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− | ===<noinclude>Chapter 1 - The woman warrior dances in the night - </noinclude>Part 2=== |
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“-yeah, that’s basically what happened in my dream last night… Even now, I kinda think that it might’ve been ‘real’. It seemed so damn realistic…” |
“-yeah, that’s basically what happened in my dream last night… Even now, I kinda think that it might’ve been ‘real’. It seemed so damn realistic…” |
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− | On my way to school this morning |
+ | On my way to school this morning I passed by my senpai and friend ‘Teruhiko Hiruma’ (nickname: Teru-san), so I started talking to him about the dream last night. To me it was such a topic that was so extraordinary, but when I try to explain it out in words, it’s hard to explain properly… So it ended up making no sense and a very boring topic, but even then, Teru-san listens to me watching me with his sleepy eyes hiding behind his glasses. |
“Hmm, that’s sure an interesting story.” |
“Hmm, that’s sure an interesting story.” |
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− | Then, after a minute of silence |
+ | Then, after a 1 minute of silence he said it as if he remembered just then. |
“…Yeah, that’s interesting, especially how it actually… ‘Hurt’ you.” |
“…Yeah, that’s interesting, especially how it actually… ‘Hurt’ you.” |
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“It hurts, it’s not a dream. Haven’t you ever heard of that quote?” |
“It hurts, it’s not a dream. Haven’t you ever heard of that quote?” |
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− | “I have… In manga and |
+ | “I have… In manga and drama’s… What about it?” |
“It’s a pretty old quote now… But what the quote says is true.” |
“It’s a pretty old quote now… But what the quote says is true.” |
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“Um… And?” |
“Um… And?” |
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− | “So, |
+ | “So, inside the dream, there’s no pain.” |
While saying that Teru-san starts walking. |
While saying that Teru-san starts walking. |
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− | “Inside a dream |
+ | “Inside a dream people can ‘hear’ and ‘see’. Those are the two main senses you use in a dream. Other than those, when you touch something you use ‘feeling’, and when you eat something you use ‘tasting’ and ‘smelling’.” |
− | “Yeah… You’re |
+ | “Yeah… You’re right…I do feel a lot of different things when I need to take a piss in a dream…” |
− | “The way you feel things is different for everyone. It depends on |
+ | “The way you feel things is different for everyone. It depends on which person, and what is happening. But ‘pain’ is a part of ‘feeling’, in most cases you’re not supposed to feel it…” |
− | “Yeah… You’re right |
+ | “Yeah… You’re right because, I’ve never really had a dream before which ‘hurt’ in the past…” |
− | When I |
+ | When I thought about it, I kinda feel special. The creepy experience I had ends up being a unique experience which is strange… That’s pretty unfair… |
− | “Also it’s interesting about the time… A watch came out in your dream, |
+ | “Also it’s interesting about the time… A watch came out in your dream, amd time inside a dream flows with your own thoughts, so it doesn’t count each second and each minute. Maybe the reason the time stayed the same was because of that?” |
“That makes sense…” |
“That makes sense…” |
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− | While |
+ | While impressed by Teru-san, we reached the school gate. All of a sudden, I realized that there were many other students walking around us. |
Private School Suijou Academy, the school I go to, is the biggest school in the city. |
Private School Suijou Academy, the school I go to, is the biggest school in the city. |
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− | There’s a medium school and a high school, and the |
+ | There’s a medium school and a high school, and the uniforms slightly change for the difference. I am year 1 in high school, and Teru-san is in year 2 high school. |
− | “Also Hoshi-kun, was the girl you met in the dream truly someone you don’t know? For example |
+ | “Also Hoshi-kun, was the girl you met in the dream truly someone you don’t know? For example a relative, classmate or even an idol you like?” |
− | “Well, if she was an idol |
+ | “Well, if she was an idol she was closest to, umm Yun Yuzuki?” |
“…Yuzuki… Who?” |
“…Yuzuki… Who?” |
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“She was similar but definitely not the same person. She definitely was someone I don’t know. Why do you want to know anyway?” |
“She was similar but definitely not the same person. She definitely was someone I don’t know. Why do you want to know anyway?” |
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− | “That’s pretty interesting… If you say it simply, dreams are there to tidy up your mind. And the ingredients used to create dreams are your own memories or an over exaggerated imagination of your own. So it’s actually highly likely for the girl to be someone you already know.” |
+ | “That’s pretty interesting… If you say it simply, dreams are there to tidy up your mind. And the ingredients used to create dreams are your own memories, or an over exaggerated imagination of your own. So it’s actually highly likely for the girl to be someone you already know.” |
“Is that… so…” |
“Is that… so…” |
