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===Chapter Two: Saito Goes Shopping in the Triumphant Town===
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===Chapter Two: Her Majesty's Melancholy===
   
 
Wardes woke up. He tried to get up and frowned. Wondering, he looked at the bandage that was rolled up around his body.
 
Wardes woke up. He tried to get up and frowned. Wondering, he looked at the bandage that was rolled up around his body.
   
''Where am I? I am sure I was hit by the magic from the flying machine that Gandálfr piloted and lost consciousness.''
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''Where am I? I am sure I was hit by the magic from the flying machine that Gandalfr piloted and lost consciousness.''
   
He looked around. It was a plain room with a wooden floor and walls, a bed and one desk. There was a pendant on the desk, which he used to wear around his neck. Seeing a pitcher, he reached out for it. But he could not reach it, as his body still ached all over. At that moment, the door opened up and he saw a familiar face.
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He looked around. It was a plain room with a wooden floor and walls, a bed and one desk. There was a pendant on the desk, which he hung around his neck. Seeing a pitcher, he reached out for it. But he could not reach it, as his body still ached all over. At that moment, the door opened up and he saw a familiar face.
   
 
“Oh, you've regained consciousness.”
 
“Oh, you've regained consciousness.”
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“Was I shot by a 'Gun'? Is this the power of a ‘Gun’?”
 
“Was I shot by a 'Gun'? Is this the power of a ‘Gun’?”
   
A gun is a weapon that commoners use. The pressure of the gunpowder, ignited by the spark of the flint, pushes a round bullet out of the weapon. Although its power in short distance is superior to the bow's, the need to load the bullet and gunpowder separately makes it hard to fire quickly. In addition, the hit accuracy is not better than a bow’s either. A gun’s great advantage is that you don’t need any additional practice to use it. It isn’t a great weapon for a mage.
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Gun is a weapon that commoners use. The pressure of the gunpowder, ignited by the spark of the flint, pushes a round bullet out of the weapon. Although it's power in the short distance is superior to the bow's, the need to load the bullet and gunpowder separately makes it hard to fire quickly. In addition, the hit accuracy is not better than a bow’s either. A gun’s great advantage is that you don’t need any additional practice to use it. It isn’t a great weapon for a mage.
   
 
“Really? You didn’t even know the weapon that defeated you? What a careless man.”
 
“Really? You didn’t even know the weapon that defeated you? What a careless man.”
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Saying so, Fouquet scooped soup with the spoon and carried it to Wardes's mouth.
 
Saying so, Fouquet scooped soup with the spoon and carried it to Wardes's mouth.
   
Wardes thought, ''It must be that strange flying machine that Gandálfr used…''
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Wardes thought, ''It must be that strange flying machine that Gandalfr used…''
   
 
Not only could it fly very quickly, but it also was equipped with a 'Gun' that could fire in rapid succession.
 
Not only could it fly very quickly, but it also was equipped with a 'Gun' that could fire in rapid succession.
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''And Sacred Emperor Cromwell's manipulation of strange magic…''
 
''And Sacred Emperor Cromwell's manipulation of strange magic…''
   
Even if he was going to follow Cromwell and go to the Holy Land, his plan might not work out, remembering that the whole fleet was destroyed by just one person.
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Even if he was going to follow Cromwell and go to the 'Sacred Ground’, his plan might not work out, remembering that the whole fleet was destroyed by just one person.
   
 
“Hey, the soup's getting cold.”
 
“Hey, the soup's getting cold.”
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Fouquet, in an exasperated tone, said to Wardes. He was lost in his own thoughts.
 
Fouquet, in an exasperated tone, said to Wardes. He was lost in his own thoughts.
   
“Where is this place?” Wardes inquired, not giving the soup a glance.
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“Where is this place?”
   
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Wardes inquired, not giving the soup a glance.
“Albion. This is a temple located on the outskirt of Londinium, in which I had been in service in the past. Good thing you were able to return in one piece, you have to thank me for that.”
 
   
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“Albion. The temple on the outskirt of Rondei Niumu, which I had been in service in past. Good thing you were able to return in one piece, you have to thank me for that.”
“Albion? What happened to the military invasion?
 
   
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“Albion? What happened to the the military invasion?
“Aah, I guess you didn't know the circumstances because you were out. It was a complete failure. After the airship fleet's annihilation, Albion’s army was routed. Geez, ‘Sure Victory’ my ass. If you couldn't defeat Tristain, whose numbers you vastly overpowered, you'll probably have a hard time recapturing the Holy Land.”
 
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“Aah, I guess you didn't know the circumstances because you were out. It was a complete failure. After the airship fleet's annihilation, Albion’s army was routed. Geez,‘Sure Victory’my ass. If you couldn't defeat Tristain, whose number you vastly overpowered, you'll probably have a hard time recapturing the Sacred Ground.”
   
 
“I didn't know you joined the invasion troops as well. You should have told me about it.”
 
“I didn't know you joined the invasion troops as well. You should have told me about it.”
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Fouquet was amazed.
 
Fouquet was amazed.
   
“I actually informed you! I was dispatched there as a scout unit because Albion's army was unfamiliar with the foreign country's geography! It seems you are the type that forget things which don't interest you!”
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“I actually informed you! I was sent there as a scout unit because Albion's army was unfamiliar about the foreign country's geography! It seems you are the type that forget things which don't interest you!”
   
 
“Is that so? Aah, that’s right. Sorry.”
 
“Is that so? Aah, that’s right. Sorry.”
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Wardes pointed at the table.
 
Wardes pointed at the table.
   
“Can you bring that pendant to me?
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“Please bring me that pendant.
   
The pendant was a silver locket. Fouquet brought the pendant to Wardes. He took it and he put it on his neck.
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The pendant was a silver locket. Wardes took it from Fouquet and put it on his neck.
   
 
“Is it very important to you?”
 
“Is it very important to you?”
   
“Not exactly, but it calms me down.”
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“Well, it calms me down.”
   
 
“She's a very beautiful woman.”
 
“She's a very beautiful woman.”
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“You saw it?”
 
“You saw it?”
   
