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“That kind of idea would only come from someone with ''low scruples.”
 
“That kind of idea would only come from someone with ''low scruples.”
For Yorimichi to say such things was an almost insulting provocation. Genma didn’t contradict; the reply would have been extremely disrespectful if he did.
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For Yorimichi to say such things was an almost insulting provocation. Genma did not contradict; the reply would have been extremely disrespectful if he did.
   
 
“Chichi-ue, that’s enough!”
 
“Chichi-ue, that’s enough!”
   
Juugo wouldn’t allow the continuation of such an insulting diatribe. In order to stop it he ordered Yorimichi to be taken away.
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Juugo would not allow the continuation of such an insulting diatribe. In order to stop it, he ordered Yorimichi to be taken away.
   
 
“Yorimichi, you must be tired. Please return to your room to rest.”
 
“Yorimichi, you must be tired. Please return to your room to rest.”
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With an exchange of looks, underscoring each other’s reasoning, they smiled at the same time. In addition, with that, they understood the time for chatting was over, and it was now time to discuss more serious matters.
 
With an exchange of looks, underscoring each other’s reasoning, they smiled at the same time. In addition, with that, they understood the time for chatting was over, and it was now time to discuss more serious matters.
   
“As the previous suzerain said, the timing is too much of a coincidence. It is better for us to meet again and talk.”
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“As the previous suzerain said, the timing is too much of a coincidence. It is better for us to meet again and talk.”
   
 
Genma maintained his silence from the start, perhaps because he did not want to discuss his own son.
 
Genma maintained his silence from the start, perhaps because he did not want to discuss his own son.
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“If he won’t submit, we will have to use force to bring him here. Even though he has gained strength, he is still Kazuma. Two or three people will be more than enough to capture him.”
 
“If he won’t submit, we will have to use force to bring him here. Even though he has gained strength, he is still Kazuma. Two or three people will be more than enough to capture him.”
   
“...That’s good, then. The selection of persons in charge of this assignment will be your responsibility. No matter what, it is necessary to bring back Kazuma quickly.”
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“...That’s good, then. The selection of persons in charge of this assignment will be your responsibility, Genma. No matter what, it is necessary to bring back Kazuma quickly.”
   
 
“Understood.” Even though Genma received an order to capture his own son, Genma was tranquil compared to others.
 
“Understood.” Even though Genma received an order to capture his own son, Genma was tranquil compared to others.
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“I’m home, [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Otou-Sama|Otou-sama]]! Ehh...? What’s going on?”
 
“I’m home, [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Otou-Sama|Otou-sama]]! Ehh...? What’s going on?”
   
Appearing on the scene was an assertive young teenage girl, who asked this question when she saw the group's mood. Her black hair that almost reached the back, flowing straight and sideways created by the movements of her head, simply represented the blooming of a [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Bishoujo|bishoujo]]. At that moment, the 'dark and cold' atmosphere had completely vanished. The spiritual energy that emerged from her cleansed the room's atmosphere in one breath.
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Appearing on the scene was an assertive young teenage girl, who asked this question when she saw the group's mood. With black hair that almost reached her back, flowing straight and sideways created by the movements of her head, simply represented the blooming of a [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Bishoujo|bishoujo]]. At that moment, the 'dark and cold' atmosphere had completely vanished. The spiritual energy that emerged from her cleansed the room's atmosphere in one breath.
   
 
The appearance of an unclear enemy who killed some people at home. The people who had been discussing this situation nonstop now faced a blinding light; their uncomfortable and distressed feeling completely vanished.
 
The appearance of an unclear enemy who killed some people at home. The people who had been discussing this situation nonstop now faced a blinding light; their uncomfortable and distressed feeling completely vanished.
   
As if facing the rays of the sun, all movements in the dark ceased to exist. The person in the doorway was the one who had the ability to vanquish darkness, with spiritual powers not below the power of light, heir of the suzerain and owner of Enraiha, is Juugo’s daughter, Kannagi Ayano.
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As if facing the rays of the sun, all movements in the dark ceased to exist. The person in the doorway was the one who had the ability to vanquish darkness, with spiritual powers not below the power of light, heir of the suzerain and owner of Enraiha, and Juugo’s daughter, Kannagi Ayano.
   
 
“How’s the report, Ayano?”
 
“How’s the report, Ayano?”
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Faced with this kind of close and revealing speech, Juugo’s "sun vein" furrowed.
 
Faced with this kind of close and revealing speech, Juugo’s "sun vein" furrowed.
   
“Think carefully about your older cousin’s name. The one who fought against you in the 'Succession Ceremony,' betting Enraiha."
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“Think carefully about your older cousin’s name; the one who fought against you in the 'Succession Ceremony,' betting Enraiha, the representative sword of the Kannagi Clan ."
   
 
“'Older cousin...' Could it be the Kazuma who left the family four years ago? Could that even be labeled as a fight?”
 
“'Older cousin...' Could it be the Kazuma who left the family four years ago? Could that even be labeled as a fight?”
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“It could be like that,” Genma replied without any facial expression.
 
“It could be like that,” Genma replied without any facial expression.
   
“But, even though it is like that, we can’t easily kill him. If it was done by him, we need to use his life to pay for the crimes.”
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“But, even though it is like that, we cannot just kill him. If it was done by him, we need to use his life to pay for the crimes.”
   
 
“If...?”
 
“If...?”
   
Ayano turned to look at Genma. Genma accepted Ayano’s look without any change. The one who disinherited Kazuma and the one who provided the reason for his disinheritance crossed gazes.
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Ayano turned to look at Genma, searching for a clue as to what Genma was thinking. Genma accepted Ayano’s look without any change. The one who disinherited Kazuma and the one who provided the reason for his disinheritance crossed gazes.
   
 
The first to look away was Ayano. Without regards to strength as practitioners, her life’s experience was immensely surpassed. In reality, even with careful searching, she still lacked the confidence in her ability to win.
 
The first to look away was Ayano. Without regards to strength as practitioners, her life’s experience was immensely surpassed. In reality, even with careful searching, she still lacked the confidence in her ability to win.
   
After stopping the unsatisfied challenge/look, Ayano looked towards Juugo.
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Ayano stopped her meaningless gaze, and turned to look towards Juugo.
   
“Then, what will be done? Defeat him?"
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“So what do we do next? Eliminate him?
   
“Now, we haven’t decided whether it was done by Kazuma. And, anyways, we would like to meet with him and discuss this issue.”
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“I mean, we still cannot be certain whether Kazuma was the one who did it; but no matter, we should find him and talk with him first.”
   
Faced with his daughter’s simplistic and dangerous words, Genma deeply felt the danger.
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After seeing his daughter, who said such words so easily, Juugo sensed danger.
   
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Perhaps due to the mighty power that Enraiha bears, whenever Ayano is faced with a problem, she is inclined to use power to resolve it. Juugo has always hoped that she understands that she will be the next clan chief and therefore would need to be more flexible in her thinking.
Even though she had Enraiha’s overwhelming power, Ayano tended to resort to violence no matter what she did.
 
   
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There is no need for you to take action at this moment in time. Remain on stand-by until an order is given!”
Genma frequently hoped that she would have a less impulsive way of thinking, as she was the next suzerain.
 
   
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“…...I get it, fine…”
“Now is not time for you. Wait until there are other missions to be done.”
 
   
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Even though she did not seem pleased, Ayano still obeys her father’s words, and she quickly left the scene after bowing. Up until the paper door was closed, the attitude she portrayed by not even looking at Juugo showed just how unhappy she was.
“...Yes.”
 
   
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“……This stubborn child.”
Faced with a barely compliant daughter, Juugo said consolingly, “You have just finished a mission; you must be tired. Get a good rest tonight.”
 
   
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Juugo sighed as he muttered this. But despite his tone being so bitter, he was still unable to hide that overflowing love he has for her.
“...I understand.”
 
   
Even though it seemed to be unacceptable, Ayano still did what her father had said. After “bowing,” she rapidly left the room. Juugo didn’t blink until the door was closed, showing a deeply unhappy expression concerning his daughter.
 
 
“...This stubborn daughter.”
 
 
Juugo seemingly says “not acceptable,” and sighs deeply. Even though he used this kind of strict manner of speech, no matter what, the care and love for his daughter was hard to hide.
 
<!-- Is there something missing here?-->
 
 
These two people have said the saying many times. To put it correctly, Shingo, due to his younger brother’s death, has a burning fire revenge. Takeya, no matter how many times you tell him to pay attention to his orders he will still forget them, said he was nagging. <!-- Who is saying what to whom --><!-- I don't get this last part. -->
 
 
They were waiting for the report, and then immediately to go where Kazuma was. <!-- Something is missing here -->
 
   
 
=== 2 ===
 
=== 2 ===
For the Kannagi Clan’s information network, finding where Kazuma was staying was simple.
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It was easy for the information network of the Kannagi clan to find out where Kazuma was.
 
 
Finding him the next morning did not really require any special methods because he used his own name to register at the hotel.
 
Finding him the next morning did not really require any special methods because he used his own name to register at the hotel.
   
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Yuuki Shingo and Oogami Takeya were the strongest practitioners of the branch families. Even though they had opposing personalities, they were great friends. This combination, outside the main family, could be said to be without equal.
 
Yuuki Shingo and Oogami Takeya were the strongest practitioners of the branch families. Even though they had opposing personalities, they were great friends. This combination, outside the main family, could be said to be without equal.
   
From Genma’s point of view, he had thrown in the two strongest cards at hand. However, the selection of the oldest son of the Yuuki family could be said to be a deadly mistake. Why? Because this man had absolutely no desire to convince Kazuma.
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From Genma’s point of view, he had thrown in the two strongest cards at hand; however, the selection of the oldest son of the Yuuki family might have been a deadly mistake. Why? That is because this man had absolutely no desire to convince Kazuma.
   
 
“Kazuma, you bastard, I will cut you into [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Ten Thousand Pieces|ten thousand pieces]].”
 
“Kazuma, you bastard, I will cut you into [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Ten Thousand Pieces|ten thousand pieces]].”
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“If he is dead, it will be problematic. At least leave him with the ability to talk when we take him back.”
 
“If he is dead, it will be problematic. At least leave him with the ability to talk when we take him back.”
   
As they waited for the upcoming report, they headed directly in Kazuma’s direction. Of course, they had absolutely no desire to persuade him. Although they didn’t have this kind of desire, they never expected that they would be the ones assaulted.
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As they waited for the upcoming report, they headed directly in Kazuma’s direction. Of course, they had absolutely no desire to persuade him; however, they never expected that they would be the ones assaulted.
   
“Still not ready yet?”
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“Is the report ready yet?”
   
 
“It’s going to be ready soon.”
 
“It’s going to be ready soon.”
   
This kind of discussion couldn't satisfy them at all. They didn't know how many times they had repeatedly asked. Given that the two of them were still waiting to receive the same report, they should have known it didn't matter how they asked…
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This kind of discussion couldn't satisfy them at all. They didn't know how many times they had repeatedly asked. Given that the two of them were still waiting to receive the same report, they should have known it didn't matter how much they asked…
   
“What the hell are they doing, that useless Fuuga clan! It’s only that one person Kazuma, can’t they easily bring him over!”
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“What the hell are they doing, that useless Fuuga clan! It’s only that one person, Kazuma, can’t they easily bring him over!”
   
 
Shingo reprimanded angrily as, in reality, they turned the arrowhead towards the Fuuga clan.
 
Shingo reprimanded angrily as, in reality, they turned the arrowhead towards the Fuuga clan.
   
 
“This is worrying; the Fuuga clan might even be connected to this situation.”
 
“This is worrying; the Fuuga clan might even be connected to this situation.”
Takeya forcefully said some pretty words to sway Shingo; that the Fuuga shielding him wasn't impossible, using words to attack them, in order to change the attention of Shingo which was certainly welcomed.
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Takeya forcefully said some pretty words to sway Shingo. A situation in which the Fuuga shielding him wasn't impossible, insulting them, in order to change the attention of Shingo from Takeya was certainly welcomed.
   
 
Thinking shortly, Shingo gritted his teeth angrily and said:
 
Thinking shortly, Shingo gritted his teeth angrily and said:
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“That’s right, hahaahahahahahaaaaa…”
 
“That’s right, hahaahahahahahaaaaa…”
   
Just as Takeya had wished, Shingo had completely forgotten about the issue of the reprimand. Hearing this sudden liberated laughter, Takeya had a thought — — not unlike what was heard 10 seconds ago “Still not ready yet?” Similarly, he feels very slow and lengthy.
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Just as Takeya had wished, Shingo had completely forgotten about the issue of the reprimand. Hearing this sudden liberated laughter, Takeya had a thought — — not unlike that which he heard 10 seconds ago “Still not ready yet?” Similarly, he felt it to be very slow and lengthy.
   
 
“Incoming, in the area right ahead, about 500 meters, looks like he hasn’t noticed.”
 
“Incoming, in the area right ahead, about 500 meters, looks like he hasn’t noticed.”
   
Suddenly, amidst the conversation between the two a voice appears. This is a jutsu used by Fuuga clan called “Method of Summoning/Calling Spirits” used for sending their voice.
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Suddenly, amidst the conversation between the two, a voice appeared. This is a jutsu used by the Fuuga clan called “Method of Summoning/Calling Spirits”, which is used for sending their voice.
 
This allows the wind to carry the voice even over large distances.
 
This allows the wind to carry the voice even over large distances.
   
“He’s coming, I won’t leave him any limbs, arms or legs, burn it all! Let’s attack!”
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“He’s coming! I won’t leave him any limbs, arms or legs, burn it all! Let’s attack!”
   
This was not voiced for anyone to hear, only Shingo’s mumblings to himself. It could be seen from his hatred-filled eyes; his passion certainly could be really problematic.
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This was not voiced for anyone to hear, only Shingo’s mumblings to himself. It could be seen from his hatred-filled eyes that his passion certainly could be really problematic.
   
 
[[image:Kaze no Stigma vol 01 051.jpg|thumb]]
 
[[image:Kaze no Stigma vol 01 051.jpg|thumb]]
   
Even though they didn’t continue their discussion of how to punish him, he hoped Kazuma would at least put up some resistance, until he was half-dead. Then they could slowly torture him, as well as what was mentioned before, that and much more.
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Shingo rattled on explaining how he would execute Kazuma. Shingo hoped Kazuma would at least put up some resistance before he was half-dead, then they could slowly torture him to the brink of death. Shingo would make sure Kazuma would suffer the most pain and suffering possible.
   
