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The moist road of black earth continued endlessly in a perfectly straight line, passing through a number of grassy hills.
 
The moist road of black earth continued endlessly in a perfectly straight line, passing through a number of grassy hills.
   
The weather was perfect, a typical warm day. The entirety of the sky was blue, and the spring sun in the east warmed up the fresh and green buds.
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The weather was perfect, a typical warm day. The entirety of the sky was blue, and the spring sun at the east warmed up the fresh and green buds.
   
 
Master Shizu sat in the driver’s seat in his usual sweater, with goggles on his face to protect his eyes from the wind.
 
Master Shizu sat in the driver’s seat in his usual sweater, with goggles on his face to protect his eyes from the wind.
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Ti was as quiet as ever, but she was always listening. As evidence of that, whenever Master Shizu would say something that he has explained some time ago, she would answer ‘I know.’
 
Ti was as quiet as ever, but she was always listening. As evidence of that, whenever Master Shizu would say something that he has explained some time ago, she would answer ‘I know.’
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And so Master Shizu continued to lecture as we traveled, even though Ti gave no reaction.
 
And so Master Shizu continued to lecture as we traveled, even though Ti gave no reaction.
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But from the scenery we’ve run into, and the fact that we’ve exited a country only a few days ago, those are not possible options. There are many countries nearby, and as far as I could tell, it’s unlikely that they get along with each other very well.
 
But from the scenery we’ve run into, and the fact that we’ve exited a country only a few days ago, those are not possible options. There are many countries nearby, and as far as I could tell, it’s unlikely that they get along with each other very well.
   
Indeed we’ve visited a country that only had fences for walls, but that was a rather isolated case. I suppose that country still exists to this day.
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Indeed we’ve visited a country that only had fences for walls, but that was a rather isolated case. I suppose that country still exist to this day.
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
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Upon approaching the gates, a smiling immigration officer came before us.
 
Upon approaching the gates, a smiling immigration officer came before us.
   
‘Welcome to this far-off country of ours,’ he said with an eager to please smile. It was an attitude of a person that would allow everyone to enter the country.
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‘Welcome to this far-off country of ours,’ he said with an eager to please smile. It was an attitude that would allow everyone to enter the country.
   
 
Master Shizu sought permission to enter for purpose of resupplying, and as we expected, we were allowed to go in without any objections.
 
Master Shizu sought permission to enter for purpose of resupplying, and as we expected, we were allowed to go in without any objections.
   
He said that we could stay as long as we like as everybody would be pleased to have us, but Master Shizu refused. Then he asked what happened to the country’s defense.
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As everybody would be pleased to have us, he said that we could stay as long as we like, but Master Shizu refused. Then he asked what happened to the country’s defense.0
   
 
The immigration officer answered with a smile.
 
The immigration officer answered with a smile.
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Stone houses that have an air of history in them were lined up neatly and made a very beautiful townscape. The road was also paved with stones, and it was very easy to ride on.
 
Stone houses that have an air of history in them were lined up neatly and made a very beautiful townscape. The road was also paved with stones, and it was very easy to ride on.
   
Judging from the beautiful clothes that the people walking on the streets wore, they must be living quite the lavish lifestyle. The smiling faces that they turned to us travelers do not seem to have any hint of care in the world.
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Judging from the beautiful clothes that the people walking on the streets wore, they must be living quite the lavish lifestyle. The smiling faces that they turned to us travelers, does not seem to have any hint of care in the world.
   
 
Their technology was also pretty advanced. The town was lined up with street lights, radios could be seen being sold, and small automobiles were running on the road.
 
Their technology was also pretty advanced. The town was lined up with street lights, radios could be seen being sold, and small automobiles were running on the road.
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“Well, I guess this much is fine…. It’s also been a while since I’ve eaten some.”
 
“Well, I guess this much is fine…. It’s also been a while since I’ve eaten some.”
   
It’s not possible to get ahold of ice cream during our travels. So even if we have to leave quickly, it wasn’t bad to indulge a little. Master Shizu brought the buggy near the shoulder of the road.
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It’s not possible to get ahold of ice cream during our travels. So even if we have to leave quickly, it wasn’t bad to indulge a little. Master Shizu took the buggy near the shoulder of the road.
   
 
He bought a tall cone of ice cream, and Ti and Master Shizu ate beside the buggy. It’s delicious, said Master Shizu.
 
He bought a tall cone of ice cream, and Ti and Master Shizu ate beside the buggy. It’s delicious, said Master Shizu.
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He looked sullen, but Master Shizu’s polite response seemed to break his expression.
 
He looked sullen, but Master Shizu’s polite response seemed to break his expression.
   
“I see. That’s great then. —Go as soon as you can. You’ll be forced to leave soon anyway.”
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“I see. That’s great then. —Go as soon as you can. Anyway you’ll be forced to leave soon anyway.”
   
 
Then he passed by the side of the buggy to leave.
 
Then he passed by the side of the buggy to leave.
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The man readily confirmed it.
 
The man readily confirmed it.
   
“Certainly. Over at the west, there’s a big country that would grab the slightest opportunity to increase its territory. Be it receiving money, getting blackmailed or being deceived—as to which I don’t know, maybe all of the above—but it’s almost certain that the leader is a puppet of that country.
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“Certainly. Over at the west, there’s a big country that would grab the slightest opportunity to increase its territory. Be it receiving money, getting blackmailed or being deceived—as to which I don’t know, maybe all of the above—but it’s almost certain that the leader is a puppet of that country.
   
 
“Then this country will eventually be taken over.”
 
“Then this country will eventually be taken over.”
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“That man couldn’t leave his country, huh...,” Master Shizu said dolefully.
 
“That man couldn’t leave his country, huh...,” Master Shizu said dolefully.
   
A wanderer’s attachment to his new-found home is not an ordinary one. It’s not an unusual thing.
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A wanderer’s attachment to his newfound home is not an ordinary one. It’s not an unusual thing.
   
 
And Master Shizu, yet to find such a place, have reached this far.
 
And Master Shizu, yet to find such a place, have reached this far.
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But as to which one’s better, neither I nor Master Shizu knew.
 
But as to which one’s better, neither I nor Master Shizu knew.
   
Is it better for that man to be killed, resulting in the country being readily subjugated, and its people living a life of oppression?
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Is it better for that man to be killed, resulting in the country being readily subjugated, and its people live a life of oppression?
   
 
Or is it better if that man continues with his counterattack, and his country will not be occupied in exchange for killing many of his people in the explosion?
 
Or is it better if that man continues with his counterattack, and his country will not be occupied in exchange for killing many of his people in the explosion?
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With its wordless driver, the buggy continued running through the prairie.
 
With its wordless driver, the buggy continued running through the prairie.
 
   
 
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