“Yes, by impulse. You were holding to it tightly in your sleep, so it made me curious.”
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“Yes, although it was by accident. While you were unconscious, you were gripping it tightly in your hand. Don’t worry, I won't tell anyone.”
   
“As expected from a thief.”
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“To notice something like that...As expected from a thief.”
   
“So tell me, who is that person? Your significant other?”
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“Hey, who is that? A lover?”
   
 
Fouquet asked Wardes while bending herself forward. Wardes said in an unpleasant voice,
 
Fouquet asked Wardes while bending herself forward. Wardes said in an unpleasant voice,
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“She's my mother.”
 
“She's my mother.”
   
“Your mother? Your looks deceived me, I didn't know you had a mother complex. Do you live with her?”
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“Your mother? Have you been living with her?”
   
“Not anymore. Either way, it is none of your business.”
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“Not any longer. Either way, it is not your business.”
   
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“Pardon me, you-san this you-san that, what san!” <!><!--Yes sir, no sir, three bags full sir! might be appropriate in this case-->
“After nursing you, that's the attitude you return?”
 
   
At that moment, the door opened with a clank. It was Cromwell, accompanied by Sheffield.
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At that moment, the room door opened with a clank. It was Cromwell, accompanied by Sheffield.
   
Seeing Wardes, he smiled thinly. ''That smile never changes. Just like a doll'', Wardes thought.
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Seeing Wardes, he smiled thinly. ''The smile that never changes. Like a doll'', Wardes thought.
   
They just experienced defeat. An unthinkable stumble at the first step of Albion's ambition. Yet the fact didn't seem to unnerve Cromwell. He was either a truly strong man or a carefree optimist. It was hard to tell.
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Such a defeat. All of their ambitions concerning Albion were crushed. Yet Cromwell didn’t seem to be shaken. He was either a truly strong man or a carefree optimist. It was hard to tell.
   
 
“Looks like you regained consciousness, Viscount.”
 
“Looks like you regained consciousness, Viscount.”
   
“I beseech your forgiveness, Your Excellency. I failed you not once, but twice.”
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“I am sorry, Your Excellency. I failed you not once, but twice.”
   
“But it seemed your failure was immaterial.”
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“But it seems that it wasn’t because of your failure.”
   
 
Sheffield, who was standing by Cromwell's side, nodded, then read the parchment scroll that seemed to be the report, and muttered,
 
Sheffield, who was standing by Cromwell's side, nodded, then read the parchment scroll that seemed to be the report, and muttered,
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“A sphere of light appeared in the sky and blew off our fleet.”
 
“A sphere of light appeared in the sky and blew off our fleet.”
   
“In other words, the enemy used an unknown magic against us. This was a miscalculation and it's no one's fault. If there was anyone to blame… it was our leadership's fault for not properly analyzing the enemy’s war potential. A mere soldier like you should not be blamed for that. You should just focus on recovering your health."
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“In a word, the enemy had an unknown magician with them. This was a miscalculation. It is no one’s fault. If anything… it was our leadership's fault that the enemy’s war potential was not scouted. One soldier, most of all you, should not be blamed for that."
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"Just heal your wounds, Viscount.”
   
 
Cromwell offered his hand to Wardes. Wardes kissed it.
 
Cromwell offered his hand to Wardes. Wardes kissed it.
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He shook his head. Cromwell said that ‘Void’ is an element controlling life. But how can it create such a light that would defeat an entire fleet?
 
He shook his head. Cromwell said that ‘Void’ is an element controlling life. But how can it create such a light that would defeat an entire fleet?
   
Even if it was really powerful magic, it was hard to imagine Louise having control over it.
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Even if it is really powerful magic, it was hard to imagine Louise having control over it.
   
 
“Was the ‘Void’ the source of that light? But the ‘Void’ that your Excellency talked about and that light seems to be completely different.”
 
“Was the ‘Void’ the source of that light? But the ‘Void’ that your Excellency talked about and that light seems to be completely different.”
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“It is as you say.”
 
“It is as you say.”
   
“It is said that Tristain’s army was led by Henrietta. For what reason has an inexperienced princess fought? That princess made use of the ‘Founder’s Prayer Book’. Maybe she sniffed out the sleeping secret of the Royal Family.”
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“It is said that Tristain’s army was led by Henrietta. For what reason has an inexperienced princess fought? That princess made use of the ‘Founder’s Prayer Book’. Maybe she sniffed out the sleeping secret of Royal Family.”
   
 
“What is the sleeping secret of the Royal Family?”
 
“What is the sleeping secret of the Royal Family?”
   
“The Royal Family of Albion, Royal Family of Tristain, and Royal Family of Gallia… were one branch in the beginning. And the Founder's secret was split between them. Isn’t that so, Miss Sheffield?”
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“The Royal Family of Albion, Royal Family of Tristain, and Royal Family of Gallia… was one branch in the beginning. And the Founder's secret was split to each. Isn’t that so, Miss Sheffield?”
   
 
Cromwell urged the woman at his side.
 
Cromwell urged the woman at his side.
   
“It is as Your Excellency says. The treasure that was given to Albion’s royal family was the 'Ruby of the Wind'… However, where the Ruby of the Wind disappeared to is yet to be found. Since the investigation has not ended so far.”
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“It is as Your Excellency says. The treasure that was given to Albion’s royal family was the 'Ruby of the Wind'… However, where the Ruby of the Wind disappeared is yet to be found. Since the investigation has not ended so far.”
   
Wardes watched the woman with a dubious feeling. Because her face was hidden by the deep robe, it was not possible to see her expression. Though one could think she was Cromwell's secretary… she didn’t give an impression of being just a secretary. No strong magic was sensed from her. However, because she was promoted here by Cromwell, she might have some special ability.
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Wardes watched the woman with a dubious feeling. Because her face was hid by the deep robe, it was not possible to see her expression. Though one could think she was Cromwell's secretary… she didn’t give an impression of being just a secretary. No strong magic was sensed from her. However, because she was promoted here by Cromwell, she might have some special ability.
   
“Now, Henrietta, a worshiped ‘Holy Woman’, enthroned to a queen.” Cromwell muttered.
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“Now, Henrietta, a worshiped ‘Holy Woman’, enthroned to a queen.”
   
