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...Well, it might be fun to see how Fuji-Nee is doing.
 
...Well, it might be fun to see how Fuji-Nee is doing.
"Yeah, if I get a chance, I'll get her back for telling Sakura those stories."
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"[line3]Yeah, if I get a chance, I'll get her back for telling Sakura those stories."
 
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"Hm? What, weren't you taking a bath?"
 
"Hm? What, weren't you taking a bath?"
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"I don't care if I'm a tiger. I'm right, aren't I? You didn't want Sakura-chan to know, right?
 
"I don't care if I'm a tiger. I'm right, aren't I? You didn't want Sakura-chan to know, right?
 
You wouldn't care if everyone else found out you wanted to be a superhero, but you're embarrassed about Sakura-chan knowing."
 
You wouldn't care if everyone else found out you wanted to be a superhero, but you're embarrassed about Sakura-chan knowing."
"Wha"
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I-I don't think so....
 
I-I don't think so....
 
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"Yeah, in that case, I'll tell her more.
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"Yeah, in that case, I'll tell her more.[l]
 
I guess you finally started to notice Sakura-chan, huh?
 
I guess you finally started to notice Sakura-chan, huh?
 
I'm worried as a teacher, but I'm quite relieved as your guardian."
 
I'm worried as a teacher, but I'm quite relieved as your guardian."
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"Of course. I'm in charge of you two, so I have to see you home. That's okay with you, right, Shirou? You'll lock up the house and go to bed after we leave, okay?"
 
"Of course. I'm in charge of you two, so I have to see you home. That's okay with you, right, Shirou? You'll lock up the house and go to bed after we leave, okay?"
 
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"All right. With Fuji-Nee, you should be fine even if a molester or a bear jumps out for you."
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"[line3]All right. With Fuji-Nee, you should be fine even if a molester or a bear jumps out for you."
 
"I don't know about that. I don't think I'd be able to beat a bear. ...No, I can't. So if that happens, I'll run back here. Then we can beat it up together and have bear stew tomorrow."
 
"I don't know about that. I don't think I'd be able to beat a bear. ...No, I can't. So if that happens, I'll run back here. Then we can beat it up together and have bear stew tomorrow."
 
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  • page0|&f.scripttitle
 ...Well, it might be fun to see how Fuji-Nee is doing.
 "[line3]Yeah, if I get a chance, I'll get her back for telling Sakura those stories."
  • page1|
 "Hm? What, weren't you taking a bath?"
 Fuji-Nee is silently peeling oranges.
 On the table are two orange skins shaped like flowers.
  • page2|
 "......"
 Is it some curse that she can't even skin an apple, but she's rather talented at artistically peeling oranges?
  • page3|
 "I decided to take it later. I just wanted to complain about those stories before I took a bath."
 "What? Come on, it's such an old story, and Sakura-chan was happy to hear it too. Instead of that... here, finish your quota. You should eat one a day."
 She takes an orange out of a small box and throws it to me.
  • page4|
 "Whoa... hey, I won't be bought off with just an orange.
  Thank God it was Sakura. Don't tell that story at school, okay? People like Issei would worry."
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 "I think Mitsuzuri-san would laugh... but I know, I won't tell anyone except Sakura-chan about your childhood."
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 "I'm saying, don't tell Sakura either. She'll just be bothered if you tell boring stories like that.  ...Well, I don't think it'll happen again, but I'll get mad if it does."
 I glare at Fuji-Nee to show her that I'm serious.
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 "Ohh, I see. I understand. So that's how it is, huh?"
 But Fuji-Nee just grins widely and she seems very pleased.
  • page8|
 "...Oh, now you're pissing me off. What are you inferring, you stupid tiger?"
 I glare at her stupid face.
  • page9|
 "I don't care if I'm a tiger. I'm right, aren't I? You didn't want Sakura-chan to know, right?
  You wouldn't care if everyone else found out you wanted to be a superhero, but you're embarrassed about Sakura-chan knowing."
 "Wha[line3]"
 I-I don't think so....
  • page10|
 "Yeah, in that case, I'll tell her more.[l]
I guess you finally started to notice Sakura-chan, huh?
  I'm worried as a teacher, but I'm quite relieved as your guardian."
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 She says so with great emotion, then she throws a whole orange into her mouth.
 Fuji-Nee can eat things as big as her fist in one bite.
 I guess it'd be an attractive quality somewhere in the Savanna, but I don't think an older woman needs such wild charms.
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 "Huh? Senpai, weren't you taking a bath?"
 And Sakura, finished with the dishes, comes into the living room.
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 "Yeah, I put it off since I wanted to tell Fuji-Nee something. Sakura, you want an orange?"
 I reach for the stack of oranges.
 It's a strange turn of events, but staying here with them should be fun too.
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 "Oh, I got some from Fujimura-Sensei just now. They were really good."
 "Sakura-chan can't eat fresh fruit.
  So she won't eat it unless you cook it or freeze it like ice cream... oh, is it almost time?"
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 "Yes. I'm done cleaning up, so I'll be heading home for today."
 "I see. Then I guess I'll leave too. Let's go, Sakura-chan. It's getting dangerous outside lately, so I'll walk home with you."
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 Fuji-Nee ceases her mass consumption of oranges and stands up.
 Her actions are almost those of a responsible elder.
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 "Uh... is that all right, Sensei?"
 "Of course. I'm in charge of you two, so I have to see you home. That's okay with you, right, Shirou? You'll lock up the house and go to bed after we leave, okay?"
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 "[line3]All right. With Fuji-Nee, you should be fine even if a molester or a bear jumps out for you."
 "I don't know about that. I don't think I'd be able to beat a bear. ...No, I can't. So if that happens, I'll run back here. Then we can beat it up together and have bear stew tomorrow."
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 Fuji-Nee smiles confidently.
 ...Yeah.
 Fuji-Nee usually does her own thing and causes havoc, but when she's acting as a teacher, she's a very responsible person.
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 "Let's go, Sakura-chan. See you tomorrow, Shirou."
 "Yes. Good night then, Senpai."
 "Yeah."
 They leave the house.
 I follow them out to the entrance and lock up the house as Fuji-Nee instructed.
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