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She was also the only person who had given me the taste of a kiss.
 
She was also the only person who had given me the taste of a kiss.
   
But that was like a reward gift—Although Iris and I were good friends, it was not the kind of relationship where we could be locked passionately in an embrace like this in bed.
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But that was like a reward gift—Although Iris and I were good friends, it was not the kind of relationship where we could be locked passionately in embrace like this in bed.
   
 
Hence, my mind was in turmoil. Despite trying to figure out the situation, I could not think properly.
 
Hence, my mind was in turmoil. Despite trying to figure out the situation, I could not think properly.
   
Iris' bodily scent and soft bosom were blanking out my mind.
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Iris' bodily scent and soft bosom was blanking out my mind.
   
 
"Ah... Mononobe... Mmm..."
 
"Ah... Mononobe... Mmm..."
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I was injured during the battle five days earlier—in other words, "Blue" Hekatonkheir and Kili's attack on Midgard, which was why I was currently under treatment in the medical building.
 
I was injured during the battle five days earlier—in other words, "Blue" Hekatonkheir and Kili's attack on Midgard, which was why I was currently under treatment in the medical building.
   
Although the more heavily injured left shoulder still could not move, the fever arising from my wounds had subsided. Starting today, I could attend classes. Hence, I was scheduled to be discharged today if there were no problems.
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Although the more heavily injured left shoulder still could not move, the fever arising from my wounds had subsided. Starting today, I could attend classes. Hence, I was scheduled to be discharged today if there were not problems.
   
 
"...Mononobe will feel soothed too, right... Hugging you like this... You'll forget your pain and suffering, right...?"
 
"...Mononobe will feel soothed too, right... Hugging you like this... You'll forget your pain and suffering, right...?"
   
Iris hugged my head tightly, burying the tip of my nose in her cleavage. It felt very soft, warm, and comfortable—even though I was almost about to suffocate.
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Iris hugged my head tightly, burying the tip of my nose in her cleavage. It felt very soft, warm and comfortable—even though I was almost about to suffocate.
   
 
I heard the beat of Iris' heart. Or was this my own heartbeat?
 
I heard the beat of Iris' heart. Or was this my own heartbeat?
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Although I had no recollection of it, that was probably the case. Now that the painkiller's effect had subsided, my left shoulder was hurting. It did not come as a surprise that I would have nightmares in such a state.
 
Although I had no recollection of it, that was probably the case. Now that the painkiller's effect had subsided, my left shoulder was hurting. It did not come as a surprise that I would have nightmares in such a state.
   
I guessed that Iris was doing this to put me at ease. After figuring out the reason, I was no longer panicking but that still did not change the situation.
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I guessed that Iris was doing this to put me at ease. After figuring out the reason, I was not longer panicking but that still did not change the situation.
   
 
Or perhaps, now that I had less to think about and occupy my mind, I became even more strongly conscious of Iris' body warmth.
 
Or perhaps, now that I had less to think about and occupy my mind, I became even more strongly conscious of Iris' body warmth.
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Shaking her beautiful fluttering hair, which looked pink in the light, Tia rushed over to the side of my bed.
 
Shaking her beautiful fluttering hair, which looked pink in the light, Tia rushed over to the side of my bed.
   
"Yuu will become Tia's husband! S-So, not allowed to do dirty things with anyone apart from the wife!"
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"Yuu will become Tia's husband! S-So, not allowed to do dirty thing with anyone apart from the wife!"
   
 
Tia climbed on the bed and pushed aside Iris, who was straddling me.
 
Tia climbed on the bed and pushed aside Iris, who was straddling me.

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