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Keeping some distance away from that dog, ''Grrrrrrrr...'', he growled threateningly. <!--This is a special case, as it already describes him as growling in the sentence, and as such, I shall leave it the way it is.-->
 
Keeping some distance away from that dog, ''Grrrrrrrr...'', he growled threateningly. <!--This is a special case, as it already describes him as growling in the sentence, and as such, I shall leave it the way it is.-->
   
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That black dog...limping all the while...ran away.
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That black dog...limping away...ran away.
   
 
"...Did you hit?"
 
"...Did you hit?"

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