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Cromwell muttered.
Sheffield said. “The ruler of the kingdom. The queen of the country will also get the Royal Families' secret.”
 
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Sheffield said.
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“The ruler of the kingdom. The queen of the country will also get the Royal Families' secret.”
   
 
Cromwell smiled.
 
Cromwell smiled.
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“You called, Your Excellency?”
 
“You called, Your Excellency?”
   
“I want to offer congratulations for your lover’s… the Holy Woman’s coronation. I want her to come to my castle of Londinium. However, the journey seems to be very tedious so keep her company to dispel the boredom.”
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“I want to offer congratulations for your lover’s… the Holy Woman’s coronation. I want her to come to my Rondei Niumu castle. However, the journey seems to be very tedious so keep her company to dispel the boredom.”
   
Wales muttered, “Certainly” in a monotone voice.
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Wales muttered, “Certainly” in a monotone.
   
 
“Then, Wardes-san. Take care of yourself. I will leave it up to you to invite the ‘Holy Woman’ to the dinner party and ensure her safe arrival.”
 
“Then, Wardes-san. Take care of yourself. I will leave it up to you to invite the ‘Holy Woman’ to the dinner party and ensure her safe arrival.”
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After that, Wardes regrettably buried his face in his hands.
 
After that, Wardes regrettably buried his face in his hands.
   
“Damn! I… Am I powerless? Hasn't the Holy Land slipped away again…”
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“Damn! I… Am I incapable? Hasn't the ‘Sacred Ground’ slipped away again…”
   
 
Fouquet laughed with a smile, and placed her hand on Wardes's shoulder.
 
Fouquet laughed with a smile, and placed her hand on Wardes's shoulder.
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In Tristain’s royal palace, Henrietta was waiting for her guest. Even though she was a queen, she never sat on the throne. She mostly did the king’s work.
 
In Tristain’s royal palace, Henrietta was waiting for her guest. Even though she was a queen, she never sat on the throne. She mostly did the king’s work.
   
After the coronation was finished and she became queen, the number of things to do in the domestic and foreign areas greatly increased. Some were demanding loans, some were asking it in a good nature, and Henrietta, from morning till night, was always meeting someone. And, because of the war, there were more guests than usual.
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After the coronation was finished and she became queen, the number of things to do in the domestic and foreign areas greatly increased. Some were demanding loans, some were asking it in a good nature, and Henrietta, from morning till night, was always meeting someone. And, because of the war, there are more guests than usual.
   
Because she was always straining to show her dignity, she became very tired. Even though Mazarini assisted, she had to come up with the answers herself. It was too late for Henrietta to revert back to being a princess.
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Because she was always straining to show her dignity, she became very tired. Even though Mazarini assisted, she had to put up with the answers herself. It was too late for Henrietta to revert back to being a princess.
   
 
However… for the new guest, she neither showed or made such expressions or attitude.
 
However… for the new guest, she neither showed or made such expressions or attitude.
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A refrained voice called outside the room, informing Henrietta about the guest's arrival.
 
A refrained voice called outside the room, informing Henrietta about the guest's arrival.
   
Right after that, the door opened.
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Right after, that the door opened.
   
 
Louise stood there, reverentially bowing her head. Next to her, Saito’s figure could be seen. Even now, a restraining device used to tame wild creatures was attached to his body.
 
Louise stood there, reverentially bowing her head. Next to her, Saito’s figure could be seen. Even now, a restraining device used to tame wild creatures was attached to his body.
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Henrietta ran up and embraced Louise closely. Looking up, Louise muttered.
 
Henrietta ran up and embraced Louise closely. Looking up, Louise muttered.
   
“Princess-sama… No, I have to call you Your Majesty now.”
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“Princess-sama… No, I have to call thee Your Majesty now.”
   
 
“I don’t like it when you say it so formally. Louise Francoise. Aren’t you my beloved friend?”
 
“I don’t like it when you say it so formally. Louise Francoise. Aren’t you my beloved friend?”
   
“Then, I will call you princess-sama, as usual.”
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“Then, I will call thee princess–sama, as usual.”
   
 
“Please do it for me. Aah Louise, I didn’t want to be a queen. It is twice as boring. It is three times more straining. And ten times more worrisome.”
 
“Please do it for me. Aah Louise, I didn’t want to be a queen. It is twice as boring. It is three times more straining. And ten times more worrisome.”
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“You scouted even that?”
 
“You scouted even that?”
   
“Well, since it is the war results, it is better not to overlook anything.”
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“Well, since it is the war results, it is better not to look anything over.”
   
After that, Henrietta faced Saito who was left out up till now. On the way there, he heard from Louise that Henrietta became a queen, so he felt very nervous.
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After that, Henrietta faced Saito who was left out up till now. Saito, who on the way here, heard from Louise that Henrietta became a queen, so he felt very nervous.
   
“For controlling the foreign country flight machine that destroyed the enemy’s dragon knight corps, I express my greatest gratitude.”
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“For controlling the foreign country flight machine that destroyed enemy’s dragon knight corps, I express my greatest gratitude.”
   
 
“No… it’s not like that.”
 
“No… it’s not like that.”
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But, despite his thoughts about the peerage, he didn’t open his mouth. Either way, when returning to Japan, all the titles would lose their meaning.
 
But, despite his thoughts about the peerage, he didn’t open his mouth. Either way, when returning to Japan, all the titles would lose their meaning.
   
“Great… a really great war outcome. Louise Francoise. The way the war ended is all thanks to you and your familiar. There has never been such a victory in the whole of Halkeginia’s history. By all means, Louise, you should be given a territory the size of a small country and a title of duchess for this. And your familiar awarded with a peer's title.”
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“Great… a really great war outcome. Louise Francoise. The way the war ended is all thanks to you and your familiar. There has never been such a victory in the whole of Halkeginia’s history. By all means, Louise, you should be given a territory the a size of a small country and a title of duchess for this. And your familiar awarded with a peer's title.”
   
 
"I d-don't need anything... this deed was my familiar‘s...“
 
"I d-don't need anything... this deed was my familiar‘s...“
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Louise muttered hesitatingly.
 
Louise muttered hesitatingly.
   
