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The pressure transmitted by the Psychokinesis flake made him feel like Felli herself was there, and Layfon was speechless.
 
The pressure transmitted by the Psychokinesis flake made him feel like Felli herself was there, and Layfon was speechless.
   
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Right now wasn't the occasion to talk about those kinds of things, and clearly he could resolve everything by saying a few words, but right now the reason he couldn't say those things was because of himself.
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Right now wasn't the occasion to talk about those kinds of things, and clearly he could resolve everything by saying a few words, but right now he the reason he couldn't say those things was because of himself.
   
 
Perhaps, talking about this topic might have been able to alleviate Layfon's tension.
 
Perhaps, talking about this topic might have been able to alleviate Layfon's tension.
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Nina's lightning split the flame, blowing away one by one the flame beasts that assaulted her.
 
Nina's lightning split the flame, blowing away one by one the flame beasts that assaulted her.
   
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The flame beasts were crushed, and their flame scattered and dissipated formlessly.
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he flame beasts were crushed, and their flame scattered and dissipated formlessly.
   
 
The lightning continuously advanced without stopping its momentum, and finally smashed the main body of flame.
 
The lightning continuously advanced without stopping its momentum, and finally smashed the main body of flame.
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She only looked ahead.
 
She only looked ahead.
   
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Only at that giant beast that wanted to burn the entire world, even now still constantly releasing flame.
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Only at that giant beast that wanted to burn the entire world, even not still constantly releasing flame.
   
 
"If I defeat it, everything will be over."
 
"If I defeat it, everything will be over."

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