User talk:Lan013

Editing

Please feel free to edit my works, it would help me a lot. - Lan013

I had took a quick look regarding your works and edited some. Basically it should be alright, but there's more to edit on grammer. I'm currently working on Volume 1 Chapter 5. If you got the time, let's help each other. Thanks, regards. Cheers!! -- JinXiang - Talk.

For this part "A ten point reward is awarded in a two versus two tag team match with parties’ that have equal total level values" I had simply change the term received to awarded as it sounds more of a professional type. And for this part "Regardless how many times the echoing metallic melody is being played, it will not get sick of it. The points rosed from 298 points to 308 points for Haruyuki" I had re-phased this sentence as previously it's weird and it's a new paragraph so supposely you should put who's the one that rosed the point. -- JinXiang - Talk.