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Takeya pulled a small distance away from Shingo after seeing how was. In his heart he was thinking, “So this guy is this dangerous.” And so, the distance between their hearts grew larger.
Takeya slightly separated himself and quickly glanced, being with someone this dangerous, his thoughts from inner self a certain divide. <!-- Note: Unsure of this sentence! please check it for me -->
 
   
Just like that a divide in the friendship, appears Kazuma.
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Just when a rift between their friendship was about to form, Kazuma appeared
   
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Facing the defenseless, seemingly casual Kazuma ---- To them that is how it seemed ------Takeya greeted him in an arrogant manner.
Facing them without alertness, Kazuma walks along completely nonchalant——at least as viewed from their perspective——.In order to alert him, Takeya shouts.
 
   
 
“Long time no see, Kazuma!”
 
“Long time no see, Kazuma!”
   
“Ah, the successor from the Oogami?”
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“….Oh, it is the successor of the Oogami family?”
 
In such an instance, connecting your memories with the present requires time. However, Takeya was waiting for that instance.
 
 
It’s this kind of prideful self-elevation that results in lagging concentration.
 
   
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A moment of pause; it was needed for Kazuma to recollect his memories. But, Takeya took it as a display of shock as if Kazuma just realized he was being ambushed. This uprising arrogant mentality gradually weakened Takeya’s concentration.
“Know why we are looking for you?”
 
   
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“Do you know why we are here?”
Takeya pressures Shingo, with his blood-filled eyes ready to release fireballs, using a condescending method of speech.
 
   
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Takeya used a tone filled with superiority to say. At the same moment, Takeya calmed Shingo, whose eyes are blood-shot and whose heart is filled with the desire to release his flames.
“Nope, I completely don’t know.”
 
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“No idea.”
   
Kazuma’s reply could only be described as “couldn’t be more direct, but it also carried some amount of defiance. Also by scrunching his head and neck and making certain exaggerating and sarcastic actions, then shaking his head in denial, as expected he was pissing Takeya off enough for his veins to be showing.
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Kazuma’s reply could not be any more honest, but at the same time it was not entirely without any sense of a taunt mixed in. He used a joking action to exaggeratedly shrug his shoulders, and then shook his head. As expected, he managed to piss Takeya off enough for his veins to show.
Takeya succeeded in controlling his anger, and after recovering his cool begins to explain.
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Takeya; however, succeeded in controlling his anger, and after recovering his cool, began to explain.
   
“Yesterday night, Kannagi clan had three practitioners killed."
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“Yesterday night, the Kannagi clan had three practitioners killed."
   
 
“Uhmm... and?"
 
“Uhmm... and?"
   
And like the one with all the authority Kazuma asked demandingly.
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Kazuma asked demandingly, acting with supreme authority.
   
“The one that killed was a fuujutsu practitioner."
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“The person who killed them was a fuujutsu practitioner."
   
 
“……………………..”
 
“……………………..”
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“……………………..”
 
“……………………..”
   
The surroundings were covered by silence. A warm wind blew through the dusk “Tree-Shadow” Road <!-- A name of a road, I think need correction --> , the red leaves lightly began to dance, being shined upon by a crimson sun, the red leaves were dyed even a darker shade of red, this was the beauty that appears before the darkness controlls world.
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The surroundings were covered in silence. A warm wind blew in through the dusk on the “Tree-Shadow” Road <!-- A name of a road, I think need correction --> , the red leaves lightly began to dance, being shined upon by a crimson sun, the red leaves were dyed even a darker shade of red, this was the beauty that appears before the darkness controls world.
   
 
“……………..”
 
“……………..”
   
The first to open his mouth was Kazuma; compared to silence, it seems like he detests even more being stared at by men.
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The first to open his mouth was Kazuma; compared to silence, it seems like he detested the stillness even more than being stared at by two men.
   
 
“So what is the matter?”
 
“So what is the matter?”
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“It wasn’t me! Are you finished?”
 
“It wasn’t me! Are you finished?”
   
The instant after saying such words, and as he was thinking of leaving, Kazuma suddenly bounced horizontally, an instant before the space where Kazuma had existed, without touching anything, became a fireball.
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Immediately after saying such words, and as he was thinking of leaving, Kazuma suddenly bounced horizontally, an instant before the space where Kazuma had existed, without touching anything, became a fireball.
   
Kazuma looks towards Shingo, consequently Shingo, using a deep tone like a natural born deep voiced singer shouts.
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Kazuma looked towards Shingo, consequently Shingo, using a tone like a natural born deep voiced singer shouted.
   
“Hmhmhm, what’s the matter, you finally did it? Then, there is no other way besides using force to subdue you!”
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“Hmhmhm, what’s the matter, you finally do it? Then, there is no other way besides using force to subdue you!”
   
At the same time as the shout, surrounding Shingo “tongues of crimson” begin to burn and dance.
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At the same time as the shout, surrounding Shingo there were “tongues of crimson” which began to burn and dance.
Even though the flames that appeared at the same time as the yell were connected to Shingo’s body, his clothes were not burnt. Shingo was exhibiting an unexpected level of precision.
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Even though the flames that appeared at the same time as the yell were attached to Shingo’s body, his clothes were not burnt. Shingo was exhibiting an unexpected level of precision.
   
Like the flames that continue to move on his body, Shingo was so happy that his lips were slanted, and said like a proclamation.
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As the flames continued to move on his body, Shingo was so happy that his lips were slanted, and said with a proclamation.
   
“If you refuse to speak about it then you are very suspicious, I'll burn off your arms and legs! Lessening the weight will make you easier to transport! I won’t kill you now, yet can you continue to live in such a humiliating condition? After the suzerain finishes his questioning, I’ll be mercyfull and kill you! Within one week! You can use that time to fully regret your life. I want you to know, after killing Shinji I absolutely cannot allow you to continue living untroubled!”
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“If you refuse to speak about it, then you are very suspicious. I’ll burn off your arms and legs! Lessening the weight will make you easier to transport! I won’t kill you now, yet can you continue to live in such a humiliating condition? After the suzerain finishes his questioning, I’ll be merciful, and kill you within one week! You can use that time to fully regret your life. I want you to know, that after killing Shinji I absolutely cannot allow you to continue living untroubled!”
   
Assuming tha the future will be like Shingo’s claims. Nevertheless, Kazuma was still faced the crazily laughing Shingo, looking as if he was watching some kind of rare animal. He then asked very seriously.
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Assuming that the future will be as Shingo’s claims; nevertheless, Kazuma was still faced with the crazily laughing Shingo, looking as if he was watching some kind of rare animal. He then asked very seriously.
   
 
“So the Kannagi clan still feeds this kind of thing?”
 
“So the Kannagi clan still feeds this kind of thing?”
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“—No, Ahh….hu….”
 
“—No, Ahh….hu….”
   
Takeya really had no reply. Considering himself to be normal, he did want to recognize that the thing with him as of the same kind.
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Takeya really had no reply. Considering himself to be normal; Takeya did not want to be recognized with the thing next to him as if they were the same kind.
   
“That person always adored Shinji, now he hates you for killing Shinji, it is quite within reason.”
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“Shingo always adored Shinji, now he hates you for killing Shinji, he is quite within reason.”
   
 
“That’s why I said it wasn’t me.”
 
“That’s why I said it wasn’t me.”
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“Then please go and clarify everything with the suzerain.”
 
“Then please go and clarify everything with the suzerain.”
   
“I am no longer part of the Kannagi clan; if he has business with me, tell him to come look for me himself. Please pass it to him like that.”
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“I am no longer part of the Kannagi clan; if the suzerain has business with me, tell him to come and look for me himself. Please pass it to him like that.”
   
 
“It seems … The negotiations have broken down then.”
 
“It seems … The negotiations have broken down then.”
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In order to make good on his words, Takeya raised his “ki”. He then directed the surrounding dancing fire spirits to dance with his self-conscious.
 
In order to make good on his words, Takeya raised his “ki”. He then directed the surrounding dancing fire spirits to dance with his self-conscious.
   
The surrounding temperature was raised enough to be felt on the skin. Even though the fire spirits had yet to materialize, the surrounding area had clearly changed in physics.
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The surrounding temperature was raised enough to be felt on the skin. Even though the fire spirits had yet to materialize, the surrounding area had clearly changed in physics.
   
Seeming to be frightened in the face of such elevated fighting spirit, scores of red leaves continually fluttered down, the bright red leaves instantly changeing to ashes and floating away before touching Takeya’s body.
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Seeming to be frightened in the face of such elevated fighting spirit, scores of red leaves continued to flutter down, the bright red leaves instantly changed into ash and floated away before touching Takeya’s body.
   
A subdued Kazuma, like before, stood there with his hands in the leather jacket watching the two of them. It seemed like he had no desire to confront the Kannagi clan; of course, it was hard to tell from that kind of pose.
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A subdued Kazuma, like before, stood there with his hands in his leather jacket, watching the two of them. It seemed like he had no desire to confront the Kannagi clan; of course, it was hard to tell from that kind of pose.
   
 
“This is your last opportunity; yield humbly to us, Kazuma.”
 
“This is your last opportunity; yield humbly to us, Kazuma.”
   
Faced with Takeya last ultimatum, Kazuma raises his middle finger and says.
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Faced with Takeya last ultimatum, Kazuma raises his middle finger and said.
   
 
“Take a good look at yourselves before coming.”
 
“Take a good look at yourselves before coming.”
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“You idiot!”
 
“You idiot!”
   
For an instant, starting their jutsu, the two believed that victory would be definite. Because, of the clan, two of the strongest were attacking at the same time. No matter what kind of strategy Kazuma had, facing those kinds of massive powers would be hopeless.
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At that instant, starting their jutsu, the two believed that victory would be definite. Because of the clan, two of the strongest practitioners were attacking at the same time. No matter what kind of strategy Kazuma had, facing those kinds of massive powers would be hopeless.
   
 
But——
 
But——
   
Poou! <!-- SFX help -->
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Boom! <!-- SFX help -->
   
The fireball in Takeya’s hand, suddenly explodes. Above the sound, he is incredulous that the fireball had such a big categorical runaway explosion.
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The fireball in Takeya’s hand suddenly explodes. Above the sound, he is incredulous that the fireball had such a big categorical runaway explosion.
   
The fireball that left Takeya’s control, was like a wild animal with its tooth pulled. Even with the protection of the fire spirit, it was still impossible to shield the crash of the explosion’s force.
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The fireball that left Takeya’s control was like a wild animal with its tooth pulled. Even with the protection of the fire spirit, it was still impossible to shield the crash of the explosion’s force.
 
Instantly the force of the explosion struck his entire body and Takeya was simply KO-ed.
 
Instantly the force of the explosion struck his entire body and Takeya was simply KO-ed.
   
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As Kazuma returned his hands back to the pockets of his leather jacket, he lowered his head to the two people before him. After flashing a condescending grin, he walked right by the two unconscious persons' sides.
 
As Kazuma returned his hands back to the pockets of his leather jacket, he lowered his head to the two people before him. After flashing a condescending grin, he walked right by the two unconscious persons' sides.
   
Although he seemed like he wanted to leave immediately Kazuma stopped. Then, as if feeling something, he looked towards the trees where there was no one.
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Although he seemed like he wanted to leave immediately, Kazuma stopped. Then, as if feeling something, he looked towards the trees where there was no one.
   
 
“If you want to pick a fight with me, I won’t be merciful.”
 
“If you want to pick a fight with me, I won’t be merciful.”
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At the same time of this warning, one of the trees split. Without any noise from the chopped tree following the break, the guarding practitioner slowly slid down.
 
At the same time of this warning, one of the trees split. Without any noise from the chopped tree following the break, the guarding practitioner slowly slid down.
   
Already forgetting to hide himself, the fujutsu user stood dumbly staring at Kazuma. As Kazuma turned to leave, the guarding practitioner was fearful. *The one that was lured was him? The prey we were hunting is this frightening thing——?*
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Already forgetting to hide himself, the fujutsu user stood while dumbly staring at Kazuma. As Kazuma turned to leave, the guarding practitioner was fearful. “The one we lured was him? The prey we were hunting is this frightening thing——?*
   
   
 
=== 3 ===
 
=== 3 ===
“Seriously, Father worries too much. I alone am enough. I don’t know how many times I have repeated this. When will he acknowledge me? Am I this untrustworthy?”
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“Seriously, Father worries too much. I alone am enough. I don’t know how many times I have repeated this. When will he acknowledge me? Am I this untrustworthy?”
   
 
“The suzerain acknowledges the young mistress' abilities, but as a father he simply worries about his daughter.”
 
“The suzerain acknowledges the young mistress' abilities, but as a father he simply worries about his daughter.”
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Confronted with the disgruntled Ayano, the man in his forties cajoled.
 
Confronted with the disgruntled Ayano, the man in his forties cajoled.
   
At this time, Ayano was ordered to a certain temple in the city of Yokohama Yamate, to strengthen the weakening seal inside. The day before the accident, she had encountered the employer of Kazuma —— of course, his single mindedness in heading to a location to vanquish the spirits, without understanding the reason. '''! <!-- Need help here, don’t quite understand meeting Kazuma’s employer? -->'''
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At this time, Ayano was ordered to a certain temple in the city of Yokohama Yamate in order to strengthen the weakening seal inside. Coincidentally, this place was very close where Kazuma extorted every cent from his employer----To put it simply, this is where he exorcised only a few days ago; however, Ayano knows nothing about it.
   
Upon arriving at the location and discovering that the seal had deteriorated to a point beyond the previously assumed limits, Ayano immediately discarded the idea of the resealing, and instead decided to eliminate it. Then, without any testing, she immediately ripped off the seal.
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Upon arriving at the location and discovering that the seal had deteriorated to a point beyond the previously assumed limits, Ayano immediately discarded the idea of the resealing it, and instead decided to eliminate the seal. Then, without any testing, she immediately ripped off the seal.
   
 
A popular saying of hers was, “This method is faster.” <!-- Not too sure about this saying -->
 
A popular saying of hers was, “This method is faster.” <!-- Not too sure about this saying -->
   
People without significant confidence in their own abilities would not say something like that, however the two men that accompanied her knew that she had the necessary ability to go along with such self-confidence.
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People without significant confidence in their own abilities would not say something like that; however, the two men that accompanied her knew that she had the necessary ability to go along with such self-confidence.
   
 
Certainly, Juugo also knew that she had this kind of ability, but such worries of a father are within reason. Even if she described Juugo as stupid or foolish, most of time he sent two or more people to protect her.
 
Certainly, Juugo also knew that she had this kind of ability, but such worries of a father are within reason. Even if she described Juugo as stupid or foolish, most of time he sent two or more people to protect her.
   
