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It was only intended as a hobby, so the dojo wasn't built for any particular purpose.
 
It was only intended as a hobby, so the dojo wasn't built for any particular purpose.
 
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"Well."
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"[line4]Well."
 
I'll warm up a bit before breakfast.
 
I'll warm up a bit before breakfast.
 
I'm not really studying martial arts, but since Father told me "if you want to be like me, you'll have to train your body first", it became my daily routine to work out.
 
I'm not really studying martial arts, but since Father told me "if you want to be like me, you'll have to train your body first", it became my daily routine to work out.
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Well, that's why I wake up early, clubs or not. It's rude for me to sleep in if you're going to be here."
 
Well, that's why I wake up early, clubs or not. It's rude for me to sleep in if you're going to be here."
 
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For me, waking up early is waking up before Sakura gets here, and sleeping in is making Sakura prepare breakfast on her ownlike today.
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For me, waking up early is waking up before Sakura gets here, and sleeping in is making Sakura prepare breakfast on her own[line3]like today.
 
Though, this has only been a habit for a year and a half or so.
 
Though, this has only been a habit for a year and a half or so.
 
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"...Huh. Is she still complaining to you about me?"
 
"...Huh. Is she still complaining to you about me?"
"Yes. She's working hard every day to beat you in archery before she graduates."
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"Yes. She's working hard every day to beat you in archery before she graduates."[l]
 
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"...Geez, she must be better than me by now. Is she just glorifying the memories? I don't mind people thinking highly of me, but I guess it depends on who they are."
 
"...Geez, she must be better than me by now. Is she just glorifying the memories? I don't mind people thinking highly of me, but I guess it depends on who they are."
"Mitsuzuri-Senpai hates losing, so she probably thinks of you as a rival."
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"Mitsuzuri-Senpai hates losing, so she probably thinks of you as a rival."[l]
 
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Sakura puts rice into a bowl as she talks.
 
Sakura puts rice into a bowl as she talks.
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"Yes. Here you go, Senpai."
 
"Yes. Here you go, Senpai."
 
Sakura hands me the bowl with a smile.
 
Sakura hands me the bowl with a smile.
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...Then.
 
...Then.
 
I'm used to this every morning, but her white fingers catch my eye.
 
I'm used to this every morning, but her white fingers catch my eye.
 
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"!!"
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"[line4]!!"
 
...How can I put this... it's troubling.
 
...How can I put this... it's troubling.
 
She must be maturing as she seems really feminine these days.
 
She must be maturing as she seems really feminine these days.
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"Senpai? Is something wrong?"
 
"Senpai? Is something wrong?"
"No, it's nothing. Don't worry, it's nothing."
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"[line3]No, it's nothing. Don't worry, it's nothing."
 
"Hm?"
 
"Hm?"
 
...Honestly.
 
...Honestly.
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The problem is not in Sakura, but me.
 
The problem is not in Sakura, but me.
 
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Frankly, Sakura is beautiful.
 
Frankly, Sakura is beautiful.
 
She's one of the best looking first years, and I'm sure there are lots of guys who want to date her.
 
She's one of the best looking first years, and I'm sure there are lots of guys who want to date her.

