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Their eyes met with a blink, senpai was laughing weirdly “Ahaha”.
 
Their eyes met with a blink, senpai was laughing weirdly “Ahaha”.
   
“Morning, Kazuki. …Ahaha, we have to change for practice.”
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“Morning, Kazuki. …Ahaha, we have to change for the practice.”
   
 
She stood up while smiling with a big grin, then senpai took off her spats smoothly.
 
She stood up while smiling with a big grin, then senpai took off her spats smoothly.
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“…Please change in your own room, Hikaru-senpai’s clothes are not here after all…”
 
“…Please change in your own room, Hikaru-senpai’s clothes are not here after all…”
   
“Eeeh? Now that you say it, this is my room yet why is Kazuki here?”
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“Eeeh? Now that you say it, here is my room yet why is Kazuki here?”
   
 
“This is my room you know…!”
 
“This is my room you know…!”
   
He couldn’t even chase Hikaru-senpai out, who had a man phobia forcefully, Kazuki accosted her with just his voice.
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He couldn’t even chase out Hikaru-senpai who had a man phobia forcefully, Kazuki accosted her with just his voice.
   
 
The rustling sounds of bra-tops being taken off was reaching the ears of Kazuki who was averting his eyes even further.
 
The rustling sounds of bra-tops being taken off was reaching the ears of Kazuki who was averting his eyes even further.
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“By any chance, are you tired because you accompanied me the whole night yesterday?”
 
“By any chance, are you tired because you accompanied me the whole night yesterday?”
   
Hikaru-senpai who changed into a gym uniform for training said that in an introspective mood while walking in the corridor.
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Hikaru-senpai who changed into gym uniform for training said that in introspection mood while walking in the corridor.
   
 
“There is no way it’s like that. Playing and making a racket with senpai was fun after all.”
 
“There is no way it’s like that. Playing and making a racket with senpai was fun after all.”
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“Really!? I’m glad~, because that was my first time to make merry with a friend of the same gender.”
 
“Really!? I’m glad~, because that was my first time to make merry with a friend of the same gender.”
   
“I said we aren't the same gender already. Are you saying that on purpose to make me tsukkomi?”
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“I said we are not the same gender already. Are you saying that purposely to make me tsukkomi?”
   
 
“Ahaha. But as expected, we really look like the same gender when there is no hesitation between us like this.”
 
“Ahaha. But as expected, we really look like the same gender when there is no hesitation between us like this.”
   
Hoshikaze-senpai might have been starved for a relationship that could be called friendship for a long time.
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Hoshikaze-senpai might had been starved for a relation that could be called friendship for a long time.
   
The girls that yearned for her as the prince were a little different from a friend.
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The girls that yearned for her as the prince were a little different from friend.
   
 
{…But it’s quite concerning how you haven’t obtained the key from her.}
 
{…But it’s quite concerning how you haven’t obtained the key from her.}
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Inside Kazuki’s head, Leme was coming with telepathy.
 
Inside Kazuki’s head, Leme was coming with telepathy.
   
Had she came back from Futsunushi no Kami’s place? She was not at Futsunushi no Kami's domain for that long, however Kazuki was completely ignorant of whatever Leme was doing in Astrum.
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Had she came back from Futsunushi no Kami’s place? She was not at the place of Futsunushi no Kami for that long, however Kazuki was completely ignorant of whatever Leme was doing in Astrum.
   
When Leme was not materializing in this world, she had no connection with other Divas and she might be all alone by herself in Astrum for a long time. When he thought of that, a feeling that he must be more proactive toward girls was sprouting inside him.
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When Leme was not materializing in this world, she had no connection with other Diva and she might be all alone by herself in Astrum for a long time. When he thought of that, a feeling that he must be more proactive toward girls was sprouting inside even Kazuki.
   
Hoshikaze Hikaru―54. Regardless of the enjoyable time they spent from last night, the range of increase of senpai's positivity level, who held a man phobia in her heart, was slow.
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Hoshikaze Hikaru―54. Regardless of the enjoyable time they spent from last night, the range of increase of the positivity level of senpai who was holding a man phobia in her heart was slow.
   
{This number might be the limit of the good mood between the same gender from a close friendship.}
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{This number might be the limit of the good mood between the same genders from a close friendship.}
   
 
Kazuki’s expression became clouded hearing Leme’s words. When he saw Hikaru-senpai who was playing happily, a feeling of wanting to give senpai a good time even more as a friend was welling up inside him.
 
Kazuki’s expression became clouded hearing Leme’s words. When he saw Hikaru-senpai who was playing happily, a feeling of wanting to give senpai a good time even more as a friend was welling up inside him.
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Was that pointless however? The bond that Leme was looking for, was it pointless if it was friendship….
 
Was that pointless however? The bond that Leme was looking for, was it pointless if it was friendship….
   
Kazuki and Hikaru-senpai went out to the courtyard like that. The fresh air of the dawn made his chest feel a little light from the cloudy feeling inside. In the courtyard that was still dark, the figure of a person was waiting.
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Kazuki and Hiakru-senpai went out to the courtyard like that. The fresh air of the dawn made his chest felt a little light from the cloudy feeling inside. In the courtyard that was still dark, a figure of a person was waiting.
   
“…Hayashizaki, that, I also have something to talk about so I was waiting.”
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“…Hayashizaki, that, I also have something to consult so I was waiting.”
   
 
“Kazuha-senpai.”
 
“Kazuha-senpai.”
   
Now that he thought again, Kazuha-senpai also said before that she had something to talk about.
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Now that he thought again, Kazuha-senpai too said before that she had something to talk about.
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“So, what did senpai want to talk about?”
 
