Editing Hidan no Aria:Volume6 Chapter4
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Keeping some distance away from that dog, ''Grrrrrrrr...'', he growled threateningly. <!--This is a special case, as it already describes him as growling in the sentence, and as such, I shall leave it the way it is.--> |
Keeping some distance away from that dog, ''Grrrrrrrr...'', he growled threateningly. <!--This is a special case, as it already describes him as growling in the sentence, and as such, I shall leave it the way it is.--> |
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β | That black dog...limping |
+ | That black dog...limping away...ran away. |
"...Did you hit?" |
"...Did you hit?" |