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===Part 3===
 
===Part 3===
   
The rail transport was in operation, but the electric train of Sangū <ref>This is the word they used in Japan that means visit to the Ise Imperial Shrine.</ref> line couldn’t travel to the closest station to Ise Imperial Shrine.
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The rail transport was in operation, but the electric train of Sangū<ref>This is the word they used in Japan that mean visit to the Ise Imperial Shrine.</ref> line couldn’t travel to the nearest station to Ise Imperial Shrine.
   
The train didn’t operate except until <Futamiura>, which was now the closest station to the Ise Imperial Shrine.
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The train didn’t operate except until <Futamiura> a few stations before that nearest station to the Ise Imperial Shrine.
   
There was a poster inside the station premises that read [Evacuation counsel information of the present].
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There was a poster pasted inside the station premise that said [Evacuation counsel information of the present].
   
 
It was a situation where there was an evacuation recommendation for the area around Ise Imperial Shrine.
 
It was a situation where there was an evacuation recommendation for the area around Ise Imperial Shrine.
   
“…Surely it’s because Ise Imperial Shrine has become a Haunted Ground, it is expanding little by little that causes trains to be unable to come near there.”
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“…Surely it’s because Ise Imperial Shrine has become a Haunted Ground, it is expanding little by little that causes the train to be unable to come near there.”
   
 
Kazuki too nodded his agreement of Kazuha-senpai’s deduction.
 
Kazuki too nodded his agreement of Kazuha-senpai’s deduction.
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With no other way they first went to the station called Futamiura. From there they began to walk to Ise Imperial Shrine.
 
With no other way they first went to the station called Futamiura. From there they began to walk to Ise Imperial Shrine.
   
Futamiura was supposed to be an area where an evacuation recommendation still hasn’t come out yet, but maybe because there were a lot of people that began to evacuate out of their own initiative, the street that the two walked in front of the station was deserted. While walking Kazuki took out a map from his waist bag. This bag was water proof, so the map inside wasn't wet.
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Futamiura was supposed to be an area where an evacuation recommendation still hasn’t come out yet, but maybe because there were a lot of people that began to evacuate out of their own initiative, the street that the two walked in front of the station was deserted. While walking Kazuki took out a map from his waist bag. This bag was water proof, so the map inside it was not wet.
   
“Futamiura is here, so the distance to Ise Imperial Shrine is…eh? There are two Ise Imperial Shrines on the map though.”
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“Futamiura is here, so the distance until Ise Imperial Shrine is…eh? There are two Ise Imperial Shrine in the map though.”
   
Hearing Kazuki’s confused voice, Kazuha-senpai, who was walking beside him brought her face near and peeked inside the map.
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Hearing Kazuki’s confused voice, Kazuha-senpai who was walking beside him brought her face near and peeked inside the map.
   
“Aah, that one.” Like that she pointed at two points on the map. “These are the outer shrine and inner shrine of Ise. You didn’t know this and you accepted the mission? There are two Ise Imperial Shrines.”
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“Aah, that one.” Like that she pointed at two points on the map. “These are the outer shrine and inner shrine of Ise. You didn’t know this and you accepted this mission? There are two Ise Imperial Shrine.”
   
The outer shrine and the inner shrine were separated by a distance of around 5 kilometers and are respectively located in different places.
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The outer shrine and the inner shrine was separated with distance around 5 kilos and they are respectively located in different places.
   
…Although, if there were two different shrines it was better if it was closer.
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…Although if there were two different sets it was better if it was nearer.
   
“It’s fine, Amaterasu-Oomikami <ref>Oomikami means god. It’s a more honorable way to refer to gods in Japan</ref> is located in the inner shrine, so I think it’s fine to ignore the outer shrine this time. But when people are visiting normally, it’s a proper to go from the outer shrine you know. At the outer shrine, there is this goddess called <Toyouke no Oomikami> that is taking care of Amaterasu.”
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“It’s fine, Amaterasu-Oomikami<ref>Oomikami means god. It’s a more honorable way to mention god in Japan</ref> is located in the inner shrine, so I think it’s fine to ignore the outer shrine this time. But when people are visiting normally, it’s a manner to go from the outer shrine you know. At the outer shrine, there is this goddess called <Toyouke no Oomikami> that is taking care of Amaterasu.”
   
