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The enemy was about eighty ships. Though it was something they knew, even if summing both armies, they were fewer than the pirates.
 
The enemy was about eighty ships. Though it was something they knew, even if summing both armies, they were fewer than the pirates.
   
It is said that a numerical factor/advantage is more effective in a battle of the sea than in the battle over land. In addition of being a vast battlefield, this was not because there was a big difference in performance between friend and foe’s ships, but because the attack methods were also limited.
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It is said that the number is more effective in a battle of the sea than in the battle over land. In addition of being a vast battlefield, this was not because there was a big difference in performance between friend and foe’s ships, but because the attack methods were also limited.
   
 
“About the enemy movement… Our scout ship detected about ten pirate ships yesterday.”
 
“About the enemy movement… Our scout ship detected about ten pirate ships yesterday.”
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In response to Sasha’s words, the captain of the Legnica troops put a piece on the chart. Elizavetta turned her pupils of different colors towards the captains of her own army.
 
In response to Sasha’s words, the captain of the Legnica troops put a piece on the chart. Elizavetta turned her pupils of different colors towards the captains of her own army.
   
“Even the scout ship we sent have discovered the enemy yesterday’s afternoon. Similarly, it seemed that about ten ships that they noticed were escaping to the west.”
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“Even the scout ship we sent have discovered the enemy in yesterday’s afternoon. Similarly, it seemed that about ten ships that they noticed were escaping to the west.”
   
 
A new piece was put on the chart. The captains shortly groaned. They could not yet narrow down the enemy position only with these two. Elizavetta folded her arms and turned a provocative look towards Sasha.
 
A new piece was put on the chart. The captains shortly groaned. They could not yet narrow down the enemy position only with these two. Elizavetta folded her arms and turned a provocative look towards Sasha.
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“Let’s assume that the number of pirate ships is eighty. I think that they divided it into eight parties of ten ships, and after deciding of the meeting place beforehand, each party proceeded at different angles. The enemy discovered by our scout ship was probably different from the enemy found by yours.”
 
“Let’s assume that the number of pirate ships is eighty. I think that they divided it into eight parties of ten ships, and after deciding of the meeting place beforehand, each party proceeded at different angles. The enemy discovered by our scout ship was probably different from the enemy found by yours.”
   
Matvey nodded, impressed.
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Matvey nodded as impressed.
   
 
“I see. Now that you mention it, with a large army of eighty ships, they must have a hard time with both mobilization and anchorage; but with about ten ships, it’s easier to anchor in small islands of the neighborhood.”
 
“I see. Now that you mention it, with a large army of eighty ships, they must have a hard time with both mobilization and anchorage; but with about ten ships, it’s easier to anchor in small islands of the neighborhood.”
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Sasha picked up several pieces and displayed them on the chart.
 
Sasha picked up several pieces and displayed them on the chart.
   
“Legnica will take charge of the center and the left wing. I will have Lebus in charge of the right wing and the rear. From here on, it will depend on the enemy’s attitude, but in case where the enemy’s right wing is weak, Legnica will attack the enemy’s right wing together, and crush them. In case where the enemy’s left wing is weak, then it will be Lebus to do so.”
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“Legnica will take charge of the center and the left wing. I will have Lebus in charge of the right wing and the rear. From here on, it will depend on the enemy’s attitude, but in case where the enemy’s right wing is weak, Legnica will attack the enemy’s right wing together, and crush them. In case where the enemy’s left wing is weak, then it will to Lebus to do so.”
   
 
“…you said together, but do you mean that, in case that Legnica moves, both the center and the left wing shall become one group?”
 
“…you said together, but do you mean that, in case that Legnica moves, both the center and the left wing shall become one group?”
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“Have you ever seen a Demon?”
 
“Have you ever seen a Demon?”
   
A silence of one minute of breathing fully controlled the cabin.
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Silence of one minute breathing fully controlled the cabin.
   
 
“Huh?”
 
“Huh?”
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“But, Alexandra. In the letter that I received from you the other day, I think it was only written about the {{furigana|sea dragon|badva}}.”
 
“But, Alexandra. In the letter that I received from you the other day, I think it was only written about the {{furigana|sea dragon|badva}}.”
   
