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===Part 5===
 
===Part 5===
   
When he got down from the boat, Kazuki didn’t join the playing girls but he searched for Miyabi-senpai and Shinobu-senpai.
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When he got down from the boat, Kazuki didn’t join with the playing girls but he searched for Miyabi-senpai and Shinobu-senpai.
   
Kaguya-senpai and the others said that “We searched for them too, but didn’t see them.”
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Kaguya-senpai and the others said that “We too searched for them, but we didn’t see them.”
   
 
But Kazuki was able to sense the whereabouts of a companion he had a bond with.
 
But Kazuki was able to sense the whereabouts of a companion he had a bond with.
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The area changed into a rough rocky place where the terrain was unsuitable for swimming.
 
The area changed into a rough rocky place where the terrain was unsuitable for swimming.
   
He had to say something to Miyabi-senpai, some small words. That was what Kazuki was thinking.
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He had to say something to Miyabi-senpai, some few words. That was what Kazuki was thinking.
   
 
Perhaps she was forcing herself that she wore that kind of swimsuit, and then undergoing that accident, she managed to mend her composed expression, but surely she felt hurt and embarrassed even at that time.
 
Perhaps she was forcing herself that she wore that kind of swimsuit, and then undergoing that accident, she managed to mend her composed expression, but surely she felt hurt and embarrassed even at that time.
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Miyabi-senpai had changed into a school swimsuit, both of them currently were in some kind of quarrel with each other.
 
Miyabi-senpai had changed into a school swimsuit, both of them currently were in some kind of quarrel with each other.
   
“…That’s why, we had especially come here together with everyone after all, it’s no good if we don’t play with everyone.”
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“…That’s why, we had especially came here together with everyone after all, it’s no good if we don’t play with everyone.”
   
Miyabi-senpai talked with a strong tone as if reproaching.
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Miyabi-senpai talked with strong tone as if reproaching.
   
“No. I came because I thought I could play with Nee-sama. That’s why Nee-sama, together with me…”
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“No. I came because I thought I can play with Nee-sama. That’s why Nee-sama, together with me…”
   
Shinobu-senpai’s hand reached out to Miyabi-senpai imploringly. Miyabi-senpai didn’t take that hand.
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Shinobu-senpai’s hand reached to Miyabi-senpai imploringly. Miyabi-senpai didn’t take that hand.
   
 
“If I take that hand, we are going to completely go wrong with the two of us.”
 
“If I take that hand, we are going to completely go wrong with the two of us.”
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“Why…” Shinobu-senpai’s eyes shook fiercely in agitation. Her heart started to beat violently from receiving a large shock, but that agitation was only conveyed from her eyes.
 
“Why…” Shinobu-senpai’s eyes shook fiercely in agitation. Her heart started to beat violently from receiving a large shock, but that agitation was only conveyed from her eyes.
   
Kazuki was standing stock still without moving a single step.
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Kazuki was standing stock still without raising any footstep.
   
 
The wandering eyes of Shinobu-senpai that couldn’t calm down located the figure of Kazuki that was like that.
 
The wandering eyes of Shinobu-senpai that couldn’t calm down located the figure of Kazuki that was like that.
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The instant the swimsuit flipped and her breasts fell out, Kazuki’s eyes became nailed on the spot as if his soul was just plundered.
 
The instant the swimsuit flipped and her breasts fell out, Kazuki’s eyes became nailed on the spot as if his soul was just plundered.
   
“Because of that, it’s strange to say something like 'thank you' I think, but…please don’t fret or feel hurt over it too much. That's what I want to convey to senpai.”
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“Because of that, it’s strange to say something like thank you I think, but…please don’t fret or feel hurt over it too much. That is what I want to convey to senpai.”
   
 
“…I chose that swimsuit with the intention of showing my skin to you, so I’m happy if you say that to me. The truth is, it was certainly embarrassing though…”
 
“…I chose that swimsuit with the intention of showing my skin to you, so I’m happy if you say that to me. The truth is, it was certainly embarrassing though…”
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Miyabi-senpai’s eyelashes shook with a start.
 
Miyabi-senpai’s eyelashes shook with a start.
   
“That…I, I thought that the both of us couldn't keep staying like this…”
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“That…I, I thought that the both of us cannot keep staying like this…”
   
 
“Shinobu-senpai, she will surely think that she has been left behind by Miyabi-senpai. And yet if Miyabi-senpai got too impatient like this, senpai will only rapidly get completely cornered…”
 
“Shinobu-senpai, she will surely think that she has been left behind by Miyabi-senpai. And yet if Miyabi-senpai got too impatient like this, senpai will only rapidly get completely cornered…”
   
With Miyabi-senpai’s transformation into an elf, the two twin sisters were locked into a world where it was just the two of them.
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With Miyabi-senpai’s transformation into elf, the two twin sisters were locked into a world where it was just the two of them.
   
