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Sweet smells tickled his nostrils. At the shrine, delicious-looking baked sweets were piled up like a mountain and princess maidens dispatched from the academy were showcasing a blade dance that entertained the spirits.
 
Sweet smells tickled his nostrils. At the shrine, delicious-looking baked sweets were piled up like a mountain and princess maidens dispatched from the academy were showcasing a blade dance that entertained the spirits.
   
"However, where did that girl go?"
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"However, where did that girl go?
   
 
As his gaze fell towards the chocolate that Claire had thrown aside—
 
As his gaze fell towards the chocolate that Claire had thrown aside—
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Kamito breathed a sigh, exasperated.
 
Kamito breathed a sigh, exasperated.
   
Together with Ellis and the other two<!-- Wasn't it 3 people? Or did you meant some other people than the Knights? -->, they had given chase after Claire. But halfway through, the time for the change of patrols came and they had to give up. With that, they started their rounds around the Wind area.
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Together with Ellis and the other two<!-- Wasn't it 3 people? Or did you meant some other people than the Knights? -->, they had given chase after Claire. But halfway through, the time for the change of patrols came and they had to give up. With that, they started their rounds around the «Wind» area.
   
 
"....."
 
"....."
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That was it— Kamito suddenly understood.
 
That was it— Kamito suddenly understood.
   
Thinking about it, Ellis was also a young lady with a prestigious noble background.
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Thinking about it, Ellis was also an ojou-sama with a prestigious noble background.
   
 
Now that he thought about it, Claire and the others seemed like they were hesitating about joining hands with him when they were departing yesterday. To them who were the daughters of nobles, joining hands with a boy might be an act more embarrassing than he imagined.
 
Now that he thought about it, Claire and the others seemed like they were hesitating about joining hands with him when they were departing yesterday. To them who were the daughters of nobles, joining hands with a boy might be an act more embarrassing than he imagined.
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As Ellis embarrassedly looked away, she tightly squeezed his hand back.
 
As Ellis embarrassedly looked away, she tightly squeezed his hand back.
   
It was the soft feeling of a girl's hands. The reason hard calluses were formed here-and-there was surely the proof that she seriously practiced her martial arts.
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It was the soft feeling of a girl's hands. The reason hard calluses were formed here-and-there was surely the proof that she seriously practised her martial arts.
   
 
Just like that, Ellis walked on stiffly like a spring-action toy.
 
Just like that, Ellis walked on stiffly like a spring-action toy.
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To be honest, he was a little absent-minded.
 
To be honest, he was a little absent-minded.
   
From a moment ago, Ellis' large breasts were pressing on his arm.
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From a moment ago, Ellis' large busts were pressing on his arm.
   
Although, he didn't directly touch them because her Knights breastplate was there, the sensation of their elasticity was being transmitted whether he liked it or not. The reason his eyes unconsciously moved to her willful body beneath her armor was something that couldn't be helped for a boy in puberty.
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Although, he didn't directly touch them because her Knights breastplate was there, the sensation of their elasticity was being transmitted whether he liked it or not. The reason his eyes unconsciously moved to her willful body beneath her armour was something that couldn't be helped for a boy in puberty.
   
 
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When Kamito brought up yesterday's maid's outfit incident to tease her, her face turned bright red as she flared up.
 
When Kamito brought up yesterday's maid's outfit incident to tease her, her face turned bright red as she flared up.
   
"Hmph! After all, I'm not suited for those sort of beautiful clothing!"
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"Hmph! After all, I'm not suited for those sort of beautiful clothings!"
   
 
"There's no such thing. Ellis in her usual knight clothing is also attractive but I also want to see Ellis wearing clothes like these."
 
"There's no such thing. Ellis in her usual knight clothing is also attractive but I also want to see Ellis wearing clothes like these."
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Ellis slowly turned her face toward him.
 
Ellis slowly turned her face toward him.
   
"At first, it was because of the admiration towards my esteemed sister."
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"At first, it was because of the admiration towards Aneue."
   
 
"That Velsaria Eva?"
 
"That Velsaria Eva?"
   
