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===Part 3===
 
===Part 3===
   
The Magic Division’s staff room had also fallen into chaos, but due to the dignified direction of Headmaster Otonashi who finally appeared, the chaos had calmed down somewhat.
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The Magic Division’s staff room had also fallen into chaos, but due to the dignified direction of Headmaster Otonashi who finally came from somewhere, the chaos had calmed down.
   
“Fortunately, the damage hasn’t reached the Magic Division. Gather the students in one place to take refuge. Refuse reinforcement requests to the Sword Division, make them wait until the Knight Order comes.”
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“Fortunately, the damage hasn’t reached the Magic Division. Gather the students in one place to take refuge. Refuse the reinforcement to the Sword Division, make them wait until the Knight Order comes.”
   
 
He gave such an instruction.
 
He gave such an instruction.
   
An internal school broadcast following the instruction was resounding throughout the Magic Division’s grounds.
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An internal school broadcast following the instruction was resounding throughout the Magic Division’s ground.
   
There was also the matter about the enemy’s identity that was still unknown, so no one was questioning the decision that instructed them to [abandon the Sword Division]. Headmaster Otonashi suppressed the report concerning the enemy’s true identity and only told them that it was a group of unidentifiable illegal magicians.
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There was also the matter about the enemy’s identity that was still unknown, no one was questioning the decision that instructed them to [abandon the Sword Division]. Headmaster Otonashi crushed the report concerning the enemy’s true identity and only told them that it was a group of unidentifiable illegal magicians.
   
“Headmaster! Why are you deciding such an irresponsible decision…we should organize students that can fight and head to rescue the Sword Division students!!”
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“Headmaster! Why are you deciding such easygoing decision…we should organize students that can fight and head to rescue them!!”
   
 
Knowing the situation well, the Magic Division’s student council finally came to the staff room.
 
Knowing the situation well, the Magic Division’s student council finally came to the staff room.
   
The student council vice president Hoshikaze Hikaru, who had a tactless and frank personality, opposed the decision without even hiding her impatience and dissatisfaction.
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The student council vice president Hoshikaze Hikaru who had a tactless frankness personality opposed the decision without even hiding her impatience and dissatisfaction.
   
 
Headmaster Otonashi brushed off that objection as something troublesome.
 
Headmaster Otonashi brushed off that objection as something troublesome.
   
“Don’t get carried away, all of you are just students. We cannot increase the damage by playing around and sending you to a real battle with an unknown opponent. We have the responsibility of being trusted with all of you by your parents after all.”
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“Don’t get carried away, all of you are students. We cannot enlarge the damage by playing around and sending you to a real battle with an unknown opponent. We have the responsibility of being trusted with all of you by your parents.”
   
That was the reasoning of the adults. Hikaru gritted her teeth hearing Headmaster Otonashi's shallow sounding words and showed her irritation.
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That was the reason of the adults. Hikaru gritted her teeth toward the words of Headmaster Otonashi that were sounds in the surface and showed her irritation.
   
 
At her side, Kaguya nodded wordlessly.
 
At her side, Kaguya nodded wordlessly.
   
“…Certainly you of the Magic Division’s student council have real battle experience, so it’s a different story. But even so, independent action is not permitted. We had already requested for reinforcements from the Knight Order. When they arrive, form the Heaven and Earth formation along with them and then you can take action.”
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“…Certainly you of the Magic Division’s student council have real battle experiences, so it’s a different story. But even so independent action is not permitted. We had already requested for reinforcement from the Knight Order. When they arrive, form the Heaven and Earth formation along with them and then you can take action.”
   
 
“Can you say when the Knight Order will come!?”
 
“Can you say when the Knight Order will come!?”
   
Hikaru who was usually cooperating with the Knight Order to participate in quests knew very well how lacking in manpower the Knight Order was right now and that their mobilization would be slow.
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Hikaru who was usually cooperating with the Knight Order to participate in a quest knew very well how lacking in manpower the Knight Order was right now and their mobilization would be slow.
   
