kill you! I’ll kill you and fed you to Aruru<!--If it sound as if she’s speaking about an animal, it’s intended; if it doesn’t, please make it so like it looks-->!”
   
 
“Hay, Meruru! Act properly!”
 
“Hay, Meruru! Act properly!”

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