Editing Talk:Campione!:Volume 4 Chapter2


 When even the large rocks begun falling on her head, Liliana instantly used the [Leap] magic. With the use of this spell, a distance of over a hundred meters could be covered in roughly ten seconds. 

For this, covering only a hundred meters in ten seconds doesn't seem especially fast, seeing as how Usain Bolt can be faster than that. Maybe the original text is as so, but wouldn't you agree that a more suitable time would be something like 1 second? Especially since the next sentence in the story says something like it "would have seemed like teleportation" -- [[User:Royaloyalz|Royaloyalz]] ([[User talk:Royaloyalz|talk]]) 03:13, 18 June 2013 (CDT)
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−	a distance of over a hundred meters could be covered in roughly ten seconds.	+	When even the large rocks begun falling on her head, Liliana instantly used the [Leap] magic. With the use of this spell, a distance of over a hundred meters could be covered in roughly ten seconds.

	For this, covering only a hundred meters in ten seconds doesn't seem especially fast, seeing as how Usain Bolt can be faster than that. Maybe the original text is as so, but wouldn't you agree that a more suitable time would be something like 1 second? Especially since the next sentence in the story says something like it "would have seemed like teleportation" -- [[User:Royaloyalz\|Royaloyalz]] ([[User talk:Royaloyalz\|talk]]) 03:13, 18 June 2013 (CDT)		For this, covering only a hundred meters in ten seconds doesn't seem especially fast, seeing as how Usain Bolt can be faster than that. Maybe the original text is as so, but wouldn't you agree that a more suitable time would be something like 1 second? Especially since the next sentence in the story says something like it "would have seemed like teleportation" -- [[User:Royaloyalz\|Royaloyalz]] ([[User talk:Royaloyalz\|talk]]) 03:13, 18 June 2013 (CDT)