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Because Fianna said she would shower later, Kamito ended up entering the bathroom first without any reservation.
 
Because Fianna said she would shower later, Kamito ended up entering the bathroom first without any reservation.
   
By the way, Claire was being nursed by Scarlet in the room. She should probably be groaning on the bed currently. Kamito thought she was pitiful, but he could not even do anything.
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By the way, Claire was being nursed by Scarlet in the room. She should probably be groaning on the bed currently. Kamito thought she was pitiful but he could not even do anything.
   
It was already time for Est to sleep. She could not return to Astral Zero, so she needed to get a lot of sleep and she would usually sleep for about half a day.
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It was already time for Est to sleep. She could not return to Astral Zero, so she needed to get a lot of sleep, and she would usually sleep for about half a day.
   
 
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A princess with a bath towel wrapped around her body.
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A princess with a sheet of bath towel wrapped around her body.
   
 
"Wh...Wh...Wh...?"
 
"Wh...Wh...Wh...?"
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...He did not understand the point. Why was she doing such a thing?
 
...He did not understand the point. Why was she doing such a thing?
   
As if his doubt was pointed out—
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As if his doubt was painted out—
   
 
"Hey, sit."
 
"Hey, sit."
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"Be...Behave yourself, do you plan on making me embarrassed?"
 
"Be...Behave yourself, do you plan on making me embarrassed?"
   
She said that in a sulky tone and strongly scrubbed his back.
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She said that in a sulky tone and strongly scrubbed his back,
   
"Ho...How is it? Does it feel good?"
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"Ho..How is it? Does it feel good?"
   
 
"Well, even if you ask something like that..."
 
"Well, even if you ask something like that..."
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Funyu. Funyun.
 
Funyu. Funyun.
   
He felt like he heard some sort of dangerous word just now, but his senses were taken away by the sensation of her breasts pressing on him and his mind immediately became hazy.
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He felt like he heard some sort of dangerous word just now, but his senses were taken away by the sensation of her breast pressing on him, and his mind immediately became hazy.
   
 
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"Fianna!? Wh...why are you doing something like adding fuel to—"
 
"Fianna!? Wh...why are you doing something like adding fuel to—"
   
Kamito tried to separate his body in a fluster, but his arms were tightly held.
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Kamito tried to separate his body in a fluster but his arms were tightly held.
   
 
"I'm now washing Kamito-kun's back. Could you please not bother us?"
 
"I'm now washing Kamito-kun's back. Could you please not bother us?"

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