She had also grasped that the personnel deployment in the surrounding areas of the Knight Academy was thin.
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She had also grasped that the personnel deployment in the surrounding area of the Knight Academy was thin.
   
“The Knight Order cannot move out immediately. But it seems they sent several elites from the Einherjar squad that are on standby. You of the student council will cooperate with the Einherjar and fight.”
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“The Knight Order cannot move out immediately. But it seems they sent several elite of the Einherjar squad that is in standby. You of the student council will cooperate with the Einherjar and fight.”
   
―Einherjar!? But they are the hunters that came to kill Lotte!
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―Einherjar!? But they are the hunter that came to kill Lotte!
   
…Gritting her teeth at her inability to do anything, on top of all that they were going to rely on those kind of people!
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…Gritting her teeth in her inability to do anything, on top of all that they were going to rely on those kind of guys!
   
“…Out of the question.”
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“…Out of question.”
   
Hikaru’s awareness became distant in her fury, yet somehow she was able to squeeze out her voice.
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Hikari’s awareness became far away in fury, somehow she was able to squeeze out her voice.
   
“Give me a break! Do all of you want to avoid your responsibilities that much!! I’m going to fight with my own strength!!”
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“Give me a break! Do all of you want to avoid your responsibility up to that far!! I’m going to fight with my own strength!!”
   
 
Having the nickname of prince with her handsome face dyed in violent emotion, Hikaru turned her back and darted off from that place.
 
Having the nickname of prince with her handsome face dyed in violent emotion, Hikaru turned her back and darted off from that place.
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The teachers in the staff room attempted to chase her but Headmaster Otonashi restrained them.
 
The teachers in the staff room attempted to chase her but Headmaster Otonashi restrained them.
   
“Leave her alone. That is the contractor magician of Baal. It’s impossible to chase after that student. …Kaguya, do you understand that there is no failure of logic in what I say?”
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“Leave her alone. That is the contractor magician of Baal. It’s impossible to chase the feet of that student. …Kaguya, do you understand that there is no failure of logic in what I say?”
   
Headmaster Otonashi turned around and fixed his sights at Kaguya. Echoes of hypnotism were loaded in those words.
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Headmaster Otonashi turned about and fixed his sight at Kaguya. Echo of hypnotism was loaded in those words.
   
 
“…Yes.”
 
“…Yes.”
   
Kaguya replied flatly with a pale countenance.
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Kaguya replied flatly with pale countenance.
   
 
The girl even now still felt an intense emotion inside her heart, but that emotion was confined unconsciously.
 
The girl even now still felt an intense emotion inside her heart, but that emotion was confined unconsciously.
   
From the bottom of her deep psyche, something like tentacles were creeping up. Her emotions were restrained tightly, and what ruled her heart now was the clever logic that her father planted inside.
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From the bottom of her deep psyche, something like tentacles were creeping up. Her emotion was restrained tightly, and then what ruled her heart was the clever logic that her father planted inside.
   
“You must not be moved by fleeting emotions. You understand your own responsibility, yes?”
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“You must not be moved by a fleeting emotion. You understand your own responsibility, right?”
   
“……I do.”
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“……Yes.”
   
Since her childhood, there were two hypnotic suggestions that were planted inside Otonashi Kaguya.
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From the time of her childhood, there were two hypnotic suggestions that were planted inside Otonashi Kaguya.
   
The first was to aim to be the strongest magician. The other one was that when she heard the keywords of "responsibility" and "logic", she would throw away her own emotions.
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The first was to aim to be the strongest magician. The other one was that when she heard the keywords of responsibility and logic, she would throw away her own emotion.
   
For the sake of carrying out the role she was given by Headmaster Otonashi, she would abandon her own ego if it was necessary. Her power to refuse was sealed using those suggestions.
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For the sake of carrying out the role she was given by Headmaster Otonashi, she would abandon her own ego if it was the needed time. Her power of refusing was sealed using the suggestion.
   
