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A summon?
  
A summon?
 
What is that? They mentioned it earlier.
  
What is that? They mentioned it earlier.
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Mr. Colbert shook his head, a man wearing a black lobe.
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Mr. Colbert shook his head, a man wearing a black robe.
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"That won't be allowed, Miss Valiale"
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"That won't be allowed, Miss Valiale."
 
"Why not, sir!"
  
"Why not, sir!"
 
"It is the rule. When you are promoted to a second grader, you summon =familiar spirit=
  
"It is the rule. When you are promoted to a second grader, you summon =familiar spirit=
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"You fix a future attribute in the familiar spirit which appeared by a summons
 
"You fix a future attribute in the familiar spirit which appeared by a summons
 
and advance to a specialized course by it.
  
and advance to a specialized course by it.
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You can't change the familiar spirit once you summoned it.
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You can't change the familiar spirit once you've summoned it.
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Because the familiar spirit summons of spring is a holly ceremony.
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Because the familiar spirit summons of spring is a holy ceremony.
 
Whether you like it or not, you don't have a choice but to have him as your familiar spirit."
  
Whether you like it or not, you don't have a choice but to have him as your familiar spirit."
 
"But! I have never heard of having a commoner as a familiar spirit!"
  
"But! I have never heard of having a commoner as a familiar spirit!"
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Everyone around laughed as Louise said it. Louise scowls them.
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Everyone around laughed as Louise said it. Louise scowls atthem.
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But laughing won't stop.
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But the laughing won't stop.
 
A familiar spirit summons of spring?
  
A familiar spirit summons of spring?
 
What is that?
  
What is that?
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I have no idea. What are they talking about?
  
I have no idea. What are they talking about?
 
... It has to be the new religious group. I have come to such a place.
  
... It has to be the new religious group. I have come to such a place.
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It is passable to find a chance quickly, and ran away.
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It is possible to find a chance quickly, and ran away.
 
I mean really, where is this place?
  
I mean really, where is this place?
 
Was I brought to the foreign country?
  
Was I brought to the foreign country?
 
An abduction! I was being abducted!
  
An abduction! I was being abducted!
 
Saito thought he was really in trouble.
  
Saito thought he was really in trouble.
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"This is a tradition, Miss Valiale. I can't allow any exception, He is..."
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"This is a tradition, Miss Valiale. I can't allow any exception, he is..."
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A middle-aged man who is co splaying as a wizard pointed at Saito.
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A middle-aged man who is cosplaying as a wizard pointed at Saito.
 
"He might be a commoner but as long as he was summoned by you,
  
"He might be a commoner but as long as he was summoned by you,
 
he has to be your familiar spirit. We have never had used a human as a familiar spirit in the history,
  
he has to be your familiar spirit. We have never had used a human as a familiar spirit in the history,
 
A familiar spirit summons of spring has priority over every rule.
  
A familiar spirit summons of spring has priority over every rule.
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Therefore he will be your familiar spirit"
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Therefore he will be your familiar spirit."
 
"You are kidding me..."
  
"You are kidding me..."
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Louise dropped her shoulder as she disappointed.
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Louise dropped her shoulder as she was disappointed.
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"Well, then. Continue with the ceremony"
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"Well, then. Continue with the ceremony."
 
"What? With him?"
  
"What? With him?"
 
"Yes, with him. Hurry. The next class will begin any minute.
  
"Yes, with him. Hurry. The next class will begin any minute.
 
How long do you think you are taking for summon?
  
How long do you think you are taking for summon?
 
Mistake after mistake, you have finally summoned him.
  
Mistake after mistake, you have finally summoned him.
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So hurry up and make a contract"
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So hurry up and make a contract."
   
   
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Louise stared at Saito's face as if she is being troubled.
  
Louise stared at Saito's face as if she is being troubled.
 
What is it? What is she going to do to me?
  
What is it? What is she going to do to me?
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"Hey"
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"Hey."
 
Louise called Saito.
  
Louise called Saito.
 
"Yes?"
  
"Yes?"
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"You should be appreciative. It usually never happens, done a thing like this by noble"
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"You should be appreciative. It usually never happens, done a thing like this by noble."
 
