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In the tent for the General in the camp of the {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}}, several maps surrounded Tigre, Ludmira, and Rurick.
 
In the tent for the General in the camp of the {{furigana|[Silver Meteor Army]|Unstoppable Silver Flow}}, several maps surrounded Tigre, Ludmira, and Rurick.
   
Ludmira specifically visited to give the men a sense of relief. The soldiers of LeitMeritz did not particularly feel good while the soldiers of Brune were simply confused about seeing an ally suddenly appear.
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Ludmira specifically visited to give the men a sense of relief. The soldiers of LeitMeritz did not particularly feel good while the soldiers of Brune were simply confused seeing an ally suddenly appear.
   
 
“Can you do it?”
 
“Can you do it?”
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Tigre scowled hearing that fact. Ludmira continued with a grim expression.
 
Tigre scowled hearing that fact. Ludmira continued with a grim expression.
   
“I am not blaming you, but to fight an army of twenty thousand with a little less than two thousand is reckless. Your men need days of rest... This is especially important since they are on the battlefield.”
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“I am not blaming you, but to fight an army of twenty thousand with a little less than two thousand is reckless. Your men need days' rest... This is especially important since they are on the battlefield.”
   
 
“But... You said we will last for a single battle. Did you have a plan in mind with that?”
 
“But... You said we will last for a single battle. Did you have a plan in mind with that?”
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“In that case, you need to be thorough.”
 
“In that case, you need to be thorough.”
   
Rurick looked at Ludmira, showing he did not understand what she meant.
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Rurick looked at Ludmira showing he did not understand what she meant.
   
 
“First, you would need to move deeper into the enemy's troops. Next, the towns and villages along their path have been emptied and burned down. On a clear night with good conditions, even an idiot would not put them out in the open, and the enemy is no idiot.
 
“First, you would need to move deeper into the enemy's troops. Next, the towns and villages along their path have been emptied and burned down. On a clear night with good conditions, even an idiot would not put them out in the open, and the enemy is no idiot.
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She stared at them coldly in anger. Tigre scratched his head in response.
 
She stared at them coldly in anger. Tigre scratched his head in response.
   
“This kind of conversation wasn't really relevant in Alsace. Sorry, but do you mind teaching us?”
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“This kind of conversation wasn't really relevant in Alsace. Sorry, do you mind teaching us?”
   
 
“Honestly... What is Eleanora teaching you?”
 
“Honestly... What is Eleanora teaching you?”
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“That's one reason, but we still lack in numbers. We will likely need the two thousand refugees to help.”
 
“That's one reason, but we still lack in numbers. We will likely need the two thousand refugees to help.”
   
Tigre inhaled deeply after hearing those words. After staring at Ludmira's emotionless face, he spoke with a bitter face.
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Tigre inhaled deeply hearing those words. After staring at Ludmira's emotionless face, he spoke with a bitter face.
   
 
“... What will we have them do?”
 
“... What will we have them do?”
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However, nothing obstructed their advance by the time they left the narrow path.
 
However, nothing obstructed their advance by the time they left the narrow path.
   
When they finally escaped from the narrow pass, they were confronted with a prairie of rolling ups and downs. Since it was winter, it was dark. However, once spring arrived, the greenery would spread about, blanketed by a carpet of grass. In the distance was a small hill.
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When they finally escaped from the narrow pass, they were confronted with a prairie of rolling ups and downs. Since it was winter, it was dark, but the greenery would spread about, blanketed by a carpet of grass, once spring arrived. In the distance was a small hill.
   
 
While he caught the snow drifting down from the gray sky in his palm, Kreshu's subordinate quickly gave a report, saying the messenger sent to the Zhcted Army had returned.
 
While he caught the snow drifting down from the gray sky in his palm, Kreshu's subordinate quickly gave a report, saying the messenger sent to the Zhcted Army had returned.
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Seeing the messenger wipe his sweat away, Kreshu urged him to continue with a nod.
 
Seeing the messenger wipe his sweat away, Kreshu urged him to continue with a nod.
   
“... We have left our land and entered this country to help an important member of Brune Kingdom who asked for our aid. We differ from your Army which lawlessly violates the land of other countries. If you should doubt my word, you have only to hear of it from Tigrevurmud Vorn. Though I do not have any desire to actively fight your Army, it cannot be helped should you obstruct our duties. I pray you safely return through the path you have come by.”
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“... We have left our land and entered this country to help an important member of Brune Kingdom who asked for our aid. We differ from your Army which lawlessly violates the land of other countries. If you should doubt my word, you have only hear of it from Tigrevurmud Vorn. Though I do not have any desire to actively fight your Army, it cannot be helped should you obstruct our duties. I pray you safely return through the path you have come by.”
   
 
After saying everything, the messenger let out a small breath and bowed.
 
After saying everything, the messenger let out a small breath and bowed.
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“One more thing. What about the small hill further back?”
 
“One more thing. What about the small hill further back?”
   
“It is covered in a blanket of snow. We have seen no signs of the enemy's appearance.”
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“It is covered in a blanket of snow. We have seen no sign of the enemy's appearance.”
   
 
“I see. In that case, tell the men to surround the hill. Do not approach, simply surround them.”
 