"That's right. My esteemed sister was a splendid knight. She was a person who was disciplined with herself, hated injustice, was earnestly polishing her sword skills, and was always aiming for a way of life like attaining the objectives of the people."
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"That's right. Aneue was a splendid knight. She was a person who was disciplined with herself, hated injustice, was earnestly polishing her sword skills, and was always aiming for a way of life like attaining the objectives of the people."
   
 
As if gazing at somewhere far away, she looked up at the sky that was dyed by the faint sunset.
 
As if gazing at somewhere far away, she looked up at the sky that was dyed by the faint sunset.
   
"From when I was a child, I had always been thinking of wanting to be a knight like my esteemed sister. As the successor of the Fahrengart family, I want to be a spirit knight that protects many people. So, when I joined the academy, I immediately made an application to the Sylphid Knights that she was serving as Captain of."
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"From when I was a child, I had always been thinking of wanting to be a knight like Aneue. As the successor of the Fahrengart family, I want to be a spirit knight that protects many people. So, when I joined the academy, I immediately made an application to the Sylphid Knights that Aneue was serving as Captain."
   
 
Suddenly, Ellis's reddish-brown pupils darkened.
 
Suddenly, Ellis's reddish-brown pupils darkened.
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However— She continued.
 
However— She continued.
   
"When I joined the academy, my esteemed sister had already changed. As if she was spurred on by something, she had turned into someone merely pursuing power. Of course, I can't say that way of life is absolutely wrong. Pursuing for superior power is also the proper way of life as an elementalist. However, at the very least, that person now isn't the knight I admired."
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"When I joined the academy, Aneue had already changed. As if she was spurred on by something, she had turned into someone merely pursuing power. Of course, I can't say that way of life is absolutely wrong. Pursuing for superior power is also the proper way of life as an elementalist. However, at the very least, that person now isn't the knight I admired."
   
 
"What had changed her like that?"
 
"What had changed her like that?"
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"It's probably ''the match with Ren Ashbell three years ago''."
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"It's probably '''the match with Ren Ashbell three years ago'''."
   
 
"...!?"
 
"...!?"
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Without thinking, Kamito had raised his voice.
 
Without thinking, Kamito had raised his voice.
   
"I'm also not sure what happened. However, with that match, it is a fact that my esteemed sister had changed."
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"I'm also not sure what happened. However, with that match, it is a fact that Aneue had changed."
   
 
"..."
 
"..."
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It was the left hand that defeated Velsaria and won through the Blade Dance three years ago.
 
It was the left hand that defeated Velsaria and won through the Blade Dance three years ago.
   
It was the left hand that had cut down many Wishes for the sake of victory.
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It was the left hand that had cut down many «wishes» for the sake of victory.
   
 
(—The me three years ago had not been looking at anything.)
 
(—The me three years ago had not been looking at anything.)
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Her reddish-brown pupils harbored strong will.
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Her reddish-brown pupils harboured strong will.
   
"I want to show my esteemed sister it, the way of the knight I believe in. Although I am still inexperienced now, I am thinking of wanting to seize the thing that lies beyond power someday. For that reason, I'm participating in the Blade Dance."
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"I want to show Aneue it, the way of the knight I believe in. Although I am still inexperienced now, I am thinking of wanting to seize the thing that lies beyond power someday. For that reason, I'm participating in the Blade Dance."
   
 
For the sake of the way of the knight I believe in—<!--just leave this like this for now-->
 
For the sake of the way of the knight I believe in—<!--just leave this like this for now-->
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However, Ellis lightly shook her head.
 
However, Ellis lightly shook her head.
   
"Of course, I also had resented her when my esteemed sister was defeated. However, while looking at Ren Ashbell winning and winning, I noticed that I was getting captivated by her."
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"Of course, I also had resented her when Aneue was defeated. However, while looking at Ren Ashbell winning and winning, I noticed that I was getting captivated by her."
   
"I don't get it. She should be similar to the other elementalists, merely dancing a blade dance for the Wish. It's not like she has a splendid goal like Ellis—"
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"I don't get it. She should be similar to the other elementalists, merely dancing a blade dance for the «wish». It's not like she has a splendid goal like Ellis—"
   
 
"Wrong"
 
"Wrong"
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For someone— That was correct. The reason Kamito participated the Blade Dance was for her.
 