“I’m sorry about it. At that time, I myself was half in doubt about the existence of Demons. Even though I know that there is no way Sophie… Sophia would tell such a lie. And I was not expecting that I would also get involved in it.”
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“I’m sorry about it. At that time, I myself was half in doubt about the existence of Demons. Even though I know that there is no way Sophie… Sophia would tell such a lie. And I was not expecting that I would also get involved to it.”
   
 
Sasha frankly admitted her fault and lowered her head. Though Elizavetta suspiciously narrowed her eyes, it was not about the black-haired Vanadis’ attitude, but about the contents of the speech.
 
Sasha frankly admitted her fault and lowered her head. Though Elizavetta suspiciously narrowed her eyes, it was not about the black-haired Vanadis’ attitude, but about the contents of the speech.
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“Last night, my ship was attacked.”
 
“Last night, my ship was attacked.”
   
At Elizavetta, who opened wide her eyes, Sasha talked about the time she encountered Torbalan at the prow of the {{furigana|Iron Lion|Zhelezo Lev}} last night with an indifferent tone. Even about the monster’s appearance and his paranormal abilities.
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At Elizavetta, who opened wide her eyes, Sasha talked about the time she encountered Torbalan at the prow the {{furigana|Iron Lion|Zhelezo Lev}} last night with an indifferent tone. Even about the monster’s appearance and his paranormal abilities.
   
“Torbalan disguises himself as human and lay hidden in the Asvarre Kingdom. He was left with the defense of a Fort, and he seems to have the ability to command three thousand soldiers. The possibility of him leading the pirates is non negligible.”
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“Torbalan disguises himself as human and lay hidden in the Asvarre Kingdom. He was left the defense of a Fort, and it seems to have the ability to command three thousand soldiers. The possibility of him leading the pirates is non negligible.”
   
 
“…Is there any evidence except the fact that he attacked your ship?”
 
“…Is there any evidence except the fact that he attacked your ship?”
   
“From the number of ships, eighty vessels, we can guess that the pirates number easily exceed ten thousand. Bringing together that much number of people and make them go not towards Asvarre or Brune, but towards Zchted. Don’t you think it required a considerable amount of ability?”
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“From the number of ships, eighty vessels, we can guess that the pirates number easily exceed ten thousand. Bringing together that much number of people and make them go not in Asvarre or Brune, but towards this Zchted. Don’t you think it required a considerable amount of ability?”
   
 
Elizavetta dropped her eyes to the worktable, and sank into silence as if to verify Sasha’s words. Before long, she asked with a sigh.
 
Elizavetta dropped her eyes to the worktable, and sank into silence as if to verify Sasha’s words. Before long, she asked with a sigh.
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And now in that uninhabited island, indeed eighty ships were anchored. The folded sails were painted in pitch-black and eerie, huge eyes were drawn at the prow.
 
And now in that uninhabited island, indeed eighty ships were anchored. The folded sails were painted in pitch-black and eerie, huge eyes were drawn at the prow.
   
All were pirate ships. It was a group led by Torbalan across the sea from Asvarre. As Sasha predicted, they advanced while dividing into ten ships each and investigated the enemy movement, but they gathered to this island by order of the leader Torbalan.
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All were pirate ships. It was a group led by Torbalan across the sea from Asvarre. As Sasha predicted, they advanced while dividing into ten ships each and investigated the enemy movement, but they gathered in this island by order of the leader Torbalan.
   
Torbalan called the captain of each squad in the center of the island, and held a war council. His identity being hidden, he acted as the human called Lester, the same as the time when he had lay hidden in Asvarre.
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Torbalan called the captain of each squad in the center of the island, and held a war council. His identity being hidden, he stuck through as the human called Lester, the same as the time when he had lay hidden in Asvarre.
   
 
Though Torbalan sat on a wooden chair that was brought by a subordinate, the captains sat down on the ground. It was a scene like that of a King and his retainers.
 
Though Torbalan sat on a wooden chair that was brought by a subordinate, the captains sat down on the ground. It was a scene like that of a King and his retainers.
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“What about the weapons, food and water?”
 
“What about the weapons, food and water?”
   
While shaking their body to the cold wind which drifted the sign of winter, the pirates answered. That there were enough weapons, and that food and water could last another two days, too.
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While shaking their body to the cold wind which drifted the sign of winter, the pirates answered. That there were enough weapons, and that food and water could secure another two days, too.
   