“So, what did senpai want to talk about?”
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“You know…until now I said a lot of unpleasant things about you but, no, I actually don’t like you but…”
 
“You know…until now I said a lot of unpleasant things about you but, no, I actually don’t like you but…”
   
While looking down and grumbling, Kazuha-senpai began the preface of what she wanted to talk about. However the positivity level from here was 29. It was by no means high, but the truth was that she didn’t hate him deep inside.
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While looking down and grumbling, Kazuha-senpai begin the preface of what she wanted to talk about. However the positivity level from here was 29. It was by no means high, but the truth was that she didn’t hate him deep inside.
   
“But I honestly respect you as a swordsman! That’s why actually I too, want to learn kenjutsu from you!”
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“But I respect you honestly as a swordsman! That’s why actually I too, want to learn kenjutsu from you!”
   
“We're on the same team anyway, naturally I don’t mind. But is it okay for senpai with me?”
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“We are in the same team anyway, naturally I don’t mind. But is it okay for senpai with me?”
   
 
“At first I was trying to get Kohaku to teach me…but that person is not good whether in teaching something or going easy on someone, she was suddenly doing a real battle method and saying things like [I’m sorry] or [Forgive me] while slashing at me earnestly with her full power…I, it was scary. I saw a killing machine.”
 
“At first I was trying to get Kohaku to teach me…but that person is not good whether in teaching something or going easy on someone, she was suddenly doing a real battle method and saying things like [I’m sorry] or [Forgive me] while slashing at me earnestly with her full power…I, it was scary. I saw a killing machine.”
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“She doesn’t have any ill will and is clumsy but, that will only make senpai lose confidence won’t it?”
 
“She doesn’t have any ill will and is clumsy but, that will only make senpai lose confidence won’t it?”
   
“I think you are still better compared to that killing machine! Better, I mean…when you taught me before it was vexing but, what you said was accurate! You're fine already!!”
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“I think you are still better compared to that killing machine! Better, I mean…when you taught me before it was vexing but, what you said was accurate! You are fine!!”
   
Had she already got a concrete result? Kazuha-senpai raised her voice in an excited mood.
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Had she already got a concrete result? Kazuha-senpai raised her voice in excited mood.
   
“Also there is this feeling of playing an active role in the battle election and looking triumphantly to those guys in the Sword Division. At first I thought it’s fine if I make a striking display with Futsunushi no Kami’s power, but the rules forbid it so…if it keeps like this I will be made fun of by everyone…”
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“Also there is also this feeling of playing an active role in the battle election and looking triumphantly to those guys at the Sword Division. At first I thought it’s fine if I make a striking display with Futsunushi no Kami’s power, but the rule forbid it so…if it keeps like this I will be made fun of by everybody…”
   
Kazuha-senpai who loved swords and made a contract with a Diva of the sword, her own skills in kenjutsu were immature, so it seemed she was made fun of in the Sword Division which held the doctrine of real strength.
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Kazuha-senpai who loved swords and made a contract with a Diva of sword, her own skills in kenjutsu was immature, so it seemed she was made fun of in the Sword Division which held the doctrine of real strength.
   
 
In this battle election that was to be held in front of the students of the entire school, it was a chance to be triumphant over everybody.
 
In this battle election that was to be held in front of the students of the entire school, it was a chance to be triumphant over everybody.
   
…Kazuha-senpai kept saying things like Kazuki was an enemy of women, but Kazuki himself didn’t dislike this senpai. Kazuha-senpai loved swords above all else, she was trying to crawl up from the very bottom.
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…Kazuha-senpai kept saying things like Kazuki was an enemy of women, but Kazuki himself didn’t dislike this senpai. Kazuha-senpai loved swords above all, she was trying to crawl up from the very bottom.
   
Rather, the one who could get along with him the best, by some chance it might be this girl.
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Rather the one who could get along with him the best, by some chance it might be this girl.
   
“Hikaru-senpai, is it okay for this senpai to join in our practice too?”
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“Hikaru-senpai, is it okay for this senpai too to join with our practice?”
   
 
Kazuki called out to Hikaru-senpai who was doing calisthenics early in the place slightly separated from them.
 
Kazuki called out to Hikaru-senpai who was doing calisthenics early in the place slightly separated from them.
   
Hikaru-senpai sent the bright smile of a prince in this direction. She looked dazzling with the morning sun as her background.
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Hikaru-senpai sent a bright smile of a prince to this direction. She looked dazzling with the morning sun as her background.
   
 
“Of course, I don’t mind at all. Welcome.”
 
“Of course, I don’t mind at all. Welcome.”
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“Hayashizaki Kazuki. …That person, she is just too cool, somehow I feel like shrinking in front of her though.”
 
“Hayashizaki Kazuki. …That person, she is just too cool, somehow I feel like shrinking in front of her though.”
   
“But Hikaru-senpai, because of that coolness, has very few friends. That’s why don’t mind her appearance, please think of her as a normal girl and become her friend.”
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“But, Hikaru-senpai too because of that coolness has very few friends. That’s why don’t mind her appearance, please think of her as a normal girl and become her friend.”
   
 
“I, is that so!? She is in [solitude] like me!?”
 
“I, is that so!? She is in [solitude] like me!?”
   
Kazuha-senpai stared at Hikaru-senpai with bright eyes that were filled with affinity.
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Kazuha-senpai stared at Hikaru-senpai with bright eyes that was filled with affinity.
   
 
“I am Hoshikaze Hikaru. Best regards.”
 
“I am Hoshikaze Hikaru. Best regards.”

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