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==Chapter 1 - You Are My Contracted Spirit==
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==Chapter 1: You Are My Contracted Spirit==
   
 
=== Part 1 ===
 
=== Part 1 ===
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<nowiki>*</nowiki>Splash—*
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>Splash—*
   
The sound of water resounded through the trees.
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-the sound of water resounded through the trees.
   
 
Kamito opened his mouth wide in shock and stood stock still.
 
Kamito opened his mouth wide in shock and stood stock still.
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Her white skin was as smooth as milk and dazzling.
 
Her white skin was as smooth as milk and dazzling.
   
Her beautifully slender legs disappeared below the water's surface.
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Her beautifully slender legs disappeared below the water surface.
   
However, what caught his eye more than anything was her blazingly crimson red hair that clung to her gorgeous, porcelain-like body.
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However, what caught his eyes more than anything was her blazingly crimson red hair that clung to her gorgeous, porcelain-like body.
   
However, she was naked---Stark naked.
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However, she was naked.
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Stark naked.
   
 
"..."
 
"..."
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"I guess I should say...this is a huge accident, ok? It is definitely an unfortunate accident for the both of us..."
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"I guess I should say...This is a huge accident, ok? It is definitely an unfortunate accident for the both of us..."
   
 
At this time, the boy made two fatal errors:
 
At this time, the boy made two fatal errors:
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''Is that the wind?'' he mused, ''No, that's-''
 
''Is that the wind?'' he mused, ''No, that's-''
   
"''Guardian of the crimson blaze, keeper of the undying hearth!''"
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'''''Guardian of the crimson blaze, keeper of the undying hearth!'''''
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'''''Now is the time to abide by our blood contract; come forth and do my bidding!''
 
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"''Now is the time to abide by our blood contract; come forth and do my bidding!''"
 
 
   
From the young girl's lips sprang an incantation in spirit language.
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From the young girl's lips sprang an incantation in the language of the Spirits.
   
 
At that instant, accompanied by the sound of air rushing into a vacuum, a whip of flames manifested in the hand of the girl.
 
At that instant, accompanied by the sound of air rushing into a vacuum, a whip of flames manifested in the hand of the girl.
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Nearly at the same time, the Flametounge brushed its way over his head.
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Nearly at the same time, the Flame Tongue brushed its way over his head.
   
 
The idle red residue that remained on the trees which had been cut was like the lingering punchline of a joke. The cut surface of the tree trunks were surprisingly smooth, without any trace of having been touched by fire. The attack had been so fast that the flames did not have the time to ignite the trees.
 
The idle red residue that remained on the trees which had been cut was like the lingering punchline of a joke. The cut surface of the tree trunks were surprisingly smooth, without any trace of having been touched by fire. The attack had been so fast that the flames did not have the time to ignite the trees.
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"'That...that old hag!?'" Claire's face stiffened.
 
"'That...that old hag!?'" Claire's face stiffened.
   
The Dusk Witch, Greyworth, is a greatly respected individual by princess maidens who aim to become Spirit Knights. It is also said that she is as popular in the Ordesia Empire as the Strongest Blade Dancer, Ren Ashbell. Even after she retired a decade ago from the Twelve Knight Generals, the most elite force of Spirit Knights known as the "Numbers," her legendary status as a Witch is still one to be feared and revered to the highest degree.
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The Dusk Witch, Greyworth, is a greatly respected individual by princess maidens who aim to become Spirit-Knights. It is also said that she is as popular in the Ordesia Empire as the Strongest Blade Dancer, Ren Ashbell. Even after she retired a decade ago from the Twelve Knight Generals, the most elite force of Spirit-Knights known as the "Numbers," her legendary status as a Witch is still one to be feared and revered to the highest degree.
   
 
''Well, for me, she is nothing but a nightmare,'' Kamito thought as he tucked the letter back into it's pocket. "Greyworth is an old acquaintance of mine. I came all the way here but the academy ground is extremely large and so I have lost my way."
 
''Well, for me, she is nothing but a nightmare,'' Kamito thought as he tucked the letter back into it's pocket. "Greyworth is an old acquaintance of mine. I came all the way here but the academy ground is extremely large and so I have lost my way."
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Claire Rouge—obviously the name is a pseudonym.
 
Claire Rouge—obviously the name is a pseudonym.
   
Most of the students attending the Areishia Spirit Academy were the young ladies of noble families who have been trained as potential elementalists since childhood. However well-versed he was in the noble families, Kamito had never heard of the Rouge family. Claire was hiding her noble family name. She must have some reason to do so, but Kamito had no intention to delve deeper.
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Most of the students attending the Areishia Spirit Academy are the young ladies of noble families who have been trained as potential elementalists since childhood. However well-versed he was in the noble families, Kamito had never heard of the Rouge family. Claire was hiding her noble family name. She must have some reason to do so, but Kamito had no intention to delve deeper.
   
 
''Everyone has some secrets they want to hide'', Kamito thought. Kamito glanced down at his left hand covered by the leather glove. ''Even I have mine, too...''
 
''Everyone has some secrets they want to hide'', Kamito thought. Kamito glanced down at his left hand covered by the leather glove. ''Even I have mine, too...''
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The inside of the shrine was misty and dark and had a heavy atmosphere. Claire frowned slightly at the smell of mold mingling in the air.
 
The inside of the shrine was misty and dark and had a heavy atmosphere. Claire frowned slightly at the smell of mold mingling in the air.
   
"''Flames, let there be light''."
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'''''Flames, let there be light'''''.
   
