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==Trash and Hakuko<ref>ED Note: This chapter needs TLC. While grammar has been improved, thanks to the collaborative effort of many users, the meanings of some sentences may need tweaking.</ref>==
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==Trash and Hakuko<ref>ED Note: This chapter needs serious TLC, or a retranslation. My editing skills aren't good enough to challenge this job.</ref>==
 
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「へー……久しぶりに城下町の方へ来たけど、凄い事になっているわね」
 
「へー……久しぶりに城下町の方へ来たけど、凄い事になっているわね」
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サディナが霊亀の山を見ながら答える。-->
 
サディナが霊亀の山を見ながら答える。-->
 
 
“Wow…… it's been a long time since I came here. The Castle Town has greatly changed.” (Sadina)
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“Wow…… it's been a long time since I came here. The castle town has greatly changed.” (Sadina)
   
 
“Have you visited this place before?” (Naofumi)
 
“Have you visited this place before?” (Naofumi)
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Sadina answers me while looking at the mountain of the Spirit Turtle. 
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Sadina answered me while looking at the mountain of the Spirit Turtle. 
 
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 前に来た時よりもさらに復興は進んでいる。荒廃した感じが大分払拭されている。
 
 前に来た時よりもさらに復興は進んでいる。荒廃した感じが大分払拭されている。
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 災害を乗り越えようと頑張っているんだな。-->
 
 災害を乗り越えようと頑張っているんだな。-->
   
The reconstruction has progressed further than before. The impression that the town had been ruined has been reduced considerably.
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The reconstruction has progressed further than before. The impression that the town has been ruined was reduced considerably.
   
That being said… what about the area around the shell of the Spirit Turtle? If one were to look closely, one could see that trees were being cut down and development was going smoothly.
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That being said…… what about the area around the shell of the Spirit Turtle. If one were to look closely, one could see that trees were being cut down and development was going smoothly.
   
 
As the saying goes, humans are strong.
 
As the saying goes, humans are strong.
   
The townsfolk were working hard to overcome the disaster.
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The townfolks were working hard trying to overcome the disaster.
 
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「これから何処へいくのかしら?」
 
「これから何処へいくのかしら?」
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 影の情報網とか女騎士がやってくれている可能性もない訳じゃないけど、一応は女王に会っておこう。
 
 影の情報網とか女騎士がやってくれている可能性もない訳じゃないけど、一応は女王に会っておこう。
 
 クラスアップとは違ってリセットの方は普段やらないだろうし。-->
 
 クラスアップとは違ってリセットの方は普段やらないだろうし。-->
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“Where do you want to go now?” (Sadina)
 
“Where do you want to go now?” (Sadina)
   
“I'll go to the castle immediately. Since we came suddenly, the preparations for the level reset have probably not been done.” (Naofumi)
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“I'll go to the castle immediately. Since we came suddenly, probably, the preparations for the level reset have not been done.” (Naofumi)
 
 
   
I doubt that the information about me arriving at the castle would not be transmitted either by the Shadow’s information network or Female knight, but for now I’ll meet the queen.
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I doubt there’s a possibility that the information about me arriving at the castle would not be transmitted either by the Shadow’s information network or female knight, but for now I’ll meet the queen.
   
Unlike a Class Up, a reset is not usually done.
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Unlike a class up, a reset is not usually done
 
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「お城ね。私、見た事あるけど入った事無いんだ」
 
「お城ね。私、見た事あるけど入った事無いんだ」
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“It's the castle! I've seen it before, but I have never entered it.” (Anon Slave 1)
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“It's the castle! I've saw it before, but I have never entered.” (Anon Slave 1)
   
 
“Yes. Me too.” (Anon Slave 2)
 
“Yes. Me too.” (Anon Slave 2)
   
“I thought as much.” (Naofumi)
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“I thought as much” (Naofumi)
 
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亜人や獣人が人間至上主義の国の城になんて入れる物じゃないか。
 
亜人や獣人が人間至上主義の国の城になんて入れる物じゃないか。
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“It is not a good place.” (Kiel)
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“It is not a good place” (Kiel)
   
 
“I guess.” (Naofumi)
 
“I guess.” (Naofumi)
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I said while heading towards the castle.
 
I said while heading towards the castle.
   
…As usual, Firo was looking around the area restlessly. 
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…… As usual, Firo was looking around the area restlessly. 
 
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「元康が居たら分かるだろ。警戒し過ぎだ」
 
「元康が居たら分かるだろ。警戒し過ぎだ」
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“We will know if Motoyasu is here; you are being too cautious.” (Naofumi)
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“We will know if Motoyasu is here. So you are being too cautious.” (Naofumi)
   
 
"Firo knows, but for some reason, Firo cannot settle down!” (Firo)
 
"Firo knows, but for some reason, Firo cannot settle down!” (Firo)
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Being too cautious has its weaknesses too.
 
Being too cautious has its weaknesses too.
   
If I startle her, it would have the opposite effect.
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But even if I startle her, it would have the opposite effect.
   
In addition, I don't think Motoyasu would come to the Castle Town because of the warrant for his arrest.
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In addition, I don't think Motoyasu would come to the castle town because of the warrant for his arrest.
   
 
When you're a known face in this town, it's impossible to hide.
 
When you're a known face in this town, it's impossible to hide.
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 スキルで隠れられたらそれまでだけど、これまでの行動から考えるに、馬鹿正直にフィーロへ突撃してくるだけだろ。-->
 
 スキルで隠れられたらそれまでだけど、これまでの行動から考えるに、馬鹿正直にフィーロへ突撃してくるだけだろ。-->
 
 
He doesn't have the skills to hide like Raphtalia, and he is dependent on crystals for magic.
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He does not have the skills to hide like Rafatalia, and he is dependent on crystals for magic.
   
 
Until he finally acquires the skills to hide, based on his past behavior, he will continue to foolishly come directly charging at Firo.
 
Until he finally acquires the skills to hide, based on his past behavior, he will continue to foolishly come directly charging at Firo.
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We pass by the castle gates while chatting.
 
We pass by the castle gates while chatting.
   
The gatekeeper lets me through after I have taken my robe off to show my face, though there is a subtle change in his expression when he sees Sadina.
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The gatekeeper lets me through after I have taken my robe off to show my face, though there is a subtle change in his face when he sees Sadina.
   
 
Is that bitter face made for Sadina, who is obviously a Beastman? 
 
Is that bitter face made for Sadina, who is obviously a Beastman? 
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 女王が許可しているだけで実際の差別意識は根強いんだ。-->
 
 女王が許可しているだけで実際の差別意識は根強いんだ。-->
 
 
Ah, back when I was summoned as a Hero, at the victory party after the First Wave was over… weren't there considerably few demi-humans there?
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Ah, back when I was summoned as a hero at the victory party after the first wave was over…… weren't there considerably few demi-humans there?
   
 
The demi-humans have a low status in this country.
 
The demi-humans have a low status in this country.
   
I realized it a few times already.
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I have realized it a few times before.
   
 
The strong sense of discrimination is so deeply-rooted that even the Queen admitted to it.
 
The strong sense of discrimination is so deeply-rooted that even the Queen admitted to it.
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「ふー……」-->
 
「ふー……」-->
 
 
I inquired the Queen’s location from a servant. It looks like she's in the middle of conducting official business, but that seems like a stalling tactic because she knew I was coming.
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I ask about the Queen's whereabouts to a servant. It looks like she's in the middle of conducting official business, but that seems like a stalling tactic because she knew I was coming.
   
 
Will she come if I wait?
 
Will she come if I wait?
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I hear a sound of something falling behind me.
 
I hear a sound of something falling behind me.
   
Turning around, I see Trash with his mouth agape while staring at me.
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Turning around, I see Trash with his mouth hanging wide open while starring foolishly at me.
 
 
   
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“And……”
“And…” (Naofumi)
 
 
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「さあ皆の者! 盾を! 盾の悪魔をこの世から抹殺するんじゃ!」-->
 
「さあ皆の者! 盾を! 盾の悪魔をこの世から抹殺するんじゃ!」-->
 
 
There's a signboard attached to him that says “Do one lap around the castle as punishment. Do not get help no matter what!” signed with the Queen's name.
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Moreover, there's a signboard attached to him that says “Do one lap around the castle as punishment. Do not get help no matter what!” signed with the Queen's name.
   
What's with this guy?
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What is with this guy?
   
 
 
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“Come on everyone! It's time to erase the Devil of the Shield from this world!" (Trash)
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“Come on everyone! It's time to erase the Devil of the Shield from this world! (Trash)
 
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なんか立て札を持ってこっちに向けて走ってくる。周りの兵士は呆気に取られつつ、クズの前に立った。
 
なんか立て札を持ってこっちに向けて走ってくる。周りの兵士は呆気に取られつつ、クズの前に立った。
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Trash comes running at me with the sign. While the soldiers were still standing around dumbfounded, he was already in front of me.
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He comes running at me with the sign. While the soldiers standing around are dumbfounded, I am standing in front of Trash.
   
Then, Trash was immediately suppressed.
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And Trash is immediately suppressed.
   
 
 
“Let go of me! The Shield is the Devil, and he even brought a Hakuko<ref>TL Note: White Tiger</ref> into the castle! Kill him!”
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“Let go of me! Shield, he is the Devil, and he even brought a Hakuko<ref>TL Note: White Tiger</ref> into the castle! Kill him!”
 
 
   
…It sounds like Trash is hostile to the Hakuko in general.
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……I hear some amazing threats from Trash about the Hakuko species.
   
Seems like some famous lines from this world have come out from his mouth.
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Some famous lines come out.
   
 
Well, I have fun seeing Trash being overpowered.
 
Well, I have fun seeing Trash being overpowered.
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“Oh my wife! The Devil of the Shield has shown his true nature, and brought a Hakuko into the castle!” (Trash)
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“Oh my wife! The Devil of the Shield is showing his true nature and has brought a Hakuko into the castle.” (Trash)
   
 
“Is that so?” (Queen)
 
“Is that so?” (Queen)
   
“'Is that so?' That's all you have to say!? Those aren't the words I expected to hear!” (Trash)
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“Is that so, that's all you have to say!? Those aren't the words I expected to hear!” (Trash)
   
“The world is in crisis now. Dealing with the Wave is more important than dwelling on bad history. It is the law of nature for the Hakuko to be with the Shield, the God of the Demi-Humans. How could that make you angry?” (Queen)
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“The world is in crisis now. Dealing with the Wave is more important than dwelling on bad history. It is the law of nature for the Hakuko to be with the Shield, the God to the Demi-Humans. How could that make you angry?” (Queen)
 
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 なんかアッサリと女王が言うな。
 
 なんかアッサリと女王が言うな。
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The Queen does not mince her words.
 
The Queen does not mince her words.
   
I felt happy when she said that. Regardless if she was brainwashed or not.
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It makes me think that regardless of whether or not you are being brainwashed, I feel uplifted here.
   
Though I do… not have a shield with such an effect.
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Though I do not have…… a shield with such an effect.
   
 
Yeah, I definitely don't.
 
Yeah, I definitely don't.
 
 
   
“Guh… even though you are my wife, I will not allow you to defend a Hakuko!” (Trash)
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“Guh…… even though you are my wife, I will not allow you to defend a Hakuko!” (Trash)
   
 
“I do not need your forgiveness. I cannot permit you to continue looking at the world with such clouded eyes forever. Take him away.” (Queen)
 
“I do not need your forgiveness. I cannot permit you to continue looking at the world with such clouded eyes forever. Take him away.” (Queen)
   
“Let go of me! Vulture, do not let that vulture take advantage- J-JYHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!” (Trash) <ref>TL: He actually says the word eagle here.</ref>
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“Let go of me! Vulture, do not let that vulture take advantage- J-JYHAAAAaaaAaaaaAAAAaaa!” (Trash) <ref>TL: He actually says the word eagle here.</ref>
 
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 と、クズは何処かへ連れて行かれた。
 
 と、クズは何処かへ連れて行かれた。
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Trash is then taken somewhere else.
 
Trash is then taken somewhere else.
   
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That guy is noisy everywhere.
No matter where he goes, he will still be noisy.
 
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“Was that… because of me?” (Fohl)
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“Was that…… because of me?” (Fohl)
   
 
“Don't worry. That guy's just crazy.” (Naofumi)
 
“Don't worry. That guy's just crazy.” (Naofumi)
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“Is that so?” (Fohl)
 
“Is that so?” (Fohl)
   
“The law… I seem to have a mysterious relationship with the law of cause and effect.” (Naofumi)
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“The law…… I seem to have a mysterious relationship with the law of cause and effect.” (Naofumi)
 
 
   
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“What is it?” (Fohl)
 
“What is it?” (Fohl)
   
<!--TLC Needed-->“You… is the name of your grandfather is Tai Ran Ga Feon perhaps?” (Queen)
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“You…… perhaps the name of your grandfather is Tai Ran=Ga=Feon?” (Queen)
   
“Ah… that's right. However, what of it? What did my grandfather do?” (Fohl)
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“Ah…… that's right. However, what of it? What did my grandfather do?” (Fohl)
 
 
   
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“How do you know my grandfather?” (Fohl)
 
“How do you know my grandfather?” (Fohl)
   
“That person who was making a racket a while ago was an enemy of your grandfather.” (Queen)
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“That person who was making those noises awhile ago was an enemy of your grandfather.” (Queen)
   
“I see, wait what did you say…?” (Fohl)
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“I see, what did you say……?” (Fohl)
 
 
   
I am also surprised. How could you say such a thing with such ease? Well, if it was me, I would not have been able to turn a blind eye to such things so easily.
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I am also surprised. How could you say that with such ease? Well, I will never forgive such selfishness.
 
 
   
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“I didn't know at all. My parents never told me.” (Fohl)
 
“I didn't know at all. My parents never told me.” (Fohl)
   
“Is that so… it was rude of me to say that. I ask that you do not mind.” (Queen)
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“Is that so…… it was rude of me to say that. I ask that you do not mind.” (Queen)
   
“……” (Fohl)
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“……”
 
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“Iwatani-sama, are you facing any problems? How are you holding up?” (Queen)
 
“Iwatani-sama, are you facing any problems? How are you holding up?” (Queen)
   
“Well, I'm fine.” (Naofumi)
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“Well, I'm well.” (Naofumi)
   
“And what of your territory? Anything that happens reaches my ear.” (Queen)
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“And your territory? Anything that happens reaches my ear.” (Queen)
   
 
“Both areas are having difficulty dealing with your daughter.” (Naofumi)
 
“Both areas are having difficulty dealing with your daughter.” (Naofumi)
   
“Result-wise, is Melty useful?” (Queen)
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“In the end, is Melty useful.” (Queen)
   
“Well… I'm leaving the management of the town to her.” (Naofumi)
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“Well…… I cannot leave the management of the town to her.” (Naofumi)
 
 
   
Though she may be a brat, the people of the town seem to have not faced many problems.
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Though it looks like due to the brat, the people of the town appear to have not faced many problems.
   
I cannot say anything more because she has only just recently taken over management of the village for a few days.
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I cannot say anything more because she has only just taken over the management for a few days.
 
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<!--TLC Needed-->"We must take into account...... the possibility of that child crossing over the border together with Ren-sama and that other woman from the Spear Hero's party.” (Queen)
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"We must take into account...... the possibility of that child crossing over the border together with Ren-sama and that other woman from the Spear Hero's party.” (Queen)
   
<!--TLC Needed-->“When putting together Motoyasu's and Elena's stories, certainly there are other countries they could flee to.”
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“When putting together Motoyasu's and Elena's stories, certainly there are other countries they could flee to.”
 
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なんだかんだでヴィッチが関所とかを通れば顔で分かるはずなんだ。なのにそれを突破する方法と言ったら……。
 
なんだかんだでヴィッチが関所とかを通れば顔で分かるはずなんだ。なのにそれを突破する方法と言ったら……。
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All in all, I would not be surprised if Witch attempts to pass through the border's barrier. However, if I were to guess methods she may use to break through it…
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All in all, I would not be surprised if Witch attempts to pass through the border's barrier. However, if I were to guess methods she may use to break through it……
   
 
Perhaps going over a mountain?
 
Perhaps going over a mountain?
   
That Witch? She would never go through such an undignified method to enter another country.
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That Witch? She would never go through such an undignified method to enter another counter.
   
 
Smuggling? Or hiding in a cargo hold? Neither options would be acceptable for her.
 
Smuggling? Or hiding in a cargo hold? Neither options would be acceptable for her.
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“Can't you just smoke her out with the slave's crest?” (Naofumi)
 
“Can't you just smoke her out with the slave's crest?” (Naofumi)
   
“It's not possible. There is something interfering…” (Queen)
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“It's not possible. There is something interfering……” (Queen)
 
 
   
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Mu……
Mu…
 
 
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「もう殺すか?」
 
「もう殺すか?」
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“Can I kill her?” (Naofumi)
 
“Can I kill her?” (Naofumi)
   
“If possible, don't…” (Queen)
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“If possible, don't……” (Queen)
   
“Is it necessary to keep that girl alive and arrest her? Don't tell me it's because of the need to keep what she did hidden.” (Naofumi)
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“Is it necessary to keep that girl alive and arrest her? Don't tell me it's because of the need to keep what she did hidden.”
   
 
"More or less. To put it specifically, it's a means to avoid a war.” (Queen)
 
"More or less. To put it specifically, it's a means to avoid a war.” (Queen)
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“Say what?” (Naofumi)
 
“Say what?” (Naofumi)
   
“That child, I hate her from the bottom of my heart. To the point that I would wholeheartedly ignore her denials and supplications even if she was writhing before me in agony.” (Queen) <ref>ED Note: Help...T_T EDITE: Still not completely right, but better. <!--EDN: Grammar good. Is the meaning right?--></ref>
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“That child, I hate her from the bottom of my heart. To the point of having her writhing and wholeheartedly ignoring her denial and supplications” (Queen) <ref>ED Note: Help...T_T EDITE: Still not completely right, but better.</ref>
   
“Ho…” (Naofumi)
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“Hō……” (Naofumi)
   
“It's…” (Queen)
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“It's……” (Queen)
   
 
“Oh, I thought of something better.” (Queen)
 
“Oh, I thought of something better.” (Queen)
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By all means, I would really like to enjoy the pleasant surprise of witnessing that moment while not knowing her fate beforehand.
 
By all means, I would really like to enjoy the pleasant surprise of witnessing that moment while not knowing her fate beforehand.
   
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It seems I can have more fun mentally by making a Daruma doll. Even if the Daruma Doll wears out, in this world, it can be cured so long as there is money due to the miracles of the recovery magic or alchemy.
 
 
   
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“Oh, it is better that you do not know everything by all means.” (Queen)
 
“Oh, it is better that you do not know everything by all means.” (Queen)
   
"But as punishment, for the sake of education, an iron brand should be firmly thrust into her." (Naofumi)
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"But as punishment, for the sake of education, an iron brand should be firmly thrust in her." (Naofumi)
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<!--Original TL: “But as punishment for the previous person will suffer by being branded in iron order to teach you.”-->
   
 
“Does that sound good to you?” (Queen)
 
“Does that sound good to you?” (Queen)
   
“…How is that good? (Fohl)
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“……how is that good? (Fohl)
 
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Fohl retorts in discomfort. Because Raphtalia is not around, there is no helping it.
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Fohl retorts in discomfort. Because Rafatalia is not around, there is no helping it.
   
If Raphtalia was here, this would have been her cue to retort.
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If Rafatalia was here, this would have been her cue to retort.
   
 
Though I feel like I've become some stand-up comedian. <ref>TL: I think he's making a joke here about plunging/thrusting the branding iron and putting Fohl in an uncomfortable/unpleasant situation) EDIT: nope, wrong translation of the former sentences; stand-up comedians come in a duo of a fool and a straight man who retorts to the fool.</ref>
 
Though I feel like I've become some stand-up comedian. <ref>TL: I think he's making a joke here about plunging/thrusting the branding iron and putting Fohl in an uncomfortable/unpleasant situation) EDIT: nope, wrong translation of the former sentences; stand-up comedians come in a duo of a fool and a straight man who retorts to the fool.</ref>
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I mean, from normal common sense standpoint, I wouldn't trust a Hero who rejoices from branding someone with an iron.
 
I mean, from normal common sense standpoint, I wouldn't trust a Hero who rejoices from branding someone with an iron.
   
I'm not saying that I want to be trusted, but I'd better hide my inner feelings a little bit more.
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I'm not saying that I want to be trusted, but I better hide my inner feelings a little bit more.
 
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しかし、相手はヴィッチだからな。いざその場に立ったら笑ってそう。
 
しかし、相手はヴィッチだからな。いざその場に立ったら笑ってそう。
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“The woman that you hate, what kind of terrible person is she?” (Fohl)
 
“The woman that you hate, what kind of terrible person is she?” (Fohl)
   
<!--Grammar improvement needed-->“Well, to give you an example, she's the type of person who would use your sister's body to commit various crimes, and once her use runs out, your crying sister would then be tossed away with a kick even as she laughs loudly. (Naofumi)
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“Well, to give you an example, she's the type of person who would use your sister's body to commit various crimes, and once her use runs out, your crying sister would then be tossed away with a kick even as she laughs loudly. (Naofumi)
   
   
 
The victims are mainly Motoyasu and me.
 
The victims are mainly Motoyasu and me.
   
I'm sure the number of victims will continue to grow until she is caught in the future, though.
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I'm sure the number of victims will grow until she is caught in the future, though.
 
 
   
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Why would I treat Atlas in such a way?.
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Why wouldn I treat Atlas in such a way.
   
Though I'll consider selling her if you are worthless.
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Though I consider selling her if you are worthless.
 
 
   
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“It was within the reach of my ear. I have already made preparations for you to visit the Hourglass of the Dragon's Era at any time. Please also go receive the sand at the same time.” (Queen)
 
“It was within the reach of my ear. I have already made preparations for you to visit the Hourglass of the Dragon's Era at any time. Please also go receive the sand at the same time.” (Queen)
   
<!--Sentence Fluency Check Needed-->“It would be convenient if the Warp skill could be used for travel.” (Naofumi)
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“It would be convenient if the Warp skill could be used for travel.” (Naofumi)
   
 
“By all means, please come to the castle at any time. That way, I can report any developments to Iwatani-sama as soon as they occur.” (Queen)
 
“By all means, please come to the castle at any time. That way, I can report any developments to Iwatani-sama as soon as they occur.” (Queen)
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Ah, I must go and meet the Old Man, and I have paid a visit to the castle for the time being, so there shouldn't be a problem.
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Ah, I must go and meet the Old Man, and I paid a visit to the castle for the time being, so there shouldn't be a problem.
   
 
 
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“I understand. I think I will attend to your request for their capture as soon as the conditions are met. Moving on, there is the issue about the Spear Hero.” (Naofumi)
 
“I understand. I think I will attend to your request for their capture as soon as the conditions are met. Moving on, there is the issue about the Spear Hero.” (Naofumi)
   
“That…” (Firo)
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“That……” (Firo)
 
 
   
 
Firo leans back with a wince and hides under my robe.
 
Firo leans back with a wince and hides under my robe.
   
<!--TLC Needed-->I do not encourage it because it is unpleasant under there.
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I do not encourage it because it is unpleasant under there.
 
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「俺も悪いとは思っている。あれは既に逃げるとかはしそうにない。それでも捕まえるか?」
 
「俺も悪いとは思っている。あれは既に逃げるとかはしそうにない。それでも捕まえるか?」
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 あいつ、人の話を全然聞かないんだ。
 
 あいつ、人の話を全然聞かないんだ。
 
 俺が言っても、フィーロの事だけを考えて居そうで怖い。
 
 俺が言っても、フィーロの事だけを考えて居そうで怖い。
 フィーロに言わせるという手もあるが、なんかおかしい方向に勘違いしそうだ。-->
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 フィーロに言わせるという手もあるが、なんかおかしい方向に勘違いしそうだ。
 
 
   
 
“I feel guilty for deciding on my own to let him escape. Do I still attempt catch him?” (Naofumi)
 
“I feel guilty for deciding on my own to let him escape. Do I still attempt catch him?” (Naofumi)
   
<!--TLC Needed-->“Iwatani-sama is obligated to report anything that has to do with the Spear Hero, and if possible, try to get him to fight in the Wave… but there is no problem as long as I get to hear a report.” (Queen)
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“Iwatani-sama is obligated to report anything that has to do with the Spear Hero, and if possible, try to get him to fight in the Wave……but there is no problem as long as I get to hear a report.” (Queen)
 
“What do you mean by that…?” (Naofumi)
 
   
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“What do you mean by that……?” (Naofumi)
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<!--TLC Needed-->This person does not listen to other people's stories at all.
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This person does not listen to other people's stories at all.
   
<!--TLC Needed-->Even if I were to pursue him, I think Firo is the only one who would be scared.
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Even if I say something, I think Firo is the only one who would be scared.
   
<!--TLC Needed-->There is also the option of letting Firo say something, but it seems that would lead to a funny misunderstanding.
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There is also the option of letting Firo say something, but it seems that would lead to a funny misunderstanding.
 
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「奴隷に出来れば良いのですが、勇者に奴隷紋は効果が無いのですよ」
 
「奴隷に出来れば良いのですが、勇者に奴隷紋は効果が無いのですよ」
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<!--TLC Needed-->“It should be possible for a slave, but the slave crest does not have an effect on a Hero.” (Queen)
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“It should be possible for a slave, but the slave crest does not have an effect on a Hero.” (Queen)
   
“So it seems… Looks like I'll have to persuade them once I catch them.” (Naofumi)
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“So it seems…… Looks like I'll have to persuade them once I catch them.” (Naofumi)
   
 
“Thank you. We will also investigate anything that has to do with the Sword Hero.” (Queen)
 
“Thank you. We will also investigate anything that has to do with the Sword Hero.” (Queen)
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Because it has something to do with Witch, there is an unpleasant feeling that's attached to it.
 
Because it has something to do with Witch, there is an unpleasant feeling that's attached to it.
   
That woman… What on earth happened to make her grow up into such a character? Though I didn't want to know about it for obvious reasons, I wonder how she turned out that way.
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That woman…… What on earth happened to make her grow up into such a character? Though I didn't want to know about it for obvious reasons, I wonder how she turned out that way.
 
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「なあ、ヴィッチはなんであんな風になったんだ? 害を吐き散らかして、人を嵌める事に関しては天才的だよな」
 
「なあ、ヴィッチはなんであんな風になったんだ? 害を吐き散らかして、人を嵌める事に関しては天才的だよな」
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I mean, you should have been aware of her bad personality.
 
I mean, you should have been aware of her bad personality.
   
Oh wait, I'm also aware that I have a bad personality.
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Oh, I'm also aware that I have a bad personality.
 
 
   
“As for that person, his daughter remained the apple of his eye even though she hurts others, and in the end they both became fools.” (Queen)
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“As for that person, his daughter remained the apple of his eye even though she hurt others, and in the end they both became fools.” (Queen)
 
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 女王が遠い目で語る。
 
 女王が遠い目で語る。
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“Many times have I tried to fix her bad personality. I even let her study abroad in a school in Foburei to learn cultures. But the result was…” <ref>TL: Foburei is the most powerful country. The hero summons was originally supposed to be performed here.</ref>
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“Many times have I tried to fix her bad personality. I even let her study abroad in a school in Foburei to learn cultures. But the result was……” <ref>TL: Foburei is the most powerful country. The hero summons was originally supposed to be performed here.</ref>
 
 
   
Witch's school period.<ref>As in "what happened when she was going to school"</ref>
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Witch's school pariod<ref>As in "what happened when she was going to school"</ref>.
   
I really don't want to see that in my life.
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I really don't want to see it in my life.
 
 
   
“By the way, it was at the school in Foburei that that child graduated from her virginity.” (Queen)
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“By the way, it was at the school in Foburei that that child graduated from her virgin status.” (Queen)
   
 
“Witch's past is not something I give a damn about!” (Naofumi)
 
“Witch's past is not something I give a damn about!” (Naofumi)
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本当どうでもいいですよね。-->
 
本当どうでもいいですよね。-->
 
 
 
 
It really did not matter.
 
It really did not matter.
   
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