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My voice was a lot louder than I wanted. The girl and her friend walking next to her got freaked out and turned around and looked at me with puzzled faces. |
My voice was a lot louder than I wanted. The girl and her friend walking next to her got freaked out and turned around and looked at me with puzzled faces. |
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− | I gazed the girl. The uniform, the hair, it’s exactly the same. She has the cute and young face. Even though, this is definitely the first time I’ve seen her in real life. I’ve never spoken, seen |
+ | I gazed the girl. The uniform, the hair, it’s exactly the same. She has the cute and young face. Even though, this is definitely the first time I’ve seen her in real life. I’ve never spoken, seen or heard of her before. |
“…Excuse me, but what do you want?” |
“…Excuse me, but what do you want?” |
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− | The girl gives me an annoyed stare |
+ | The girl gives me an annoyed stare. And the girl next to her seems excited. I think she has a misunderstanding about what I’m thinking… She probably is thinking that I’m gonna ask this girl out or something… Oh man I must look like an idiot. |
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“…huh?” |
“…huh?” |
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− | I thought for sure that next thing she would |
+ | I thought for sure that next thing she would shout at me. Her emotion was stoned, so I didn’t know what to do. Her wide opened eyes, stare at me with surprise. |
“…that’s…bullsh*t…” |
“…that’s…bullsh*t…” |
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− | By her reaction, is it that she also remembers me from the dream? Are you seriously saying that we actually both remember the dream? |
+ | By her reaction, is it that she also remembers me from the dream? Are you seriously saying that we actually, both remember the dream? |
My heart pounds faster and faster. Each pound makes me remember the pain I had from being smashed in the head. |
My heart pounds faster and faster. Each pound makes me remember the pain I had from being smashed in the head. |
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“Oh, ohhh, ahhh!” |
“Oh, ohhh, ahhh!” |
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− | I fall back and lose balance |
+ | I fall back, and lose balance and my hands which are wobbling around, |
“Wha-?” |
“Wha-?” |
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“-uh…!” |
“-uh…!” |
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− | I fell on the ground and hit my back. I managed to not hit my head my head |
+ | I fell on the ground and hit my back. I managed to not hit my head my head but, now the girl falls down towards me! |
I catch her with my arms, and she was a lot lighter than I thought. She proved to be just as elegant as she looks. |
I catch her with my arms, and she was a lot lighter than I thought. She proved to be just as elegant as she looks. |
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“………….” |
“………….” |
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− | She was soft and elegant. I felt that as our |
+ | She was soft, and elegant. I felt that as our body’s stacked together. The girl’s hair which was moving across my face had a great smell. |
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“Ou…Ouchh…” |
“Ou…Ouchh…” |
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The girl quickly tries to get up, and I try to help out by holding her and- |
The girl quickly tries to get up, and I try to help out by holding her and- |
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She is in a horseback riding position above my waist. And my hand is touching her- |
She is in a horseback riding position above my waist. And my hand is touching her- |
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− | The hand which tried to hold her up is on the girl’s breast. The soft lump touching my palm softly bounces a bit with the squishy feeling. Our faces are close together, and if I let go I have the feeling that our lips are going to have contact, so we stared at each other for awhile. People around us were saying unwanted words as they walked past. |
+ | The hand which tried to hold her up is on, the girl’s breast. The soft lump touching my palm softly bounces a bit with the squishy feeling. Our faces are close together, and if I let go I have the feeling that our lips are going to have contact, so we stared at each other for awhile. People around us were saying unwanted words as they walked past. |
In the insecure feeling silence, the girl’s face goes all red, and she started shaking. |
In the insecure feeling silence, the girl’s face goes all red, and she started shaking. |
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“You…Freak…” |
“You…Freak…” |
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− | + | “C…Calm down, this was an accident. It wasn’t on purpose, you know that too, right?!” |
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“You pervert! You freak!” |
“You pervert! You freak!” |
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And I saw fireworks… |
And I saw fireworks… |
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− | | Back to [[7 Nights:Chapter 01 part1|Chapter 1 Part 1]] |
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− | | Return to [[7 Nights|Main Page]] |
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− | | Forward to [[7 Nights:Chapter 01 part3|Chapter 1 Part 3]] |
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