A tiny fireball immediately formed from Claire's fingertips; a basic spirit spell that draws on the power of a flame spirit. The flickering light of the fireball dimly illuminated the walls of the shrine. The shrine looked like a cavern filled with stalactites.
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A tiny fireball immediately formed from Claire's fingertips; a basic spirit spell that draws on the power of a Flame Spirit. The flickering light of the fireball dimly illuminated the walls of the shrine. The shrine looked like a cavern filled with stalactites.
   
 
The sword was at the innermost area of the shrine.
 
The sword was at the innermost area of the shrine.
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"...Let's do this, Claire Rouge." Breathing deeply, Claire murmured to herself. Her voice trembled a bit; it seemed that she was nervous after all, Kamito noted.
 
"...Let's do this, Claire Rouge." Breathing deeply, Claire murmured to herself. Her voice trembled a bit; it seemed that she was nervous after all, Kamito noted.
   
"''Oh Noble Spirit Sealed in Ancient Holy Sword!''"
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'''''Oh Noble Spirit Sealed in Ancient Holy Sword!'''''
   
"''Thou Shall Accept Me as Thy Master and I Shall Be Thy Sheath!''"
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'''''Thou Shall Accept Me as Thy Master and I Shall Be Thy Sheath!'''''
   
 
From her cherry-red lips flew a fluent incantation for a contract ritual in spirit language. Her crimson hair stood on its ends. A crashing wind started to swirl inside the shrine.
 
From her cherry-red lips flew a fluent incantation for a contract ritual in spirit language. Her crimson hair stood on its ends. A crashing wind started to swirl inside the shrine.
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From the holy blade stabbed in the stone came an overwhelmingly tremendous amount of divine energy. If Claire was an average elementalist, she would have already passed out.
 
From the holy blade stabbed in the stone came an overwhelmingly tremendous amount of divine energy. If Claire was an average elementalist, she would have already passed out.
   
''"Thrice I Command Thee, Exchange Vows With Me!"''
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'''''"Thrice I Command Thee, Exchange Vows With Me!"'''''
   
 
Claire's vow reverberated inside the shrine in that instant.
 
Claire's vow reverberated inside the shrine in that instant.
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"I need...power, I need a powerful spirit that will not lose to any other spirit!"
 
"I need...power, I need a powerful spirit that will not lose to any other spirit!"
   
"''Guardian of the crimson blaze, keeper of the undying hearth!''"
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'''''Guardian of the crimson blaze, keeper of undying hearth!'''''
   
"''Now's the time to abide by the blood contract, come forth and do my bidding!''"
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'''''Now's the time to abide by the blood contract, come forth and do my bidding!'''''
   
Claire recited the summoning spell of her flame spirit. A crimson flame surged and she was engulfed by an intense heat.
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Claire recited the summoning spell of her Flame Spirit. A crimson flame surged and she was engulfed by an intense heat.
   
 
"The hunting begins, Scarlet!"
 
"The hunting begins, Scarlet!"
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At the fierce attacks of Scarlet, the spirit sword's movement stopped—At that instant,
 
At the fierce attacks of Scarlet, the spirit sword's movement stopped—At that instant,
   
"Eat this—''Searing Fireball''!"
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"Eat this!" '''''Searing Fireball!'''''
   
 
Claire released a huge fire ball from her palm.
 
Claire released a huge fire ball from her palm.
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''...No choice but to do this!''
 
''...No choice but to do this!''
   
"''Oh Noble Spirit Sealed in Thy Ancient Holy Sword!''"
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'''''Oh Noble Spirit Sealed in Thy Ancient Holy Sword!'''''
   
"''Thou Shall Accept Me as Thy Master and I Shall Be Thy Sheath!''"
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'''''Thou Shall Accept Me as Thy Master and I Shall Be Thy Sheath!'''''
   
 
Sweat rushed down from his forehead as he started to recite the incantation for spirit contracts, one which he had sworn to never utter again. The spinning tip of the sword pierced the skin of his palm. Red blood gushed intensely from it.
 
Sweat rushed down from his forehead as he started to recite the incantation for spirit contracts, one which he had sworn to never utter again. The spinning tip of the sword pierced the skin of his palm. Red blood gushed intensely from it.
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Crushing amounts of divine energy swirled around him, the gravel and dirt surrounding them whirled up from the strength of the wind. He almost lost consciousness from the sharp pain, but he knew that if he fainted, Claire, who was behind him, would surely be cut in half.
 
Crushing amounts of divine energy swirled around him, the gravel and dirt surrounding them whirled up from the strength of the wind. He almost lost consciousness from the sharp pain, but he knew that if he fainted, Claire, who was behind him, would surely be cut in half.
   
"''Thrice I Command Thee!''"
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'''''Thrice I Command Thee!'''''
   
"...No way, a spirit contract!?" A surprised sound came from Claire's throat.
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"...No way, a Spirit Contract!?" A surprised sound came from Claire's throat.
   
 
Kamito's heels sank into the ground. The sound of his breaking bones resounded underneath his scalp.
 
Kamito's heels sank into the ground. The sound of his breaking bones resounded underneath his scalp.
   
"''Exchange Vows With Me!''"
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'''''Exchange Vows With Me!'''''
   
 
Withstanding the terrible sharp pain, Kamito finished the last words of the contract ritual.
 
Withstanding the terrible sharp pain, Kamito finished the last words of the contract ritual.
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===References and Translation Notes===
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==References and Translation Notes==
 
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