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“W-Wait! Hold on a sec! Please keep this a secret from Sefi!”
 
“W-Wait! Hold on a sec! Please keep this a secret from Sefi!”
   
“If you're requesting me to do so in such a manner, I suppose I’ll back off……”
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“If your requesting me to do so in such a manner, I suppose I’ll back off……”
   
 
Hinako revealed a very somber expression. Kurou was currently looking quite pathetic.
 
Hinako revealed a very somber expression. Kurou was currently looking quite pathetic.
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Furthermore, Hinako did not understand how swordsmen think.
 
Furthermore, Hinako did not understand how swordsmen think.
   
“I’m putting an end to this topic. Since we're already here we might as well go further on a bit.”
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“I’m putting an end to this topic. Since were already here we might as well go further on a bit.”
   
 
Kurou glanced at the map to confirm their location. This place was a small park. In order to get closer to the targeted building, he would have to go across the park.
 
Kurou glanced at the map to confirm their location. This place was a small park. In order to get closer to the targeted building, he would have to go across the park.
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“I had heard the Blazes were segregated, but to think they had a park like this.”
 
“I had heard the Blazes were segregated, but to think they had a park like this.”
   
“They were probably only provided with the bare necessities. I feel that this park was just shoved into this narrow space as some sort of entertainment facility for them. Plus this was probably just all a facade and it’s highly probable that the children were denied usage of the park anyways.”
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“They were probably only provided with the bare necessities. I feel that this park was just shoved into this narrow space as some sort of entertainment facility for them. Plus this was probably just all a facade, and it’s highly probable that the children were denied usage of the park anyways.”
   
 
“Kuro sure is pessimistic.”
 
“Kuro sure is pessimistic.”
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Hinako got off the swing set and casually approached Kurou. After getting to the point where their bodies almost touched, Hinako raised her head and gazed at Kurou
 
Hinako got off the swing set and casually approached Kurou. After getting to the point where their bodies almost touched, Hinako raised her head and gazed at Kurou
   
“Sefi selected this for me and the underwear I’m currently wearing is decorated in lovely laces.”
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“Sefi selected this for me and the underwear I’m currently wearing is decorated in lovely lace.”
   
 
As she was saying this, Hinako began unbuckling the buttons to her jacket. Following that she pulled down the front of her shirt collar and her pure white skin slowly came into sight.
 
As she was saying this, Hinako began unbuckling the buttons to her jacket. Following that she pulled down the front of her shirt collar and her pure white skin slowly came into sight.
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“Is she? I’m not that kid’s guardian so I wouldn’t know.”
 
“Is she? I’m not that kid’s guardian so I wouldn’t know.”
   
In the end, he only arrived here due to the GPS signal. Although he was not totally sure, it seemed that this was Rinne’s residence.
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In the end it was just due to the GPS signal that he arrived here. Although he was not totally sure, but it seemed that this was Rinne’s residence.
   
 
In that case, his guess that she was Blaze was correct.
 
In that case, his guess that she was Blaze was correct.

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