For someone— That was correct. The reason Kamito participated the Blade Dance was for her.
   
Losing himself, he swung his sword for the sake of granting her one and only desired Wish.
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Losing himself, he swung his sword for the sake of granting her one and only desired «wish».
   
 
Even if, for example, that result was something disgusting.
 
Even if, for example, that result was something disgusting.
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Claire rubbed her eyes briskly with her uniform sleeves.
 
Claire rubbed her eyes briskly with her uniform sleeves.
   
The cold evening wind blew her red twintailed hair like it was making fun of her.
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The cold evening wind blew her red twin-tailed hair like it was making fun of her.
   
 
Claire bit her lips tightly and dropped her sight onto her leather loafers.
 
Claire bit her lips tightly and dropped her sight onto her leather loafers.
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Upon voicing it out, she suddenly became unbearably lonely.<!--taking a break here-->
 
Upon voicing it out, she suddenly became unbearably lonely.<!--taking a break here-->
   
Every year, both her parents, her sister and the locals would gather in great numbers in their castle and a grand birthday party would be held. She would wear a beautiful dress, the table would be fully lined up with her favorite cakes and feasts, and she would be sleeping in a warm bed together with her sister, who would return from the Divine Ritual Institute only on that day— that would be the most enjoyable day of the year.
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Every year, both her parents, her sister and the locals would gather in great numbers in their castle and a grand birthday party would be held. She would wear a beautiful dress, the table would be fully lined up with her favourite cakes and feasts, and she would be sleeping in a warm bed together with her sister, who would return from the «Divine Ritual Institute» only on that day— that would be the most enjoyable day of the year.
   
 
However, four years ago— on that day when her sister Rubia Elstein betrayed the Elemental Lord of Fire.
 
However, four years ago— on that day when her sister Rubia Elstein betrayed the Elemental Lord of Fire.
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(My goals are to win through the Blade Dance and know the truth of four years ago. For that objective, I have to become even stronger—)
 
(My goals are to win through the Blade Dance and know the truth of four years ago. For that objective, I have to become even stronger—)
   
Her red twintailed hair bristled up like flames.
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Her red twin-tailed hair bristled up like flames.
   
 
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(Even if someone like Kamito isn't there, I'll—)
 
(Even if someone like Kamito isn't there, I'll—)
   
"Fufu, you seem to be harboring a lot of stress, Miss Hell Cat."
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"Fufu, you seem to be harbouring a lot of stress, hellcat ojou-sama."
   
 
"...!?"
 
"...!?"
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Vivian Melosa swung both her hands to show her.
 
Vivian Melosa swung both her hands to show her.
   
"Despite that I took great pains on planning to lend you power."
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"Despite that I took great pains on planning to lend you power.
   
 
"...Power?"
 
"...Power?"
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Her words roaringly reverberated.
 
Her words roaringly reverberated.
   
Claire couldn't move like her feet were bound.
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Claire couldn't move like her feet were binded.
   
 
(This is domination magic?!)
 
(This is domination magic?!)
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"... You"
 
"... You"
   
"If you implanted my Cursed Armament Seal, your little hell cat will become an even mightier spirit."
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"If you implanted my «Cursed Armament Seal», your hellcat-chan will become an even mightier spirit."
   
 
It hurt like her head was splitting. Even if she plugged her ears with both hands, the words penetrated through.
 
It hurt like her head was splitting. Even if she plugged her ears with both hands, the words penetrated through.
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—Hey, don't you want power?
 
—Hey, don't you want power?
   
—The power to overwhelm everything— The power to achieve your Wish.
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—The power to overwhelm everything— The power to achieve your «wish».
   
 
(...It's obvious that I want something like that!)
 
(...It's obvious that I want something like that!)
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"Don't look down on me!"
 
"Don't look down on me!"
   
In an instant, Claire's blazing Flametounge manifested in her hand, and mowed down the space before her.
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In an instant, Claire's blazing Flame Tongue manifested in her hand, and mowed down the space before her.
   
 
"...My domination magic was broken?"
 
"...My domination magic was broken?"
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"My apologies but I'll reject your forceful sale."
 