“Weren‘t you the cause of that light, Louise? That light was called a miracle of the castle, yet I do not believe in miracles. The light came from the flying machine that you were flying in. Aren't you the cause of it?”
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“Weren‘t you the cause of that light, Louise? The light that was called a miracle of the castle, yet I do not believe in miracles. The light came from the flying machine that you were flying in. Aren't you the cause of it?”
   
 
Henrietta intently watched Louise. It was impossible to hide anything this way.
 
Henrietta intently watched Louise. It was impossible to hide anything this way.
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“I am not from a royal Family.”
 
“I am not from a royal Family.”
   
“What are you saying, Louise? The ancestor of Duke of La Vallière was the king’s illegitimate child. And you are the Duke’s child."
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“What are you saying, Louise? The ancestor of La Valliere duke family was the king’s illegitimate child. And you are the duke’s child."
   
 
Louise was startled.
 
Louise was startled.
   
“You, too, have the Tristainian Royal Family's blood. And that is good enough.”
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“You, too, have the Tristain Royal Family's blood. And that is good enough.”
   
 
After that, Henrietta took Saito’s hand. Seeing the runes, she nodded.
 
After that, Henrietta took Saito’s hand. Seeing the runes, she nodded.
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"Is this the sign of 'Gandálfr'? The sign of the Familiar that Founder Brimir used for protection while casting spells?"
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"Is this the sign of 'Gandalfr'? The sign of the Familiar that Founder Brimir used for protection while casting spells?"
   
 
Saito nodded. Sir Osmond also said the same thing.
 
Saito nodded. Sir Osmond also said the same thing.
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Henrietta answered with a clouded face.
 
Henrietta answered with a clouded face.
   
"If I were to give the reward, Louise's secret services would be exposed in the daylight. That would be dangerous. Louise's power is too big. Even one country could not manage such power. If an enemy learned about Louise's secret, they would become frantic about it and would do anything to get it. I alone should be the enemy’s target.”
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"If I were to give the reward, Louise's secret services would be exposed in the daylight. That would be dangerous. Louise's
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power is too big. Even one country could not manage such power. If an enemy learned about Louise's secret, they would become frantic about it and would do anything to get it. I alone should be the enemy’s target.”
   
 
After that, Henrietta sighed.
 
After that, Henrietta sighed.
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And, in a slowly determined way, she opened her mouth.
 
And, in a slowly determined way, she opened her mouth.
   
“Don’t worry princess-sama. I want to dedicate my 'Void' to you.”
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“Don’t worry princess–sama. I want to dedicate my 'Void' to thee.”
   
 
“No… it is all right. You must forget that power as soon as possible. And never use it again.”
 
“No… it is all right. You must forget that power as soon as possible. And never use it again.”
   
“But… Princess-sama I want to help you with the powers I was granted!”
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“But… princess-sama I want to help thee with the powers I was granted!”
   
 
However, Henrietta shook her head.
 
However, Henrietta shook her head.
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Louise proudly lifted her face. It was the face of a person who had decided her mission. However, such a face was somewhat dangerous.
 
Louise proudly lifted her face. It was the face of a person who had decided her mission. However, such a face was somewhat dangerous.
   
“I always wanted to dedicate my power and body to princess-sama and the mother country. I was taught so, I believed so, and I grew up with that. However, my magic always failed. As you know, I was nicknamed 'Zero'. Behind sneers and contempt, I was always shaken with regret.”
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“I always wanted to dedicate my power and body for the princess-sama and the mother country. I was taught so, I believed so, and I grew up with that. However, my magic always failed. As you know, I was nicknamed 'Zero'. Behind sneers and contempt, I was always shaken with regret.”
   
 
Louise clearly asserted.
 
Louise clearly asserted.
   
“However, God gave such power to me. I, myself, believe in using this power. Still, if you say that Your Majesty will not need it, then it is necessary to return my wand to Your Majesty.”
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“However, god gave such power to me. I, myself, believe in using this power. Still, if you say that Your Majesty will not need it, then it is necessary to return Your Majesty the wand.”
   
 
Henrietta was touched by Louise’s speech.
 
Henrietta was touched by Louise’s speech.
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“Louise, I understand. You are still… my best friend. From the times when you helped me on Ragdorian’s lake. You took the blame for me…”
 
“Louise, I understand. You are still… my best friend. From the times when you helped me on Ragdorian’s lake. You took the blame for me…”
   
“Princess-sama...”
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“Princess–sama...”
   
Louise and Henrietta tightly embraced each other. Saito, who as always was left out, swung his head absentmindedly. ''Louise is too eager to promise without thinking…'' he thought, though he didn’t say that.
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Louise and Henrietta tightly embraced each other. Saito, who as always was left out, swung his head absentmindedly. Louise was too eager to promise without thinking…he thought, though he didn’t say that.
   
''Though it was nice to help Henrietta… but what about the travel to the east to find a way to return me home…''
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Though it was nice to help Henrietta… but what about the travel to the east to find a way to return me home…
   
By helping Henrietta, it seemed like they would not go there.
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By helping Henrietta, it seems like they will not go there.
   
 
“After this, I will help Louise too.”
 
“After this, I will help Louise too.”
   
“Naturally, princess-sama.”
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“Naturally, Princess-sama.”
   
 
“Then I give the 'Founder's Prayer Book' to you. However Louise, promise me. Don’t tell anyone that you are a ‘Void’ user. And do not use it recklessly, either.”
 
“Then I give the 'Founder's Prayer Book' to you. However Louise, promise me. Don’t tell anyone that you are a ‘Void’ user. And do not use it recklessly, either.”
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“After this, you will become my court lady and will obey only me.”
 
“After this, you will become my court lady and will obey only me.”
   
Henrietta then took out a quill pen and smooth parchment. After that, she signed the document and put down the quill pen.
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Then Henrietta takes out a quill pen and smooth parchment. After that, she signed the document and put down the quill pen.
   
 
“Take this. This is my formal permission. With this, whether in the royal palace, or inside or outside the country, you will have supreme authority over everything, even over the police. If there is no freedom, one cannot work well.”
 
