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However, Kurou did not find any satisfaction in messing around with defenseless girls. Even if he did, this was not the time for it.
 
However, Kurou did not find any satisfaction in messing around with defenseless girls. Even if he did, this was not the time for it.
   
“Looks like that side has been taken care of. What the, that guy looks completely revived.”
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“Looks like that side has been taken care of. What the, that guy looks completed revived.”
   
 
Kurou stated with a hint of exasperation.
 
Kurou stated with a hint of exasperation.
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Following that, Rinne began to move as if she was gliding across the ground. She swung the Silver Wing more like a sword than a lance. With a blade on each side of the lance, she seemed to be at ease even though the weight should feel abnormal. Even though the single blade was blocked, there was an incoming second blade that came down as well.
 
Following that, Rinne began to move as if she was gliding across the ground. She swung the Silver Wing more like a sword than a lance. With a blade on each side of the lance, she seemed to be at ease even though the weight should feel abnormal. Even though the single blade was blocked, there was an incoming second blade that came down as well.
   
With a ferocious strike akin to Sefi’s from Rinne’s swing of the Silver Wing, it was as if a tornado formed during the attack. Even though she was not hit during the strike, just being in the attack radius made her body feel like it shattered into pieces.
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With a ferocious strike akin to Sefi’s from Rinne’s swing of the Silver Wing, it was as if a tornado formed during the attack. Even though she was not hit during the strike, just being in the attack radius made her body feel shattered into pieces.
   
 
“Guh……!”
 
“Guh……!”
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“Rinne……”
 
“Rinne……”
   
Not having to live a life of segregation at the reservation, her life would seem to resemble that of a human.
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Not having to live a life of segregation at the reservation, her life would seem to resemble that of a humans.
   
 
In regards to Rinne, do Blazes find that type of situation to be unsatisfying?
 
In regards to Rinne, do Blazes find that type of situation to be unsatisfying?

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