Shinobu-senpai grew to harbor feelings of distrust toward everything of the outside world that discriminates against the big sister that she loved.
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Shinobu-senpai grew to harbor feeling of distrust toward everything of the outside world that discriminate the big sister that she loved.
   
[In reverse], Miyabi-senpai had gotten back on her feet because Shinobu-senpai continued to stay by her side for a long time.
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''In reverse Miyabi''-senpai had gotten back on her feet because Shinobu-senpai continued to stay by her side for a long time.
   
 
On Shinobu-senpai’s side who was not the one who became an elf herself, even now she was still continuing to confine herself inside her shell….
 
On Shinobu-senpai’s side who was not the one who became an elf herself, even now she was still continuing to confine herself inside her shell….
   
“I didn’t mean to ignore her feelings…”
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“I don’t mean to ignore that child’s feeling…”
   
 
Even while saying that she thought deeply of what Kazuki had pointed out. Miyabi-senpai hung her head down crestfallen.
 
Even while saying that she thought deeply of what Kazuki had pointed out. Miyabi-senpai hung her head down crestfallen.
   
“…That’s right isn’t it, this wasn't for the sake of the child or anything like that. I came to the sea to be with everyone. I might be able to make friends, with you, and with everyone else, making merry and everything…. It’s really like that isn’t it, even though that child is still unable to prepare her heart for something like this. Even though I can recover this far simply because that child kept continuing to think about me all this time….I was just about to discard those feelings of hers.”
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“…That’s right isn’t it, this is not for the sake of the child or anything like that. I came like this to the sea to be with everyone. I might be able to make friends, with you, and with everyone else, making merry and everything…. It’s really like that isn’t it, even though that child is still unable to prepare her heart for something like this. Even though I can recover this far simply because that child kept continuing to think about me all this time….I was just about going to discard those feelings of hers.”
   
“Senpai shouldn't think that senpai is discarding Shinobu-senpai or anything like that.”
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“Senpai should not think that senpai is discarding Shinobu-senpai or anything like that.”
   
 
The expression of Miyabi-senpai that was always showing a composed smile crumbled and peeled off.
 
The expression of Miyabi-senpai that was always showing a composed smile crumbled and peeled off.
   
“I discarded her! Because, being alone with Shinobu just the two of us, I've had enough already! Being just the two of us like this, is just the same as being alone…! It looks far more fun to be together with all of you!!”
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“I discarded her! Because, being alone with Shinobu just the two of us, is enough already! Being just the two of us like this, is just the same thing with being alone…! It looks far more fun to be together with all of you!!”
   
 
Miyabi-senpai had said to him before [Quickly conquer me too] while floating a composed smile, however,
 
Miyabi-senpai had said to him before [Quickly conquer me too] while floating a composed smile, however,
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―She was not supposed to be composed.
 
―She was not supposed to be composed.
   
She was showing behavior that made people feel her elegance, but that might be just her pretending to be strong, showing [I don’t feel painful for even a little] to the outside world that had discriminated her.
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She was showing behaviors that made people feel her elegance, but that might be just her pretending to be strong, showing [I don’t feel painful for even a little] to the outside world that had discriminated her.
   
 
Right now, Miyabi-senpai’s shoulders were shaking with self-disgust for herself [that was going to discard] her little sister.
 
Right now, Miyabi-senpai’s shoulders were shaking with self-disgust for herself [that was going to discard] her little sister.
   
The two that had been mutually dependent on each other for a long time. These two sisters, it would be in vain if it was not simultaneously.
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The two that had been dependent on each other mutually for a long time. These two sisters, it would be in vain if it was not simultaneously.
   
 
“Senpai, it’s going to be okay. Because, I will show you that I’m going to [conquer] Shinobu-senpai too.”
 
“Senpai, it’s going to be okay. Because, I will show you that I’m going to [conquer] Shinobu-senpai too.”
   
This was the first time he had ever said [conquer], a galge-like word like that with such earnest feelings.
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This was the first time he had ever said [conquer], a galge-like word like that with such earnest feeling like this.
   
 
Kazuki lightly embraced the trembling Miyabi-senpai and pat her shaking shoulder.
 
Kazuki lightly embraced the trembling Miyabi-senpai and pat her shaking shoulder.
   
“But I think it will take a little more time, so please run after Shinobu-senpai for now. Not only with Shinobu-senpai, I will become more intimate with Miyabi-senpai as well. And then after that, let’s go with the three of us to the beach or the pool again. After all, the highlight of summer will be from now on.”
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“But I think it will take a little more time, so please run after Shinobu-senpai for now. Not only with Shinobu-senpai, I will become more intimate with Miyabi-senpai as well. And then after that, let’s go with the three of us to the beach or a pool again. After all the highlight of summer will be from now on.”
   