“Take this. This is my formal permission. With this, whether in the royal palace, or inside or outside the country, you will have supreme authority over everything, even over the police. If there is no freedom, one cannot work well.”
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Louise reverently received the permission with an expression of gratitude. Henrietta's authorization. This meant that Louise was granted with the right to act in the queen’s name.
 
Louise reverently received the permission with an expression of gratitude. Henrietta's authorization. This meant that Louise was granted with the right to act in the queen’s name.
   
“If I face a problem that only you can solve, I will surely consult you. Officially, please act as a student of Academy of Magic like you have up to now. Since it is you, you will, without a doubt, do well.”
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“If I will face a problem that only you can solve, I will surely consult you. Officially, please act as a student of
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Academy of Magic like you have up to now. Since it is you, you will, without a doubt, do well.”
   
 
After that, Henrietta turned towards Saito. Having an idea, she fumbled within the pocket of her dress. When she took out some golden coins, Saito gasped audibly.
 
After that, Henrietta turned towards Saito. Having an idea, she fumbled within the pocket of her dress. When she took out some golden coins, Saito gasped audibly.
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Because Saito was not from this world, he wasn’t Henrietta’s vassal either, but even if he didn’t have to feel responsible,
 
Because Saito was not from this world, he wasn’t Henrietta’s vassal either, but even if he didn’t have to feel responsible,
   
Saito felt a strong sense of obligation either way.
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Saito felt a strong sense of obligation this way.
   
''Aah, it might be fate'', he thought.
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Aah, it might be fate, he thought.
   
No, it was his personality rather than fate. When such a beautiful woman like Henrietta said 'please', he could not find it in his heart to refuse. ''What a light-hearted fellow I am. Haa…''
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No, it was his personality rather than fate. When such a beautiful woman, like Henrietta, said please, he could not find heart to refuse. What a light-hearted fellow I am. Haa…
   
 
He wasn’t so welcomed in the Japan of his time.
 
He wasn’t so welcomed in the Japan of his time.
   
''Anyway, I should search for the way to return home'', Saito thought, putting the golden coins into his pocket.
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Anyway, I should search for the way to return home, Saito thought, putting the golden coins into his pocket.
 
   
   
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“So that’s it, isn’t it? You are worried about me leaving, right? It would be hard to help princess-sama otherwise.”
 
“So that’s it, isn’t it? You are worried about me leaving, right? It would be hard to help princess-sama otherwise.”
   
''It's not like that'', Louise wanted to say, but shut her mouth. ''That’s not the reason why I don't want Saito to return to his former world''. However, by saying this, she would reveal her hazy feelings for Saito. Louise's pride couldn't permit such a thing.
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It is different, Louise wanted to say but shut her mouth. That’s not the reason why I do not want Saito to return to his former world. However, by saying this, she would reveal her hazy feelings for Saito. Louise's pride couldn't permit such a thing.
   
 
In that sort of division, Louise nodded reluctantly.
 
In that sort of division, Louise nodded reluctantly.
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Saito muttered, and began walking again.
 
Saito muttered, and began walking again.
   
What he really thought was, she didn’t have to say ‘because I love you’, but she could have said ‘I would be lonely’ or at least ‘I want you to be near’, if she would have said that, he would not have minded helping her and would have searched for the way to return later.
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What he really thought was she didn’t have to say ‘because I love you’, but she could have said ‘I would be lonely’ or at least ‘I want you to be near’, if she would have said that he would not have minded helping her and would have searched for the way to return later.
   
 
When Henrietta asked for his help a while ago, though he thought it was bothersome, he was also glad for a moment. No one really needed him in Japan. The earth kept on spinning, even with Saito gone. However, it was different in this world. Siesta and Henrietta… there were some people that needed him.
 
When Henrietta asked for his help a while ago, though he thought it was bothersome, he was also glad for a moment. No one really needed him in Japan. The earth kept on spinning, even with Saito gone. However, it was different in this world. Siesta and Henrietta… there were some people that needed him.
   
Yet he wanted to feel needed by Louise more. However, judging from her words earlier, all that she cared about were his ‘Gandálfr’ powers.
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Yet he wanted to feel needed by Louise more. However, judging from her words earlier, all that she cared about were his ‘Gandalfr’ powers.
   
 
Saito pouted. He was sulky.
 
Saito pouted. He was sulky.
   
Determined, he started to push his way through the crowd. The town was still crowded from the victory celebration. A drunken group was yelling out toasts while hanging out their cups filled with wine.
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Determined, he started to push his way through crowd. The town was still crowded from the victory celebration. A drunken group was yelling out toasts while hanging out their cups filled with wine.
   
Louise, still in shock from Saito’s ‘Lovely’, was petrified for a while. With face down, she bit her lower lip. When she looked up after a while, Saito was already gone in the crowd and could not be seen. Louise ran out panicking.
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Louise, still in shock from Saito’s words ‘Lovely’, was petrified for a while. With face down, she bit her lower lip. When she looked up after a while, Saito was already gone in the crowd and could not be seen. Louise ran out panicking.
   
 
“Mooove!”
 
“Mooove!”
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However, the man who was clasping Louise's arm didn't move.
 
However, the man who was clasping Louise's arm didn't move.
   
“Today is the festival celebrating the victory at Tarbes. Put aside the rank. Today nobles, mercenaries and salesmen are equal. Hey, Miss Noble, how about sharing one drink with me as an apology for bumping into me?”
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“Today it is the festival celebrating the victory at Tarbes. Put aside the rank. Today nobles, mercenaries and salesmen are equal. Hey, Miss Noble, how about sharing one drink with me as an apology for bumping into me?”
   
 
Saying so, the man thrust out his jar of wine.
 
Saying so, the man thrust out his jar of wine.
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The man reached out to grasp Louise's hair. However, his hand was stopped.
 
The man reached out to grasp Louise's hair. However, his hand was stopped.
   
Saito, who showed up right before their eyes, firmly gripped the man’s hand.
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Saito, who showed up right before one’s eyes, firmly gripped the man’s hand.
   
 
“What? Go away kid!”
 
“What? Go away kid!”
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Saito said in a quiet voice. If it were the old days… his legs would be shaking while threatening such a scary looking man.
 