I see, so it’s a god of maids then. Rather, he would want to go to that shrine personally.
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I see, so it’s a god of maid then. Rather he would want to go to that shrine personally.
   
“There is around 8 kilometers until we get there.” While saying that, Kazuki took Kazuha-senpai’s hand.
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“There is around 8 kilos until there.” While saying such thing Kazuki took Kazuha-senpai’s hand.
   
 
“…What are you doing, this hand of yours.”
 
“…What are you doing, this hand of yours.”
   
“Although the presence of people here is only a few, we who are intentionally walking to the direction of the dangerous Ise Imperial Shrine are suspicious when looked from the outside. That’s why, let’s act like a couple again!”
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“Although the presence of people here is only a few, we who are intentionally walking to the direction of the dangerous Ise Imperial Shrine are suspicious when looked from the side. That’s why let’s act like a couple again!”
   
“Act, acting like a couple again!? Are you thinking that as long as we act like a couple that everything will turn out okay!?”
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“Act, acting like couple again!? Are you thinking that as long as we act like a couple that everything will turn out okay!?”
   
 
“I’m not thinking like that, but I’m thinking that as long as there is some kind of excuse then I want to act like a couple.”
 
“I’m not thinking like that, but I’m thinking that as long as there is some kind of excuse then I want to act like a couple.”
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“You are too honest there! Idiot!!”
 
“You are too honest there! Idiot!!”
   
“But it’s also true that a couple won’t get suspected. A couple that is going to a place where there are no watching eyes around…a bacouple that wants to show the girl a good place and intentionally go to a dangerous place…it has a power of persuasion in double meaning! Come here, Kazuha.”
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“But it’s also certain that a couple won’t get suspected. A couple that is going to a place where there are no people’s eye around…bacouple that wants to show the girl a good place and intentionally go to a dangerous place…it has a power of persuasion in double meaning! Come here, Kazuha.”
   
“Uu―, certainly that, is true. …I get it okay, Kazu-kun.”
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“Uu―, certainly that is so. …I get it okay, Kazu-kun.”
   
 
Kazuha-senpai gently hugged Kazuki’s arm and she reclined her body on his shoulder.
 
Kazuha-senpai gently hugged Kazuki’s arm and she reclined her body on his shoulder.
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That Kazuha-senpai (just an act though) was fawning on him honestly.
 
That Kazuha-senpai (just an act though) was fawning on him honestly.
   
…The day where he would get used to this gap still hasn’t come yet.
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…The day where he would get used to this gap still hasn’t come for the present time.
   
 
“Just as I thought, you really have a solid body…”
 
“Just as I thought, you really have a solid body…”
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{What an unexpected journey of pilgrimage huh?} Inside Kazuki, Leme was making fun of him.
 
{What an unexpected journey of pilgrimage huh?} Inside Kazuki, Leme was making fun of him.
   
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While they were walking, they grasped the transformation that happened clearly. The line of a Haunted Ground was generated right there.
 
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While they were walking, they grasped the transformation that happened clearly. A line of Haunted Ground was generated right there.
   
 
From around over the Isuzu River, the road was transforming little by little.
 
From around over the Isuzu River, the road was transforming little by little.
   
The texture of the road that was made from black asphalt was changed into something that felt clinging onto the soles of their shoes like dripping mud. The private homes along the road grew dull in color into a grayish color and looked worn out. Their outside appearances looked dirty like abandoned buildings. Even the Isuzu River, that was said to be holy, became a completely pitch black stream. The sky was also shrouded with dark clouds all of a sudden, making for gloomy weather.
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The texture of the road that was made from black asphalt was changed into something that felt clinging onto their shoe sole like dripping mud. The residence home along the road grew dull in color into grayish color and looked worn out. Its external appearance looked dirty like abandoned buildings. Even the Isuzu River that was said to be holy became a completely pure black stream. The sky was also shrouded with dark clouds all of a sudden, making a gloomy weather.
   
It appears that what the people said about Ise Imperial Shrine turning into a Haunted Ground was true. With Ise Imperial Shrine as the center, its surroundings were swallowed and the Haunted Ground spread.
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It appears that what the people said that Ise Imperial Shrine had turned into a Haunted Ground was true. With Ise Imperial Shrine as the center, even its surrounding was swallowed and the Haunted Ground kept spreading.
   