“'Don’t mix work with your private life,' is frequently lectured to me no matter what. 'Don’t follow your own desires and do things,' Uncle Masato?” <!-- frequently lectured to me (Ayano) -->
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“'Don’t mix work with your private life, is frequently lectured to me no matter what. ‘Don’t follow your own desires to do things,' isn’t that right Uncle Masato?” <!-- frequently lectured to me (Ayano) -->
   
Still discharging her annoyances, Ayano faced that man, the younger brother of the head of the Yuuki family, complaining to Masato.
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Still discharging her annoyances, Ayano faced that man, the younger brother of the head of the Yuuki family, Masato.
 
“Because he is the suzerain, he cannot mull over such minor issues.”
 
“Because he is the suzerain, he cannot mull over such minor issues.”
In this manner a smile and laughter appeared on Masato’s thin face. As a member of one of the branch families, he certainly wasn’t thinking about the consequences. But, it seemed like Ayano hadn’t really noticed or cared.
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In this manner, a smile and laughter appeared on Masato’s thin face. As a member of one of the branch families, he certainly was not thinking about the consequence, but it seemed like Ayano hadn’t really noticed or cared.
   
This man, Oogami Masato, although possessing a strength greater than his older brother, disliked scheming for the position of family head and so went off to Tibet to train like a eccentric person.
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This man, Oogami Masato, although possessing strength greater than his older brother, disliked scheming for the position of family head and so went off to Tibet to train like an eccentric person.
   
When he returned to Japan he was given the “Protect Ayano” mission. Juugo had a high regard of him, and from the first time Ayano went on a mission he was continually responsible for this job of protection.
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When he returned to Japan, he was given the “Protect Ayano” mission. Juugo had a high regard of him, and from the first time Ayano went on a mission, he was continually responsible for this job of protection.
   
Certainly, Ayano also had good feelings about this easy-going relative. Due to the surrounding people’s princess like treatment of her, Masato’s causal kind of attitude was quite refreshing for her and feelt very good.
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Certainly, Ayano also had good feelings about this easy-going relative. Due to everyone else’s princess like treatment of her, Masato’s causal kind of attitude was quite refreshing for her and felt very good.
   
Consequently, “Uncle Masato, ojo-sama," this kind of terminology was like a real family without any separation.
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Concenquently, “Uncle Masato, ojo-sama," this kind of terminology used between the two was like a real family without any separation.
   
“Maybe if it is to allow the younger practitioner to learn, this kind of reasoning is still possible. Isn’t that so, Takeshi… Takeshi?”
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“Maybe if it is to allow the younger practitioner here to learn, this kind of reasoning is still possible. Isn’t that so, Takeshi… Takeshi?”
   
 
“Ahh, Yes!?”
 
“Ahh, Yes!?”
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The young practitioner was using admiring eyes to stare at Ayano. Oogami Takeshi’s uncle had to holler many times before he finally paid attention.
 
The young practitioner was using admiring eyes to stare at Ayano. Oogami Takeshi’s uncle had to holler many times before he finally paid attention.
   
“Did you not hear… Stopping staring stupidly at Ojo-sama, be prepared. It is not known when the seal will be released.”
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“Did you not hear… Stop staring stupidly at Ojo-sama, be prepared. It is not known when the seal will be released.”
 
“Yes, I understand! Just as Uncle has said! To be allowed to watch Ayano-sama's striking fighting method is really a great honor!”
 
“Yes, I understand! Just as Uncle has said! To be allowed to watch Ayano-sama's striking fighting method is really a great honor!”
   
In order to not screw-up in front of Ayano, Takeshi uselessly shouts in a loud voice. In that stare at Ayano appeared, compared to respect, more admiration and reverence. For Takeshi’s generation of practitioners, Ayano had the status of a goddess. Hoping to watch her striking manner from close by while guarding her is something anyone would accept.
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In order to not screw-up in front of Ayano, Takeshi uselessly shouted in a loud voice. He stared at Ayano as she appeared with admiration and reverence compare to respect. For Takeshi’s generation of practitioners, Ayano had the status of a goddess. Hoping to watch her striking manner from close by while guarding her is something anyone would accept.
   
 
“Yes——It’s——like——this?”
 
“Yes——It’s——like——this?”
 
“Yes, it’s like that!”
 
“Yes, it’s like that!”
   
The exhilaration to be able to talk to Ayano is something that can be seen through Takeshi’s entire body language. Of course, Ayano doesn’t like being viewed like that. It seems like she is being separated from “normal”, changed into something she doesn't want.
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The exhilaration of being able to talk to Ayano is something can be seen through Takeshi’s entire body language. Of course, Ayano does not like being viewed like that. It seems like she is being separated from “normal” and changed into something she doesn't want.
   
No matter what, no matter how much it is explained it is useless. That is Takeshi’s only simple means of showing deference to a much stronger and more beautiful existence.
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No matter what, no matter how much it is explained that it is useless, it is Takeshi’s only simple means of showing deference to a much stronger and more beautiful existence.
   
 
“Ah, forget it. … It’s about time.”
 
“Ah, forget it. … It’s about time.”
   
Ayano sensing the expanding ki of the youma, relaxedly turned herself towards the main hall. Her mini-skirt started to flutter and dance.
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Ayano sensing the expanding ki of the youma, relaxed and turned herself towards the main hall. Her mini-skirt started to flutter and dance.
   
Now why would Ayano be wearing her high school uniform?
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Now why Ayano would be wearing her high school uniform?
   
 
This is not only to allow her to normally attend a high school.
 
This is not only to allow her to normally attend a high school.
   
Because, if you think about it, the best suited outfit for a high school student is their uniform. So Juugo, focused upon this point, added ,within the range of his abilities, the best class of defensive spells to it.
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Because, if you think about it, the best suited outfit for a high school student is their uniform. So Juugo focused upon this point and added, within the range of his abilities, the best class of defensive spells to it.
   
 
The material, in order to allow better transpiration, was the best type of silk, that is, during the process of fabrication air is mixed in. Furthermore, everything is made from expensive materials.
 
The material, in order to allow better transpiration, was the best type of silk, that is, during the process of fabrication air is mixed in. Furthermore, everything is made from expensive materials.
   
As a result, by inputting great amounts of money and time, a high school uniform; it would not wrong be to call it a work of art. Its cost is comparable. It could be said that it is enough to buy a car, no, not really, correctly it can be said that it could buy a luxury house without being wrong.
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As a result, by inputting great amounts of money and time, a high school uniform; it would not wrong be to call it a work of art. Its cost is comparable. It could be said that the cost is enough to buy a car, no, not really, correctly it can be said that it could buy a luxury house without being wrong.
   
Of course Ayano payed attention to this outfit, not towards its capabilities, but because it was a gift given by her father, so she frequently wore this outfit in combat.
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Of course, Ayano paid attention to wearing this outfit, but not because of its capabilities, but because it was a gift given to her by her father, so she frequently wore this outfit in combat.
   
Wearing this outfit which could be said to be the world’s most expensive combat outfit, Ayano watched as the seal was about to be broken, took a deep breath, then began moving and warming-up her own inner strength.
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Wearing this outfit which could be said to be the world’s most expensive combat outfit, Ayano watched as the seal was about to be broken. She took a deep breath and then began moving and warming-up her own inner strength.
   
 
Pah!
 
Pah!
   
The clear sound of clapping started to vibrate within the space. When the two closed palms were opened, in between the two appeared a flaming line. Ayano then grasped it with her right hand, making a horizontal outwards swinging motion.
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A clear sound of clapping started to vibrate within the space. When the two closed palms were opened, in between the two appeared a flaming line. Ayano then grasped it with her right hand, making a horizontal outwards swinging motion.
   
 
The burning line, around 1 meter long, at that instant materialized into a crimson sword.
 
The burning line, around 1 meter long, at that instant materialized into a crimson sword.
   
There was no blunt side to the bright crimson sword, it having two edges. The blade of the sword was surrounded by a golden flame, releasing vivid beautifull light. Just like that, as beautiful as one could imagine. <!-- Not too sure about crimson red, just some form of red. -->
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There was no blunt side to the bright crimson sword, it had two edges. The blade of the sword was surrounded by a golden flame, releasing vivid beautiful light. Just like that, it was as beautiful as one could imagine. <!-- Not too sure about crimson red, just some form of red. -->
   
That sword was the Kannagi Clan’s supreme treasure, Enraiha. It was rewarded to the Kannagi Clan founder by the King of the Flame Spirits, and was passed down defeating devils/evil of treasured sword. '''!<!-- Not too sure if [huh] is a person or a typo. -->'''
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That sword was the Kannagi Clan’s supreme treasure, Enraiha. It was rewarded to the Kannagi Clan’s founder by the King of the Flame Spirits, and it was passed down defeating devils/evil as a treasured sword. '''!<!-- Not too sure if [huh] is a person or a typo. -->'''
   
Ayano lifted Enraiha upwards, then added her left hand to grasp the sword and make a downward stroke. Along the path of the stroke, spreading golden pieces of the flame appeared. Then instantly and prettily she stopped the sword before her eyes. No matter if it is done ten-thousand times or hundred thousand times, it was a beautiful motion that could always be forgiven.
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Ayano lifted Enraiha upwards, then added her left hand to grasp the sword and made a downward stroke. Along the path of the stroke, golden pieces of the flame started spreading. Then instantly while beautifully, she stopped the sword before her eyes. No matter if it was done ten-thousand times or hundred thousand times, it was a beautiful motion that could always be forgiven.
   
The vase of the shrine had already approached its limits and, with a “pong” sound, bursted open. Even faster than the falling pieces, a white light shot towards Ayano.
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The vase of the shrine had already approached its limits and, with a “pong” sound, burst open. Even faster than the falling pieces, a white light shot towards Ayano.
   
Ayano, from the front, made a downward stroke with Enraiha and went forward to attack. To attack that white object that had produced the sound “like the sound produced when the water is evaporated in a flat frying pan”.
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Ayano, from the front, made a downward stroke with Enraiha, attacking that thing head-on. After contact, the white substance gave off a sound like sprinkling water on a burning hot pot, vaporizing.
   
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“Ugh, it’s sticky”
“Sticky stuff…!?” <!-- Sticky stuff, please put right word in. -->
 
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Ayano mumbled after seeing that thing that dispersed in all directions, connected by thin threads.
Ayano said mumbling, faced with the string that had smashed into her.
 
 
Then she changed her vision to the inside of the main hall, seeing a few points of something like lights. That thing slowly moved forward and revealed its own appearance.
 
Then she changed her vision to the inside of the main hall, seeing a few points of something like lights. That thing slowly moved forward and revealed its own appearance.
   
 
“Wah…”
 
“Wah…”
   
Ayano let out, inadvertently surprised; that thing that had appeared was ——
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Ayano, inadvertently surprised, let out a gasp; that thing that had appeared was ——
   
Having multiple eyes, beyond eight feet, the entire body covered with dirty yet rigid fur, it was a segmented animal producing sounds like “kulah, kulah” as its legs moved. Upon seeing its full appearance anyone would feel shivers not due to cold. It really is was a horrify spider freak.
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Having multiple eyes, beyond eight feet, the entire body covered with dirty yet rigid fur, it was a segmented animal producing sounds like “kulah, kulah” as its legs moved. Upon seeing its full appearance anyone would feel shivers not due to cold. It really was a horrify spider freak.
   
 
“Earth Spider huh... Need help?”
 
“Earth Spider huh... Need help?”
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“Not necessary”
 
“Not necessary”
   
Ayano immediately replied. Even though it produced a very disgusting feeling it was not the time for complaints. It seemed like she was more afraid of disappointing her otou-san, compared to that fighting against spiders or cockroaches was nothing in comparison.
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Ayano immediately replied. Even though it produced a very disgusting feeling it was not the time for complaints. It seemed like she was more afraid of disappointing her otou-san; fighting against spiders or cockroaches was nothing in comparison.
   
 
(Come here…)
 
(Come here…)
   
Summoning fire spirits does not require chants and such. As if following Ayano’s thinking, fire spirits assembled themselves, flying into Enraiha. Along the sword's blade the light of the flame became even brighter.
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Summoning fire spirits does not require chants and such. As if following Ayano’s thinking, fire spirits assembled themselves, flying into Enraiha. Along the sword's blade, the light of the flame became even brighter.
   
 
Within the range reached by her awareness, Ayano continuously summoned spirits. Juugo didn't know how many times he had instructed her, "Don’t be like other practitioners, the spirits are not commanded, you can’t be too arrogant."
 
Within the range reached by her awareness, Ayano continuously summoned spirits. Juugo didn't know how many times he had instructed her, "Don’t be like other practitioners, the spirits are not commanded, you can’t be too arrogant."
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“They and we have same level of existence.” <!-- Not completely sure -->
 
“They and we have same level of existence.” <!-- Not completely sure -->
   
This saying was frequently repeated by Juugo; spirits are the means to safeguard the existence of the world’s order. Because the Kannagi Clan has a contract with the spirit king the spirits are only helpers.
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This saying was frequently repeated by Juugo; spirits are the means to safeguard the existence of the world’s order. Because the Kannagi Clan has a contract with the spirit king, the spirits are only helpers.
   
Of course Ayano also understood, her own strength was borrowed. Only to seal or vanquish the inconsistencies in the world’s order was the power gifted, and only for a short period of time.
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Of course, Ayano also understood that her own strength was borrowed. Only to seal or vanquish the inconsistencies in the world’s order was the reason the power was gifted, and only for a short period of time.
   
That is why it isn’t ordering them. Because knowing such matters is not necessary. If the correct way of thinking is known the fire spirits will certainly answer.
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That is why she was not ordering them, because doing such matters is not necessary. If the correct way of thinking is known, the fire spirits will certainly answer.
   
Like having respect for the world, it’s not in order to obtain huge power or be arrogant. Ayano, no matter what, always calls out to them like this: “Please, lend me your strength….”
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Having respect for the world, it’s not in order to obtain huge power or to be arrogant. Ayano, no matter what, always calls out to them like this: “Please, lend me your strength….”
   
 
“V… Very formidable….”
 
“V… Very formidable….”
   
Takeshi watched dumbfounded, as the enormous number of spirits gathered on Ayano’s body, the amount of spirits he could manage was only one small portion of this in comparison. For him it was the first time seeing the main family’s power, like the difference is between the sky and the ground.
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Takeshi watched dumbfounded as the enormous number of spirits gathered on Ayano’s body, the amount of spirits he could manage was only one small portion of this in comparison. For him, it was the first time seeing the main family’s power, the difference of which is like the difference between sky and the ground.
   
 
“Ah, formidable, right!?”
 
“Ah, formidable, right!?”
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His uncle’s reply already forgotten, Takeshi once again looked at Ayano.
 
His uncle’s reply already forgotten, Takeshi once again looked at Ayano.
   
Ayano holding the Enraiha, continued to confront the earth spider.
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Ayano, holding the Enraiha, continued to confront the earth spider.
   