Saito said in a quiet voice. If it were the old days… his legs would be shaking while threatening such a scary looking man.
However, now it was Saito who had gone through many battles. Thus he had gained courage. Now he only had to grip Derflinger who hung on his back when the time came. Not pulling it out, just grasping it would be enough to knock all those soldiers out.
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However, now it was Saito who went through many battles. Thus he gained courage. Now he only had to grip Derflinger who hung on his back when the time came. Not pulling it out, just grasping it would be enough to knock all those soldiers out.
   
The man looked at the sword on Saito’s shoulder, with a similar look. The experience that he had gained through battlefields in many years told him that Saito’s attitude wasn’t just a bluff. Then the man spat nonchalantly and, urging his companions, left.
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The man looked at the sword on Saito’s shoulder, with a similar look. The experience that he gained through battlefields in many years, told him that Saito’s attitude wasn’t just a bluff. Then a man spitted nonchalantly and, urging his companions, left.
   
 
Saito silently took Louise's hand. And began to walk.
 
Saito silently took Louise's hand. And began to walk.
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“Not really,” Saito answered snappishly.
 
“Not really,” Saito answered snappishly.
   
The clasp of his hand made Louise flurried for a moment. ''Does Saito feel the same?'' However, because Saito walked straight ahead, she couldn’t see his facial expression.
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The clasp of his hand made Louise flurried for a moment. Does Saito feel the same? However, because Saito walked straight ahead, she couldn’t see his facial expression.
   
 
Louise followed while being dragged.
 
Louise followed while being dragged.
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“True,” Louise muttered happily.
 
“True,” Louise muttered happily.
   
“Feels like my world’s festivals.”
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“Feels like my world’s festival.”
   
 
“Really?”
 
“Really?”
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“Yeah. The showy street stalls line up just like this… gold fish catching, yo-yo fishing, okonomiyaki shops, and food carts queuing in line…”
 
“Yeah. The showy street stalls line up just like this… gold fish catching, yo-yo fishing, okonomiyaki shops, and food carts queuing in line…”
   
While saying so, Saito’s eyes turned distant. Louise tightened her grasp on Saito’s hand. Somehow, the thought about Saito suddenly leaving to some place made her feel bad.
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While saying so, Saito’s eyes turned distant. Louise tightened her grasp on Saito’s hand. Somehow, the thought about Saito suddenly leaving to someplace, made her feel bad.
   
''Sometime… the day when Saito leaves, will surely come.
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Sometime… the day when Saito leaves, will surely come.
   
However, when walking together this way, the one that I want you to see is me'', Louise thought. ''Just for now. And nothing else matters.''
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However, when walking together this way, the one that I want you to see is me, Louise thought. Just for now. And nothing else matters.
   
 
And at the same time she was angry at herself for thinking that way.
 
And at the same time she was angry at herself for thinking that way.
   
Because of love? That’s not it. It was her pride that was the problem.
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Because of love? That’s not it. It was her pride’s problem.
   
After convincing herself of that, Louise looked around blankly.
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After convincing herself so, Louise looked around blankly.
   
 
And then, shouting “Waa”, stopped still.
 
And then, shouting “Waa”, stopped still.
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Louise took a pendant. It was a pure-white pendant, carved in a shape of a shell. There were a lot of big jewels placed around. However, upon closer look, the jewels were nothing but cheap crystals.
 
Louise took a pendant. It was a pure-white pendant, carved in a shape of a shell. There were a lot of big jewels placed around. However, upon closer look, the jewels were nothing but cheap crystals.
   
Still, Louise liked this shiny pendant. Within the atmosphere of noisy festival, filled with quality goods, such a showy one attracted attention.
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Still, Louise liked this shiny pendant. Within the atmosphere of noisy festival, filled with quality goods, such a showy one attracts attention.
   
 
“Do you want it?”
 
“Do you want it?”
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“Don’t have the money.”
 
“Don’t have the money.”
   
“Well then, I will cheapen it. It will be only four écus."
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“Well then, I will cheapen it. It will be only four ecus."
   
 
The merchant sweetly smiled.
 
The merchant sweetly smiled.
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Saito asked amazed, Louise puffed her lips nonchalantly.
 
Saito asked amazed, Louise puffed her lips nonchalantly.
   
“I would if I hadn’t bought that impertinent sword the other day. I spent all my month’s pocket money on that.”
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“I would if I haven’t bought that impertinent sword the other day. I spent all my month’s pocket money on that.”
   
 
Saito reluctantly fumbled in his pocket. He tightly gripped the golden coins that he got from Henrietta a little while ago.
 
Saito reluctantly fumbled in his pocket. He tightly gripped the golden coins that he got from Henrietta a little while ago.
Holding the golden coins that were approximately of the size of one yen coin on his palm, Saito asked.
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Holding the golden coins, that was approximately of the size of one yen coin, on a palm, Saito asked.
   
 
“How much is this worth?”
 
“How much is this worth?”
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“T-this is! Hii, fuu, hmm…This is splendid.”
 
“T-this is! Hii, fuu, hmm…This is splendid.”
   
Taking up four gold coins on which an old king’s portrait was carved, the merchant passed the pendant to Louise.
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Taking up four gold coins on which old king’s portrait was carved, the merchant passed the pendant to Louise.
   
Louise was taken aback with surprise, her cheeks unintentionally loosened up a bit. ''The first thing that Saito did with the money given by Henrietta was shopping for me''. She was very happy. After it was in her hand for a while, she cheerfully put it on her neck. "It suits you well", said the merchant gracefully.
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Louise was taken aback with surprise, her cheeks unintentionally loosened up a bit. The first thing that Saito did with the money given by Henrietta was shopping for me. She was very happy. After it was in her hand for a while, she cheerfully put it on her neck. It suits you well, said the merchant gracefully.
   
''I want Saito to have a look'', she thought while pulling his sleeve. However Saito, whose attention was on the stall near the sides, didn’t move. ''What on earth is he staring at?''
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I want Saito to have a look, she thought while pulling his sleeve. However Saito, whose attention was on the stall near the sides, didn’t move. What on earth is he staring at?
   
 
Saito was gazing at the loot, taken from the Albion army, displayed on the ground.
 
