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Hikaru-senpai came to Kazuki’s room again. They passed the time playing games together.
 
Hikaru-senpai came to Kazuki’s room again. They passed the time playing games together.
   
“I―lost―a―ga―in―! Kazuki, for some reason, your response time is too dreadful. Even when I think of a new way of fighting, you completely adapt against it immediately. How do you do that?”
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“I―lost―a―ga―in―! Kazuki, for some reason, your response power is too dreadful. Even when I think of a new way of fighting, you completely adapt against it immediately. How did you do that?”
   
“That’s because the Hayashizaki-style is a school that puts importance in observing.”
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“That’s because Hayashizaki-style is a school that puts importance in seeing.”
   
“So it’s the Hayashizaki-style―, it’s the Hayashizaki-style after all so it can't be helped huh―. But except for games that we have to use our brains, I still have a better battle record against you in fighting games, isn't it―. I wonder if I’m too simple?”
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“So it’s Hayashizaki-style―, it’s Hayashizaki-style after all so it can't be helped huh―. But except for games that we have to use our brains, I still have a better battle record against you in fighting games, isn't it―. I wonder if I’m too simple?”
   
 
Hikaru-senpai sprawled on the floor powerlessly. As usual she was wearing that stimulating attire that looked like body paint. Kazuki was still unable to take a straight look at her.
 
Hikaru-senpai sprawled on the floor powerlessly. As usual she was wearing that stimulating attire that looked like body paint. Kazuki was still unable to take a straight look at her.
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“Senpai, it's quite late already, let’s go to sleep.”
 
“Senpai, it's quite late already, let’s go to sleep.”
   
“Mu, are you quitting while you're ahead!? Someone like that isn't manly at all!!”
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“Mu, are you quitting while you are ahead!? Someone like that is not manly at all!!”
   
Rather than games, there was a matter that he wanted to talk about.
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Rather than game, there was a matter that he wanted to talk about.
   
 
“Senpai, I want to tell you something though…”
 
“Senpai, I want to tell you something though…”
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Toward Hikaru-senpai that was leaning her body forward (goro―) like a cat, Kazuki began to talk about the suspicious shadow that was associated with this battle election and about the assassin that came aiming for his life―Katsura Karin.
 
Toward Hikaru-senpai that was leaning her body forward (goro―) like a cat, Kazuki began to talk about the suspicious shadow that was associated with this battle election and about the assassin that came aiming for his life―Katsura Karin.
   
“…That’s really dangerous! To ask about the security cameras from me for that kind of reason!”
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“…That’s really dangerous! To ask about the security camera from me for that kind of reason!”
   
First, about when Kazuki’s heart got stopped and then after that, how he intentionally took a walk and got attacked once more, when Kazuki told the story, Hikaru-senpai sprung up and got angry with a serious face.
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About when at first Kazuki’s heart got stopped, and then after that how he intentionally took a walk and got attacked once more, when Kazuki told the story, Hikaru-senpai sprung up and got angry with a serious face.
   
 
“I’m sorry, but I thought it would be more dangerous if we didn’t obtain more information. For a man, there are times when he has to do something even if it’s dangerous.”
 
“I’m sorry, but I thought it would be more dangerous if we didn’t obtain more information. For a man, there are times when he has to do something even if it’s dangerous.”
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There were times where it was easy to make Hikaru-senpai understand as long as you told her [for a man~].
 
There were times where it was easy to make Hikaru-senpai understand as long as you told her [for a man~].
   
“Then if we put the story all together, Katsura Karin will use a dangerous Chinese kenpo skill in the fight the day after tomorrow against my team. By some chance there might also be that unknown Diva she is contracted with too.”
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“Then if we put the story all together, Katsura Karin will use a dangerous Chinese kenpo in the fight the day after tomorrow against my team. By some chance there might also be that unknown Diva she is contracted with too.”
   
Shintoukei―a technique that inflicts damage directly to the flesh. When he imagined that kind of technique used against his important people, it felt like he was assaulted with a chill that made the hairs on his whole body stand up.
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Shintoukei―a technique that inflicted damage directly to the flesh. When he imagined that kind of technique wielded against his important people, it felt like he was assaulted with a chill that made the hair in his whole body stand up.
   
 
He was anxious. Far more than when his own heart got stopped.
 
He was anxious. Far more than when his own heart got stopped.
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“It’s unnatural to think that she is unrelated in this isn’t it?”
 
“It’s unnatural to think that she is unrelated in this isn’t it?”
   
“And then Mibu Akira and Asamiya Anna, these two learned Chinese kenpo from them too; and just like that they could fight like what we saw.”
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“And then Mibu Akira and Asamiya Anna, these two learned Chinese kenpo from those two; and just like that they could fight like what we saw.”
   
 
“In short, it was like that. In the worst case, Mibu Akira’s team…all four of them are made of Magica Stigma that could fight in close-quarters with Chinese kenpo that possess the power of instant death. …Ahaha!”
 
