Difference between revisions of "Kara no Kyoukai:Chapter01 00"

Latest revision as of 17:36, 27 March 2020

That day, I chose to take the main street home.

It was just a whim, and a very rare thing for me to do.

Walking woodenly along the building-lined street that I was tired of seeing day in and day out, someone came crashing down.

It was a squishing sound that isn't usually heard.

The person lying on the pavement, broken, had obviously died from falling off a building.

A crimson color slowly seeped onto the concrete.

The only features that remained were the dark black hair and the pale, thin, fragile-looking limbs.

And that featureless, crushed face.

The whole scene reminded me of a pressed flower, flattened between the covers of a heavy tome.

Probably because the corpse, with only its neck bent like a fetus, looked like a broken lily to me.

／Overlooking View (Thanatos) -Fujoh Kirie-

Return to Main Page

@@ Line 1: / Line 1: @@
 That day, I chose to take the main street home.
-It was just on a whim; a very rare thing for me to do.
+It was just a whim, and a very rare thing for me to do.
-Walking woodenly along the building street that I was tired of seeing, someone fell.
-It was a squishing sound that you normally never hear.
+Walking woodenly along the building-lined street that I was tired of seeing day in and day out, someone came crashing down.
-The person obviously died from falling off a building.
-A crimson color spread across the pavement.
+It was a squishing sound that isn't usually heard.
-The only features that remained were the dark, black hair and the thin, white fragile arms and legs.
+The person lying on the pavement, broken, had obviously died from falling off a building.
+A crimson color slowly seeped onto the concrete.
+The only features that remained were the dark black hair and the pale, thin, fragile-looking limbs.
 And that featureless, crushed face.
-The whole scene reminded me of a flattened flower, tucked between the pages of an old book.
+The whole scene reminded me of a pressed flower, flattened between the covers of a heavy tome.
+Probably because the corpse, with only its neck bent like a fetus, looked like a broken lily to me.
-Probably because the corpse, with only the head deformed like a baby's, looked like a broken lily to me...
 ／Overlooking View (Thanatos) -Fujoh Kirie-