"My apologies but I'll reject your forceful sale."
   
As Claire raised her breathing, she swung her Flametounge with a snap as if to shake off the temptation.
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As Claire raised her breathing, she swung her Flame Tongue with a snap as if to shake off the temptation.
   
 
"How disappointing. I thought you had the qualifications but it looks like I miscalculated."
 
"How disappointing. I thought you had the qualifications but it looks like I miscalculated."
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If you want power— I will become your contracted spirit.<!--leave this like this first-->
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If you want power— I will become your contract spirit.<!--leave this like this first-->
   
 
(...After all, he had promised me)
 
(...After all, he had promised me)
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"...Wa...a...laire...Rouge...Aaaahhh!"
 
"...Wa...a...laire...Rouge...Aaaahhh!"
   
The adamantine elementalist girl released an ear-splitting wail.
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The adamantine elementalist girl released a ear-splitting wail.
   
 
In that instant, a violent wind swept over, and a huge beast appeared from nowhere.
 
In that instant, a violent wind swept over, and a huge beast appeared from nowhere.
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Over there— There was large deer of the metal attribute, which easily surpassed Claire's height.
 
Over there— There was large deer of the metal attribute, which easily surpassed Claire's height.
   
It had two horns that extended out radically and black pupils that harbored signs of atrocity.
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It had two horns that extended out radically and black pupils that harboured signs of atrocity.
   
 
It had a terrifying air of intimidation that caused her skin to tremble.
 
It had a terrifying air of intimidation that caused her skin to tremble.
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Vivian Melosa chuckled.
 
Vivian Melosa chuckled.
   
"So, would you please cooperate with my experiment, Miss Hell Cat."
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"So, would you please cooperate with my experiment, hellcat ojou-sama."
   
 
"...!?"
 
"...!?"
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"I think reconciling is not going to be that hard. Wasn't that chocolate from just now Claire Rouge's handmade item?"
 
"I think reconciling is not going to be that hard. Wasn't that chocolate from just now Claire Rouge's handmade item?"
   
"Ah, it looks like it. It also looks like she practiced yesterday."
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"Ah, it looks like it. It also looks like she practised yesterday."
   
 
"For her to give that on the day of the Valentia Holy Festival means that, err, she doesn't even hate you, I think... I mean, I think that she wants to reconcile, right?"
 
"For her to give that on the day of the Valentia Holy Festival means that, err, she doesn't even hate you, I think... I mean, I think that she wants to reconcile, right?"
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As expected of being used to these sort of situations, Ellis was very calm.
 
As expected of being used to these sort of situations, Ellis was very calm.
   
She had already armed her elemental waffe Ray Hawk in her hand.
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She had already armed her elemental waffe «Ray Hawk» in her hand.
   
 
"The investigation of the cause will be done later. I've concluded this situation to be a level five spirit disaster. Let's exterminate it, Kamito."
 
"The investigation of the cause will be done later. I've concluded this situation to be a level five spirit disaster. Let's exterminate it, Kamito."
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Hearing Ellis' shout, Kamito quickly turned his head around.
 
Hearing Ellis' shout, Kamito quickly turned his head around.
   
The demon mirror spirit was stampeding its feet violent on the ground.
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The demonic mirror spirit was stampeding its feet violent on the ground.
   
 
In its path, there was a small girl who was petrified.
 
In its path, there was a small girl who was petrified.
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With that timing, grabbing the girl and dodging was impossible.
 
With that timing, grabbing the girl and dodging was impossible.
   
Making a quick judgment, he pushed the girl to the side.
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Making a quick judgement, he pushed the girl to the side.
   
 
A spray of red blood danced out.
 
A spray of red blood danced out.
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It was hot. His vision turned pure white at that burning-like pain.
 
It was hot. His vision turned pure white at that burning-like pain.
   
The demon mirror spirit swung its tusks and Kamito's body was slammed onto the ground.
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The demonic mirror spirit swung its tusks and Kamito's body was slammed onto the ground.
   
 
"...! Kamito!!"
 
"...! Kamito!!"
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Pressing the side of his abdomen with one hand, Kamito slowly stood up.
 