 
(What should I do… looks like I can’t get close…)
 
(What should I do… looks like I can’t get close…)
   
Even though enough spirits were already summoned to destroy the earth spider, given the long distance she really didn’t have the confidence. Even though Enraiha is an ancient sword for summoning, to use the sword it is necessary to employ it to its fullest potential.
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Even though enough spirits were already summoned to destroy the earth spider, given the long distance, she really didn’t have the confidence. Even though Enraiha is an ancient sword for summoning, in order to use the sword it is necessary to employ it to its fullest potential.
   
In other words; get close, from a close distance puncture or split the earth spider, then from inside its body burn it completely.
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In other words; get close, and from a close distance puncture or split the earth spider, then from inside, burn its body completely.
   
(Of course if that was done, more adhesive matter would certainly fly out from the cut’s aperture… after the explosion fragments would all fly from the body… if it’s female, after opening its skin, hundreds of spiders might come out… No———!)
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(Of course if that was done, more adhesive matter would certainly fly out from the cut’s aperture… after the explosion fragments would all fly from the body… and if it’s female, after opening its skin, hundreds of spiders might come out… No———!)
   
Just thinking about it made her hair stand on end, inside Ayano started complaining bitterly. If Takeshi could have read Ayano’s inner thoughts then, maybe the thoughts of reverence could have been corrected, it can be said. <!-- Basically bitter – poor me, not quite complaining bitterly. -->
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Just thinking about it made her hair stand on end; inside, Ayano started complaining bitterly. If Takeshi could have read Ayano’s inner thoughts then, maybe the thoughts of reverence could have been corrected. <!-- Basically bitter – poor me, not quite complaining bitterly. -->
   
The earth spider seemed to seize the currently mulling Ayano’s openings; “palapala” using it's long legs it changed it's body to start moving forward.
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The earth spider seemed to seize the currently mulling Ayano’s opening; “palapala” using its long legs it changed its body and started moving forward.
   
 
“You want to escape!?”
 
“You want to escape!?”
   
Suddenly, toward the chasing Ayano, white silk spat out from the tail, but at the same time Ayano pulled up Enraiha to face it.
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Suddenly, towards the chasing Ayano, white silk spat out from the tail, but at the same time Ayano pulled up Enraiha to face it.
   
From Enraiha emerged a golden flame that burned the spider’s web, but because of the blockage by the silk Ayano still could not get close to the earth spider.
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From Enraiha emerged a golden flame that burned the spider’s web, but because of the blockage by the silk, Ayano still could not get close to the earth spider.
   
Then Ayano only could stop and focus her mind. She took a deep breath, tuning her ki and calmed down.
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Then Ayano could only stop and focus her mind. She took a deep breath, tuning her ki and calmed down.
   
(This kind of thing can’t do any real kind of obstruction, just kill it in couple seconds.)
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(This kind of thing can’t do any real kind of obstruction; just kill it in couple seconds.)
   
Bringing up the Enraiha, she performed a downwards swing with her full strength. Golden Flame, the highest level of fire of purification, not only completely burned the earth spider’s web, but closed in directly on the earth spider itself.
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Bringing up Enraiha, she performed a downward swing with her full strength. Golden Flame, the highest level of fire of purification, not only completely burned the earth spider’s web, but closed in directly on the earth spider itself.
   
Pong!!
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Kaboom!!
   
 
With the sounds of the explosion, earth spider was surrounded by flames.
 
With the sounds of the explosion, earth spider was surrounded by flames.
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“Got…Gotcha…?”
 
“Got…Gotcha…?”
   
But as Ayano dubiously mumbled while looking into the flames, what appeared to her vision was only a white cocoon-like object. What really surprised Ayano was the “pishpiish” sound of it spliting open.
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But as Ayano dubiously mumbled while looking into the flames, what appeared to her vision was only a white cocoon-like object. What really surprised Ayano was the “pishpiish” sound of it splitting open.
   
 
Pang!
 
Pang!
   
Just like a thin layer of glass shattering, from the middle the cocoon split open and the earth spider again appeared, completely without harm.
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Just like a thin layer of glass shattering, the middle the cocoon split open and the earth spider again appeared, completely without harm.
   
Probably the webbing contained some special component that could block spiritual energies, it used that covering to hide its body and avoid the purifying powers to be completely purified.
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Probably the webbing contained some special component that could block spiritual energies, it used that covering to hide its body and avoided the purifying powers of the flames.
   
 
“It’s, it’s quite formidable, hu…”
 
“It’s, it’s quite formidable, hu…”
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Ayano said using a sing-song voice. At first glance she seemed very calm, but careful study would discover that her “sun-vein” <!-- 太陽穴, the two side of the forehead, important in martial arts and body health --> had already risen.
 
Ayano said using a sing-song voice. At first glance she seemed very calm, but careful study would discover that her “sun-vein” <!-- 太陽穴, the two side of the forehead, important in martial arts and body health --> had already risen.
   
Even though this was not a full strength strike it was completely deflected and Ayano’s self-confidence was certainly hurting a lot.
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Even though this was not a full strength strike, it was completely deflected and Ayano’s self-confidence was certainly hurting a lot.
   
 
“Only a little bug, don’t be so haughty ——!!”
 
“Only a little bug, don’t be so haughty ——!!”
   
Resonating with Ayano’s anger, an even greater amount of fire spirits gathered and, even though there was no materialization, in the vicinity was already gathered an equal amount of spirits to a volcano opening.
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Resonating with Ayano’s anger, an even greater amount of fire spirits gathered and, even though there was no materialization, in the vicinity there was already gathered an equal amount of spirits as to a volcano opening.
   
 
“Then… regretting it now?”
 
“Then… regretting it now?”
   
Accompanying her anger, Ayano was already entered into a selfless state. Her composure had completely been commanded by anger, and then transformed into strength.
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Accompanying her anger, Ayano was already entering into a selfless state. Her composure had completely been commanded by anger, and then transformed into strength.
   
She continuously summoned stronger and even stronger spirits. This time it wasn't directed released towards one area but, given her immovable strength of mind, was at the same time directly released in one direction.
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She continuously summoned stronger and even stronger spirits. This time it wasn't directly released towards one area but, given her immovable strength of mind, was at the same time being released towards one direction.
   
This time Ayano held Enraiha in a direction perpendicular to her body, seriously chasing it, took a deep breath and released it with a sharp kiai.
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This time Ayano held Enraiha in a direction perpendicular to her body, seriously chasing it, took a deep breath and released it with a sharp “kiai.
   
 
“Haa!!”
 
“Haa!!”
   
At that instant, the flame flew into the earth spider’s body. It's abdomen expanded and exploded, changing it into a miniature torch.
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At that instant, the flame flew into the earth spider’s body. Its abdomen expanded and exploded, changing it into a miniature torch.
   
Within this seemingly small torch, are gathered the entire area’s fire spirits. The explosion of the fireball became even bigger, this time the earth spider was certainly transformed into ashes.
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Within this seemingly small torch, gathered the entire area’s fire spirits. The explosion of the fireball became even bigger, this time the earth spider was certainly transformed into ashes.
   
Afterwards nothing was left, the pieces of the spider’s body and the youma spirit around had been completed purified. Now the temple where the youma was vanquished was full of the “special air” that only temples have.
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Afterwards, nothing was left; the pieces of the spider’s body and the youma spirit around had been completed purified. Now the temple where the youma was vanquished was full of the tranquil air that only temples have.
   
 
If an attack from the outside can be defended, simply attack from the inside. Even though describing it is easy, actually doing it is close to impossible.
 
If an attack from the outside can be defended, simply attack from the inside. Even though describing it is easy, actually doing it is close to impossible.
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However, in ordinary circumstances, controlling the spirits residing within the body is impossible.
 
However, in ordinary circumstances, controlling the spirits residing within the body is impossible.
   
These kind of spirits, infinitely close to a living beings’ survival instinct, involve enormous willpower, the origin of life can be said to not allow anyone control.
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These kinds of spirits, infinitely close to a living beings’ survival instinct, involve enormous willpower. The origin of life can be said to not allow anyone control.
   
 
Even a genius can’t control it easily according to one’s likings. But, in this world, no matter what, there are people who spend their entire day saying “logical boundaries” are for foolish and sad humans.
 
Even a genius can’t control it easily according to one’s likings. But, in this world, no matter what, there are people who spend their entire day saying “logical boundaries” are for foolish and sad humans.
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“Then, let’s go!...”
 
“Then, let’s go!...”
   
During this dialogue that she couldn’t continue, Ayano stupidly stared at the two’s body language. Probably the bigger body is Masato, on his left is Takeshi. From the clothes that should be right.
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During this dialogue that she couldn’t continue, Ayano stupidly stared at the two’s body language. Probably the bigger body was Masato, and on his left was Takeshi. Everything seemed to be just fine.
   
 
But——
 
But——
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(How come there’s no head…?)
 
(How come there’s no head…?)
   
These two guys, the taller one with both hands still in his pockets, the other one seeming not to be able to control his exhilaration, holding a fist in front of his chest, standing naturally.
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These two guys; the taller one with both hands still in his pockets, and the other one who seemed not to be able to control his exhilaration, holding a fist in front of his chest, stood naturally.
   
 
When you look at them and there are no heads, it doesn’t seem like an odd situation.
 
When you look at them and there are no heads, it doesn’t seem like an odd situation.
   
So Ayano looked toward the ground, where there were two round objects entering her eyes. Ayano stumbled, seeming about to fall, closed in, knelt and lifted one onto her knees. Even though it was quite heavy as Ayano smelt the odor of the guy that she really liked she smiled. Ayano hugged the head of the one who, from very young, fought together with her and taught her the ways of survival/existence. Quietly she mumbled.
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So Ayano looked toward the ground, where there were two round objects entering her eyes. Ayano stumbled, almost about to fall, closed in, knelt and lifted one onto her knees. Even though it was quite heavy, as Ayano smelt the odor of the guy that she really liked, she smiled. Ayano hugged the head of the one who, from a very young age, fought together with her and taught her the ways of survival/existence. Quietly she mumbled.
   
 
“Uncle… head… fell down… uh…’
 
“Uncle… head… fell down… uh…’
   
On Ayano's face appeared a sad smile as she tried to put Masato’s head back on. Thinking that by doing this he will return to life she stubbornly forced the head back in.
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On Ayano's face appeared a sad smile as she tried to put Masato’s head back on. Thinking that by doing this he will return to life, she stubbornly forced the head back on.
   
As if mocking Ayano for this kind of useless action, a hidden unseen sword blade lightly carved Masato’s body. In one second the big body was separated into hundreds or even thousands of slices of meat.
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As if mocking Ayano for this kind of useless action, a hidden unseen sword blade lightly carved Masato’s body. In one second, the big body was separated into hundreds or even thousands of slices of meat.
   
 
Because his heart had stopped pumping a while ago, fresh blood did not fly out from the sharp cuts.
 
Because his heart had stopped pumping a while ago, fresh blood did not fly out from the sharp cuts.
   
Although there was no sound of blood flowing, nor the sounds of flesh breaking, still it strangely gives a person a feeling of reality.
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Although there was no sound of blood flowing, nor the sounds of flesh breaking, it still strangely gave a person a feeling of reality.
   
 
[[image:Kaze no Stigma vol 01 071.jpg|thumb]]
 
[[image:Kaze no Stigma vol 01 071.jpg|thumb]]
   
Under the blowing of the wind, Masato’s body was taken apart without a sound. Like going through a paper shredder, the pieces of meat, like flower petals, danced in the sky.
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Under the blowing of the wind, Masato’s body was taken apart without a sound. Almost like going through a paper shredder, the pieces of meat, like flower petals, danced in the sky.
   
In the instant of the image, Ayano watched as if frozen.
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In that instant, like a picture, Ayano watched as if frozen.
   
 
Drop.
 
Drop.
   
Accompanying the water droplet like sound, something droped on her face and Ayano unconsciously tried to remove it.
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Accompanying the water droplet-like sound, something fell on her face, and Ayano unconsciously tried to remove it.
   
That was a bright red piece of meat, which still had some remaining warmth. When she understood what was carried on her fingers, Ayano’s consciousness seemed to be passing through a filter, only recovering a small amount.
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It was a bright red piece of meat, which still had some remaining warmth. When she understood what was on her fingers, Ayano’s consciousness seemed to be passing through a filter, only recovering a small amount.
   
 
“No.”
 
“No.”
   
That was once a part belonging to Masato’s body. But those miserable remains no longer could be described even as a corpse.
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It was once a part that belonged to Masato’s body, but those miserable remains no longer could be described even as a corpse.
   
 
“I don’t want this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
 
“I don’t want this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
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“Kukuku—————“
 
“Kukuku—————“
   
That sound, even though it vibrated the air, that sniggering sound, wasn’t directly sent to the brain. If you had to describe it, accompaning this “snigger” are strong feelings. This kind of derision towards one's opponent’s “awareness” seemed to provoke Ayano, it was just that annoying.
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That sound that even vibrated through the air, that sniggering sound, wasn’t directly sent to the brain. If you had to describe it, accompanying this “snigger” were strong feelings. This kind of derision towards one's opponent’s “awareness” seemed to provoke Ayano. It was just that annoying.
   
 
Faced with the situation of the appearance of the enemy, due to frequent training of the body and spirit, Ayano instantly entered fighting mode.
 
Faced with the situation of the appearance of the enemy, due to frequent training of the body and spirit, Ayano instantly entered fighting mode.
   
Then she buried deep within her the feelings of anguish, substituting them with feelings of animation and anticipation.
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Then she buried deep within her the feeling of anguish, substituting them with the feelings of animation and anticipation.
   
 
Changing the target of her anger towards her opponent and challenging the opponent.
 
Changing the target of her anger towards her opponent and challenging the opponent.
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“Come out!”
 
“Come out!”
   
Already she surpassed the limits of anger that could be expressed on a humans' face. But Ayano seeming determined that it could, looked upwards.
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Already she surpassed the limits that anger could be expressed on a humans' face, but Ayano seemed determined that she could. Ayano looked upwards.
   
There existed ''that thing''. In the front of a branch on a huge tree stood a human shadow completely without fear of danger, it's right hand in the pockets of it's clothing.
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There existed ''that thing''. In the front of a branch on a huge tree stood a human shadow completely without fear of danger with its right hand in the pocket of its clothing.
   
Because it was place of little light she was not able to clearly see her opponents face, but it didn’t really matter anymore. The outflowing of evil ki already told her “This is an enemy.”
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Because it was place of little light, she was not able to clearly see her opponents face, but it didn’t really matter anymore. The out flowing of evil ki already told her “This is an enemy.”
   
 
Ayano silently swung Enraiha upwards.
 
Ayano silently swung Enraiha upwards.
   
