Talk:Rakuin no Monshou:Volume1 Chapter7
Note 1, there may be names I left untranslated until I can figure it out who they are based on the Chinese translation - Archmage
Note 2, I am also considering a few liberties with the text. Especially with the combat scenes. In the Chinese translation some of the words are condensed to 4 letter adages, so I have to expand a few sentences to make sense. Also, I might try to slightly deviate from the text, such as the repeat use of character's name during a string of action, replacing Obra with "gladiator" or Ryucown as "the knight" so the sentence flow would be easier
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Started changing some things but I was pressed for time. I made some inline texts, but I'll leave it up to you for now what to do with it. I'll continue checking when I have a bit more time, but good job! And, again, thanks for joining the project!
On the above Note 2 - I will check the sentence flow with the Japanese and make suggestions if I deem it necessary, so don't worry about it. And I also omit names sometimes because 'Orba picked up Orba's cup' sounds silly, so you're free to do the same. THe important thing is that the translation won't feel awkward to read.
Oh, and I'll leave grammar corrections up to the editors. --Dohma (talk) 16:25, 22 July 2013 (CDT)
- Ah, well, now I just learned how to use inline. This'll help me out, so i don't have to spam copy and paste, and can insert missing raw text in the appropriate areas. I'll start on the grammar corrections once this chapter is closed to being completed. For now, I'll either be catching up in the story, or proofing the rest of the translations --Detalz (talk) 16:48, 22 July 2013 (CDT)
On Note 3, you can just fill in the name as what you think is best for now. I personally like Rogue Syan as the romanization. It can always be fixed later, if anything. --Detalz (talk) 18:43, 23 July 2013 (CDT)