A noble? How stupid. Give me a break, a noble?
  
A noble? How stupid. Give me a break, a noble?
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You are just perverted co splaying new religious group.
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You are just a perverted cosplaying new religious group.
 
Louise closed her eyes as if she has given up.
  
Louise closed her eyes as if she has given up.
 
She shook around a little wooden stick, which is in her hand.
  
She shook around a little wooden stick, which is in her hand.
 
"My name is Louise. Fransowazu. le. Blan. de. la. Valiale. A pentagon, which holds five powers.
  
"My name is Louise. Fransowazu. le. Blan. de. la. Valiale. A pentagon, which holds five powers.
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Bless this humble, and make him become my familiar spirit"
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Bless this humble, and make him become my familiar spirit."
 
She has begun to advocate words like an incantation sonorously.
  
She has begun to advocate words like an incantation sonorously.
 
She touched Saito's forehead with a wooden stick.
  
She touched Saito's forehead with a wooden stick.
 
Then her lips were getting closer slowly.
  
Then her lips were getting closer slowly.
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"What... what are you doing?"
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"What... What are you doing?"
   
 
<<<end 17>>>
  
<<<end 17>>>
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"Just be still"
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"Just be still."
 
Louise said as if she was upset.
  
Louise said as if she was upset.
 
Louise's face is getting closer.
  
Louise's face is getting closer.
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"Hey, wait. Well, I'm... well, I'm not ready for this..."
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"Hey, wait. Well, I'm... Well, I'm not ready for this..."
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Panicked. face is gradually shaken.
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Panicked. Face is gradually shaken.
 
"Uh! I told you to be still!"
  
"Uh! I told you to be still!"
 
Louise roughly grabbed Saito's face with her left hand.
  
Louise roughly grabbed Saito's face with her left hand.
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What, what is this! This is what that contract means!
  
What, what is this! This is what that contract means!
 
The touch of soft lips confuses Saito more.
  
The touch of soft lips confuses Saito more.
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My first kiss! But was taken by this weird girl at this weird place!
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My first kiss! But it was taken by this weird girl at this weird place!
 
Saito couldn't even move, he was just lying there.
  
Saito couldn't even move, he was just lying there.
 
Louise let go of her lips.
  
Louise let go of her lips.
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"It is done"
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"It is done."
   
   
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"You have failed for =summon servant= many times, but you have managed to succeed for =contract servant="
  
"You have failed for =summon servant= many times, but you have managed to succeed for =contract servant="
 
Colbert said happily.
  
Colbert said happily.
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"She was able to make a =contract=, because he is just a commoner"
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"She was able to make a =contract=, because he is just a commoner."
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"If he was high ranked an illusion beast, she couldn't have made a =contract="
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"If he was high ranked like an illusion beast, she couldn't have made a =contract="
 
Few students laughed as they made those comments.
  
Few students laughed as they made those comments.
 
Louise scowled them.
  
Louise scowled them.
 
"Don't make a fool out of me! Even if it happens rarely, I can still do things right!"
  
"Don't make a fool out of me! Even if it happens rarely, I can still do things right!"
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"You are right it rarely happens. Louise the zero"
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"You are right, it rarely happens. Louise the zero"
 
A girl laughed at Louise, a girl with gorgeous curly hair and freckles on her face.
  
A girl laughed at Louise, a girl with gorgeous curly hair and freckles on her face.
 
"Mr. Colbert! A =flood='s mommolancey has insulted me!"
  
"Mr. Colbert! A =flood='s mommolancey has insulted me!"
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"I heard that you used to bed-wet like it was flooding! So =flood= suits you more!"
  
"I heard that you used to bed-wet like it was flooding! So =flood= suits you more!"
 
"How dare you! Louise the zero! What can you say, you are the zero!"
  
"How dare you! Louise the zero! What can you say, you are the zero!"
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"Watch it, nobles are to respect each others"
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"Watch it, nobles are to respect each others."
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A middle-aged co splaying man tried to smooth them.
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The middle-aged cosplaying man tried to stop them.
 
What are they talking about. A =contract=? =Contract servant=?
 