 
As Torbalan contentedly nodded, he told with a happy smile and voice.
 
As Torbalan contentedly nodded, he told with a happy smile and voice.
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“We will leave this island in the early morning of the day after tomorrow, and engage the Zchted army.”
 
“We will leave this island in the early morning of the day after tomorrow, and engage the Zchted army.”
   
A wave of tension and shiver ran among the captains. They were originally pirate veterans, but they had never fought against the army of one country from the front and moreover on such a scale. Applying a surprise attack on the merchant ships and its escort ships, depriving them and burning them was their way of doing.
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A wave of tension and shiver ran among the captains. They were eventually pirate veterans, but they had never fought against the army of one country from the front and moreover on such a scale. Applying a surprise attack on the merchant ships and its escort ships, depriving them and burning them was their way of doing.
   
 
“The enemy has approximately sixty ships. As I thought, there are fewer than us. If we were to defeat these sixty ships, there is nothing that will get on our way up to the port town which lined up in the coast. You shall attack it, deprive it and burn it to your heart’s content.”
 
“The enemy has approximately sixty ships. As I thought, there are fewer than us. If we were to defeat these sixty ships, there is nothing that will get on our way up to the port town which lined up in the coast. You shall attack it, deprive it and burn it to your heart’s content.”
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“––Gerhard. Moritz. Albert.”
 
“––Gerhard. Moritz. Albert.”
   
Among the captains sitting in front of Torbalan, the three people whose names were called stood up.
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Among the captains sitting in front of Torbalan, the three persons whose names were called stood up.
   
 
Gerhard was a big man whose face was nearly half covered with red hair and beard. Owner of a burly body, he had a double-edged battle axe and a dagger put on his waist as weapons.
 
Gerhard was a big man whose face was nearly half covered with red hair and beard. Owner of a burly body, he had a double-edged battle axe and a dagger put on his waist as weapons.
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It was the early afternoon of the next day that the scout ships of Legnica and Lebus’ Allied Forces discovered the eighty pirate ships which had anchored on Olsina Island.
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It was the early afternoon of the next day that the scout ships of Legnica and Lebus’ Allied Forces discovered the eighty pirate ships which had anchored on the Olsina Island.
   
Sasha and Elizavetta, who received the report, headed towards Olsina Island at less than half the normal speed in order to let the soldiers and sailors rest in turns. Now that they knew the enemy position, there was really no need to rush. Moreover, there was another reason to drop the speed for the Legnica troops.
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Sasha and Elizavetta, who received the report, headed towards the Olsina Island at less than half the normal speed in order to let the soldiers and sailors rest by turn. Now that they knew the enemy position, there was really no need to rush. Moreover, there was another reason to drop the speed for the Legnica troops.
   
 
This day, Sasha had a fever since morning and was lying in bed. The fact that she was steadily conscious and she had meal even a little made the doctor, the captain Pavel and her personal attendant Matvey, who were riding together in the flagship, relieved.
 
This day, Sasha had a fever since morning and was lying in bed. The fact that she was steadily conscious and she had meal even a little made the doctor, the captain Pavel and her personal attendant Matvey, who were riding together in the flagship, relieved.
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Early morning of the next day, the pirates finally left Olsina Island.
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Early morning of the next day, the pirates finally left the Olsina Island.
   
 
Back to the western sky that the white light of morning could not yet reach, a deep black outline of a ship appeared. It which looked at first like one ship increased to two, then to four ships in a blink of an eye, and spread through the azure sea.
 
Back to the western sky that the white light of morning could not yet reach, a deep black outline of a ship appeared. It which looked at first like one ship increased to two, then to four ships in a blink of an eye, and spread through the azure sea.
   
The scout ships which were near Olsina Island immediately returned to the side of the Legnica and Lebus Allied Forces. At this time, the Allied Forces were in the sea area in about ten Belsta (about ten kilometers) to the southeast from the Olsina Island. Both soldiers and sailors were in a state where they could move at any time.
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The scout ships which were near the Olsina Island immediately returned to the side of the Legnica and Lebus Allied Forces. At this time, the Allied Forces were in the sea area in about ten Belsta (about ten kilometers) to the southeast from the Olsina Island. Both soldiers and sailors were in a state where they could move at any time.
   
 
“––Let’s depart.”
 
“––Let’s depart.”

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