Headmaster Otonashi manipulated her like a doll, as if the innocence she showed to Kazuki and the others was a lie.
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Headmaster Otonashi manipulated her like a machine, as if the innocence she showed to Kazuki and others was a lie.
   
Nyarlatoteph thought sweetly of the Tsukikurou's education. Because of Tsukikurou’s constant care, he could now make this girl’s excellent body his own.
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Naiarlatoteph thought sweetly of those educations of Tsukikurou. Because of Tsukikurou’s constant care, now he could make this female’s excellent flesh body as his thing.
   
But that was for later. Right now the position of Otonashi Tsukikurou was something he needed.
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But that was not now. Right now the position of Otonashi Tsukikurou was something he needed.
   
 
Otonashi Kaguya stood stock still like a puppet. Satisfied with that state of her, Nyarlathotep thought of Kazuki and others in the underground and laughed.
 
Otonashi Kaguya stood stock still like a puppet. Satisfied with that state of her, Nyarlathotep thought of Kazuki and others in the underground and laughed.
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Hikaru who rushed out from the staff room and entered the grounds of the Sword Division tilted her head at the out of season mist.
 
Hikaru who rushed out from the staff room and entered the grounds of the Sword Division tilted her head at the out of season mist.
   
She soon found out its source.
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She soon found out the source of the mist.
   
 
Liz Liza-sensei was leaning over near the pond of the garden.
 
Liz Liza-sensei was leaning over near the pond of the garden.
   
By vibrating the Prima Material of the water using Psychokinesis to make the mist for the smoke screen, she manipulated and dispersed it throughout the school grounds.
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By vibrating the Prima Material of the water using Psychokinesis to make the mist for the smoke screen, she manipulated that mist and dispersed it within the school.
   
It was an extremely advanced common magic, but the degree of the magic power it exhausted compared to the Summoning Magic borrowing the power of Divas was remarkably intense. The color of Liz Liza-sensei’s face was becoming pale from the mental exhaustion.
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It was an extremely advanced common magic, but the degree of the magic power it exhausted compared to the Summoning Magic that was borrowing the power of the Diva was remarkably intense. The color of Liz Liza-sensei’s face was becoming pale from the mental exhaustion.
   
But there was no doubt that many students were saved by her great efforts.
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But there was no doubt that many students were practically saved by her great effort.
   
Hikaru thought it was strange that Liz Liza-sensei was not in the staff room, but she was already giving up on the them and came to the Sword Division in order to do everything she could within her power to help them.
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Hikaru thought it was strange that Liz Liza-sensei was not in the staff room, but she was already giving up on the staff room and came to the Sword Division in order to do everything she could within her own power.
   
 
“…Hoshikaze huh?”
 
“…Hoshikaze huh?”
   
When the figure of Hikaru caught Liz Liza-sensei’s attention, she spoke.
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When the figure of Hikaru caught Liz Liza-sensei’s attention, she made a voice.
   
“Hoshikaze, listen, first you need to prioritize buying time and rescuing the students. With your speed you should be able to make some distractions and performing rescue as much as possible. And then…wait until Hayashizaki Kazuki comes.”
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“Hoshikaze, listen, first you need to prioritize to buy time and rescue the students. With your speed you should be able to run some distraction and performing rescue as much as possible. And then…wait until Hayashizaki Kazuki comes.”
   
 
“Hayashizaki-kun? Not the Knight Order?”
 
“Hayashizaki-kun? Not the Knight Order?”
   
Hikaru was surprised hearing the name of a student whose whereabouts were supposedly unknown.
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Hikaru was surprised hearing the name of a student whose whereabouts was supposedly unknown came out.
   
“…That guy will definitely return. When that happens, form a Heaven and Earth Formation under his instructions and make an opposition. And then…it’s just my intuition but, the fight will not be over from there. There is a mastermind behind this.”
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“…That guy will definitely return. When that happens, form a Heaven and Earth Formation under his instruction and make an opposition. And then…it’s just my feeling but, the fight will not be over from there. There is a mastermind behind this.”
   
 
===Part 4===
 
===Part 4===

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