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  • page0|&f.scripttitle
 The Emiya house has a big dojo.
 It was built when the house was built.
 It was only intended as a hobby, so the dojo wasn't built for any particular purpose.
  • page1|
 "[line4]Well."
 I'll warm up a bit before breakfast.
 I'm not really studying martial arts, but since Father told me "if you want to be like me, you'll have to train your body first", it became my daily routine to work out.
  • page2|
 "...Ninety-nine, one hundred..."
 I finish my routine sit-ups and change out of my gi into my uniform.
 I slept in this morning, so I cut short of my workout.
 Some sit-ups with no stretching should be enough.
 I'm not the kind to build up a lot of muscle, and it's not like I want to get into a fight.
  • page3|
 All I need is enough athletic ability to handle sudden accidents, and to move as I wish when I have to.
 After all, the thing I want to become is the complete opposite of an athlete.
  • page4|
 "...Oh, this late already?"
 I put the sweaty gi into the laundry basket.
 It's 6:20.
 In our house, even this is a late time for breakfast.
  • page5|
 Breakfast is already prepared.
 I can smell the elegant scent of breakfast befitting Sakura.
  • page6|
 "Breakfast is ready, Senpai."
 "Yeah, thanks... sorry, you had to do more work because I slept in."
  • page7|
 "No, it's no work at all. Besides, you didn't sleep in. This is early for you since you're not in any clubs."
  • page8|
 "Clubs have nothing to do with it. When you bring clubs into it, you have to wake up early to come here when you have morning practice."
 "Ah... no, I'm doing this because I want to, so please don't worry about my club."
  • page9|
 "Yeah, you always say that.
  Well, that's why I wake up early, clubs or not. It's rude for me to sleep in if you're going to be here."
  • page10|
 For me, waking up early is waking up before Sakura gets here, and sleeping in is making Sakura prepare breakfast on her own[line3]like today.
 Though, this has only been a habit for a year and a half or so.
  • page11|
 "Heehee. Senpai, you always put too much weight on these things. Mitsuzuri-Senpai always says you're so honest that it's annoying."
 Sakura smiles, as if remembering it.
 Mitsuzuri is the captain of the archery club Sakura is in, and someone I have a lot of acquaintance with.
  • page12|
 "...Huh. Is she still complaining to you about me?"
 "Yes. She's working hard every day to beat you in archery before she graduates."[l]
  • page13|
 "...Geez, she must be better than me by now. Is she just glorifying the memories? I don't mind people thinking highly of me, but I guess it depends on who they are."
 "Mitsuzuri-Senpai hates losing, so she probably thinks of you as a rival."[l]
  • page14|
 Sakura puts rice into a bowl as she talks.
 It's almost six thirty.
 The archery club's morning practice starts at seven.
 It's not mandatory, but she can't afford to take it easy.
  • page15|
 "Fuji-Nee... will be here soon, I guess. Well, it's her fault for not getting here on time. Well, Sakura, let's go ahead and start eating."
 "Yes. Here you go, Senpai."
 Sakura hands me the bowl with a smile.
 "[line8]"
 ...Then.
 I'm used to this every morning, but her white fingers catch my eye.
  • page16|
 "[line4]!!"
 ...How can I put this... it's troubling.
 She must be maturing as she seems really feminine these days.
 Her casual movements are beautiful and she often takes my breath away.
 Perhaps it's a reaction to not feeling anything for her until now, but I'm noticing more and more feminine characteristics in her...
  • page17|
 "Senpai? Is something wrong?"
 "[line3]No, it's nothing. Don't worry, it's nothing."
 "Hm?"
 ...Honestly.
 Why am I feeling tense around my friend's sister?
 She's a good underclassman and a junior I need to take care of.
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 First of all, the relationship between me and Matou Sakura is just that of a Senpai and a junior.
 She's the sister of a close friend of mine, but since she's a grade below me, we weren't that close.
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 It all changed a year and a half ago into this cooperative kind of relationship.
 Sakura came to cook when I was injured, and after that, I think we just ended up like this.
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 ...I think we intended to do it until my injury healed, but some trivial thing came up to make her stay with it.
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 Anyways, Sakura is a good cook, and perfect at cleaning and doing the laundry.
 It's a big help to have her helping around here in the mornings, but it's been a bit troubling recently.
 The problem is not in Sakura, but me.
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 "[line4]"
 Frankly, Sakura is beautiful.
 She's one of the best looking first years, and I'm sure there are lots of guys who want to date her.
 And on top of that, she's been growing in certain places recently and some of her casual gestures have started to catch my eye.
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 ...That's what I mean by a small problem.
 Maybe I'm just feeling guilty about being attracted to my friend's sister.
 Usually I'm fine, but when I'm caught off guard like just now, I blush... does this make me an unsuitable Senpai...?
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