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"--- Is that supposed to be a nickname for the Commander of the {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}}..."
 
"--- Is that supposed to be a nickname for the Commander of the {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}}..."
   
The messenger continued speaking, giving words of flattery to the extent that it was disgusting.
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The messenger continued speaking giving words of flattery to the extent that it was disgusting.
   
 
While polite on the outside, Ludmira was abusing him with frosty words. They could not afford to fight the Muozinel Army any longer. Careless words could not be afforded.
 
While polite on the outside, Ludmira was abusing him with frosty words. They could not afford to fight the Muozinel Army any longer. Careless words could not be afforded.
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“Did something happen?”
 
“Did something happen?”
   
From outside the tent, a soldier asked a question after hearing the sound of Tigre collapsing. Ludmira said nothing happened, convincing the soldier.
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From outside the tent, a soldier asked a question hearing the sound of Tigre collapsing. Ludmira said nothing happened, convincing the soldier.
   
 
Even with such loud sounds near his ear, Tigre showed no sign of awakening. Ludmira smiled, corrected her posture, and embraced Tigre closely.
 
Even with such loud sounds near his ear, Tigre showed no sign of awakening. Ludmira smiled, corrected her posture, and embraced Tigre closely.
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Due to Gerard's favor, Tigre did not awaken until night fell. Though he vaguely understood something warm was touching him, it was dark and his mind was dim.
 
Due to Gerard's favor, Tigre did not awaken until night fell. Though he vaguely understood something warm was touching him, it was dark and his mind was dim.
   
For the moment, he touched whatever the soft sensation was that was embracing him. Since he was half asleep, he did not think much. A question suddenly appeared in his mind when a sweet scent tickled his nose and a faint sigh touched his ears.
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For the moment, he touched whatever soft was embracing him. Since he was half asleep, he did not think much. A question suddenly appeared to his mind when a sweet scent tickled his nose and a faint sigh touched his ears.
   
 
He opened his eyes. Though it took some time to get accustomed to the darkness, Tigre was becoming increasingly aware.
 
He opened his eyes. Though it took some time to get accustomed to the darkness, Tigre was becoming increasingly aware.
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“Be, because it was soft...?”
 
“Be, because it was soft...?”
   
Because his head was not yet fully active, his voice was hollow and his response came out as a question.
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Because his head was not fully active, his voice was hollow and his response came out as a question.
   
Even so, he could not think of any other reason. He thought it was like the body of a dog with long hair in which he might want to bury his face in, but he remained silent because he did not think he could easily say that this instance.
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Even so, he could not think of any other reason. He thought it was like the body of a dog with long hair in which he might want to bury his face in, but he remained silent because he did not think he could easily say that in an instant.
   
 
“In that case – what is with your body's reaction?”
 
“In that case – what is with your body's reaction?”
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“--- Very well. I am also in the wrong for sleeping next to you.”
 
“--- Very well. I am also in the wrong for sleeping next to you.”
   
Ludmira finally spoke after Tigre apologized for what seemed to have been one thousand times. After all that, he spoke quietly.
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Ludmira finally spoke after Tigre apologized what seemed to have been one thousand times. After all that, he spoke quietly.
   
 
“Will you forgive me?”
 
“Will you forgive me?”
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“--- So both Lords came. No matter.”
 
“--- So both Lords came. No matter.”
   
The young man smiled brightly and spoke to himself while in a strange stance. His legs were spread and his body was leaned forward severely.
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The young man smiled brightly and spoke to himself in a strange stance. His legs were spread and his body was leaned forward severely.
   
 
“I will have you come with me, Boy.”
 
“I will have you come with me, Boy.”
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“You... What are you?”
 
“You... What are you?”
   
The man laughed after hearing Tigre's hoarsely spoken question.
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The man laughed hearing Tigre's hoarsely spoken question.
   
 
“My friends call me Vodyanoy. You may as well.”
 
“My friends call me Vodyanoy. You may as well.”
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“Master of the Frozen Wave! Right here, you will---!”
 
“Master of the Frozen Wave! Right here, you will---!”
   
Vodyanoy could not speak another word. He swallowed his words upon sensing a force with his entire body. He stared at Tigre with wide eyes.
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Vodyanoy could not speak another word. He swallowed his words sensing a force with his entire body. He stared at Tigre with wide eyes.
   
 
Tigre grasped his black bow and aimed an arrow toward Vodyanoy.
 
Tigre grasped his black bow and aimed an arrow toward Vodyanoy.
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“... The other day, I nearly fainted. Compared to that...”
 
“... The other day, I nearly fainted. Compared to that...”
   
It was better since he was still conscious. Even so, his body was heavy enough that he just wanted to lie in place, though it would be troublesome to do so.
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It was better since he was still conscious. Even so, his body was heavy enough that he wanted to lie in place, though it would be troublesome to do so.
   
 
“I suppose it cannot be helped.”
 
“I suppose it cannot be helped.”
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After quietly setting Tigre on the ground, Ludmira – Mira – stood before Ellen.
 
After quietly setting Tigre on the ground, Ludmira – Mira – stood before Ellen.
   
The two Vanadis exchanged intense glares. While Tigre looked at the two, someone lightly tapped his shoulder. When he turned around, Lim was kneeling on the ground, her index finger right before her mouth.
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The two Vanadis exchanged an intense glares. While Tigre looked at the two, someone lightly tapped his shoulder. When he turned around, Lim was kneeling on the ground, her index finger right before her mouth.
   
