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“Will Ren go out of his way to target a lone dragon chick?” (Naofumi)
 
“Will Ren go out of his way to target a lone dragon chick?” (Naofumi)
   
“Isn’t that the entire basis on which this plan is relying on?” (Female Knight)
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“Isn’t that the entire basis on which this plan is relying?” (Female Knight)
   
   
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Gluttony… Ren may attack him to sate his desire for EXP.
 
Gluttony… Ren may attack him to sate his desire for EXP.
   
He seems to like those with high levels, and Solo Players like him generally have such tendencies.
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He seems to like to have a high level, and Solo Players like him generally have such tendencies.
   
 
If those feelings of desire were to reach their peak, then he would definitely attack any lone enemy.
 
If those feelings of desire were to reach their peak, then he would definitely attack any lone enemy.
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Last is perhaps Pride.
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Last is perhaps pride.
   
People who believe that levels are everything, and look down on those of low level are common in Net Games.
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People who believe that level is everything, and look down on those of low level are common in Net Games.
   
 
Perhaps his lone wolf-like attitude is actually a form of conceit.
 
Perhaps his lone wolf-like attitude is actually a form of conceit.
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Gluttony, Lust, Greed, Melancholy, Wrath, Sloth, Vainglory, and Pride. <ref>TL: Vainglory is pretty much showing off. This list is from Evagrius Ponticus’ Logismoi (A.D. 4th Century). The version listed in the bible is once again a different one (Proverbs 6:16-19).</ref>
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Gluttony, Lust, Greed, Dejection, Wrath, Sloth, Ostentation, and Pride. <ref>TL: Ostentation is pretty much showing off. This list is from Evagrius Ponticus’ Logismoi (A.D. 4th Century). The version listed in the bible is once again a different one (Proverbs 6:16-19).</ref>
   
Envy wasn’t present, and Melancholy and Vainglory were in its place.
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Envy wasn’t present, and Dejection and Ostentation were in its place.
   
Eventually, Melancholy was fused with Sloth, and Vainglory with Pride. Additionally, Envy was tacked on.
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Eventually, Dejection was fused with Sloth, and Ostentation with Pride. Additionally, Envy was tacked on.
   
   
If it’s the old version, then Vainglory, devoting yourself to showing off your possessions to others, is possible.
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If it’s the old version, then Ostentation, devoting yourself to showing off your possessions to others, is possible.
   
 
In Online Games, strength is merely an illusion, but an individual’s attachment to such strength may be considered as such.
 
In Online Games, strength is merely an illusion, but an individual’s attachment to such strength may be considered as such.
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I had met him before in real life as well.
 
I had met him before in real life as well.
   
I’m not sure of his true intentions, but he said something like, ‘Your upfront personality and Guild master Charisma are wanted in this company.’
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I’m not sure his true intentions, but he said something like, ‘Your upfront personality and Guild master Charisma are wanted in this company.’
   
 
Now that I think about it, perhaps he was merely praising me to make me work harder down the line.
 
Now that I think about it, perhaps he was merely praising me to make me work harder down the line.
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It’s not like he was the strongest, so having him brag over every little thing would just get annoying. As a former guild master, that’s my opinion.
 
It’s not like he was the strongest, so having him brag over every little thing would just get annoying. As a former guild master, that’s my opinion.
   
But there are plenty who find joy in doing such things, and that’s one of the main reasons for the profitability of the Net Game Industry.
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But there are plenty who find joy in doing as such, and that’s one of the very reasons for the profitability of the Net Game Industry.
   
   
Perhaps Vainglory is the one that fits Ren best. But Itsuki fits it as well.
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Perhaps Ostentation is the one that fits Ren best. But Itsuki fits it as well.
   
 
The activation requirements for the Curse Series are still a mystery.
 
The activation requirements for the Curse Series are still a mystery.
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Anyways, the Curses that Ren is likely to have are Gluttony, Greed, Pride, and Vainglory.
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Anyways, the Curses that Ren is likely to have are Gluttony, Greed, Pride, and Ostentation.
   
 
Based on this, he will probably attack the lone Gaelion, as all of these sins deal with the gathering of EXP.
 
Based on this, he will probably attack the lone Gaelion, as all of these sins deal with the gathering of EXP.
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Should I really be doing nothing and watching?
 
Should I really be doing nothing and watching?
   
If I get closer, I’ll get in Gaelion’s way, and I may miss my chance.
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If I get closer, I’ll get in Gaelion’s way, and I may miss a chance.
   
 
Thinking back, it was quite good luck to have encountered him so quickly anyways.
 
Thinking back, it was quite good luck to have encountered him so quickly anyways.
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“…Hey, Rishia.” (Naofumi)
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“… Hey, Rishia.” (Naofumi)
   
 
“What is it?” (Rishia)
 
“What is it?” (Rishia)
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…As we’re running, I can see that we occasionally become semi-visible.
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… As we’re running, I can see that we occasionally become semi-visible.
   
 
It seems that the quality is lower in comparison to Raphtalia’s.
 
It seems that the quality is lower in comparison to Raphtalia’s.

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