Kazuki pictured the map that he saw before in his head. It was about 5 kilometers from here to the Ise Imperial Shrine. That meant that the scale of this Haunted Ground was about 5 kilometers in radius.
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Kazuki pictured the map that he saw before in his head. It was about 5 kilos from here to the Ise Imperial Shrine. That meant that the scale of this Haunted Ground was about 5 kilos in radius.
   
 
“How awful…did Yamato really not set out to exterminate the Demon Beasts?”
 
“How awful…did Yamato really not set out to exterminate the Demon Beasts?”
   
Kazuha-senpai pulled a wry face looking at the now completely transformed street.
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Kazuha-senpai pulled a wry face looking at the street that was completely transformed.
   
And then she separated herself from Kazuki. Kazuki too didn’t feel any reluctance from the separation.
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And then she separated her body from Kazuki. Kazuki too didn’t feel any reluctance from the separation.
   
The existence of Demon Beasts most likely also meant that there would be battle.
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The existence of Demon Beast most likely also meant that there would be battle.
   
Cancer―pure magic power that spilled out from Astrum into this world, it then transformed into Demon Beasts.
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Cancer―pure magic power that spilled out from Astrum into this world, it then transformed into Demon Beast.
   
If this Demon Beast isn’t exterminated quickly, it would call even more Cancer and increase the number of Demon Beasts. When Demon Beast multiplication like this was allowed, the surrounding space would be polluted by thick magic power and become completely distorted. A land of Demon Beasts where humans couldn’t live, in that case it had finished transforming into a Haunted Ground.
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If this Demon Beast isn’t exterminated quickly, it would call even more Cancer and increase the number of Demon Beasts. When Demon Beast multiplication like this was allowed, its surrounding space would be polluted by thick magic power and become completely distorted. A land of Demon Beast where humans couldn’t live, in that case it had finished transforming into a Haunted Ground.
   
To defend against the expansion of Haunted Grounds, exterminating the materialized Demon Beasts quickly was also one of the most important jobs of the Knight Order. It seemed that Yamato’s provisional government shirked its duty to do that.
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To defend against the expansion of Haunted Ground, exterminating the materialized Demon Beast speedily was also one of the most important jobs of the Knight Order. It seemed that Yamato’s provisional government shirked its duty to do that.
   
 
Like this the area of Ise would be encroached completely.
 
Like this the area of Ise would be encroached completely.
   
―But saying it in reverse this meant that they didn’t need to fear Yamato’s soldiers in this Haunted Ground. They didn’t defeat any Demon Beasts in the Haunted Ground and yet they posted a large number of soldiers inside the Haunted Ground, such action was not skillful at all.
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―But saying it in reverse this meant that they didn’t need to fear Yamato’s soldiers in this Haunted Ground. They didn’t defeat any Demon Beast in the Haunted Ground and yet they posted a large number of soldiers inside the Haunted Ground, such action was not skillful at all.
   
 
As expected Yamato’s government didn’t hear anything at all from the Wild Gods about the importance of Ise Imperial Shrine.
 
As expected Yamato’s government didn’t hear anything at all from the Wild Gods about the importance of Ise Imperial Shrine.
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Although the Wild Gods became part of their battle strength, their failure in taking close communication with the Wild Gods exposed a fatal gap in their armor.
 
Although the Wild Gods became part of their battle strength, their failure in taking close communication with the Wild Gods exposed a fatal gap in their armor.
   
“But Hayashizaki, isn’t this strange? For the Ise Imperial Shrine to become a Haunted Ground so deliberately…I think it’s just too contrived somehow.”
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“But Hayashizaki, isn’t this strange? For the Ise Imperial Shrine to become the Haunted Ground so accurately…I think it’s just too contrived somehow.”
   
 
…Certainly. However if this happening was not just a coincidence…then that meant the government of Yamato intentionally changed the Ise Imperial Shrine into a Haunted Ground. How? For what reason?
 
…Certainly. However if this happening was not just a coincidence…then that meant the government of Yamato intentionally changed the Ise Imperial Shrine into a Haunted Ground. How? For what reason?
   
