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…''Oushuu has long been wary of outsiders.
 
…''Oushuu has long been wary of outsiders.
   
They had historical connections from long ago, so they had been able to handle everything through peaceful discussions.
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They had historical connects from long ago, so they had been able to handle everything through peaceful discussions.
   
 
“In the Age of Dawn before the Testament was made, Oushuu is said to have been the site of the most intense fighting in the war over the Far East’s land. That fighting was treated as an early recreation of the later eastern expeditions of the successive imperial courts, so a relatively peaceful age began on the Far Eastern side of things. But with the confusion of the Kamakura Shogunate’s establishment and the Harmonic Unification War, it became a dangerous region once more. Especially since the collapse of the many Harmonic regions caused a resonance that affected the surrounding Far Eastern ley lines. That attuned the Far Eastern land with the Harmonic regions, making them just as frigid.”
 
“In the Age of Dawn before the Testament was made, Oushuu is said to have been the site of the most intense fighting in the war over the Far East’s land. That fighting was treated as an early recreation of the later eastern expeditions of the successive imperial courts, so a relatively peaceful age began on the Far Eastern side of things. But with the confusion of the Kamakura Shogunate’s establishment and the Harmonic Unification War, it became a dangerous region once more. Especially since the collapse of the many Harmonic regions caused a resonance that affected the surrounding Far Eastern ley lines. That attuned the Far Eastern land with the Harmonic regions, making them just as frigid.”
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Since they were on the move, in a way, he was not with them. His objective remained unchanged, so he only needed to watch.
 
Since they were on the move, in a way, he was not with them. His objective remained unchanged, so he only needed to watch.
   
''But,'' thought Neshinbara. ''What if he found a way to do more than watch and actually took part? Would we no longer have anything like Mikatagahara happen?
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''But,'' thought Neshinbara. ''What if he found a way to do more than watch and actually take part? Would we no longer have anything like Mikatagahara happen?
   
 
''I do wonder. Am I viewing him as too much of a hero? But he’s still peeping and doing stupid things. When he leaves these meetings, he keeps smiling and doing weird things like he always has.
 
''I do wonder. Am I viewing him as too much of a hero? But he’s still peeping and doing stupid things. When he leaves these meetings, he keeps smiling and doing weird things like he always has.
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“I need to pull myself together.”
 
“I need to pull myself together.”
   
She knew she would find herself at the negotiating table or in a meeting once more. And once that happened, she wanted to avoid doing anything like what Aoi had admonished her about.
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She knew she would find herself at the negotiating table or in a meeting once more. And once that happened, she wanted to avoid doing anything like Aoi had admonished her about.
   
 
…''And what about you?
 
…''And what about you?
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…''What is this?
 
…''What is this?
   
She could not put it in words, but something still seemed different in the bottom of her heart.
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She could not put it in words, but something still seemed different in the bottom of her hear.t
   
 
She wanted something other than this cool breeze.
 
She wanted something other than this cool breeze.

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