 
Tigre swallowed his words and nodded. Lim quietly carried the man with dull red hair on her back and stood up as if Tigre were simply a backpack. She lightly ran from the spot without emitting any unnecessary sounds. With their gazes unwavering, neither Ellen nor Mira noticed.
 
Tigre swallowed his words and nodded. Lim quietly carried the man with dull red hair on her back and stood up as if Tigre were simply a backpack. She lightly ran from the spot without emitting any unnecessary sounds. With their gazes unwavering, neither Ellen nor Mira noticed.
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“We will not die so easily, no matter how many people are after us.”
 
“We will not die so easily, no matter how many people are after us.”
   
Massas laughed after hearing Lim's response.
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Massas laughed hearing Lim's response.
   
 
“By the way, Lord Massas. What are you doing so early in the morning?”
 
“By the way, Lord Massas. What are you doing so early in the morning?”
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“The next time I ate a warm meal was when you brought me soup the other day. I apologize, though, for the trouble I have caused others...”
 
“The next time I ate a warm meal was when you brought me soup the other day. I apologize, though, for the trouble I have caused others...”
   
Hearing those words, Tigre was convinced of Regin's behavior at the time. She was wary of the presence of poison. It was only when Tigre put the soup in his mouth that she had confirmed it was safe.
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Hearing those words, Tigre was convinced of Regin's behavior at the time. She was wary of the presence of poison. It was only when Tigre put the soup in his mouth that she was confirmed it was safe.
   
 
“Do you trust me?”
 
“Do you trust me?”
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While Tigre spoke to appease Regin, Ellen looked silently at Mira in triumph. Lim simply watched her Lord silently as if she were deplorable.
 
While Tigre spoke to appease Regin, Ellen looked silently at Mira in triumph. Lim simply watched her Lord silently as if she were deplorable.
   
Though Regin was worried, she decided to believe Tigre. She straightened her posture and turned back to Ellen, meeting her gaze.
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Though Regin was worried, she decided to believe Tigre. She straightened her posture and turned back to Ellen, meeting their gaze.
   
 
“... This is a conspiracy between Dukes Thenardier and Ganelon. If it is in the battlefield, it would not be unnatural for me to die as a casualty of war.”
 
“... This is a conspiracy between Dukes Thenardier and Ganelon. If it is in the battlefield, it would not be unnatural for me to die as a casualty of war.”
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Ellen hit her hand as she said those words.
 
Ellen hit her hand as she said those words.
   
“Isn't it fine remaining dead for the time being? Isn't it fine being Regin? How many people in Brune really know that the Prince is actually a woman?”
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“Isn't it fine remaining dead for the time being? Isn't it fine being Regin? How many people in Brune really know the Prince is actually a woman?”
   
 
“Although it is supposed to just be His Majesty, mother, and me, it is likely Duke Thenardier and Duke Ganelon also know.”
 
“Although it is supposed to just be His Majesty, mother, and me, it is likely Duke Thenardier and Duke Ganelon also know.”
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“It would be even worse. Dukes Thenardier and Ganelon would turn you into a public enemy. You would either be caught or sold as a slave if you went to anyone.”
 
“It would be even worse. Dukes Thenardier and Ganelon would turn you into a public enemy. You would either be caught or sold as a slave if you went to anyone.”
   
Massas, who had finally recovered, and Tigre frowned after hearing Ellen's candid words, though they could not deny them.
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Massas, who had finally recovered, and Tigre frowned hearing Ellen's candid words, though they could not deny them.
   
 
“Regarding this talk, does Duke Ganelon know you are alive?”
 
“Regarding this talk, does Duke Ganelon know you are alive?”
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“Lending her your power. Frankly speaking, this person is a hindrance.”
 
“Lending her your power. Frankly speaking, this person is a hindrance.”
   
Ellen expressed agreement with Mira's brutally honest words.
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Ellen implied agreement with Mira's brutally honest words.
   
“If you claim the Prince is alive, Duke Thenardier and Ganelon would simply try to kill her, since she is a woman, and there will be many who would put her at fault.”
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“If you claim the Prince is alive, Duke Thenardier and Ganelon would simply try to kill her, since she is a woman, there will be many who would put her at fault.”
   
Tigre tilted his head after hearing their opinions.
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Tigre tilted his head hearing their opinions.
   
 
“I understand what you mean, Ellen, Mira... But if word reached His Majesty, wouldn't it work out? Though I hear he is currently ill.”
 
“I understand what you mean, Ellen, Mira... But if word reached His Majesty, wouldn't it work out? Though I hear he is currently ill.”
   
Massas began to choke after hearing Tigre's words. Looking at the unexpected noise from the old Earl, it was clear he was sweating.
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Massas began to choke hearing Tigre's words. Looking at the unexpected noise from the old Earl, it was clear he was sweating.
   
 
“Lord Massas?”
 
“Lord Massas?”
   
Tigre called out to Massas in worry. While holding his gray beard, Massas managed to squeeze out his voice, explaining the King had become extremely mentally unstable upon hearing of the Prince's death.
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Tigre called out to Massas in worry. While holding his gray beard, Massas managed to squeeze out his voice, explaining the King had become extremely mentally unstable hearing of the Prince's death.
   
 
“That... Is it true?”
 
“That... Is it true?”
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He could not possibly abandon her.
 
He could not possibly abandon her.
   
“Regin. Anything is good, even if it's trivial... Do you have any clues that proves you are His Majesty's, the King's child?”
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“Regin. Anything is good, even if it's trivial... Do you have any clue that proves you are His Majesty's, the King's child?”
   
 
If she did, Regin would be able to return to the King's Capital openly.
 
If she did, Regin would be able to return to the King's Capital openly.

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