There was no need to know who, nor the need to accumulate strength. Only to calmly mix in the killing intention and kill it in one strike. This kind of sharpened killing intention transformed the flaming sword blade, running upwards.
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There was no need to know who, nor the need to accumulate strength. All that was requited was to calmly mix in the killing intention and kill it in one strike. This kind of sharpened killing intention transformed the flaming sword blade, running upwards.
   
Moving lightly, clearly without regard to weight, ''that thing'' avoided the flaming sword blade. Then it flew onto the roof (with a leap?). Afterwards ''that thing'' looked down towards Ayano, slowly moving it's body. Seeming to say "chase away".
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Moving lightly, clearly without regard to weight, ''that thing'' avoided the flaming sword blade. Then it flew onto the roof (with a leap?). Afterwards ''that thing'' looked down towards Ayano, slowly moving its body, seeming to say "chase away".
   
 
This was clearly a trap and Ayano bravely accepted this kind of provocation.
 
This was clearly a trap and Ayano bravely accepted this kind of provocation.
   
(Even it is a trap, it doesn't matter, I will absolutely annihilate you.)
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(Even if it is a trap, it doesn't matter, I will absolutely annihilate you.)
   
 
Deep within herself she was submitting to such a type of anger; Ayano had already begun a rampage for revenge.
 
Deep within herself she was submitting to such a type of anger; Ayano had already begun a rampage for revenge.
   
 
=== 4 ===
 
=== 4 ===
In the sky the ki of a youma suddenly appeared.
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In the sky, the ki of a youma suddenly appeared.
   
 
“Hmm…”
 
“Hmm…”
   
Kazuma suddenly looked toward the sky. In order for the power not to be sensed, it had been gathered bit by bit in the sky. Suddenly a wind blade flashed out and without time to defend even flying backward to escape took his full effort.
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Kazuma suddenly looked toward the sky. In order for its power not to be sensed, it had been gathered bit by bit in the sky. Suddenly a wind blade flashed out and, without time to defend, even flying backwards to escape it took Kazuma’s full effort.
   
The wind blade passed right by the still rolling Kazuma, then, slightly correcting it's angle, with one stroke it sliced in two the Fuuga practitioner, Shingo and Takeya, all three of them.
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The wind blade passed right by the still rolling Kazuma, and then while slightly correcting its angle, with one stroke it sliced in two the Fuuga practitioner, Shingo, and Takeya, all three of them.
   
 
“Wait, Wait a second!!”
 
“Wait, Wait a second!!”
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(I, I was actually ambushed!?)
 
(I, I was actually ambushed!?)
   
Actually this is first time this had happened to him, facing an ambush situation. Further, it was an ambush with wind spirits? No matter who had summoned them, gathering this degree of wind spirits would be impossible for Kazuma not to feel it. No matter how great of a fuujutsu-shi, the use of fuu-jutsu could not deceive Kazuma. This was not simply a question of the difference in distance of abilities, but the rules are simply thus.
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Actually, this is first time this has ever happened to him, facing an ambush situation. Furthermore, it was an ambush with wind spirits? No matter who had summoned them, gathering this degree of wind spirits would be impossible for Kazuma not to feel it. No matter how great of a fuujutsu-shi, the use of fuu-jutsu could not deceive Kazuma. This was simply not a question of the difference in distance of abilities, but the rules are simply thus.
   
But now occurred an impossible situation. Kazuma immediately broke off his thoughts, focusing towards the thing in the sky.
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But what now occurred was just that impossible situation. Kazuma immediately broke off his thoughts, focusing towards the thing in the sky.
   
 
“What’s… that thing...?”
 
“What’s… that thing...?”
   
A really small thing, maybe smaller than 20 mm, was floating in the sky about 20-30 meters above. Nearby five things rose and flew out.
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A really small thing, maybe smaller than 20 mm, was floating in the sky about 20-30 meters above. Nearby it, five things rose and flew out.
   
 
“Someone’s hand…? Doesn’t seem so... red leaves…?
 
“Someone’s hand…? Doesn’t seem so... red leaves…?
   
No matter how he looked it didn’t seem like it was flying in the sky, it wasn't controlling the wind. With a questioning look, suddenly Kazuma discovers what that thing really is.
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No matter how he looked, it didn’t seem like it was flying in the sky. It wasn't controlling the wind. With a questioning look, suddenly Kazuma discovered what that thing really was.
   
 
It was a human hand. A strange human hand was flying in the sky. Even recognizing it didn’t solve anything, it still couldn’t change the fact that 3 people had been killed.
 
It was a human hand. A strange human hand was flying in the sky. Even recognizing it didn’t solve anything, it still couldn’t change the fact that 3 people had been killed.
 
 
(Anyway, first let’s defeat it!)
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(Anyways, first let’s defeat it!)
   
 
Using a voice that could only be heard by himself, he mumbled. The thing that looked like a hand flew into the upper sky —— then disappeared.
 
Using a voice that could only be heard by himself, he mumbled. The thing that looked like a hand flew into the upper sky —— then disappeared.
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“Wait! What are you actually thinking!?”
 
“Wait! What are you actually thinking!?”
   
Kazuma protested towards the wind spirit, this was clearly against the agreement. But the spirit had only an uncertain sound, and couldn’t tell Kazuma the actual place of the disappeared hand.
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Kazuma protested towards the wind spirit, this was clearly against the agreement. But the spirit made only an uncertain sound, and it couldn’t tell Kazuma the actual place of the disappeared hand.
   
 
“What is going on…”
 
“What is going on…”
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The spirit disobeyed the covenant? —— impossible.
 
The spirit disobeyed the covenant? —— impossible.
   
To Kazuma, if were hearing this kind of situation from someone else, would be quite skeptical of the mental state of that person. That was why what just happened was a very irregular situation. <!--“correct mindset” not too sure. -->
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To Kazuma, if he were to hear this kind of situation from someone else, he would be quite skeptical of the mental state of that person. This was why what just happened was a very irregular situation. <!--“correct mindset” not too sure. -->
   
The spirits do have cognizant qualities. [Initial Principle] —— it was when the world was first created, don’t know by whom, immutable laws were also created towards this existential world—— and they obey them, allowing this world to remain in this kind of shape and reality. Just like bees have to live in a beehive, just like one part of himself recognizes him, one part, even if it had intelligence, it would still be impossible for it to think. Of course it’s impossible for it to have the type of free will to break a covenant.
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The spirits do have cognizant qualities. [Initial Principle] —— it was when the world was first created, don’t know by whom, but immutable laws were also created towards this existential world—— and they obey them, allowing this world to remain in this kind of shape and reality. Just like bees have to live in a beehive, just like one part of himself recognizes him, one part, even if it had intelligence, it would still be impossible for it to think. Of course it’s impossible for it to have the type of free will to break a covenant.
   
 
If the spirits had the free will to move about, then the laws of science would be broken. The world would be destroyed within 3 days.
 
If the spirits had the free will to move about, then the laws of science would be broken. The world would be destroyed within 3 days.
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“That’s impossible…”
 
“That’s impossible…”
   
Kazuma thinking of the worst-case scenario, weakly sighs saying.
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Kazuma thought of the worst-case scenario, and weakly sighed saying.
   
 
(There’s someone like me? No way…)
 
(There’s someone like me? No way…)
   
Just thinking about it brang shivers not from cold, but it couldn’t be said to be good luck —— no matter what, Kazuma didn’t want to think that—— but right then it wasn't the best time to stop and think.
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Just thinking about it brought shivers not from cold, but it couldn’t be said to be good luck —— no matter what, Kazuma didn’t want to think that—— but right then it wasn't the best time to stop and think.
   
Because he sensed a huge amount of fire spirits coming towards here.
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That was because he sensed a huge amount of fire spirits coming towards here.
   
 
(This time even [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Ifrit|Ifrit]] has come? Crap, when did Japan become a world of youma!?)
 
(This time even [[Kaze_no_Stigma:Volume1_Translator%27s_Notes#Ifrit|Ifrit]] has come? Crap, when did Japan become a world of youma!?)
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Even before he finished talking, a situation appeared that Kazuma could not have predicted.
 
Even before he finished talking, a situation appeared that Kazuma could not have predicted.
   
What appeared was a shoujo. Accompanying the red fire and eyes where that hatred-filled fire resided, holding in her right hand was accumulated power ——
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What appeared was a shoujo(young girl). She had red flames and eyes where hatred-filled fire resided, holding in her right hand was accumulated power ——
   
 
“Kazuma —— !!”
 
“Kazuma —— !!”
   
The strength of the fire spirits gathered in her right hand had already crystallized. Ayano seemed to make up her mind in that instant.
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The strength of the fire spirits that gathered in her right hand had already crystallized. Ayano seemed to have made up her mind in that instant.
   
 
Chop!!
 
Chop!!
   
Entering the rapidly retreating Kazuma’s eyes was Ayano, swinging the red sword that was, for his clan, more important than anything else. It was also the thing that had made his life very chaotic.
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Entering the rapidly retreating Kazuma’s eyes was Ayano, swinging the red sword that was, for the Kannagi clan, more important than anything else. It was also the thing that had made his life very chaotic.
   
Kazuma, faced with the godly sword that, no matter what, he would like to escape, saw this and yelled.
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Faced with the godly sword that, no matter what, he would like to escape from; Kazuma saw this and yelled.
   
 
“Enraiha!? Are you Ayano!?”
 
“Enraiha!? Are you Ayano!?”
   
The only answer was a sword flash from Enraiha. As he was faced with Ayano, filled with killing intent and not listening to anything, he tried really hard to explain.
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The only answer was a sword flash from Enraiha. As he was faced with Ayano, who was filled with killing intent and not listening to anything, he tried really hard to explain.
   
“Hey, hey wait a moment, this is a misunderstanding! They weren’t killed by me… hey, you should listen to what other people are saying!”
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“Hey, hey wait a moment, this is a misunderstanding! They weren’t killed by me… hey; you should listen to what other people are saying!”
   
 
As flaming white fireballs continuously approached, Kazuma kept dodging and speaking, but Ayano seemed like she couldn't hearing it at all.
 
As flaming white fireballs continuously approached, Kazuma kept dodging and speaking, but Ayano seemed like she couldn't hearing it at all.
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“Hey!!!”
 
“Hey!!!”
   
Believing that he had already evaded the fireball, it suddenly exploded, blocking Kazuma’s retreat. Noticing, Ayano used the time that the explosion sealed off the way to appear in front of his eyes swinging the Enraiha.
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Believing that he had already evaded the fireball, it suddenly exploded, blocking Kazuma’s retreat. Noticing, Ayano used the time that the explosion sealed off the way, to appear in front of his eyes swinging the Enraiha.
   
 
“Uncle’s revenge!!”
 
“Uncle’s revenge!!”
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“Otou-san —— Genma died?”
 
“Otou-san —— Genma died?”
   
However, before he finished saying such, he figured that it was a mistake; even though Ayano and Genma’s relationship wasn’t so bad that it could been seen from the outside, certainly if Genma were to die Ayano would not get revenge for him.
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However, before he finished saying such, he figured that it was a mistake; even though Ayano and Genma’s relationship wasn’t so bad from what could be seen from the outside, certainly if Genma were to die Ayano would not get revenge for him.
   
 
A person appeared in his head, a man, “uncle”, from the Oogami family that Ayano had been very close to.
 
A person appeared in his head, a man, “uncle”, from the Oogami family that Ayano had been very close to.
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The name probably was —— like!!
 
The name probably was —— like!!
   
“—— pong” <!-- Like usually SFX help needed. -->
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“—— bam” <!-- Like usually SFX help needed. -->
   
Suddenly Ayano butted her head upwards and heavily hit his chin. Because of his pondering his reflexes were slower; even though it was quickly evaded, the hit still caused his head to be dizzy and painful.
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Suddenly Ayano butted her head upwards and heavily hit Kazuma’s chin. Because of his pondering, his reflexes were slower; even though it was quickly evaded, the hit still caused his head to be dizzy and painful.
   
 
Even though he was dizzy, he still calmly asked.
 
Even though he was dizzy, he still calmly asked.
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“Oogami Masato died?
 
“Oogami Masato died?
   
Ayano's face became even more somber, further she forcefully focused more strength into the Enraiha in her hand; such that, from a distance, it could be clearly seen.
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Ayano's face became even more somber; furthermore, she forcefully focused more strength into the Enraiha in her hand; such that, from a distance, it could be clearly seen.
   
(Seems like the opposite effect occured…)
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(Seems like the opposite effect occurred…)
   
He shrugged his shoulders, faced with this person filled with anger, he had no more questions to ask. Faced with this confused, angry little girl, anything he did would be useless.
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He shrugged his shoulders, faced with this person filled with such emotion; he had no more questions to ask. Faced with this confused, angry little girl, anything he did would be useless.
   
But, she couldn’t be killed. If he hurt her the fool’s father, Juugo, would probably completely recognize him as an enemy. This had to be avoided. <!--Not sure where fool is Juugo or Ayano. -->
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But, she couldn’t be killed. If he was to hurt her, this fool’s father, Juugo, would probably completely recognize him as an enemy. This had to be avoided. <!--Not sure where fool is Juugo or Ayano. -->
   
 
This was not because he feared Juugo, who was the Kannagi clan’s historically strongest practitioner. But because as “Kannagi Kazuma”, Juugo could be said to be his only ally. In order not to create sorrow for him, there was only one method.
 
This was not because he feared Juugo, who was the Kannagi clan’s historically strongest practitioner. But because as “Kannagi Kazuma”, Juugo could be said to be his only ally. In order not to create sorrow for him, there was only one method.
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“——Wait, Wait a second!”
 
“——Wait, Wait a second!”
   
Kazuma, with his back towards Ayano, who wanted to stop him, leaped up, surrounded by wind, and flew upwards about 10 meters, then suddenly disappeared.
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Kazuma, with his back towards Ayano who wanted to stop him, leaped up, surrounded by wind, and flew upwards about 10 meters, then suddenly disappeared.
   
 
“What—— where at?”
 
“What—— where at?”
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Right above her, as she kept looking around, Kazuma floated along.
 
Right above her, as she kept looking around, Kazuma floated along.
   
Employing the air to change the reflection rate of light, he become see-through, just as if wearing a transparent robe. If one looked closely one could see the parts where waves were created by high heat, but Ayano, who was being controlled by anger and had forgotten herself, did not.
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Employing the air to change the reflection rate of light, Kazuma became see-through, just as if wearing a transparent robe. If one looked closely, one could see the parts where waves were created by high heat, but Ayano, who was being controlled by anger and had forgotten herself, did not.
   
 
Kazuma took no pleasure in watching the troubled Ayano, but was thinking about what to do later on.
 
Kazuma took no pleasure in watching the troubled Ayano, but was thinking about what to do later on.
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Hehe, hmmhmmhmm.
 