“I see. In that case, tell the men to surround the hill. Do not approach, simply surround them.”
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“They must be attacking the nearest army... But where did they come from?”
 
“They must be attacking the nearest army... But where did they come from?”
   
Kreshu showed no signs of being upset. When an enemy suddenly sprung out of nowhere, they must have hidden themselves somewhere.
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Kreshu showed no sign of being upset. When an enemy suddenly sprung out of nowhere, they must have hidden themselves somewhere.
   
 
Hearing that there were three thousand soldiers, he considered them to be in the shadow of the uninhabited hill.
 
Hearing that there were three thousand soldiers, he considered them to be in the shadow of the uninhabited hill.
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The blood which flowed was frozen in an instant, melted, then disappeared in the snow as the corpses fell to the ground. Swords were cut, spears were smashed, and bows crumbled as they were pressed between corpses, their bodies pierced and stuck to the ground.
 
The blood which flowed was frozen in an instant, melted, then disappeared in the snow as the corpses fell to the ground. Swords were cut, spears were smashed, and bows crumbled as they were pressed between corpses, their bodies pierced and stuck to the ground.
   
Though the Muozinel soldiers were lightly dressed, they would not be able to stop her fierce charge even if they were in iron armor.
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Though the Muozinel soldiers were lightly dressed, they were not be able to stop her fierce charge, even in iron armor.
   
 
Spear bearers charged at Ludmira from multiple angles simultaneously. Half she drove away while the remainder she dodged by skillfully manipulating her horse and posture. The next moment, the Frozen Wave drew out from her hand and cut through the Muozinel soldiers in a flash.
 
Spear bearers charged at Ludmira from multiple angles simultaneously. Half she drove away while the remainder she dodged by skillfully manipulating her horse and posture. The next moment, the Frozen Wave drew out from her hand and cut through the Muozinel soldiers in a flash.
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“If you think so, then please defend me.”
 
“If you think so, then please defend me.”
   
Tigre responded in a somewhat rough manner. While regretting that he could only speak so simply, he pulled out another arrow from the quiver at his waist. He was already running low. As if he knew in advance, Gerard wore leather armor and approached Tigre quietly from behind with a new quiver. Tigre tapped the new quiver lightly instead of giving a greeting.
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Tigre responded in a somewhat rough term. While regretting that he could only speak so simply, he pulled out another arrow from the quiver at his waist. He was already running low. As if he knew in advance, Gerard wore leather armor and approached Tigre quietly from behind with a new quiver. Tigre tapped the new quiver lightly instead of giving a greeting.
   
 
“In a situation like this, you can even aim at the enemy's unit Commander.”
 
“In a situation like this, you can even aim at the enemy's unit Commander.”
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“However, he may not have necessarily come to help us.”
 
“However, he may not have necessarily come to help us.”
   
Another person spoke up and became quiet after seeing the man glare at him. The man then continued to speak.
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Another person spoke up and became quiet seeing the man glare at him. The man then continued to speak.
   
 
“He has helped us and brought us this far. That is a fact. I wouldn't mind having a bit of revenge, either. They killed our families and destroyed our homes.”
 
“He has helped us and brought us this far. That is a fact. I wouldn't mind having a bit of revenge, either. They killed our families and destroyed our homes.”
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Ludmira had wonderfully used her fame for defense to trick the Muozinel Army.
 
Ludmira had wonderfully used her fame for defense to trick the Muozinel Army.
   
Even when he received a report that the fifth army was destroyed, {{furigana|[Red Beard]|Barbaros}} showed no signs of confusion. Even if he lost five thousand men, he could send the next unit of five thousand soon afterward.
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Even when he received a report that the fifth team was destroyed, {{furigana|[Red Beard]|Barbaros}} showed no sign of confusion. Even if he lost five thousand men, he could send the next unit of five thousand soon afterward.
   
 
Although his aides were dismayed by an approaching enemy, Kreshu retained his presence of mind.
 
Although his aides were dismayed by an approaching enemy, Kreshu retained his presence of mind.
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“... Roland?”
 
“... Roland?”
   
Tigre stared in blank surprise, hearing an unexpected name.
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Tigre stared in blank surprise hearing an unexpected name.
   
“You went to war for the people of Brune – At that time, I was making preparations to fight. I heard of your story from them and rushed to Lords Massas and Augre. Both the Knights of Perucche and Lutece are the same.”
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“You went to war for the people of Brune – At that time, I was making preparations to fight. I heard of your story from and rushed to Lords Massas and Augre. Both the Knights of Perucche and Lutece are the same.”
   
 
Words of their lives and words of their death, they had pierced through the Knights, bringing them to action.
 
Words of their lives and words of their death, they had pierced through the Knights, bringing them to action.
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Kreshu instructed his soldiers to withdraw and thought of such a thing. There were two reasons for this.
 
Kreshu instructed his soldiers to withdraw and thought of such a thing. There were two reasons for this.
   
The first reason was to bring forth jealousy of Tigre's influence. Kreshu wanted it to reach the level of Thenardier and Ganelon.
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The first reason was bring forth jealousy of Tigre's influence. Kreshu wanted it to reach the level of Thenardier and Ganelon.
   
 
The other reason was for his honor.
 
The other reason was for his honor.

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