With its change into a Haunted Ground, maybe it was for the replacement of its defense squad. Possibly Amaterasu’s change into a Wild God and Ise Imperial Shrine’s transformation into a Haunted Ground had some kind of connection.
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With its change into a Haunted Ground, maybe it was for the replacement of its defense squad. Possibly Amaterasu’s change into Wild God and Ise Imperial Shrine’s transformation into a Haunted Ground had some kind of connection.
   
 
They surely wouldn’t understand anything if they didn’t advance forward.
 
They surely wouldn’t understand anything if they didn’t advance forward.
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For a long time Kazuki had relied on his pride of his skill in sword technique. However before he knew it, he had already thought of his fight using Summoning Magic with similar pride.
 
For a long time Kazuki had relied on his pride of his skill in sword technique. However before he knew it, he had already thought of his fight using Summoning Magic with similar pride.
   
It was not like sword skill had become something trivial for him. How he was able to handle sword skill just like Kanae, and how he could chant the same Summoning Magic just like everyone in the Witch’s Manor, he was equally proud of both.
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It was not like sword skill had become something trivial for him. How he was able to handle sword skill just like Kanae, and how he could chant the same Summoning Magic just like everyone in the Witch’s Mansion, he was equally proud on both.
   
“Fufufuu. Actually, I’m not only practicing sword skills but also doing special training for Summoning Magic recently! Now I’m able to use magic up to level 6 you see!”
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“Fufufuu. Actually, I’m not only practicing sword skill but also doing special training for Summoning Magic recently! Now I’m able to use magic until level 6 you see!”
   
Kazuha-senpai said that as if naturally sympathizing with Kazuki’s inner thoughts.
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Kazuha-senpai said that as if naturally sympathizing with Kazuki’s inner thought.
   
 
Kazuha-senpai was born with an excellent talent in magic, but she yearned for swordsman instead of Magika Stigma since she was a child. She was a rare person that didn’t make an effective use of that talent at all.
 
Kazuha-senpai was born with an excellent talent in magic, but she yearned for swordsman instead of Magika Stigma since she was a child. She was a rare person that didn’t make an effective use of that talent at all.
   
She made a contract with Futsunushi no Kami that was worshipped in her own household even before Solomon's 72 Pillars could discover her talent, but she didn’t do any training for Summoning Magic at all, nevertheless she could handle her magic up to level 5.
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She made a contract with Futsunushi no Kami that was worshipped in her own household even before Solomon 72 Pillar could discover her talent, but she didn’t do any training for Summoning Magic at all, nevertheless she could handle her magic until level 5.
   
If that kind of person seriously set out to train her magic seriously…. For her to become able to use level 6 magic already, Kazuki who was also a magic swordsman like her couldn’t be careless lest he'll get left behind.
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If that kind of person seriously set out to train her magic seriously…. For her to become able to use magic until level 6 already, Kazuki who was also a magic swordsman like her couldn’t be careless lest he gets left behind.
   
 
Kazuha-senpai spun a spell in preparation for battle and performed Access.
 
Kazuha-senpai spun a spell in preparation for battle and performed Access.
   
“…My crimson hand is red hot grasping the ore. Ridge in the sky, blade in the earth, combining in a flash, become namely a single sword. Thy inscription is <Futsunushi no Kami>! O god of steel and fire, show that forging!”
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“…My crimson hand is red hot grasping the ore. Ridge in the sky, blade in the earth, combining in a flash become namely a sole sword. Thy inscription is <Futsunushi no Kami>! O god of steel and fire, show that forging!”
   
The god of swords and blacksmithing, Futsunushi no Kami granted a burning flame to Kazuha-senpai. The flame was spreading on senpai’s clothing, its Prima Material disintegrated transforming the shape into a totally different battle costume―Magic Dress.
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The god of sword and blacksmith, Futsunushi no Kami granted a burning flame to Kazuha-senpai. The flame was spreading on senpai’s clothing, its Prima Material disintegrated transforming the shape into a totally different battle costume―Magic Dress.
   
“For a long time, I only fussed over swords, but when I see Hayashizaki I want to become stronger and stronger using both sword and magic together. After all you and I are the same magic swordsmen!”
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“For a long time, I only fuss over sword, but when I see Hayashizaki I want to become stronger and stronger doing both sword and magic together. After all you and I are the same magic swordsman!”
   
