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“The Muozinel Army has invaded, and the situation in Brune has changed drastically. Eleanora Viltaria has also been gone for half a year. Though it is good that her duties are still being done, but any longer and I will be forced to pull her back.”
 
“The Muozinel Army has invaded, and the situation in Brune has changed drastically. Eleanora Viltaria has also been gone for half a year. Though it is good that her duties are still being done, but any longer and I will be forced to pull her back.”
   
''--- I wonder if that really is the reason. There must be something more.''
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''--- I wonder of that really is the reason. There must be something more.''
   
 
While muttering those words in her mind, Sophie accepted the King's words.
 
While muttering those words in her mind, Sophie accepted the King's words.
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Thenardier never had the intention to accept them.
 
Thenardier never had the intention to accept them.
   
He had twenty-five thousand troops and five Dragons. If his army doubled, of course the required food and fuel consumption would double as well. Though Thenardier might have been able to prepare that, he was not in the mind to do so.
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He had twenty-five thousand troops and five Dragons. If his army doubled, of course the required food and fuel consumption would double as well. Though Thenardier may have been able to prepare that, he was not in the mind to do so.
   
 
Nevertheless, he had a reason to allow them to march with him until then.
 
Nevertheless, he had a reason to allow them to march with him until then.
   
One reason is because the battlefield they surrendered at was close to Nemetacum. Even if he had taken their arms and food, they might have devastated his territory, so it was necessary to pull them away.
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One reason is because the battlefield they surrendered at was close to Nemetacum. Even if he had taken their arms and food, they may have devastated his territory, so it was necessary to pull them away.
   
 
Also, there would be too many allies. He would need to divide the territory he gained from battle amongst them all.
 
Also, there would be too many allies. He would need to divide the territory he gained from battle amongst them all.
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“From Lutetia.”
 
“From Lutetia.”
   
A middle aged man who seemed to command the caravan responded with the utmost bravado. His attitude was natural, since many caravans which encountered an army were stripped of all they had.
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A middle aged man who seemed to command the caravan responded with the utmost bravado. His attitude was natural, since many caravans which encounter an army were stripped of all they have.
   
 
Even if they were an army, it was possible they were enemy spies. There were many reasons to remain suspicious of possible mercenary armies. What was important was to make sure his cargo was not stolen.
 
Even if they were an army, it was possible they were enemy spies. There were many reasons to remain suspicious of possible mercenary armies. What was important was to make sure his cargo was not stolen.
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Lim tilted her head expressionlessly. Massas responded to her doubt.
 
Lim tilted her head expressionlessly. Massas responded to her doubt.
   
“There are five Dragons in Duke Thenardier's Army. The battle ended quickly because they took the lead.
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“There are five Dragons in Duke Thenardier's Army. The battle ended quickly because they took the lead.
   
 
Dragons. Tigre and Massas trembled after hearing the world. Only Ellen and Mira remained calm. Lim as well showed no sign of tension in her face.
 
Dragons. Tigre and Massas trembled after hearing the world. Only Ellen and Mira remained calm. Lim as well showed no sign of tension in her face.
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There were numerous corpses accompanying the city burning to ruins.
 
There were numerous corpses accompanying the city burning to ruins.
   
At the same time, news of Ganelon's death circulated about northern Brune. To say nothing of the various cities throughout Lutetia, the aristocrats who did not fight in the war alongside Ganelon's troops were deeply impacted in the midst of the public turmoil.
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At the same time, news of Ganelon's death circulated about northern Brune. To say nothing of the various cities throughout Lutetia, the aristocrats who did not fought in the war alongside Ganelon's troops were deeply impacted in the midst of the public turmoil
   
 
On the other hand, the soldiers of the Ganelon Army which was defeated by the Thenardier Army simply scattered in all directions.
 
On the other hand, the soldiers of the Ganelon Army which was defeated by the Thenardier Army simply scattered in all directions.

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