Saito was gazing at the loot, taken from the Albion army, displayed on the ground.
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Things that soldiers captured were taken to merchants.
 
Things that soldiers captured were taken to merchants.
   
They were articles taken from the enemy… swords, armor, clothes and clocks. Saito took one of the clothes.
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It was articles taken from the enemy… swords, armor, clothes and clocks. Saito took one of the clothes.
   
''I want him to look at me'', Louise pouted lips sulkily. However, Saito’s full attention was on the clothing. It was not unreasonable to want new clothes after all.
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I want him to look at me, Louise pouted lips sulkily. However, Saito’s full attention was on the clothing. It was not unreasonable to want new clothes after all.
   
 
“What, you want clothes? But it is not a good idea to wear second-handed middle aged clothes that the enemy used to wear, there are much better ones.”
 
“What, you want clothes? But it is not a good idea to wear second-handed middle aged clothes that the enemy used to wear, there are much better ones.”
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Seaman uniform? Indeed!
 
Seaman uniform? Indeed!
   
B-but in Saito’s world it was called a sailor uniform…
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B-but in Saito’s world it is called a sailor uniform…
   
 
Saito’s head started working at full power.
 
Saito’s head started working at full power.
   
Though the size was too big, it could still be modified for Siesta to wear…
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Though the size is too big, it could still be modified for Siesta to wear…
   
 
He imagined Siesta wearing this.
 
He imagined Siesta wearing this.
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The enjoyment increased. No, that’s not it. Not personal enjoyment. Gratitude. It was gratitude for the muffler! He still felt slightly guilty though.
 
The enjoyment increased. No, that’s not it. Not personal enjoyment. Gratitude. It was gratitude for the muffler! He still felt slightly guilty though.
   
That’s right, Saito cooled down. Money, he should absolutely use it for this.
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That’s right, Saito cooled down. Money, he absolutely should use them on such thing.
   
 
“How much?” Saito asked in a voice overcome with emotion.
 
“How much?” Saito asked in a voice overcome with emotion.
   
“Three for one écus would be fine.”
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“Three ecus would be fine.”
   
 
Louise was amazed. Paying such money for second-handed clothing was too much.
 
Louise was amazed. Paying such money for second-handed clothing was too much.
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Louise, who returned back to her room, was lying on the bed, listing the Founder's Prayer Book while humming. Seems like she was in a good mood. Saito tried to slip out of the room quietly, he wanted to go to Siesta to deliver the goods he bought today, but the door was locked by Louise who rejected the wand and put the 'Lock' spell on it. 
 
Louise, who returned back to her room, was lying on the bed, listing the Founder's Prayer Book while humming. It seemed like she was in a good mood. Saito tried to slip out of the room quietly, he wanted to go to Siesta to deliver the goods he bought today, but the door was locked by Louise who waved her wand and put the 'Lock' spell on it. 
 
   
 
“Are you going somewhere in the middle of the night?”
 
“Are you going somewhere in the middle of the night?”
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Louise unfastened the restraining device and took off Saito’s parka. Her face was always angry. She chewed her lower lip hard.
 
Louise unfastened the restraining device and took off Saito’s parka. Her face was always angry. She chewed her lower lip hard.
   
Then Louise went back to bed, hugging the taken off parka tightly and said “Face that way”.
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Then Louise went back to bed, hugging the taken off parka tightly.
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And said - “Face that way”.
   
 
With all her clothes taken off, Louise, wearing only Saito’s parka, pouted.
 
With all her clothes taken off, Louise, wearing only Saito’s parka, pouted.
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“Still want to go for a walk?”
 
“Still want to go for a walk?”
   
''Giving it to Siesta will have to wait for tomorrow night'', Saito thought, now wearing only a T-shirt. Even though it was an early summer, the climate in Halkeginia was very different from Japan. Walking this way, he would catch a cold. Without a doubt, Louise knew that too.
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Giving it to Siesta will have to wait for tomorrow night, Saito, who was wearing only a T-shirt, thought. Even though it was an early summer, the climate in Halkeginia was very different from Japan. Walking this way, he would catch a cold. Without a doubt, Louise knew that too.
   
 
“There are more important things than the night wind, don’t you agree~? And a partner who doesn’t serve his master is no good, don’t you agree~?”
 
“There are more important things than the night wind, don’t you agree~? And a partner who doesn’t serve his master is no good, don’t you agree~?”
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‘Void’. The legendary element that Founder Brimir used…
 
‘Void’. The legendary element that Founder Brimir used…
   
And, I am a Familiar that Founder Brimir is said to have used - 'Gandálfr'.
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And, I am a Familiar that Founder Brimir is said to have used - 'Gandalfr'.
   
The legendary Familiar that has the ability to master all kinds of weapons, in order to protect the Founder, while he casts his spells…
+
The legendary Familiar that has the ability to master all kinds of weapons, in order to protect the Founder, while he casts aria…
   
 
“Then you are the strongest wizard in this world? Cool! Destroying with one swing.”
 
“Then you are the strongest wizard in this world? Cool! Destroying with one swing.”
   
“I wouldn’t say so. I haven’t said this to princess-sama since I didn’t want to disappoint her…”
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“I wouldn’t say so. I haven’t said this to princess-sama as I didn’t want to disappoint her…”
   
 
With a sigh Louise took the wand.
 
With a sigh Louise took the wand.
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“S-stop! Idiot!”
 
“S-stop! Idiot!”
   
It would be terrible if such explosion were to happen in a place like this. However, Louise didn't stop chanting.
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It’s no good if such explosion would happen in a place like this. However, Louise didn't stop chanting.
   
 
“Yarunsakusa..”
 
“Yarunsakusa..”
   
Finishing the chant uninterrupted. Louise lifted the wand. Saito dug himself into his pile of hay, scattering the straw all around.
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Finishing the chant uninterrupted. Louise put out the wand. Saito dug himself into his pile of hay, scattering the straw all around.
   
 
And then Louise’s eyes rolled back and she crumbled to the bed suddenly.
 
And then Louise’s eyes rolled back and she crumbled to the bed suddenly.
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“How could I know such a thing?”
 
“How could I know such a thing?”
   
