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“Haa, haa…”
 
“Haa, haa…”
   
—Kamito and the others had fought with Valaraukar, and at that moment.
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—Kamito and the others had fought with «Valaraukar», and at that moment.
   
Fianna felt a strange sense of uneasiness, and went towards the heart of the abandoned city Megidoa.
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Fianna felt a strange sense of uneasiness, and went towards the heart of the abandoned city «Megidoa».
   
 
Her perception at times like this was often right. She, who held unparalleled talent as a princess maiden, would never neglect her intuition.
 
Her perception at times like this was often right. She, who held unparalleled talent as a princess maiden, would never neglect her intuition.
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“…Scarlet!?”
 
“…Scarlet!?”
   
What was there was Claire’s hell cat spirit.
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What was there was Claire’s hellcat spirit.
   
 
She noticed that it somewhat seemed smaller than usual.
 
She noticed that it somewhat seemed smaller than usual.
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Seemingly worried, the hell cat spirit was going in circles around her.
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Seemingly worried, the hellcat spirit was going in circles around her.
   
Upon taking a spirit crystal from her uniform pocket, Fianna pressed it onto Claire's chest.
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Upon taking a spirit ore from her uniform pocket, Fianna pressed it onto Claire's chest.
   
 
The sacred light, possessing healing powers, faintly shone.
 
The sacred light, possessing healing powers, faintly shone.
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"...! Don't tell me, this is..."
 
"...! Don't tell me, this is..."
   
It was a familiar demon sword of darkness. ...Even its appearance was subtly different, but there wasn't a doubt, it was Ren Ashbell's elemental waffe, the Vorpal Sword.
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It was a familiar demon sword of darkness. ...Even its appearance was subtly different, but there wasn't a doubt, it was Ren Ashbell's elemental waffe, the «Vorpal Sword».
   
 
"Claire, why do you have...?"
 
"Claire, why do you have...?"
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Fianna asked back, and at that moment.
 
Fianna asked back, and at that moment.
   
"I should have had already warned you not to appear in front of me again, Fianna Ray Ordesia."
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"I should have had already warn you not to appear in front of me again, Fianna Ray Ordesia."
   
 
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She calmly gulped.
 
She calmly gulped.
   
While feeling cold sweat spouting out from her whole body, Fianna turned around.
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While feeling cold sweat spouting out from her whole body, Fianna turned behind.
   
 
There was a crimson flame violently blazing.
 
There was a crimson flame violently blazing.
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She had glamorous long black hair and a deep-crimson-red mask that was like scraped out of a burning flame.
 
She had glamorous long black hair and a deep-crimson-red mask that was like scraped out of a burning flame.
   
She wore a military uniform of the Theocracy, and her body was clad in sparks fluttering down.
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She wore a military uniform of the Empire, and her body was clad in sparks fluttering down.
   
Leader of Team Inferno. Strongest Blade Dancer—Ren Ashbell.
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Leader of «Team Inferno». Strongest Blade Dancer—Ren Ashbell.
   
 
...No. Fianna already knew her true identity.
 
...No. Fianna already knew her true identity.
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—Her motive was obvious.
 
—Her motive was obvious.
   
(...The Darkness Queen.)
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(...«The Darkness Queen».)
   
 
Fianna stood up to protect Claire who had fallen.
 
Fianna stood up to protect Claire who had fallen.
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"Rubia-sama, I don't understand what beliefs you have. However, if you're going to hurt my friends—I'll... stop you!"
 
"Rubia-sama, I don't understand what beliefs you have. However, if you're going to hurt my friends—I'll... stop you!"
   
Agilely drawing a magic formation in the air, she summoned Georgios.
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Agilely drawing a magic formation in the air, she summoned «Georgios».
   
 
Instantly unsheathing its sword, the knight spirit rushed at her.
 
Instantly unsheathing its sword, the knight spirit rushed at her.
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Ren Ashbell was clad in the freezing flame, and her black hair was violently fluttering.
 
Ren Ashbell was clad in the freezing flame, and her black hair was violently fluttering.
   
"—Your time is up. I shall welcome the Darkness Queen into my hands."
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"—Your time is up. I shall welcome the «Darkness Queen» into my hands."
   
 
Then, she—
 
Then, she—
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Removed the deep-crimson mask that concealed her face.
 
Removed the deep-crimson mask that concealed her face.
   
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<nowiki>*</nowiki>Crack* The mask landed on the ground and broke.
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"...!"
 
"...!"
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As if the flames were painting over the darkness—
 
As if the flames were painting over the darkness—
   
That was the color of her hair during the time she was once called the Fire Queen.
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That was the color of her hair during the time she was once called the «Fire Queen».
   
 
Elstein red.
 
Elstein red.

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