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After ending her break, Ellen took command and started acting.
 
After ending her break, Ellen took command and started acting.
   
On the other side were the Knights of Navarre numbering nearly five thousand. Due to their victory in battle the day before, their morale was much higher.
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On other side were the Knights of Navarre numbering nearly five thousand. Due to their victory in battle the day before, their morale was much higher.
   
 
However, their actions would be slow due to the mud on the ground.
 
However, their actions would be slow due to the mud on the ground.
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They would not run away from the challenge. Furthermore, the enemy had decreased significantly due to their injuries. After thinking for a short moment, Roland made his decision.
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They would not run away from the challenge. Further, the enemy had decreased significantly due to their injuries. After thinking for a short moment, Roland made his decision.
   
 
“Leave the injured. We will fight the main force.”
 
“Leave the injured. We will fight the main force.”
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The arrow entered Teita's chest. It stuck there. The sound of air exploded as a gale raged through the narrow hall. The black light, the [Power] blew Teita's clothes to pieces.
 
The arrow entered Teita's chest. It stuck there. The sound of air exploded as a gale raged through the narrow hall. The black light, the [Power] blew Teita's clothes to pieces.
   
Tigre's heart stopped after seeing this.
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Tigre's heart stopped seeing this.
   
 
However, the black light did not injure her and disappeared. Tigre was completely worn out and sat down, his physical strength now drained. Even in battle, he had never felt this tired. He wanted to fall to the floor and sleep.
 
However, the black light did not injure her and disappeared. Tigre was completely worn out and sat down, his physical strength now drained. Even in battle, he had never felt this tired. He wanted to fall to the floor and sleep.
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“He's a bit busy. The {{furigana|[Wind Princess of the Silver Flash]|Silvfrau}} will be your opponent.”
 
“He's a bit busy. The {{furigana|[Wind Princess of the Silver Flash]|Silvfrau}} will be your opponent.”
   
With a movement of Sophie's hand, Ellen rushed forward. The sunlight reflected her sword as she collided with the sacred blade. Roland let out a strong desire to kill, but Ellen simply returned it without showing any signs of pressure.
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With a movement of Sophie's hand, Ellen rushed forward. The sunlight reflected her sword as she collided with the sacred blade. Roland let out a strong desire to kill, but Ellen simply returned it without showing any sign of pressure.
   
 
Blue sparks were thrown about, the wind swirled, and mud splashed about.
 
Blue sparks were thrown about, the wind swirled, and mud splashed about.
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The subordinates separated from the mortal battle in fear.
 
The subordinates separated from the mortal battle in fear.
   
There were some brave Knights from Navarre who entered the space, but they were immediately knocked away by Sophie. The Zhcted soldiers who approached were also repelled.
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There were some brave Knights from Navarre which entered the space, but they were immediately knocked away by Sophie. The Zhcted soldiers who approached were also repelled.
   
 
While Ellen and Roland clashed, the vortex of battle grew, little by little.
 
While Ellen and Roland clashed, the vortex of battle grew, little by little.
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She swung her longsword downward. A condensed storm raged from the tip of her blade, unleashing a roar similar to a beast's. The invisible fangs of wind pierced the ground, scattering earth and sand. She used her Dragonic Skill against Roland – to be precise, she was forced to. She had no room for error.
 
She swung her longsword downward. A condensed storm raged from the tip of her blade, unleashing a roar similar to a beast's. The invisible fangs of wind pierced the ground, scattering earth and sand. She used her Dragonic Skill against Roland – to be precise, she was forced to. She had no room for error.
   
Roland raised his eyebrow slightly, though no sign of agitation was present. He attacked the wind with Durandal, staring at it with the eyes of a beast.
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Roland raised his eyebrow slightly, though no sign of agitation was present. He attacked the wind with Durandal, staring at it with eyes of a beast.
   
 
Letting loose a cry, he cut it down.
 
Letting loose a cry, he cut it down.
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“Why did you come here, idiot!”
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“Why did you come here, Idiot!”
   
 
“I'm not an idiot, Ellen.”
 
“I'm not an idiot, Ellen.”
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“If you have lived for that long, many things that you see and hear stay in your head. That is all it was. If anything, you are far more amazing, Limlisha.”
 
“If you have lived for that long, many things that you see and hear stay in your head. That is all it was. If anything, you are far more amazing, Limlisha.”
   
Lim tilted her head slightly within her helmet after hearing the sudden praise.
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Lim tilted her head slightly within her helmet hearing the sudden praise.
   
 
“You made a plan for victory. You arranged a large army and have a sense of how to move them properly. At the young age of 19, you were able to use them effectively. When I was 19, I was still a boy absorbed in thinking of the future with his father.”
 
“You made a plan for victory. You arranged a large army and have a sense of how to move them properly. At the young age of 19, you were able to use them effectively. When I was 19, I was still a boy absorbed in thinking of the future with his father.”
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Tigre got off his horse and stood in the grass distant from the battlefield and faced Roland. Though Ellen, alongside Sophie, stood behind Tigre, she was quietly abusing him in her mind.
 
Tigre got off his horse and stood in the grass distant from the battlefield and faced Roland. Though Ellen, alongside Sophie, stood behind Tigre, she was quietly abusing him in her mind.
   
“Honestly, what a foolish man... The General is supposed to stay in the back.”
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“Honestly, what a foolish man... The General is supposed to stay in back.”
   
 
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“... Such a nice scent.”
 
“... Such a nice scent.”
   
Though he did not point out what he was talking about, it seems Ellen understood what he meant. Her face was dyed red and she muttered to herself. Tigre as well, though he had not particularly given thought to his comment, became flushed after seeing Ellen's reaction.
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Though he did not point out what he was talking about, it seems Ellen understood what he meant. Her face was dyed red and she muttered to herself. Tigre as well, though he had not particularly given thought to his comment, became flush seeing Ellen's reaction.
   
As his gaze wandered restlessly, Tigre thought frantically about what happened before he fell into unconsciousness.
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As his gaze wandered restlessly, Tigre thought frantically about what happened before he fell unconsciousness.
   
 
“Um, since when...?”
 
“Um, since when...?”
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“I see, Perhaps I can buy you some time.”
 
“I see, Perhaps I can buy you some time.”
   
Both Tigre and Massas frowned upon hearing Roland's words, while Ellen's red pupils showed interest. Olivier, in the back of his mind, still could not consent.
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Both Tigre and Massas frowned hearing Roland's words, while Ellen's red pupils showed interest. Olivier, in the back of his mind, could still not consent.
   
 
“I will return to the Royal Capital and get an audience with His Majesty for you.”
 
“I will return to the Royal Capital and get an audience with His Majesty for you.”
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Tigre received the sacred sword and felt a strange feeling in the heavy blade. It was something special like his bow or a {{furigana|Dragonic Tool|Viralt}}.
 
Tigre received the sacred sword and felt a strange feeling in the heavy blade. It was something special like his bow or a {{furigana|Dragonic Tool|Viralt}}.
   
Tigre gave it some thought and raised his head and responded to Roland.
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Tigre gave it some thought and raised head and responded to Roland.
   
 
“I understand. Until you return, I will remain here.”
 
“I understand. Until you return, I will remain here.”

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