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I changed it to "come home late" since the sentence means that the jail guard knocked on his doorbell late at night, so his wife scolded him. I think I'm pretty used to Teh Ping's translations, so I can guess his typos accurately now like a 6th sense.-[[User:Hiro Hayase|Hiro Hayase]] 00:30, 25 February 2012 (CST)
 
I changed it to "come home late" since the sentence means that the jail guard knocked on his doorbell late at night, so his wife scolded him. I think I'm pretty used to Teh Ping's translations, so I can guess his typos accurately now like a 6th sense.-[[User:Hiro Hayase|Hiro Hayase]] 00:30, 25 February 2012 (CST)
 
"icy cold ices "<-- wearing ice is rare enough, is there a need to mention that the ice is ice cold?
 
 
Misumi<-- if i remember correctly, water is Mizu. Just confirming that it is Misumi? -- [[User:Pryun|Pryun]] 21:57, 26 February 2012 (CST)
 

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