Then, Louise sat up straight demurely, lifted a finger and started explaining, proud as a peacock.
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Then, Louise sat up straight demurely, put out the finger and started explaining, proud as a peacock.
   
 
“Listen, the number of elements that a mage uses can be increased, and his class changes accordingly. A mage who can use only one element is a dot. Ability to have two – makes one a line. Being able to use three - triangle. Spells are also applied to the class. The spells from three elements are called 'Triangle spells'. Each time the spell class rises, the consumption of willpower doubles.”
 
“Listen, the number of elements that a mage uses can be increased, and his class changes accordingly. A mage who can use only one element is a dot. Ability to have two – makes one a line. Being able to use three - triangle. Spells are also applied to the class. The spells from three elements are called 'Triangle spells'. Each time the spell class rises, the consumption of willpower doubles.”
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“Haa.”
 
“Haa.”
   
“The main point is, that mage could cast two ‘Dot’ spells instead. Eight divided by four is two. Therefore, you could cast the spell twice. But when you cast a line spell only once, because twice of the willpower consumed, and eight divided by eight is one.”
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“The main point is, that mage could chant two ‘Dot’ spells instead. Eight divided by four is two. Therefore, you could strike and stop chant the spell twice. But when you chant a line spell only once, because twice of the willpower consumed, and eight divided by eight is one.”
   
 
“Haa.”
 
“Haa.”
   
“When the line mage grows up to a triangular mage, consumption of the willpower spent on dot spells decreases by half. Therefore, four divided by two - two, he can use the dot spell four times. The line spell can be used twice. Triangular spell – one time. That’s because the mage grows up.”
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“When the line mage grows up to a triangular mage, consumption in the willpower spent on dot spells decreases by half. Therefore, four divided by two - two, he can use the dot spell four times. The line spell can be used twice. Triangular spell – one time. That’s because the mage grows up.”
   
 
“Haa. In other words, the low class spells can be chanted many times, while the high class spells can be chanted only so many times.”
 
“Haa. In other words, the low class spells can be chanted many times, while the high class spells can be chanted only so many times.”
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“Yeah. I fainted a while ago because I overworked and used up my willpower. The spell was too strong and my willpower was insufficient.”
 
“Yeah. I fainted a while ago because I overworked and used up my willpower. The spell was too strong and my willpower was insufficient.”
   
“Then, why were you able to cast it the other day?”
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“Then, why were you able to chant it the other day?”
   
 
“Well… Really why… I wonder myself…”
 
“Well… Really why… I wonder myself…”
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Saito thought while folding his arms together.
 
Saito thought while folding his arms together.
   
“Ummm… Well, up till now, you haven’t used many spells correctly?"
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“Ummm… Well, up till now, you haven’t chanted many spells correctly?"
   
 
“Well, yes.”
 
“Well, yes.”
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Louise made a startled face.
 
Louise made a startled face.
   
“For instance, let's assume that your willpower is 100. The ‘Explosion', consumed all 100 at once. While usually the willpower is recovered while sleeping at night, the amount needed is too large for you… Since it is as much as 100, you cannot store that much just with one night of sleep.”
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“For instance, let's assume that your willpower is 100. The ‘Explosion', consumed all 100 at once. While usually the willpower is recovered while sleeping at night, yet an amount needed is too large for you…as it is 100…you cannot collect that much just with one night of sleep.”
   
 
Saito plainly stated his hypothesis.
 
Saito plainly stated his hypothesis.
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“Eh? Eeeh?”
 
“Eh? Eeeh?”
   
“Applying the Earth magic Square Class spell ‘Wrought Gold’, gold can be created. But do you know why the world still uses money?”
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“Adding to “Earth” spell a square class spell ‘Wrought gold’, gold can be created. But do you know why the world still uses money?”
   
“Eh?”
+
“Feh?”
   
 
“It is said the square mages simply cannot chant the square spells many times. It’s too unreliable, one time the recovery might take one week, the other – one month. Besides, the amount of gold you could convert this way is too little. Therefore money is used instead of gold.”
 
“It is said the square mages simply cannot chant the square spells many times. It’s too unreliable, one time the recovery might take one week, the other – one month. Besides, the amount of gold you could convert this way is too little. Therefore money is used instead of gold.”
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“Then…when would you be able to chant again.....”
 
“Then…when would you be able to chant again.....”
   
“Don’t know. I… One month or maybe one year…”
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“Don’t know. I…One month or maybe one year…”
   
 
Louise pondered.
 
Louise pondered.
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“But, it was successful.”
 
“But, it was successful.”
   
“Oh well. No one can understand ‘Void’ fully. Anyways, the incantation’s power was demonstrated. There are no other spells like this one.”
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“Oh well. No one can understand ‘Void’ fully. Anyways, the aria’s spell effect was demonstrated. There are no more spells like this.”
   
 
“It’s too little now. Uuu, my hay…”
 
“It’s too little now. Uuu, my hay…”
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Louise muttered, blushing for some reason.
 
Louise muttered, blushing for some reason.
   
"Haa", Saito held his breath once he noticed something. What! He became crazy from the view that Louise gave him, not aware of it herself. The parka’s hem had rolled up to Louise’s buttocks.'' Just a little more, mooore,'' he peeked.
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Haa, Saito held his breath once he noticed something. What! He became crazy from the view that Louise gave him, not aware of it herself. The parka’s hem had rolled up to Louise’s buttocks. Just a little more, mooore, he peeked.
   
 
Saito instinctively held his nose. Due to Saito’s gesture, Louise finally became aware that the parka rolled up. Instantly she sprang to her feet and held down the Parka’s hem while blushing.
 
Saito instinctively held his nose. Due to Saito’s gesture, Louise finally became aware that the parka rolled up. Instantly she sprang to her feet and held down the Parka’s hem while blushing.
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“It was scattered.”
 
“It was scattered.”
   
Though he heard Louise groaning a few times within the futon, she calmed down after a while. "Aah", thinking about the sailor uniform that he will deliver to Siesta tomorrow night, Saito fell asleep.
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Though he heard Louise groaning a few times within the futon, she calmed down after a while. Aah, thinking about the sailor uniform, that he will deliver to Siesta tomorrow night, Saito fell asleep.
   
 
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