 
Kazuha-senpai’s expression shined brightly.
 
Kazuha-senpai’s expression shined brightly.
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“Senpai, when you talk about strength you are really lively.”
 
“Senpai, when you talk about strength you are really lively.”
   
“Is that so? …That’s right huh. I was born in a household that worships the god of swords. My father is also a swordsman…but swordsmen are weak compared to Summoning Magic and the surrounding is also looking at them in contempt…I too became obstinate and became a swordsman but for a long time I had no talent at all and was made fun of…honestly it was really miserable.”
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“Is that so? …That’s right huh. I was born in a household that worship god of sword. My father is also a swordsman…but swordsman is weak compared to Summoning Magic and the surrounding is also looking at them in contempt…I too became obstinate and became a swordsman but for a long time I had no talent at all and made fun of…honestly it was really miserable.”
   
Thinking back once more, it was something like a miracle that she was raised with such a straightforward personality like this after she went through such a twisted path for half her life. The nature of Kazuha-senpai herself was strong, surely she was fine because of how bright a person she was.
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Thinking back once more, it was something like a miracle that she was raised with such a straightforward personality like this after she went through a twisted path for half her life. The nature of Kazuha-senpai herself was strong, surely she was fine because of how bright a person she was.
   
“…I think that’s why the feeling of wanting to become even stronger than others is instilled into me. The feeling of always wanting to become stronger and stronger doesn’t vanish. Though somehow it’s unbecoming boorishness for a woman. …Hahaha.”
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“…I think that’s why the feeling of wanting to become even stronger than others is instilled into me. The feeling of always wanting to become stronger and stronger doesn’t vanish. Though somehow it’s an unbecoming boorishness for a woman. …Hahaha.”
   
 
Kazuha-senpai floated a bitter smile awkwardly.
 
Kazuha-senpai floated a bitter smile awkwardly.
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“That’s not true at all. The lively Kazuha-senpai at that time is even more charming than usual. …All the more because normally Kazuha-senpai is not honest at all to me.”
 
“That’s not true at all. The lively Kazuha-senpai at that time is even more charming than usual. …All the more because normally Kazuha-senpai is not honest at all to me.”
   
“Hmph, don’t say such cheeky things even though you are just my junior!”
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“Hmph, don’t say such cheeky thing even though you are just my junior!”
   
 
When Kazuki talked as if he was poking fun at Kazuha-senpai, she scolded him overbearingly,
 
When Kazuki talked as if he was poking fun at Kazuha-senpai, she scolded him overbearingly,
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“…But when I’m together with you, I have a feeling that I can become stronger without any limit…”
 
“…But when I’m together with you, I have a feeling that I can become stronger without any limit…”
   
Quietly as if whispering, she said so in addition. A heart mark that signed the increase of positivity level came flying from her chest.
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Whisperingly, she said so in addition. A heart mark that signed the increase of positivity level came flying from her chest.
   
 
She was being shy for some reason. The both of them walked side by side silently for a while.
 
She was being shy for some reason. The both of them walked side by side silently for a while.
   
“―Now that I remember senpai, the waist bag was also disintegrated and became the Magic Dress didn’t it?”
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“―Now that I remember senpai, the waist bag was also disintegrated and became the Magic Dress wasn’t it?”
   
When Magika Stigma performed Access, things that were attached to the body were dispersed into Prima Material by the reality distortion called magic power, and then it was reconstructed as Magic Dresses with the contracted Diva’s divine response as support.
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When Magika Stigma performed Access, things that were attached to the body were dispersed into Prima Material by the reality distortion called magic power, and then it was reconstructed as Magic Dress with the contracted Diva’s divine response as support.
   
 
Did the waist bag also get swallowed by that distortion?
 
Did the waist bag also get swallowed by that distortion?
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Kazuha-senpai who realized her lost waist bag after being told patted her own waist with some slaps and raised a sad voice.
 
Kazuha-senpai who realized her lost waist bag after being told patted her own waist with some slaps and raised a sad voice.
   
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While paying sufficient attention to their surroundings, Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai advanced through the road of the Haunted Ground.
 
While paying sufficient attention to their surroundings, Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai advanced through the road of the Haunted Ground.

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