Pressing the side of his abdomen with one hand, Kamito slowly stood up.
   
He glared at the demon mirror spirit that was covered in his own blood.
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He glared at the demonic mirror spirit that was covered in his own blood.
   
 
"E-Ellis, cover me. I'll take care of that guy."
 
"E-Ellis, cover me. I'll take care of that guy."
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With the Kamito's current state, he could only bet on that one strike.
 
With the Kamito's current state, he could only bet on that one strike.
   
The demon mirror spirit raised its tusk, and charged again.
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The demonic mirror spirit raised its tusk, and charged again.
   
 
"Ellis, I'm counting on you!"
 
"Ellis, I'm counting on you!"
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Ellis had used her wind spirit magic.
 
Ellis had used her wind spirit magic.
   
Flying over the demon mirror spirit, Kamito swung his sword downwards on the huge beast's head.
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Flying over the demonic mirror spirit, Kamito swung his sword downwards on the huge beast's head.
   
 
However.
 
However.
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Because of his serious injury, his control over Est was unstable.
 
Because of his serious injury, his control over Est was unstable.
   
The raging demon mirror spirit shook his head violently and threw Kamito on the ground.
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The raging demonic mirror spirit shook his head violently and threw Kamito on the ground.
   
 
The behemoth slowly approached the fallen Kamito from just above his head—
 
The behemoth slowly approached the fallen Kamito from just above his head—
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Flametounge was twined around the demon mirror spirit, making it trip and that behemoth toppled sideways .
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Flame Tongue was twined around the demonic mirror spirit, making it trip and that behemoth toppled sideways .
   
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Dooon!*
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Dooon!*
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Kamito's eyes widened in surprise.
 
Kamito's eyes widened in surprise.
   
Holding Flametounge, Claire got down from the second floor of a building.
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Holding Flame Tongue, Claire got down from the second floor of a building.
   
 
"Y-You, why—"
 
"Y-You, why—"
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"Their masters are the demon mirror elementalist and the adamantine elementalist students. I've already defeated the elementalists, but these two spirits have completely lost control and gone into a frenzy."
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"Their masters are the demonic mirror elementalist and the adamantine elementalist students. I've already defeated the elementalists, but these two spirits have completely lost control and gone into a frenzy."
   
"Don't tell me, it's the two people from yesterday... B-But their contracted spirits don't have that kind of form—"
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"Don't tell me, it's the two people from yesterday... B-But their contract spirits don't have that kind of form—"
   
 
Stopping his sentence midway— Kamito suddenly realized. Ellis also seemed to get it.
 
Stopping his sentence midway— Kamito suddenly realized. Ellis also seemed to get it.
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Ellis bit her lips and looked down. As the battle strength of the Sylphid Knights were almost cut by half, they couldn't help but disperse their security forces.
 
Ellis bit her lips and looked down. As the battle strength of the Sylphid Knights were almost cut by half, they couldn't help but disperse their security forces.
   
Releasing a loud roar that shook the earth, the fallen demon mirror spirit got up.
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Releasing a loud roar that shook the earth, the fallen demonic mirror spirit got up.
   
 
The adamantine spirit with the form of a large deer was also slowly walking to the center of the plaza.
 
The adamantine spirit with the form of a large deer was also slowly walking to the center of the plaza.
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And at that instant, a bright flash exploded.
 
And at that instant, a bright flash exploded.
   
There was an ear-splitting thunderous sound. The rubble was smashed up.
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There was a ear-splitting thunderous sound. The rubble was smashed up.
   
 
"...! What was that!?"
 
"...! What was that!?"
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"I only exterminated the rampaging spirits. Those that were involved were unlucky— no, for it to end with this level of damage was instead lucky of them."
 
"I only exterminated the rampaging spirits. Those that were involved were unlucky— no, for it to end with this level of damage was instead lucky of them."
   
"My esteemed sister! Do you seriously think like—"
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"Aneue! Do you seriously think like—"
   
 
Velsaria coldly looked down at the enraged Ellis.
 
Velsaria coldly looked down at the enraged Ellis.
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=== Translator's Notes and Reference ===
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== Translator's Notes and Reference ==
 
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