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“…nega…kete.”
 
“…nega…kete.”
   
He realized that was a person, they sounded female, but her words were too soft to be audible.
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He realized that was person, they sounded female, but her words were too soft to be audible.
   
 
“Is someone there?”
 
“Is someone there?”
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“Um, are you okay?”
 
“Um, are you okay?”
   
The spot where he touched her transmitted a burning heat. If he looked closely, he saw she was repeatedly breathing hard from her mouth. It was as if she had sprinted with all her might. Upon further inspection, Takeshi noticed that her knees were bleeding.
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The spot where he touched her transmitted a burning heat. If he looked closely, he saw she was repeatedly breathing hard from her mouth. It was if she had sprinted with all her might. Upon further inspection, Takeshi noticed that her knees were bleeding.
   
 
“What should I do?”
 
“What should I do?”
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"It's impossible after all, this is a bad way to carry someone."
 
"It's impossible after all, this is a bad way to carry someone."
   
Using these words as a justification, Takeshi turned around and used both his hands to feel around for her thighs. He put one leg under each arm and once more got up from the ground with her on his back. This was much easier than when he dragged her, however, it would be dreadful if other people saw this situation.
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Using these words as a justification, Takeshi turned around and used both his hands to feel around for her thighs. He put one leg under each arm and once more got up from the ground with her on his back. This was much easier than when he dragged her, however, it would be dreadful other people saw this situation.
   
 
Takeshi started to hurry, he hoped that he would not be seen by anybody else. With this wish inside, Takeshi ran to the school building as he carried this unknown girl.
 
Takeshi started to hurry, he hoped that he would not be seen by anybody else. With this wish inside, Takeshi ran to the school building as he carried this unknown girl.

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