“In short, it was like that. In the worst case, Mibu Akira’s team…all four of them are made of Magica Stigma that could fight in close-quarters with Chinese kenpo that possess the power of instant death. …Ahaha!”
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“That’s not something to laugh at.”
 
“That’s not something to laugh at.”
   
Kazuki thought whether or not there was a method to remove those girls in accordance with the rules.
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Kazuki thought whether or not there was a method to remove those girls in accordance with the rule.
   
 
In truth, he was having this kind of discussion with Kazuha-senpai during the daytime.
 
In truth, he was having this kind of discussion with Kazuha-senpai during the daytime.
   
{Kazuha-senpai, suppose that you're still hiding Futsunushi no Kami’s stigmata, how would you get away if the academy suddenly did a surprise stigmata inspection on a certain day?}
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{Kazuha-senpai, suppose that you are still hiding Futsunushi no Kami’s stigmata, how would you get away if the academy suddenly did a surprise inspection stigmata on a certain day?}
   
 
{Wh, what’s with that messed up question? Well…it’s simple you know. I will immediately cut my contract with Futsunushi no Kami. If I do that everything will be alright if I bare my body naked in the inspection.}
 
{Wh, what’s with that messed up question? Well…it’s simple you know. I will immediately cut my contract with Futsunushi no Kami. If I do that everything will be alright if I bare my body naked in the inspection.}
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Hikaru-senpai floated an easy smile. Certainly…Kaguya-senpai’s team and Mibu Akira’s team, if someone asked him which would be easier to fight, he had a hunch that Kaguya-senpai would be the one that would still be more severe to face even after all that had been said and done.
 
Hikaru-senpai floated an easy smile. Certainly…Kaguya-senpai’s team and Mibu Akira’s team, if someone asked him which would be easier to fight, he had a hunch that Kaguya-senpai would be the one that would still be more severe to face even after all that had been said and done.
   
“When I saw the tournament chart, I felt bad when I noticed that I'm the only one who would arrive at the finals with ease. But now that we arrived at this point, I get the role to stop the opponent that absolutely must be stopped from going further directly to the front. I’m really happy. This is a serious responsibility. A fitting event for a real man. I'll give the taste of defeat to those guys thoroughly. …That’s why, how about you just concentrate on defeating Kaguya?”
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“When I saw the tournament chart, I felt bad when I noticed that I'm the only one who would arrive at the finals with ease. But now that we arrive at this point, I get the role to stop the opponent that absolutely must be stopped from going further directly to the front. I’m really happy. This is a serious responsibility. A fitting event for a real man. I'll give the taste of defeat to those guys thoroughly. …That’s why, how about you just concentrate on defeating Kaguya?”
   
 
Hikaru-senpai timidly brought her finger near Kazuki’s forehead and poked lightly.
 
Hikaru-senpai timidly brought her finger near Kazuki’s forehead and poked lightly.
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It was embarrassing, but for some reason, Kazuki averted his eyes from senpai’s straightforward gaze.
 
It was embarrassing, but for some reason, Kazuki averted his eyes from senpai’s straightforward gaze.
   
“Err―rr, that’s all for the talk, let’s get to sleep soon.”
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“Err―rr, that’s all of the talk, let’s get to sleep soon.”
   
 
“Right, right. We have to prepare for tomorrow’s practice!”
 
“Right, right. We have to prepare for tomorrow’s practice!”
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“Hmm? Even though we are touching, strangely I feel fine…” She was saying that with a relieved voice.
 
“Hmm? Even though we are touching, strangely I feel fine…” She was saying that with a relieved voice.
   
Hikaru-senpai trusted Kazuki with her reasoning, but she said that she was instinctively repulsed by the part of him that was a man. It is possible that she has a completely instinctive fear of the smell of a man.
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Hikaru-senpai trusted Kazuki with her reasoning, but she said that she was instinctively repulsed by his part that was of a man. It is possible that she has a completely instinctive fear of the smell of a man.
   
 
However, the act of wrapping up their hands together was the exact opposite of such fear and repulsion.
 
However, the act of wrapping up their hands together was the exact opposite of such fear and repulsion.
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The manly sensation of a boy’s palm, however he only did a [normal hand holding] that was the farthest thing from a dangerous action and did nothing else. ‘I wonder if it would be fine if it’s just this’, that was what Kazuki thought.
 
The manly sensation of a boy’s palm, however he only did a [normal hand holding] that was the farthest thing from a dangerous action and did nothing else. ‘I wonder if it would be fine if it’s just this’, that was what Kazuki thought.
   
“Bu, but this…it makes my heart throb fast, I can't calm downnn…”
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“Bu, but this…it makes my heart throb fast, I cannot calm downnn…”
   
 
“That throb, does it feel bad?”
 
“That throb, does it feel bad?”

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