Hehe, hmmhmmhmm.
   
Kazuma burst out laughing. The Kannagi clan and the mysterious fuujutsu-shi, two of the strongest things already assaulting his life, of course Kazuma couldn't ignore this.
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Kazuma burst out laughing. The Kannagi clan and the mysterious fuujutsu-shi, two of the strongest things already assaulting his life; of course, Kazuma could not ignore this.
   
 
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Revision as of 21:31, 23 August 2008

Chapter Two - The sudden disaster

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“Still not ready? How much longer do we have to wait, Hyoue?”

“Please—wait a little longer,” Hyoue replied to the seemingly impatient person.

Then, that person closed his eyes pensively and walked away. The wind blew against Hyoue. The air was filled with the ki of the youma and passed beneath Hyoue’s palm. The ki of the youma that passed beneath his palms was like an air that would swallow everyone, no matter whom.

It was already dawn by the time the shredded remains of the three people were discovered. This unbelievably serious situation completely shocked the entire Kannagi clan.

The Kannagi clan was astonished; this was an undeniable fact. Faster than human reflexes, the three defensively prepared people were killed without anyone being alerted.

The Fuuga clan was summoned in order to better understand the situation. Because of this, Hyoue, gathered the youma ki to understand who the enemy was. “Hmm, t—this is....”

The sound of concentration. Hyoue gathered the youma ki in his palms without losing any. It was a very cold air. Even for powerful practitioners the ki provided sufficient reasons to fear it.

“This was caused by fuujutsu, and was created by a practitioner who is on a completely different level from us, the Fuuga clan. It trapped the three people in a wind kekkai and then killed them.”

Hyoue’s report was not in the least beneficial, any practitioner could easily understand from the sight of the incident.

“I understand. But, who did it?!”

“If you require a detailed report, I hope more time is allowed,” Hyoue replied indistinctly, facing this inquiry.

“Then do it quickly! You and your clan can act...”

“Everyone be quiet!”

At Juugo's angry voice, everyone present became silent; then Juugo spoke in a consoling voice.

“So it's like that? Good job; you may retire... Right—how’s the health of Ryuuya?"

Hyoue appeared surprised at that moment due to the Suzerain’s concern over his son’s health.

“Yes… If he quietly recuperates, there shouldn’t be any problems. However, he can no longer recover to the level of working for the Kannagi clan anymore. This unworthy son really is an embarrassment.”

Given Juugo’s words of gratitude, Hyoue bowed.

“Yes… Thank you very much. I will give instructions to my subordinates for I will now retire….” “Then please, I await your reply, Hyoue.”

The head of the Fuuga clan bowed silently and left.

The enemy was a fuujutsu practitioner who loathed the Kannagi clan. Everyone naturally thought of a certain person who had—coincidentally—just returned to Japan.

“It’s Kazuma! He obtained strength for revenge and returned to Japan! My fellow clan members, let us destroy the traitor Kazuma. Find him without delay and kill him!”

The person who made such an aggressive comment was the previous suzerain, Yorimichi. Even though he was retired, he still had the air of a suzerain. The entire clan strongly disliked him, but only he is ignorant of this fact.

Chichi-ue, to clarify, we don’t have enough evidence to prove that Kazuma did this.” Juugo said this seriously to stop Yorimichi's tirade.

“You—! Who but Kazuma could have done this...?”

“Yorimichi, please hold your tongue. When you talk like that, it becomes impossible for us to discuss the issue.”

Genma coolly interrupted Yorimichi, who was shouting in an ear-shattering voice. Genma coldly looked on in a way that didn't try to hide the scorn expressed in his eyes.

Genma looked down on Yorimichi from the depth of his heart, facing a person who had no strength except for scheming and yet was chosen as the suzerain.

In Yorimichi’s thirty years as suzerain, the strength of the Kannagi Clan hit rock bottom. Given Yorimichi's inability to control the representative sword of the Kannagi Clan, and his incapacity of passing the sword to someone else, resulted in it being deeply buried in the warehouse before Juugo’s accession to the suzerain position.

Of course, Genma was not thinking about such a foolish item.

Genma thought the one who succeeded the position of suzerain should be the strongest practitioner. Because of this, Genma did not hate the current suzerain, Juugo. He only thought his own strength wasn’t enough in comparison.

Previously, he wanted to prepare his son to be the next suzerain. This was not really a scheme; he just wanted to train and prepare Kazuma to give him the strength to become the next suzerain.

Yorimichi didn’t really have any beliefs like Genma’s; he only had the ambition for power. This is what Genma thought. Therefore, no matter how Genma tried to hide his thoughts, those thoughts were revealed when he further enraged Yorimichi.

Even though they had a close family/blood relationship of uncle and nephew, the hatred between the two had deepened again.

“Y-You want to shield Kazuma? No—should I say that this is your scheme? Allowing Kazuma to go outside the country to learn jutsu to kill Juugo and Ayano, and then allow Ren to succeed the position of suzerain?

Yorimichi turned his accusing finger towards Genma. This kind of bad will was almost materializing like, “sticky things connect items together,” allowing the crowd to be agitated.

“That kind of idea would only come from someone with low scruples.” For Yorimichi to say such things was an almost insulting provocation. Genma did not contradict; the reply would have been extremely disrespectful if he did.

“Chichi-ue, that’s enough!”

Juugo would not allow the continuation of such an insulting diatribe. In order to stop it, he ordered Yorimichi to be taken away.

“Yorimichi, you must be tired. Please return to your room to rest.”

“Wait, Juugo! Genma cannot be trusted! If you don’t listen to me now, you will end up regretting it sooner or later!”

Yorimichi was hauled away like luggage. His harsh voice slowly decreased in volume until nothing could be heard.

“I really am sorry for the insulting diatribes of my father. With regards to me, please forgive him.”

Juugo placed both of his hands on the tatami in a slight bow. Genma replied indifferently, “I didn’t pay attention; the reason for such words is that the previous suzerain cares deeply for the Kannagi Clan.”

With an exchange of looks, underscoring each other’s reasoning, they smiled at the same time. In addition, with that, they understood the time for chatting was over, and it was now time to discuss more serious matters.

“As the previous suzerain said, the timing is too much of a coincidence. It is better for us to meet again and talk.”

Genma maintained his silence from the start, perhaps because he did not want to discuss his own son.

“Would Kazuma submit to our instructions willingly?”

“If he won’t submit, we will have to use force to bring him here. Even though he has gained strength, he is still Kazuma. Two or three people will be more than enough to capture him.”

“...That’s good, then. The selection of persons in charge of this assignment will be your responsibility, Genma. No matter what, it is necessary to bring back Kazuma quickly.”

“Understood.” Even though Genma received an order to capture his own son, Genma was tranquil compared to others.

“Ayano-sama has returned!”

The serious expression on Juugo’s face began to relax, and Genma wore a highly energetic and fierce look.

She appeared without even waiting a second.

“Bah!” She pulled the sliding door open and caught everyone’s attention.

“I’m home, Otou-sama! Ehh...? What’s going on?”

Appearing on the scene was an assertive young teenage girl, who asked this question when she saw the group's mood. With black hair that almost reached her back, flowing straight and sideways created by the movements of her head, simply represented the blooming of a bishoujo. At that moment, the 'dark and cold' atmosphere had completely vanished. The spiritual energy that emerged from her cleansed the room's atmosphere in one breath.

The appearance of an unclear enemy who killed some people at home. The people who had been discussing this situation nonstop now faced a blinding light; their uncomfortable and distressed feeling completely vanished.

As if facing the rays of the sun, all movements in the dark ceased to exist. The person in the doorway was the one who had the ability to vanquish darkness, with spiritual powers not below the power of light, heir of the suzerain and owner of Enraiha, and Juugo’s daughter, Kannagi Ayano.

“How’s the report, Ayano?”

Juugo tested his daughter with a serious expression, as when he asked other people. This is the best way for a father to guide his daughter ... at least this is what Juugo thought.

“Excuse me.” Ayano at that moment finished bowing. “The youma that was released was completely vanquished.”

“Hmm, good job.”

Finishing her report to the suzerain as a practitioner, Ayano innocently continued her questioning. “So, what actually happened, Otou-sama?”

“Hmm—— earlier, three people had been killed without notice. This is a serious situation!"

Although they were distant relatives, Ayano quieted after hearing how three people from the family had been killed. “A serious situation” wasn’t from “three people have been killed.” Instead, it was because it was “without notice.”

This was not some callous sentiment, but it was an understanding of what was of primary importance. For a girl of only sixteen years of age, who had such a strong will and discipline, it was surprising.

“Nobody saw who, fuujutsu-shi?”

“Of course there's a suspect.” Faced with Ayano’s questions, Juugo replied heavily, “It’s Kazuma.”

“Who’s that? That’s...”

Faced with this kind of close and revealing speech, Juugo’s "sun vein" furrowed.

“Think carefully about your older cousin’s name; the one who fought against you in the 'Succession Ceremony,' betting Enraiha, the representative sword of the Kannagi Clan ."

“'Older cousin...' Could it be the Kazuma who left the family four years ago? Could that even be labeled as a fight?”

Given his daughter’s direct words, Juugo secretly spied on Genma’s expression to see if there were any changes. Even though his inner feelings were not apparent, Genma’s outer unreadable appearance didn’t change at all.

“Right, I heard he left the country... and trained there. Later he became a fuujutsu-shi?”

“That’s how it is. Supposedly, he returned to Japan recently and changed his name to Yagami Kazuma. Yesterday, he met with the late Shinji during a job, where he beautifully completed it. It seems like he has trained very hard in those four years.”

“Kazuma... Looks like he hates us…” Finally remembering, Ayano said this while looking towards a distant place.

“It could be like that,” Genma replied without any facial expression.

“But, even though it is like that, we cannot just kill him. If it was done by him, we need to use his life to pay for the crimes.”

“If...?”

Ayano turned to look at Genma, searching for a clue as to what Genma was thinking. Genma accepted Ayano’s look without any change. The one who disinherited Kazuma and the one who provided the reason for his disinheritance crossed gazes.

The first to look away was Ayano. Without regards to strength as practitioners, her life’s experience was immensely surpassed. In reality, even with careful searching, she still lacked the confidence in her ability to win.

Ayano stopped her meaningless gaze, and turned to look towards Juugo.

“So what do we do next? Eliminate him?

“I mean, we still cannot be certain whether Kazuma was the one who did it; but no matter, we should find him and talk with him first.”

After seeing his daughter, who said such words so easily, Juugo sensed danger.

Perhaps due to the mighty power that Enraiha bears, whenever Ayano is faced with a problem, she is inclined to use power to resolve it. Juugo has always hoped that she understands that she will be the next clan chief and therefore would need to be more flexible in her thinking.

There is no need for you to take action at this moment in time. Remain on stand-by until an order is given!”

“…...I get it, fine…”

Even though she did not seem pleased, Ayano still obeys her father’s words, and she quickly left the scene after bowing. Up until the paper door was closed, the attitude she portrayed by not even looking at Juugo showed just how unhappy she was.

“……This stubborn child.”

Juugo sighed as he muttered this. But despite his tone being so bitter, he was still unable to hide that overflowing love he has for her.


2

It was easy for the information network of the Kannagi clan to find out where Kazuma was. Finding him the next morning did not really require any special methods because he used his own name to register at the hotel.

Therefore, at Genma’s command, two practitioners were sent out.

Yuuki Shingo and Oogami Takeya were the strongest practitioners of the branch families. Even though they had opposing personalities, they were great friends. This combination, outside the main family, could be said to be without equal.

From Genma’s point of view, he had thrown in the two strongest cards at hand; however, the selection of the oldest son of the Yuuki family might have been a deadly mistake. Why? That is because this man had absolutely no desire to convince Kazuma.

“Kazuma, you bastard, I will cut you into ten thousand pieces.”

“If he is dead, it will be problematic. At least leave him with the ability to talk when we take him back.”

As they waited for the upcoming report, they headed directly in Kazuma’s direction. Of course, they had absolutely no desire to persuade him; however, they never expected that they would be the ones assaulted.

“Is the report ready yet?”

“It’s going to be ready soon.”

This kind of discussion couldn't satisfy them at all. They didn't know how many times they had repeatedly asked. Given that the two of them were still waiting to receive the same report, they should have known it didn't matter how much they asked…

“What the hell are they doing, that useless Fuuga clan! It’s only that one person, Kazuma, can’t they easily bring him over!”

Shingo reprimanded angrily as, in reality, they turned the arrowhead towards the Fuuga clan.

“This is worrying; the Fuuga clan might even be connected to this situation.” Takeya forcefully said some pretty words to sway Shingo. A situation in which the Fuuga shielding him wasn't impossible, insulting them, in order to change the attention of Shingo from Takeya was certainly welcomed.

Thinking shortly, Shingo gritted his teeth angrily and said:

“Damn, they only have slightly sharper senses, what is there to be complacent about.”

“Don’t say it like that; they are just a bunch of sad people with non-discussable/nil fighting power. Even failing to do something simple, aren't they very pathetic?”

“That’s right, hahaahahahahahaaaaa…”

Just as Takeya had wished, Shingo had completely forgotten about the issue of the reprimand. Hearing this sudden liberated laughter, Takeya had a thought — — not unlike that which he heard 10 seconds ago “Still not ready yet?” Similarly, he felt it to be very slow and lengthy.

“Incoming, in the area right ahead, about 500 meters, looks like he hasn’t noticed.”

Suddenly, amidst the conversation between the two, a voice appeared. This is a jutsu used by the Fuuga clan called “Method of Summoning/Calling Spirits”, which is used for sending their voice. This allows the wind to carry the voice even over large distances.

“He’s coming! I won’t leave him any limbs, arms or legs, burn it all! Let’s attack!”

This was not voiced for anyone to hear, only Shingo’s mumblings to himself. It could be seen from his hatred-filled eyes that his passion certainly could be really problematic.

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Shingo rattled on explaining how he would execute Kazuma. Shingo hoped Kazuma would at least put up some resistance before he was half-dead, then they could slowly torture him to the brink of death. Shingo would make sure Kazuma would suffer the most pain and suffering possible.

Takeya pulled a small distance away from Shingo after seeing how was. In his heart he was thinking, “So this guy is this dangerous.” And so, the distance between their hearts grew larger.

Just when a rift between their friendship was about to form, Kazuma appeared

Facing the defenseless, seemingly casual Kazuma ---- To them that is how it seemed ------Takeya greeted him in an arrogant manner.

“Long time no see, Kazuma!”

“….Oh, it is the successor of the Oogami family?”

A moment of pause; it was needed for Kazuma to recollect his memories. But, Takeya took it as a display of shock as if Kazuma just realized he was being ambushed. This uprising arrogant mentality gradually weakened Takeya’s concentration.