What are they talking about. A =contract=? =Contract servant=?
 
That instant Saito's body starts to get hot.
  
That instant Saito's body starts to get hot.
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Louise said irritate.
  
Louise said irritate.
 
"It will be over soon, just wait. =Lune as familiar spirit= is being engraved"
  
"It will be over soon, just wait. =Lune as familiar spirit= is being engraved"
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"Don't engrave it! What did you do to my body!"
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"Don't engrave it! What did you do to my body?"
 
There is nothing I could do to just quietly lying around. It is hot! Unbelievable!
  
There is nothing I could do to just quietly lying around. It is hot! Unbelievable!
 
"By the way?"
  
"By the way?"
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<<<22>>>
  
<<<22>>>
   
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"Do you think it's forgivable for commoner to use that kind of language at noble?"
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"Do you think it's forgivable for a commoner to use that kind of language at noble?"
 
However, that feeling of hot lasted only for a second.
  
However, that feeling of hot lasted only for a second.
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His body had returned to normal state.
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His body had returned to a normal state.
 
"That was quick..."
  
"That was quick..."
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A middle-aged co splaying man who is also called Colbert came to Saito who is on his knees.
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The middle-aged cosplaying man who is also called Colbert came to Saito who is on his knees.
 
And checked back of his left hand.
  
And checked back of his left hand.
 
There is un-familiar letter, which is jumping around.
  
There is un-familiar letter, which is jumping around.
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"Hummm..."
  
"Hummm..."
 
At this point, he really has lost it.
  
At this point, he really has lost it.
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"This is very rare lune"
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"This is very rare lune."
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A middles aged wizard like said.
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The middles aged wizard like said.
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"What are you, people!"
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"What are you, people?"
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Saito yelled out but no one react to it.
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Saito yelled out but no one reacted to it.
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"Well, let's go back to class, everyone"
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"Well, let's go back to class, everyone."
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A middle-aged co splaying wizard turned around then floats in the air.
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The middle-aged cosplaying wizard turned around then floats in the air.
 
Saito dropped his chin and just stared at it.
  
Saito dropped his chin and just stared at it.
   
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Other those looks like students float up in the air at once.
  
Other those looks like students float up in the air at once.
 
This is more of it can't be. A man could float in the air with magic but all of them?
  
This is more of it can't be. A man could float in the air with magic but all of them?
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He looked for a wire. Looked for a crane. But surrounding area is a large grassy plain.
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He looked for a wire. Looked for a crane. But the surrounding area is a large grassy plain.
 
There are nothing to suggest there are tricks or setups.
  
There are nothing to suggest there are tricks or setups.
 
Everyone who float up in the air flew towards that stone walled castle quietly.
  
Everyone who float up in the air flew towards that stone walled castle quietly.
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"That commoner is just what you need!"
  
"That commoner is just what you need!"
 
They made those comment as they flew away.
  
They made those comment as they flew away.
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The ones who was left behind was a girl named Louise and Saito.
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The ones who was left behind was the girl named Louise and Saito.
 
Louise took a deep breath as soon as there were only two of them.
  
Louise took a deep breath as soon as there were only two of them.
 
Then she looked at Saito and yelled at him.
  
Then she looked at Saito and yelled at him.
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"What are you!"
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"What are you?"
 
Saito got mad. He thought that is his line.
  
Saito got mad. He thought that is his line.
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"Who are you! Where is this place! What are you all! Why you fly!
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"Who are you? Where is this place? What are you all? Why you fly?
   
 
<<<end 23>>>
  
<<<end 23>>>
 
<<<24>>>
  
<<<24>>>
   
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What did you to my body!"
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What did you to my body?"
 
"I don't know which country you are from but I will explain it to you"
  
"I don't know which country you are from but I will explain it to you"
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"A country? This is a country! A Tokyo is nothing like this!"
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"A country? This is a country? Tokyo is nothing like this!"
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"A Tokyo? What is that? What country is it?"
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"Tokyo? What is that? What country is it?"
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"Japan"
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"Japan."
 
"What? I have never heard of it before"
  
"What? I have never heard of it before"
 
"Oh please! But what are they flying! You saw it too! They flew! They all did!"
  
