Editing HEAVY OBJECT:Volume4 Chapter 3

Jump to navigation Jump to search

Warning: You are not logged in. Your IP address will be publicly visible if you make any edits. If you log in or create an account, your edits will be attributed to your username, along with other benefits.

The edit can be undone. Please check the comparison below to verify that this is what you want to do, and then save the changes below to finish undoing the edit.

Latest revision Your text
Line 901: Line 901:
 
(We were deployed because those impudent ideas of his reached a level where they violated our religious rules. But our reasoning means nothing to the Legitimacy Kingdom. We cannot avoid a conflict here.)
 
(We were deployed because those impudent ideas of his reached a level where they violated our religious rules. But our reasoning means nothing to the Legitimacy Kingdom. We cannot avoid a conflict here.)
   
“Maria, Rachel.” Sarasa gave instructions to her subordinates over the radio. “We must finish them off quickly. Prepare your 50 mm mortar. I will intentionally fire well off target. Once they know we are using short-range sniper rifles, they will assume we cannot hit them at this range and grow negligent. Fire at them once their heads surface.
+
“Maria, Rachel.” Sarasa gave instructions to her subordinates over the radio. “We must finish them off quickly. Prepare your 50 mm mortar. I will intentionally fire well off target. Once they know we are using short-range sniper rifles, they will assume we cannot hit them at this range and grow negligent. Fire at them once their heads surface.
   
 
“Understood. We can hold the mortar one-handed, so the setup takes no time at all.”
 
“Understood. We can hold the mortar one-handed, so the setup takes no time at all.”
Line 939: Line 939:
 
[[Image:HO_v04_14.jpg|thumb]]
 
[[Image:HO_v04_14.jpg|thumb]]
   
“You can have his head,” replied the Legitimacy Kingdom soldier immediately. “We just need to get DNA evidence. After Oldnick is dead, we’ll give you some time. You can chop off his head, but leave the rest of him for us. We’ll retrieve that.”
+
“You can have his head,” replied the Legitimacy Kingdom soldier immediately. “We just need to get DNA evidence. After Oldnick is dead, we’ll give you some time. You can chop of his head, but leave the rest of him for us. We’ll retrieve that.”
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
Line 979: Line 979:
 
With an explosion, the steel door was blown off its hinges and into the room. It did not hit Oldnick directly, but the shockwave seemed to have hit him. They saw him thrown forcefully against the communications equipment inside.
 
With an explosion, the steel door was blown off its hinges and into the room. It did not hit Oldnick directly, but the shockwave seemed to have hit him. They saw him thrown forcefully against the communications equipment inside.
   
Heivia fired his rifle into the now-doorless entrance and sparks flew from several devices within. But Oldnick moved his unsteady legs and ran towards the staircase further within the facility.
+
Heivia fired his rifle into the now-doorless entrance and sparks flew from several devices within. But Oldnick moved his unsteady legs and rand towards the staircase further within the facility.
   
 
“That persistent bastard!!” shouted Heivia as he ran for the stairs after Oldnick.
 
“That persistent bastard!!” shouted Heivia as he ran for the stairs after Oldnick.
Line 1,053: Line 1,053:
 
The type of explosive and distance from the explosive were also important factors, but Heivia had seen a report saying the deadliness of an explosive blast differed by over 70% depending on whether the target was standing or lying down.
 
The type of explosive and distance from the explosive were also important factors, but Heivia had seen a report saying the deadliness of an explosive blast differed by over 70% depending on whether the target was standing or lying down.
   
Oldnick tried to pull up his hurting body, but it would not move the way he wanted it to. The old man could only breathe heavily as he lay on the ground.
+
Oldnick tried to pull up his hurting body, but it would not move the way he wanted it do. The old man could only breathe heavily as he lay on the ground.
   
 
“You…idiot. Do you not know a good deal when you see one!?” said the old man.
 
“You…idiot. Do you not know a good deal when you see one!?” said the old man.
Line 1,189: Line 1,189:
 
(A portion of the steel facility was vaporized!?)
 
(A portion of the steel facility was vaporized!?)
   
The metal had turned into a hot vapor, had been sprayed across the giant float, and then had cooled and hardened there. That made the surface of the float shine like it had been silver-plated.
+
The metal had turned into a hot vapor, had been sprayed cross the giant float, and then had cooled and hardened there. That made the surface of the float shine like it had been silver-plated.
   
 
(God dammit…)
 
(God dammit…)
Line 1,357: Line 1,357:
 
The princess was targeting the ocean surface below the Deep Optical. A crater several dozen meters across was created and a spray of water that was closer to an explosive blast than a wave dyed the air white.
 
The princess was targeting the ocean surface below the Deep Optical. A crater several dozen meters across was created and a spray of water that was closer to an explosive blast than a wave dyed the air white.
   
The Deep Optical floated in the air using its air cushions, but it could still be greatly affected by the condition of the ocean surface.
+
The Deep Optical floated in the air using its air cushions, but it could still be greatly affect by the condition of the ocean surface.
   
 
As more and more metal shells were fired, the Deep Optical very nearly capsized.
 
As more and more metal shells were fired, the Deep Optical very nearly capsized.
Line 1,367: Line 1,367:
 
How did the Deep Optical interpret that attack?
 
How did the Deep Optical interpret that attack?
   
Had the Baby Magnum been attempting to slow the Deep Optical’s evasive speed by destroying its footing?
+
Had the Baby Mangum been attempting to slow the Deep Optical’s evasive speed by destroying its footing?
   
 
Had the Baby Magnum been trying to damage the delicate equipment within the Deep Optical by shaking the entire Object?
 
Had the Baby Magnum been trying to damage the delicate equipment within the Deep Optical by shaking the entire Object?
Line 1,639: Line 1,639:
 
She could hardly be blamed for being confused.
 
She could hardly be blamed for being confused.
   
An explosion had suddenly occurred amongst the frames that made up a large portion of the plant. And the explosion did not spread out evenly. It was vertical. A few of the frames were blown to pieces and a pillar of water shot a few dozen meters straight up into the air.
+
An explosion had suddenly occurred amongst the frames that made up large portion of the plant. And the explosion did not spread out evenly. It was vertical. A few of the frames were blown to pieces and a pillar of water shot a few dozen meters straight up into the air.
   
 
“Is there anything explosive there?”
 
“Is there anything explosive there?”
Line 1,763: Line 1,763:
 
“We still haven’t gotten the white flag signal from the Capitalist Corporations. It seems they still wish to fight,” replied the princess.
 
“We still haven’t gotten the white flag signal from the Capitalist Corporations. It seems they still wish to fight,” replied the princess.
   
“Sink their lifeboats or something. They’ll change their minds once they see firsthand that nothing but a watery grave awaits them if they don't surrender here.”
+
“Sink their lifeboats or something. They’ll change their minds once they see firsthand that nothing but a watery grave awaits them if they do surrender here.”
   
 
With that comment, Quenser headed for the bright ocean surface.
 
With that comment, Quenser headed for the bright ocean surface.

Please note that all contributions to Baka-Tsuki are considered to be released under the TLG Translation Common Agreement v.0.4.1 (see Baka-Tsuki:Copyrights for details). If you do not want your writing to be edited mercilessly and redistributed at will, then do not submit it here.
You are also promising us that you wrote this yourself, or copied it from a public domain or similar free resource. Do not submit copyrighted work without permission!

To protect the wiki against automated edit spam, we kindly ask you to solve the following CAPTCHA:

Cancel Editing help (opens in new window)

Template used on this page: