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I just realised that the part at the end is the /sixth/ day; this shifts the focus of attention slightly towards 'starvation as an immanent threat'.
 
I just realised that the part at the end is the /sixth/ day; this shifts the focus of attention slightly towards 'starvation as an immanent threat'.
   
I'm starting to get really annoyed by what a flustered wimp Kazuki is. It wasn't as bad when he could get led around on a leash by Maria in the first couple volumes, but now that his composure is really being challenged, and there's a real antagonist that he has to face down in Daiya, he's really turning out to be a useless sack of wet towels. This series is still unbelievably awesome, but having the protagonist be so useless and malleable leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
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*I'm starting to get really annoyed by what a flustered wimp Kazuki is. It wasn't as bad when he could get led around on a leash by Maria in the first couple volumes, but now that his composure is really being challenged, and there's a real antagonist that he has to face down in Daiya, he's really turning out to be a useless sack of wet towels. This series is still unbelievably awesome, but having the protagonist be so useless and malleable leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
   
*Plus, if Kazuki had a bit of character development and became more assertive and intelligent, maybe he could finally catch Maria off-guard and their romantic/sexual tension could either be heightened to a meaningful feature, or even resolved in a romance arc. I just don't like it languishing the way it is right now.--[[User:Variance|Variance]] 00:20, 27 May 2010 (UTC)
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Plus, if Kazuki had a bit of character development and became more assertive and intelligent, maybe he could finally catch Maria off-guard and their romantic/sexual tension could either be heightened to a meaningful feature, or even resolved in a romance arc. I just don't like it languishing the way it is right now.--[[User:Variance|Variance]] 00:20, 27 May 2010 (UTC)
 
First of all, this Round had me thinking '''"What the FUCK!?What the FUCK!?''' '''''WhattheFUCKwhattheFUCKwhattheFUCK!?''''' Seriously just wanted to raeg out loud :/
 
 
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"And yet, she lamented to me, looking so shameful.
 
---It's painful.
 
She lamented. "
 
 
Shouldn't it be 'She '''had''' lamented?' [[User:MatrixM|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM|talk]]) 16:17, 15 July 2013 (CDT)
 
: I think I've figured out what's going now (didn't notice the player tag at the end of the previous Round) but the author is a massive troll for making me think things went completely batshit crazy there. [[User:MatrixM|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM|talk]]) 16:47, 15 July 2013 (CDT)
 

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