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===Chapter 8: The Meaning of the Smile===
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===Chapter 8: The meaning of the Smile===
 
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She didn't seem to be angry.
 
She didn't seem to be angry.
   
Meaning...? “Hey, this is the middle of the street, there are a lot of people here.” Saito said while furiously trying to stop her.
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Meaning...? “Hey, this is the middle of the street, there’re a lot of people here.” Saito said while furiously trying to stop her.
   
 
"Stop, people can see you!"
 
"Stop, people can see you!"
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"Okay, I won't hold back then."
 
"Okay, I won't hold back then."
   
Gulp, Saito swallowed his saliva and began to touch her small breast. Mofu, mofu.
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Gulp, Saito swallowed his saliva and began to touch her small breast. Rustle, rustle. (I guess that this is the sound being made, don’t know where to put it)
   
 
Even with her small breasts, touching her there, Saito’s excitment began to rise.
 
Even with her small breasts, touching her there, Saito’s excitment began to rise.
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"Let's dance."
 
"Let's dance."
   
With cheerful rhythm accompanying them, Louise and Saito danced. A pleasant waltz. Louise was dancing, and Saito was trying to follow her lead.
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With cheerful rhythm accompanying them, Louise and Saito danced. A pleasant want(waltz). Louise was dancing, and Saito was trying to follow her lead.
   
 
After they were satisfied they went to the tavern that they had been chased into by the Templar knights.
 
After they were satisfied they went to the tavern that they had been chased into by the Templar knights.
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When they entered the tavern, they saw that the table had been replaced by high class looking sparkling one. It seemed that the money Kirche had given as compensation was quite sufficient to repair all the damage. The window and stand counter had been replaced with a glass one.
 
When they entered the tavern, they saw that the table had been replaced by high class looking sparkling one. It seemed that the money Kirche had given as compensation was quite sufficient to repair all the damage. The window and stand counter had been replaced with a glass one.
   
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This tavern was really different from the previous one. The one that stood right now was a first class tavern.
This entire store became so posh it was like a different establishment altogether.
 
   
The shopkeeper too was wearing first class brand-new polished clothes. Seeing this, Louise and Saito looked at each other and laughed.
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The shopkeeper too was wearing first class brand-new polished clothes. When he saw the two of them, he smiled.
   
When they entered, the shopkeeper recognized Louise and Saito and looked away awkwardly.
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When they entered, the shopkeeper recognized Louise and Saito and looked awkward.
   
"Sorry for the trouble last time." Saito grinned at the shopkeeper devilishly. And so, the shopkeeper, without a word, started sending plate after plate of food to their table.
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Until this time much trouble has been happened(?). He grinned at Saito and, without saying anything, the shopkeeper started to send foods one by one to both of them.
   
 
And then he whispered silently to Saito's ear.
 
And then he whispered silently to Saito's ear.
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"I'll be in your care next year too."
 
"I'll be in your care next year too."
   
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Meanwhile, Louise was still smiling.
Louise and Saito looked at each other and laughed once more.
 
   
When all the plates had arrived, Louise scooped up some thick broth with a spoon and brought it near Saito's face.
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When the food had been served to the table, Louise offered some soup to Saito.
   
 
"Еh?"
 
"Еh?"
   
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Б, a----a・(?, maybe aah( as in say aah))
"Now, aaaaaahhh--n."
 
   
 
With Louise started to say that, Saito still felt a little troubled. Even if this was a reward, it was still too much.
 
With Louise started to say that, Saito still felt a little troubled. Even if this was a reward, it was still too much.
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"Something wrong?"
 
"Something wrong?"
   
"Nothing at all, really."
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"Nothing at all, don't mind me."
   
Every time this happened, Saito would forcefully make a smile and shake his head.
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The instant that happened, Saito forced a smile, cooling his head.(?)
   
 
Wholeheartedly, the two of them spent their time together, and when the night drew near they returned to their room. In the end, Saito was with her the whole day. Calmly thinking, from whatever aspect, it was too suspicious.
 
Wholeheartedly, the two of them spent their time together, and when the night drew near they returned to their room. In the end, Saito was with her the whole day. Calmly thinking, from whatever aspect, it was too suspicious.
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Louise poured water into a cup and gave it to Saito. After taking a breath, he drank it. Saito asked.
 
Louise poured water into a cup and gave it to Saito. After taking a breath, he drank it. Saito asked.
   
"Hey Louise."
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"Hey Louise!"
   
 
"Yes"
 
"Yes"
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Once again, she smiled. It was an angelic smile, a lovely smile.
 
Once again, she smiled. It was an angelic smile, a lovely smile.
   
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"That's why I will smile continuously this last minute."
"So, I've smiled my whole life's worth today."
 
   
 
"What?"
 
"What?"
   
"Twice a year, huh. If we always stay together from now on, it will take thirty years, no, forty years I think? If it was fifty years' worth it'd be even better... At that point, you will have seen the number of times I smiled at you today."
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"Оnly twice a year, huh. But from now on, the time we could have spent together, twenty years, forty years?, or even fifty years....., I would have smiled whenever I could."
   
 
"What are you talking about?"
 
"What are you talking about?"
   
"You see, I won’t smile again for the rest of my life."
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"You know, I won’t smile again for the rest of my life."
   
 
Even with her smiles still surfacing, tears began to flow down Louise's face.
 
Even with her smiles still surfacing, tears began to flow down Louise's face.
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"Louise?"
 
"Louise?"
   
"I won't love anyone else for the rest of my life. But you must not be like me. No matter who you end up falling in love with, you have to treat her like you do me and protect her well, over in your world..."
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"I won't love anyone else for the rest of my life. But you must not be like me. No matter who you end up falling in love with, you have to treat her like me and protect her well, over in your world..."
   
 
Tears joined into a line across Louise's face, and dripped down from her beautiful chin.
 
Tears joined into a line across Louise's face, and dripped down from her beautiful chin.
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Having said that, Saito suddenly became very drowsy.
 
Having said that, Saito suddenly became very drowsy.
   
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"This is strange."
"Strange."
 
   
 
It was magic. But the moment he noticed that, the magic had already taken effect.
 
It was magic. But the moment he noticed that, the magic had already taken effect.

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