“Do you know why we are here?”

Takeya used a tone filled with superiority to say. At the same moment, Takeya calmed Shingo, whose eyes are blood-shot and whose heart is filled with the desire to release his flames. “No idea.”

Kazuma’s reply could not be any more honest, but at the same time it was not entirely without any sense of a taunt mixed in. He used a joking action to exaggeratedly shrug his shoulders, and then shook his head. As expected, he managed to piss Takeya off enough for his veins to show. Takeya; however, succeeded in controlling his anger, and after recovering his cool, began to explain.

“Yesterday night, the Kannagi clan had three practitioners killed."

“Uhmm... and?"

Kazuma asked demandingly, acting with supreme authority.

“The person who killed them was a fuujutsu practitioner."

“……………………..”

“……………………..”

The surroundings were covered in silence. A warm wind blew in through the dusk on the “Tree-Shadow” Road , the red leaves lightly began to dance, being shined upon by a crimson sun, the red leaves were dyed even a darker shade of red, this was the beauty that appears before the darkness controls world.

“……………..”

The first to open his mouth was Kazuma; compared to silence, it seems like he detested the stillness even more than being stared at by two men.

“So what is the matter?”

“The suzerain has things to ask you, follow us!”

“It wasn’t me! Are you finished?”

Immediately after saying such words, and as he was thinking of leaving, Kazuma suddenly bounced horizontally, an instant before the space where Kazuma had existed, without touching anything, became a fireball.

Kazuma looked towards Shingo, consequently Shingo, using a tone like a natural born deep voiced singer shouted.

“Hmhmhm, what’s the matter, you finally do it? Then, there is no other way besides using force to subdue you!”

At the same time as the shout, surrounding Shingo there were “tongues of crimson” which began to burn and dance. Even though the flames that appeared at the same time as the yell were attached to Shingo’s body, his clothes were not burnt. Shingo was exhibiting an unexpected level of precision.

As the flames continued to move on his body, Shingo was so happy that his lips were slanted, and said with a proclamation.

“If you refuse to speak about it, then you are very suspicious. I’ll burn off your arms and legs! Lessening the weight will make you easier to transport! I won’t kill you now, yet can you continue to live in such a humiliating condition? After the suzerain finishes his questioning, I’ll be merciful, and kill you within one week! You can use that time to fully regret your life. I want you to know, that after killing Shinji I absolutely cannot allow you to continue living untroubled!”

Assuming that the future will be as Shingo’s claims; nevertheless, Kazuma was still faced with the crazily laughing Shingo, looking as if he was watching some kind of rare animal. He then asked very seriously.

“So the Kannagi clan still feeds this kind of thing?”

“—No, Ahh….hu….”

Takeya really had no reply. Considering himself to be normal; Takeya did not want to be recognized with the thing next to him as if they were the same kind.

“Shingo always adored Shinji, now he hates you for killing Shinji, he is quite within reason.”

“That’s why I said it wasn’t me.”

“Then please go and clarify everything with the suzerain.”

“I am no longer part of the Kannagi clan; if the suzerain has business with me, tell him to come and look for me himself. Please pass it to him like that.”

“It seems … The negotiations have broken down then.”

In order to make good on his words, Takeya raised his “ki”. He then directed the surrounding dancing fire spirits to dance with his self-conscious.

The surrounding temperature was raised enough to be felt on the skin. Even though the fire spirits had yet to materialize, the surrounding area had clearly changed in physics.

Seeming to be frightened in the face of such elevated fighting spirit, scores of red leaves continued to flutter down, the bright red leaves instantly changed into ash and floated away before touching Takeya’s body.

A subdued Kazuma, like before, stood there with his hands in his leather jacket, watching the two of them. It seemed like he had no desire to confront the Kannagi clan; of course, it was hard to tell from that kind of pose.

“This is your last opportunity; yield humbly to us, Kazuma.”

Faced with Takeya last ultimatum, Kazuma raises his middle finger and said.

“Take a good look at yourselves before coming.”

“Die!!!”

“You idiot!”

At that instant, starting their jutsu, the two believed that victory would be definite. Because of the clan, two of the strongest practitioners were attacking at the same time. No matter what kind of strategy Kazuma had, facing those kinds of massive powers would be hopeless.

But——

Boom!

The fireball in Takeya’s hand suddenly explodes. Above the sound, he is incredulous that the fireball had such a big categorical runaway explosion.

The fireball that left Takeya’s control was like a wild animal with its tooth pulled. Even with the protection of the fire spirit, it was still impossible to shield the crash of the explosion’s force. Instantly the force of the explosion struck his entire body and Takeya was simply KO-ed.

(W, What? What had happened…? Shit, Shingo, leave….)

Even though he left this kind of “I leave the rest to you” saying, Shingo similarly lost his consciousness, with black and blue continuously pulsing on his face.

As Kazuma returned his hands back to the pockets of his leather jacket, he lowered his head to the two people before him. After flashing a condescending grin, he walked right by the two unconscious persons' sides.

Although he seemed like he wanted to leave immediately, Kazuma stopped. Then, as if feeling something, he looked towards the trees where there was no one.

“If you want to pick a fight with me, I won’t be merciful.”

At the same time of this warning, one of the trees split. Without any noise from the chopped tree following the break, the guarding practitioner slowly slid down.

Already forgetting to hide himself, the fujutsu user stood while dumbly staring at Kazuma. As Kazuma turned to leave, the guarding practitioner was fearful. “The one we lured was him? The prey we were hunting is this frightening thing——?*


3

“Seriously, Father worries too much. I alone am enough. I don’t know how many times I have repeated this. When will he acknowledge me? Am I this untrustworthy?”

“The suzerain acknowledges the young mistress' abilities, but as a father he simply worries about his daughter.”

Confronted with the disgruntled Ayano, the man in his forties cajoled.

At this time, Ayano was ordered to a certain temple in the city of Yokohama Yamate in order to strengthen the weakening seal inside. Coincidentally, this place was very close where Kazuma extorted every cent from his employer----To put it simply, this is where he exorcised only a few days ago; however, Ayano knows nothing about it.

Upon arriving at the location and discovering that the seal had deteriorated to a point beyond the previously assumed limits, Ayano immediately discarded the idea of the resealing it, and instead decided to eliminate the seal. Then, without any testing, she immediately ripped off the seal.

A popular saying of hers was, “This method is faster.”

People without significant confidence in their own abilities would not say something like that; however, the two men that accompanied her knew that she had the necessary ability to go along with such self-confidence.

Certainly, Juugo also knew that she had this kind of ability, but such worries of a father are within reason. Even if she described Juugo as stupid or foolish, most of time he sent two or more people to protect her.

“'Don’t mix work with your private life,’ is frequently lectured to me no matter what. ‘Don’t follow your own desires to do things,' isn’t that right Uncle Masato?”

Still discharging her annoyances, Ayano faced that man, the younger brother of the head of the Yuuki family, Masato. “Because he is the suzerain, he cannot mull over such minor issues.” In this manner, a smile and laughter appeared on Masato’s thin face. As a member of one of the branch families, he certainly was not thinking about the consequence, but it seemed like Ayano hadn’t really noticed or cared.

This man, Oogami Masato, although possessing strength greater than his older brother, disliked scheming for the position of family head and so went off to Tibet to train like an eccentric person.

When he returned to Japan, he was given the “Protect Ayano” mission. Juugo had a high regard of him, and from the first time Ayano went on a mission, he was continually responsible for this job of protection.

Certainly, Ayano also had good feelings about this easy-going relative. Due to everyone else’s princess like treatment of her, Masato’s causal kind of attitude was quite refreshing for her and felt very good.

Concenquently, “Uncle Masato, ojo-sama," this kind of terminology used between the two was like a real family without any separation.

“Maybe if it is to allow the younger practitioner here to learn, this kind of reasoning is still possible. Isn’t that so, Takeshi… Takeshi?”

“Ahh, Yes!?”

The young practitioner was using admiring eyes to stare at Ayano. Oogami Takeshi’s uncle had to holler many times before he finally paid attention.

“Did you not hear… Stop staring stupidly at Ojo-sama, be prepared. It is not known when the seal will be released.” “Yes, I understand! Just as Uncle has said! To be allowed to watch Ayano-sama's striking fighting method is really a great honor!”

In order to not screw-up in front of Ayano, Takeshi uselessly shouted in a loud voice. He stared at Ayano as she appeared with admiration and reverence compare to respect. For Takeshi’s generation of practitioners, Ayano had the status of a goddess. Hoping to watch her striking manner from close by while guarding her is something anyone would accept.

“Yes——It’s——like——this?” “Yes, it’s like that!”

The exhilaration of being able to talk to Ayano is something can be seen through Takeshi’s entire body language. Of course, Ayano does not like being viewed like that. It seems like she is being separated from “normal” and changed into something she doesn't want.

No matter what, no matter how much it is explained that it is useless, it is Takeshi’s only simple means of showing deference to a much stronger and more beautiful existence.

“Ah, forget it. … It’s about time.”

Ayano sensing the expanding ki of the youma, relaxed and turned herself towards the main hall. Her mini-skirt started to flutter and dance.

Now why Ayano would be wearing her high school uniform?

This is not only to allow her to normally attend a high school.

Because, if you think about it, the best suited outfit for a high school student is their uniform. So Juugo focused upon this point and added, within the range of his abilities, the best class of defensive spells to it.

The material, in order to allow better transpiration, was the best type of silk, that is, during the process of fabrication air is mixed in. Furthermore, everything is made from expensive materials.

As a result, by inputting great amounts of money and time, a high school uniform; it would not wrong be to call it a work of art. Its cost is comparable. It could be said that the cost is enough to buy a car, no, not really, correctly it can be said that it could buy a luxury house without being wrong.

Of course, Ayano paid attention to wearing this outfit, but not because of its capabilities, but because it was a gift given to her by her father, so she frequently wore this outfit in combat.

Wearing this outfit which could be said to be the world’s most expensive combat outfit, Ayano watched as the seal was about to be broken. She took a deep breath and then began moving and warming-up her own inner strength.

Pah!

A clear sound of clapping started to vibrate within the space. When the two closed palms were opened, in between the two appeared a flaming line. Ayano then grasped it with her right hand, making a horizontal outwards swinging motion.

The burning line, around 1 meter long, at that instant materialized into a crimson sword.

There was no blunt side to the bright crimson sword, it had two edges. The blade of the sword was surrounded by a golden flame, releasing vivid beautiful light. Just like that, it was as beautiful as one could imagine.

That sword was the Kannagi Clan’s supreme treasure, Enraiha. It was rewarded to the Kannagi Clan’s founder by the King of the Flame Spirits, and it was passed down defeating devils/evil as a treasured sword. !

Ayano lifted Enraiha upwards, then added her left hand to grasp the sword and made a downward stroke. Along the path of the stroke, golden pieces of the flame started spreading. Then instantly while beautifully, she stopped the sword before her eyes. No matter if it was done ten-thousand times or hundred thousand times, it was a beautiful motion that could always be forgiven.

The vase of the shrine had already approached its limits and, with a “pong” sound, burst open. Even faster than the falling pieces, a white light shot towards Ayano.

Ayano, from the front, made a downward stroke with Enraiha, attacking that thing head-on. After contact, the white substance gave off a sound like sprinkling water on a burning hot pot, vaporizing.

“Ugh, it’s sticky” Ayano mumbled after seeing that thing that dispersed in all directions, connected by thin threads. Then she changed her vision to the inside of the main hall, seeing a few points of something like lights. That thing slowly moved forward and revealed its own appearance.

“Wah…”

Ayano, inadvertently surprised, let out a gasp; that thing that had appeared was ——

Having multiple eyes, beyond eight feet, the entire body covered with dirty yet rigid fur, it was a segmented animal producing sounds like “kulah, kulah” as its legs moved. Upon seeing its full appearance anyone would feel shivers not due to cold. It really was a horrify spider freak.

“Earth Spider huh... Need help?”

“Not necessary”

Ayano immediately replied. Even though it produced a very disgusting feeling it was not the time for complaints. It seemed like she was more afraid of disappointing her otou-san; fighting against spiders or cockroaches was nothing in comparison.

(Come here…)

Summoning fire spirits does not require chants and such. As if following Ayano’s thinking, fire spirits assembled themselves, flying into Enraiha. Along the sword's blade, the light of the flame became even brighter.

Within the range reached by her awareness, Ayano continuously summoned spirits. Juugo didn't know how many times he had instructed her, "Don’t be like other practitioners, the spirits are not commanded, you can’t be too arrogant."

“They and we have same level of existence.”

This saying was frequently repeated by Juugo; spirits are the means to safeguard the existence of the world’s order. Because the Kannagi Clan has a contract with the spirit king, the spirits are only helpers.

Of course, Ayano also understood that her own strength was borrowed. Only to seal or vanquish the inconsistencies in the world’s order was the reason the power was gifted, and only for a short period of time.

That is why she was not ordering them, because doing such matters is not necessary. If the correct way of thinking is known, the fire spirits will certainly answer.

Having respect for the world, it’s not in order to obtain huge power or to be arrogant. Ayano, no matter what, always calls out to them like this: “Please, lend me your strength….”

“V… Very formidable….”

Takeshi watched dumbfounded as the enormous number of spirits gathered on Ayano’s body, the amount of spirits he could manage was only one small portion of this in comparison. For him, it was the first time seeing the main family’s power, the difference of which is like the difference between sky and the ground.

“Ah, formidable, right!?”

Masato said smiling, just like him to show off his own condition.

“Even though we said it recently, no matter how hard we work, we won’t be able to reach such levels.”

His uncle’s reply already forgotten, Takeshi once again looked at Ayano.

Ayano, holding the Enraiha, continued to confront the earth spider.

(What should I do… looks like I can’t get close…)

Even though enough spirits were already summoned to destroy the earth spider, given the long distance, she really didn’t have the confidence. Even though Enraiha is an ancient sword for summoning, in order to use the sword it is necessary to employ it to its fullest potential.

In other words; get close, and from a close distance puncture or split the earth spider, then from inside, burn its body completely.

(Of course if that was done, more adhesive matter would certainly fly out from the cut’s aperture… after the explosion fragments would all fly from the body… and if it’s female, after opening its skin, hundreds of spiders might come out… No———!)

Just thinking about it made her hair stand on end; inside, Ayano started complaining bitterly. If Takeshi could have read Ayano’s inner thoughts then, maybe the thoughts of reverence could have been corrected.

The earth spider seemed to seize the currently mulling Ayano’s opening; “palapala” using its long legs it changed its body and started moving forward.

“You want to escape!?”

Suddenly, towards the chasing Ayano, white silk spat out from the tail, but at the same time Ayano pulled up Enraiha to face it.