 
“…Thank you, my King.”
 
“…Thank you, my King.”
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“Please don’t forcibly hide yourself when you are crying.”
 
“Please don’t forcibly hide yourself when you are crying.”
   
“Really...you are, even though I was desperately trying to look good but you see through all of it…”
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“Really you are, even though I was desperately trying to look good but you see through all of it…”
   
 
A large heart mark came flying from Miyabi-senpai.
 
A large heart mark came flying from Miyabi-senpai.
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Her face was somehow like a good obedient child who was despondent because her toy was taken away.
 
Her face was somehow like a good obedient child who was despondent because her toy was taken away.
   
“Kazuki, from now on you…might not be concerning yourself with me anymore.”
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“Kazuki, from now on you…might not be concerning yourself about me anymore.”
   
 
“Eh?”
 
“Eh?”
   
“Until now you are sympathizing with the pitiful elf and concerned yourself with me but now, a new more pitiful elf has appears…” Koyuki talked while averting her eyes in another direction.
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“Until now you are sympathizing with the pitiful elf and concerned yourself with me but, now a new more pitiful elf has appear…” Koyuki talked while averting her eyes in another direction.
   
 
“Are you seriously saying that?”
 
“Are you seriously saying that?”
   
Kazuki was approaching Koyuki, he circled his hands on her small back and embraced her. The sensation of her body snugly settling into his arms was very lovely. He forcefully directed Koyuki’s face that was facing another direction to look at him, then he repeated one more time. “Are you seriously thinking, that I never embraced Koyuki except from something like pity?”
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Kazuki was approaching near Koyuki, he circled his hands on her small back and embraced her. The sensation of her body snugly settling into his arms was very lovely. He forcefully directed Koyuki’s face that was facing another direction to look at him, then he repeated one more time. “Are you seriously thinking, that I never embraced Koyuki except from something like pity?”
   
Being stared at directly by Kazuki, Koyuki’s face was red and her eyes became moist.
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Being stared directly by Kazuki, Koyuki’s face was red and her eyes became moist.
   
 
“I’m not thinking that…if I show you I’m sulking like this, I thought you might spoil me…”
 
“I’m not thinking that…if I show you I’m sulking like this, I thought you might spoil me…”
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Kazuki let out a deep breath and showed his amazement. And then while hugging Koyuki, his fingers stroked the girl’s sensitive long ear. “…!” Koyuki was trembling twitchingly from the sudden sensation.
 
Kazuki let out a deep breath and showed his amazement. And then while hugging Koyuki, his fingers stroked the girl’s sensitive long ear. “…!” Koyuki was trembling twitchingly from the sudden sensation.
   
“Ka, Kazuki…you always touched my ear so casually but, this, it gives me lewd feelings even more than Kazuki thinks so, that…”
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“Ka, Kazuki…you always touched my ear so casually but, this, it give lewd feelings even more than Kazuki think so, that…”
   
 
“Eh, is that so? I just think of this as the extension of patting the head…so should I stop this?”
 
“Eh, is that so? I just think of this as the extension of patting the head…so should I stop this?”
   
When Kazuki was going to separate his finger from her ear, Koyuki raised her voice in a fluster.
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When Kazuki was going to separate his finger from her ear, Koyuki raised her voice in fluster.
   
 
“It, it’s okay for you to not stop! …Please do it more.”
 
“It, it’s okay for you to not stop! …Please do it more.”
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“Haa, haa…Please say it properly using your words, that you are not just pitying me…”
 
“Haa, haa…Please say it properly using your words, that you are not just pitying me…”
   
“It’s because Koyuki is adorable and I love you, that I am together like this with you.”
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“It’s because Koyuki is adorable and I love you, that I am being together like this with you.”
   
 
After whispering those words, he kissed Koyuki’s white cheek. The cheek of Koyuki who was playing in the sea just now tasted salty.
 
After whispering those words, he kissed Koyuki’s white cheek. The cheek of Koyuki who was playing in the sea just now tasted salty.
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“Ka, Kazuki…n, nnn!!”
 
“Ka, Kazuki…n, nnn!!”
   
Koyuki whose lips were sucked while her ear was toyed around with continuously by one hand suddenly had her body spring strongly. And then as if power left her waist, she sank down on the spot.
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Koyuki whose lip was sucked while her ear were toyed around with continuously by one hand suddenly had her body spring strongly. And then as if power left her waist, she sank down on the spot.
   
 
===Part 6===
 
===Part 6===

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