"Oh please! But what are they flying! You saw it too! They flew! They all did!"
 
But Louise is not affected by it at all.
  
But Louise is not affected by it at all.
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Instead, she seems... what's wrong with flying?
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Instead, she seems... What's wrong with flying?
 
"Of course they do, what we going to do if Maige couldn't fly"
  
"Of course they do, what we going to do if Maige couldn't fly"
 
"A maige? What is this place!"
  
"A maige? What is this place!"
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"This is Tristein! And this is a much known Tristein magic school!"
  
"This is Tristein! And this is a much known Tristein magic school!"
 
"A magic school?"
  
"A magic school?"
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"Ifm a second grader Louise. de. la. Valiale. I am your master now own. Remember that!"
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"I'm a second grader Louise. de. la. Valiale. I am your master from now on. Remember that!"
   
 
<<<24 end>>>
  
<<<24 end>>>
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He felt something really unpleasant about this situation.
  
He felt something really unpleasant about this situation.
 
"Excuse me... Louise-san"
  
"Excuse me... Louise-san"
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"What"
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"What?"
 
"Was I really summoned?"
  
"Was I really summoned?"
 
"I told you so, so many times. Over and over again. Just give up. I will give up too.
  
"I told you so, so many times. Over and over again. Just give up. I will give up too.
 
Why is my familiar spirit is a creature, which is not so cool...
  
Why is my familiar spirit is a creature, which is not so cool...
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I wanted to have something cool. Like dragon, Griffon, or Manteca.
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I wanted to have something cool. Like a dragon, griffon, or manteca.
 
At least an eagle or an owl."
  
At least an eagle or an owl."
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"A dragon and Griffon? What do you mean?"
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"A dragon and griffon? What do you mean?"
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"I was just saying that I wish that was my familiar spirit"
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"I was just saying that I wish that was my familiar spirit."
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"Do they really exist!"
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"Do they really exist?"
 
"They do, why?"
  
"They do, why?"
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"You are kidding me?"
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"You are kidding me."
 
Saito said it as he laughed. But Louise is not laughing.
  
Saito said it as he laughed. But Louise is not laughing.
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"Well, you probably have never seen them before"
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"Well, you probably have never seen them before."
 
Louise said it with disappointment in her voice.
  
Louise said it with disappointment in her voice.
 
She doesn't look like she is joking.
  
She doesn't look like she is joking.
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Maijis those flew away from here and those fantasy word connect.
  
Maijis those flew away from here and those fantasy word connect.
 
He felt chill on his spine. And he has cold sweat running.
  
He felt chill on his spine. And he has cold sweat running.
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"I thought maybe... since they flew. Are you people really witches and wizards?"
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"I thought maybe... Since they flew. Are you people really witches and wizards?"
 
"Yes we are, if you understand it, let go of my shoulder!
  
"Yes we are, if you understand it, let go of my shoulder!
 
You shouldn't even be talking to me!"
  
You shouldn't even be talking to me!"
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A dream... this is a dream...
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A dream... This is a dream...
 
Slowly his strength left him from his waist and Saito got on his knees.
  
Slowly his strength left him from his waist and Saito got on his knees.
 
He said with voice with no strength.
  
He said with voice with no strength.
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"Louise"
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"Louise."
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"Don't call me by name"
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"Don't call me by name."
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"Hit me"
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"Hit me."
 
"What?"
  
"What?"
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"Hit my head as hard as you can"
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"Hit my head as hard as you can."
 
"Why?"
  
"Why?"
 
"I want to wake up from this dream now. I will wake up from this dream and get online.
  
"I want to wake up from this dream now. I will wake up from this dream and get online.
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Tonight's dinner is Hamburg, My mother mentioned it."
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Tonight's dinner is hamburger. My mother mentioned it."
 
"Get online?"
  
"Get online?"
   

Revision as of 07:08, 20 August 2006

Translators Note

Cala's note: Anything in italics should be given a second look at the meaning/wording.


  • Second part will come soon.

Onizuka-gto 07:36, 19 August 2006 (PDT)


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