From Enraiha emerged a golden flame that burned the spider’s web, but because of the blockage by the silk, Ayano still could not get close to the earth spider.

Then Ayano could only stop and focus her mind. She took a deep breath, tuning her ki and calmed down.

(This kind of thing can’t do any real kind of obstruction; just kill it in couple seconds.)

Bringing up Enraiha, she performed a downward swing with her full strength. Golden Flame, the highest level of fire of purification, not only completely burned the earth spider’s web, but closed in directly on the earth spider itself.

Kaboom!!

With the sounds of the explosion, earth spider was surrounded by flames.

“Got…Gotcha…?”

But as Ayano dubiously mumbled while looking into the flames, what appeared to her vision was only a white cocoon-like object. What really surprised Ayano was the “pishpiish” sound of it splitting open.

Pang!

Just like a thin layer of glass shattering, the middle the cocoon split open and the earth spider again appeared, completely without harm.

Probably the webbing contained some special component that could block spiritual energies, it used that covering to hide its body and avoided the purifying powers of the flames.

“It’s, it’s quite formidable, hu…”

Ayano said using a sing-song voice. At first glance she seemed very calm, but careful study would discover that her “sun-vein” had already risen.

Even though this was not a full strength strike, it was completely deflected and Ayano’s self-confidence was certainly hurting a lot.

“Only a little bug, don’t be so haughty ——!!”

Resonating with Ayano’s anger, an even greater amount of fire spirits gathered and, even though there was no materialization, in the vicinity there was already gathered an equal amount of spirits as to a volcano opening.

“Then… regretting it now?”

Accompanying her anger, Ayano was already entering into a selfless state. Her composure had completely been commanded by anger, and then transformed into strength.

She continuously summoned stronger and even stronger spirits. This time it wasn't directly released towards one area but, given her immovable strength of mind, was at the same time being released towards one direction.

This time Ayano held Enraiha in a direction perpendicular to her body, seriously chasing it, took a deep breath and released it with a sharp “kiai.”

“Haa!!”

At that instant, the flame flew into the earth spider’s body. Its abdomen expanded and exploded, changing it into a miniature torch.

Within this seemingly small torch, gathered the entire area’s fire spirits. The explosion of the fireball became even bigger, this time the earth spider was certainly transformed into ashes.

Afterwards, nothing was left; the pieces of the spider’s body and the youma spirit around had been completed purified. Now the temple where the youma was vanquished was full of the tranquil air that only temples have.

If an attack from the outside can be defended, simply attack from the inside. Even though describing it is easy, actually doing it is close to impossible.

This was like the world’s own close relationship with the spirits. That’s right, like the life force/life activity of living beings.

The body of living beings that have water cannot be uninfluenced by water spirits and those living beings that have heat, within their body resides fire spirits.

For example, the youma, even though they materialize, can’t escape this rule.

However, in ordinary circumstances, controlling the spirits residing within the body is impossible.

These kinds of spirits, infinitely close to a living beings’ survival instinct, involve enormous willpower. The origin of life can be said to not allow anyone control.

Even a genius can’t control it easily according to one’s likings. But, in this world, no matter what, there are people who spend their entire day saying “logical boundaries” are for foolish and sad humans.

“Heh. It was this kind of thing.”

Ayano released a pleasing smile and turned around in order to go back.

“Then, let’s go!...”

During this dialogue that she couldn’t continue, Ayano stupidly stared at the two’s body language. Probably the bigger body was Masato, and on his left was Takeshi. Everything seemed to be just fine.

But——

(How come there’s no head…?)

These two guys; the taller one with both hands still in his pockets, and the other one who seemed not to be able to control his exhilaration, holding a fist in front of his chest, stood naturally.

When you look at them and there are no heads, it doesn’t seem like an odd situation.

So Ayano looked toward the ground, where there were two round objects entering her eyes. Ayano stumbled, almost about to fall, closed in, knelt and lifted one onto her knees. Even though it was quite heavy, as Ayano smelt the odor of the guy that she really liked, she smiled. Ayano hugged the head of the one who, from a very young age, fought together with her and taught her the ways of survival/existence. Quietly she mumbled.

“Uncle… head… fell down… uh…’

On Ayano's face appeared a sad smile as she tried to put Masato’s head back on. Thinking that by doing this he will return to life, she stubbornly forced the head back on.

As if mocking Ayano for this kind of useless action, a hidden unseen sword blade lightly carved Masato’s body. In one second, the big body was separated into hundreds or even thousands of slices of meat.

Because his heart had stopped pumping a while ago, fresh blood did not fly out from the sharp cuts.

Although there was no sound of blood flowing, nor the sounds of flesh breaking, it still strangely gave a person a feeling of reality.

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Under the blowing of the wind, Masato’s body was taken apart without a sound. Almost like going through a paper shredder, the pieces of meat, like flower petals, danced in the sky.

In that instant, like a picture, Ayano watched as if frozen.

Drop.

Accompanying the water droplet-like sound, something fell on her face, and Ayano unconsciously tried to remove it.

It was a bright red piece of meat, which still had some remaining warmth. When she understood what was on her fingers, Ayano’s consciousness seemed to be passing through a filter, only recovering a small amount.

“No.”

It was once a part that belonged to Masato’s body, but those miserable remains no longer could be described even as a corpse.

“I don’t want this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

At that moment, Ayano screamed as far as could be heard.

“Kukuku—————“

That sound that even vibrated through the air, that sniggering sound, wasn’t directly sent to the brain. If you had to describe it, accompanying this “snigger” were strong feelings. This kind of derision towards one's opponent’s “awareness” seemed to provoke Ayano. It was just that annoying.

Faced with the situation of the appearance of the enemy, due to frequent training of the body and spirit, Ayano instantly entered fighting mode.

Then she buried deep within her the feeling of anguish, substituting them with the feelings of animation and anticipation.

Changing the target of her anger towards her opponent and challenging the opponent.

“Come out!”

Already she surpassed the limits that anger could be expressed on a humans' face, but Ayano seemed determined that she could. Ayano looked upwards.

There existed that thing. In the front of a branch on a huge tree stood a human shadow completely without fear of danger with its right hand in the pocket of its clothing.

Because it was place of little light, she was not able to clearly see her opponents face, but it didn’t really matter anymore. The out flowing of evil ki already told her “This is an enemy.”

Ayano silently swung Enraiha upwards.

There was no need to know who, nor the need to accumulate strength. All that was requited was to calmly mix in the killing intention and kill it in one strike. This kind of sharpened killing intention transformed the flaming sword blade, running upwards.

Moving lightly, clearly without regard to weight, that thing avoided the flaming sword blade. Then it flew onto the roof (with a leap?). Afterwards that thing looked down towards Ayano, slowly moving its body, seeming to say "chase away".

This was clearly a trap and Ayano bravely accepted this kind of provocation.

(Even if it is a trap, it doesn't matter, I will absolutely annihilate you.)

Deep within herself she was submitting to such a type of anger; Ayano had already begun a rampage for revenge.

4

In the sky, the ki of a youma suddenly appeared.

“Hmm…”

Kazuma suddenly looked toward the sky. In order for its power not to be sensed, it had been gathered bit by bit in the sky. Suddenly a wind blade flashed out and, without time to defend, even flying backwards to escape it took Kazuma’s full effort.

The wind blade passed right by the still rolling Kazuma, and then while slightly correcting its angle, with one stroke it sliced in two the Fuuga practitioner, Shingo, and Takeya, all three of them.

“Wait, Wait a second!!”

Kazuma yelled without thinking as the situation changed into something unthought-of.

(I, I was actually ambushed!?)

Actually, this is first time this has ever happened to him, facing an ambush situation. Furthermore, it was an ambush with wind spirits? No matter who had summoned them, gathering this degree of wind spirits would be impossible for Kazuma not to feel it. No matter how great of a fuujutsu-shi, the use of fuu-jutsu could not deceive Kazuma. This was simply not a question of the difference in distance of abilities, but the rules are simply thus.

But what now occurred was just that impossible situation. Kazuma immediately broke off his thoughts, focusing towards the thing in the sky.

“What’s… that thing...?”

A really small thing, maybe smaller than 20 mm, was floating in the sky about 20-30 meters above. Nearby it, five things rose and flew out.

“Someone’s hand…? Doesn’t seem so... red leaves…?

No matter how he looked, it didn’t seem like it was flying in the sky. It wasn't controlling the wind. With a questioning look, suddenly Kazuma discovered what that thing really was.

It was a human hand. A strange human hand was flying in the sky. Even recognizing it didn’t solve anything, it still couldn’t change the fact that 3 people had been killed.

(Anyways, first let’s defeat it!)

Using a voice that could only be heard by himself, he mumbled. The thing that looked like a hand flew into the upper sky —— then disappeared.

“Wait! What are you actually thinking!?”

Kazuma protested towards the wind spirit, this was clearly against the agreement. But the spirit made only an uncertain sound, and it couldn’t tell Kazuma the actual place of the disappeared hand.

“What is going on…”

The miserable condition in front of his eyes —— the divided in two Fuuga practitioner and the separated corpses of Shingo and Takeya —— with it like this, it seems just like it was done by Kazuma.

The spirit disobeyed the covenant? —— impossible.

To Kazuma, if he were to hear this kind of situation from someone else, he would be quite skeptical of the mental state of that person. This was why what just happened was a very irregular situation.

The spirits do have cognizant qualities. [Initial Principle] —— it was when the world was first created, don’t know by whom, but immutable laws were also created towards this existential world—— and they obey them, allowing this world to remain in this kind of shape and reality. Just like bees have to live in a beehive, just like one part of himself recognizes him, one part, even if it had intelligence, it would still be impossible for it to think. Of course it’s impossible for it to have the type of free will to break a covenant.

If the spirits had the free will to move about, then the laws of science would be broken. The world would be destroyed within 3 days.

All the wind spirits should obey Kazuma. [What belongs to Him] The covenant certainly reflected this kind of meaning. For example—— “That’s impossible…”

Kazuma thought of the worst-case scenario, and weakly sighed saying.

(There’s someone like me? No way…)

Just thinking about it brought shivers not from cold, but it couldn’t be said to be good luck —— no matter what, Kazuma didn’t want to think that—— but right then it wasn't the best time to stop and think.

That was because he sensed a huge amount of fire spirits coming towards here.

(This time even Ifrit has come? Crap, when did Japan become a world of youma!?)

Even before he finished talking, a situation appeared that Kazuma could not have predicted.

What appeared was a shoujo(young girl). She had red flames and eyes where hatred-filled fire resided, holding in her right hand was accumulated power ——

“Kazuma —— !!”

The strength of the fire spirits that gathered in her right hand had already crystallized. Ayano seemed to have made up her mind in that instant.

Chop!!

Entering the rapidly retreating Kazuma’s eyes was Ayano, swinging the red sword that was, for the Kannagi clan, more important than anything else. It was also the thing that had made his life very chaotic.

Faced with the godly sword that, no matter what, he would like to escape from; Kazuma saw this and yelled.

“Enraiha!? Are you Ayano!?”

The only answer was a sword flash from Enraiha. As he was faced with Ayano, who was filled with killing intent and not listening to anything, he tried really hard to explain.

“Hey, hey wait a moment, this is a misunderstanding! They weren’t killed by me… hey; you should listen to what other people are saying!”

As flaming white fireballs continuously approached, Kazuma kept dodging and speaking, but Ayano seemed like she couldn't hearing it at all.

Because the esteemed Masato had been killed, Ayano was already too angry and had already forgotten herself. She really had no time to listen to people talking. Furthermore, given what her otou-san had told her, this guy is quite suspicious.

Dang!!

“Hey!!!”

Believing that he had already evaded the fireball, it suddenly exploded, blocking Kazuma’s retreat. Noticing, Ayano used the time that the explosion sealed off the way, to appear in front of his eyes swinging the Enraiha.

“Uncle’s revenge!!”

“!!”

With that, she began the motion for a two part strike with the intent of splitting Kazuma like bamboo, but he escaped by shifting his body sideways then using his palms to pressure the sword handle near the top. Faced with Ayano’s fiery anger, her face covered with blood, he yelled.

“Otou-san —— Genma died?”

However, before he finished saying such, he figured that it was a mistake; even though Ayano and Genma’s relationship wasn’t so bad from what could be seen from the outside, certainly if Genma were to die Ayano would not get revenge for him.

A person appeared in his head, a man, “uncle”, from the Oogami family that Ayano had been very close to.

The name probably was —— like!!

“—— bam”

Suddenly Ayano butted her head upwards and heavily hit Kazuma’s chin. Because of his pondering, his reflexes were slower; even though it was quickly evaded, the hit still caused his head to be dizzy and painful.

Even though he was dizzy, he still calmly asked.

“Oogami Masato died?

Ayano's face became even more somber; furthermore, she forcefully focused more strength into the Enraiha in her hand; such that, from a distance, it could be clearly seen.

(Seems like the opposite effect occurred…)

He shrugged his shoulders, faced with this person filled with such emotion; he had no more questions to ask. Faced with this confused, angry little girl, anything he did would be useless.

But, she couldn’t be killed. If he was to hurt her, this fool’s father, Juugo, would probably completely recognize him as an enemy. This had to be avoided.

This was not because he feared Juugo, who was the Kannagi clan’s historically strongest practitioner. But because as “Kannagi Kazuma”, Juugo could be said to be his only ally. In order not to create sorrow for him, there was only one method.

“Ah—— Ayano-chan? I’m —— leaving then, the issue with cleaning up the corpses will be left to you. Then see-ya.”

Prettily avoiding the completely tenacious approaching flames, Kazuma decided to escape.

“——Wait, Wait a second!”

Kazuma, with his back towards Ayano who wanted to stop him, leaped up, surrounded by wind, and flew upwards about 10 meters, then suddenly disappeared.

“What—— where at?”

Right above her, as she kept looking around, Kazuma floated along.

Employing the air to change the reflection rate of light, Kazuma became see-through, just as if wearing a transparent robe. If one looked closely, one could see the parts where waves were created by high heat, but Ayano, who was being controlled by anger and had forgotten herself, did not.

Kazuma took no pleasure in watching the troubled Ayano, but was thinking about what to do later on.

What he realized then was that the guilty person who killed Shingo and Takeya, no matter how you described it, was Kazuma, furthermore, apparently, he had also killed Oogami Masato.

(They want to enter into a complete war with the Kannagi clan? If that’s the case, it might be quite interesting, allowing people to get excited… then, how will it progress?)

Hehe, hmmhmmhmm.

Kazuma burst out laughing. The Kannagi clan and the mysterious fuujutsu-shi, two of the strongest things already assaulting his life; of course, Kazuma could not ignore this.


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